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by Valkier
Sun Mar 10, 2019 7:33 am
Forum: Kiri
Topic: The Plight of Miyada
Replies: 3
Views: 131

The Plight of Miyada

Naohiro had allowed his mind to wander while he waited, leaning idly against a large mooring stanchion near the water's edge. It was only when Lumine approached him directly that he realised the boy had arrived. Naohiro quickly stood up straight and returned the bow politely, greeting the boy as an ...
by Valkier
Sat Mar 09, 2019 6:27 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: [Plotboard] The Fall and the Rise
Replies: 5
Views: 239

[Plotboard] The Fall and the Rise

Kiyoshi's eyes settled on the broken glass as Shizuo spoke, a measure of trepidation rising due to his tone. But then she glimpsed her own reflection within one of the larger fragments, and she froze. A tired, weak-looking girl looked back at her. A girl with an unnatural golden band burned around h...
by Valkier
Sat Mar 09, 2019 2:14 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Shizuo Mod 1.1.1
Replies: 2
Views: 90

Shizuo Mod 1.1.1

1/2
by Valkier
Fri Mar 08, 2019 6:10 pm
Forum: Kiri
Topic: [PB] A Mizukage's Tasker
Replies: 4
Views: 167

[PB] A Mizukage's Tasker

Naohiro was one with the winds. Arms spread wide and fingers splayed, he balanced one-footed on the apex of his family home as icey, chakra-laden winds tore around him in a miniature tempest of his own making. It was a particularly frustrating test of endurance, chakra control, and simple balance, a...
by Valkier
Fri Mar 08, 2019 5:01 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Naohiro Mod. #8
Replies: 2
Views: 93

Naohiro Mod. #8

Naohiro Mod. #8 [hr] Application: Aisu Naohiro Change: Claiming Perks: Actuary (scaled) and Connections Adding flak jacket as equipment: Naohiro wears a Kirigakure flak jacket as part of his standard mission attire. The jacket is dyed a deep midnight blue and covers the entirety of Naohiro’s torso ...
by Valkier
Wed Mar 06, 2019 8:19 am
Forum: Kiri
Topic: The Plight of Miyada
Replies: 3
Views: 131

The Plight of Miyada

Tomasu woke to the sounds of broken men. Only exhaustion, deep-set and damning, had allowed him any rest, but now the moans of the wounded and the sick returned, just barely audible over the ceaseless hammering of rain and claps of thunder overhead. Many of the people lay in the dirt, or sat huddled...
by Valkier
Tue Feb 26, 2019 5:30 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: [Plotboard] The Fall and the Rise
Replies: 5
Views: 239

[Plotboard] The Fall and the Rise

Unfortunately—or perhaps fortunately, since it had undoubtedly saved her life only hours earlier—stubbornness ran strongly in Kiyoshi. She struggled, trying to resist Shizuo’s attempts to keep her bedridden, but found his touch surprisingly strong for all its outward gentleness. Unable to push past ...
by Valkier
Tue Feb 12, 2019 5:07 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Preapproval] The Way of Bushido
Replies: 9
Views: 362

[Preapproval] The Way of Bushido

Hey Ty, apologies for this having sat for so long! We're a little short staffed, but have been reviewing it. Unfortunately, a lot of the feedback is similar to what has been said above, but I'll go through as much of it as I can still. I'll go piece by piece like the others have. Chugi: What does "b...
by Valkier
Tue Feb 12, 2019 3:10 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Lumine
Replies: 5
Views: 212

[Accepted]Lumine

Looks good to me -
2/2
by Valkier
Sat Feb 09, 2019 5:44 am
Forum: Questions and Ideas
Topic: Combination Stats
Replies: 6
Views: 285

Combination Stats

I like the idea of having them written down, yeah -- these are important considerations when planning a character's stats, and might not be immediately obvious to newer members. It'd be particularly good for explaining why Instinct can be so important. Probably a few things we can clarify in the pro...
by Valkier
Sat Feb 09, 2019 5:37 am
Forum: Introductions & Departures
Topic: Hi everyone
Replies: 4
Views: 261

Hi everyone

Welcome!
by Valkier
Fri Feb 08, 2019 6:24 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Naohiro Mod. #7
Replies: 2
Views: 95

[Accepted]Naohiro Mod. #7

Application: Aisu Naohiro Change: Revised profile layout & consolidated jutsu into one post (please delete post 3 from the archive page after updating posts 1 & 2 below -- #3 is now obsolete) Updated [Upper Body] to [Close Quarters Combat] Rewrote some parts to reduce length & improve(?) readabilit...
by Valkier
Fri Feb 08, 2019 1:38 pm
Forum: Iwa
Topic: [Plotboard] The Fall and the Rise
Replies: 5
Views: 239

[Plotboard] The Fall and the Rise

Consciousness returned slowly, at first. Thought trickled into Kiyoshi's waking mind like half-molten wax, filled with the memory of terrible dreams. Dreams of pain, of screaming, of swirling colours and an eternity bound within a featureless cage. She could feel it still, trapping her, stifling her...
by Valkier
Wed Jan 23, 2019 5:08 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted][Companion] Tsuyu
Replies: 4
Views: 131

[Accepted][Companion] Tsuyu

2/2
by Valkier
Wed Jan 23, 2019 4:12 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Denied][Family] Shinkizou
Replies: 17
Views: 706

[Family] Shinkizou

It is not that