Naruto Saigen Roleplay

Literally doing it for the points.

<r>Hayasu yawned lazily, feet perched upon his desk with his chair tilted on it's hind legs. <B><s>[b]</s><COLOR color="#fe0"><s>[color=#fe0]</s>"How boring. The Raikage leaves for Konoha to talk of peace, and I'm stuck here assigning missions and helping administer the village. I'm not surprised if...

<r><B><s>[b]</s>Application:<e>[/b]</e></B> <URL url="https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5950446/1/#new"><s>[url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5950446/1/#new]</s>Hayasu Juko<e>[/url]</e></URL><br/> <B><s>[b]</s>Change:<e>[/b]</e></B> Special Jounin su...

It's taking forever because I went too big too soon tbh. I know to break it up into smaller chunks next time.

I clarified the above.

I'm open to suggestions, but I've been just cobbling stuff together as best as I can. Admittedly, this isn't as polished as I'd like, but I just want to get it through the door and doctor it up over time.

I fixed a lot of directors stuff/did some minor revisions.

Once the content is approved, I'll format it and clean up the rest of the app. Seems pointless to rewrite, break, clean, rewrite, break clean lol. Would rather rewrite until thumbs upped again then I'll sit and clean it up.

Edited in the main body itself, not the addons.

<t>Okay Valk!<br/> <br/> I fixed the jutsu that just needed revisions;<br/> <br/> <br/> Drunken Monkey: Liquid Courage Rush <br/> Drunken Monkey: Squirrel Monkey Climbing Technique<br/> Drunken Monkey: Strength of the Apes - <br/> Senjutsu : Gate of the Great God <br/> <br/> <br/> Remade;<br/> <br/>...

(I'm going to work on cleaning it all up and getting it polished this weekend! Thanks for the feedback Val, I'll reply when your changes have been fixed.)

<t>I fixed all of the jutsu above. My god I must be on crack to of missed so much grammatically.<br/> <br/> Anyway,<br/> <br/> The only two I'm going to lightly push back on iiis;<br/> <br/> Drunken Monkey: Orangutan Climbing Technique <--- For this to work while moving at full speed, it's got to be...

<t>Fixed them up, take a look when you get a chance.<br/> <br/> I'm not sure where else to put the concs, so I'm open to suggestions o nthat one.<br/> <br/> I revised all of the jutsu you described and spiffed some of them up/elaborated.<br/> <br/> The only one I want to discuss in detail is the enh...

((I'll get to this tomorrow to rectify, just got back from out of town. Thanks for the Feedback!))

<t>I fixed it up a bit more.<br/> <br/> So what I'm having it do is a flat +5, +10, +15, but it takes Senjutsu Chakra and it cannot be used for anything but the same rank. IE you cannot use an A ranked to boost a C ranked jutsu and vice versa. Additionally, I gave Senjutsu Chakra a static number.<br...

Ill see if I can get time to work on this today and fix up some more of the jutsu. Any other things that need to be fixed?

<t>I fixed all of the jutsu isuses.<br/> <br/> As for the percentages, I think it's far more balanced that way instead of upgrading the jutsu itself, but if someone else also disagrees I'm all for that.<br/> <br/> I put sealing and the charging to be more balanced out.<br/> <br/> I also added some c...

<r><QUOTE><s>[quote]</s>-- I need you to state what his stats were before and exactly what ones changed. <e>[/quote]</e></QUOTE> Fixed.<br/> <br/> <QUOTE><s>[quote]</s>-- Are you saying you removed jutsu or just a concentration? If the former, it costs points to swap jutsu out and last I knew you ca...

<r>Hayasu coughed at the hit, before chuckling loudly. <COLOR color="#fe0"><s>[color=#fe0]</s><B><s>[b]</s>"Hayate-san, that's awfully linear of you. You're making an assumption that I'm dependent on your command, or that I do it because it's what I'm told to do. While to an extent that's true, I do...

<r>Hayasu squirmed a bit but finally sighed and calmed down, focusing on just resting despite his childish protesting. An ultimate combination move? It appeared even Hayate hadn't totally dismissed his boyish ideas either. A grin danced across his lips. Heavier was an understatement, as it was nearl...

All updates are current, I've adjusted a few things. Looking for feedback now.

(I apologize, I forgot to post I was moving, please extend!)

<r>The karate chop wasn't particularly lethal or meant to inflict, the psychological damage after taking several thousand of them from his Sensei always managed to make them hurt. He rubbed his head and glared at his sensei, even after all these years of fighting and training, they still acted the s...

<r>Hayasu's mouth nearly hit the ground as he stared in disbelief. There was a siege?! He was finally an elite?! These were all things he didn't expect ever, but the Lord Raikage himself had presented them to him as if they were simple things. He didn't know what else to do. While he was a literal g...

<r><B><s>[b]</s>Application:<e>[/b]</e></B> Zasadel / <URL url="https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5950446/1/#new"><s>[url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5950446/1/#new]</s>Hayasu Juko<e>[/url]</e></URL><br/> <B><s>[b]</s>Change:<e>[/b]</e></B> Check c...

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<r>Hayasu felt the water splash across his face and immediately awoke in a frenzy. "OOOOOSUUUUU!! " he roared as he jumped up to his feet and began attacking the air all around him, slamming his fist into the earth. A crater formed under the mans fist before he came to his senses, Kureiji still unco...

<r>Hayasu was surprised that he made it, a nervous laugh escaping him. In the end, for all his training, all his muscle, all his antics, only a simple word loomed in his mind. <I><s>[i]</s>Endure.<e>[/i]</e></I> His steps weighed insurmountable, each one feeling like his last until he reached the ge...

<r>Shit! Hayasu wasn't counting on him having the energy to continue bounding forward as such. He fumbled quickly and armed himself as quick as he could, tossing a handful of explosive kunai rigged at the mans feet. A loud THOOM! Echoed out, stirring up a cloud of dust as he quickly manueved as best...

<r>Hayasu estimated he had no more then roughly 25% of his chakra supply left after such heavy fighting. As the man charged forward, Hayasu calculated as best as he could before simply submitting. No, he couldn't dodge this with skill. He couldn't take this attack head on. He couldn't even endure it...

<r>Hayasu roared viciously, flipping back and springing forward, unleashing yet another technique, his arm coating itself in Black Raiton. While it wasn't going to be enough to truly fend off his opponent's attack, Hayasu was gambling on the idea it would at least dampen the blow enough to let him e...

<r>Hayasu indeed went flying, slamming into the earth and skidding across as rocks tore up around the behemoth. He scoffed and spat blood from his heavily panting lips. He definitely had at least a few bruised ribs, a minor concussion, and likely other damage. But he would be DAMNED if he was going ...

Hayasu has been a Genin from the start and is almost Jounin, Jesse can vouch for it because he recruited and trained Hayasu with Hayate lol. Do you still want me to dig up all those threads?

<r>Hayasu dodged out of the way, almost into a cartwheel as the ground next to him broke from the hit. At the shoulder tackle, Hayasu grabbed the man into a guillotine, wrapping his forearm around the mans throat. Hayasu grappled and grunted, veins bulging as his muscles flexed to compensate as best...

<r>Hayasu grinned. For all of the dumb assery he pulled on a consistant basis, one of his most basic techniques proved to be effective. With the cackling of lightning and the heavy footsteps, it allowed Hayasu to hear him step by step, improving his ability to react. His eyes still remained shut, ho...

Was I literally the only one who put in for them? Lmao

<r>DAMN IT ALL.<br/> <br/> I've missed every single year, but my birthday was Feburary 23rd.<br/> <br/> 5 to Hayasu please?<br/> <br/> <URL url="https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5950446/1/#new"><s>[url]</s><LINK_TEXT text="viewtopic.php?&t=5950446/1/#new">https://www.naru...

Hayasu Juko For the Greaves.

Creation. nvm

<r>Kureiji squealed and whooped, tugging Hayasu back from the sudden blur of movement. Hayasu instinctively darted backwards, feeling the vibration and the boom of the man's fist, not a second prior to where he was before. He shook his hands hard to try and regain feeling, growling a bit. <B><s>[b]<...

<r>Kureiji was dazed, but alive, shaking his tiny head as he snarled. He glanced over with wide eyes and whooped, leaping up and bolting toward's Hayasu on the far side, albeit wobbly. The Genjutsu user had the right idea to target Kureiji, however the Genjutsu wasn't particularly effective against ...

<r>Hayasu's thoughts had been racing, ears listening to every slight audible that happened. Due to his chakra spread, the hissing of the kunai toward them was perfect for standing out. <COLOR color="#fe0"><s>[color=#fe0]</s><I><s>[i]</s>'There!'<e>[/i]</e></I> <e>[/color]</e></COLOR>Hayasu thought, ...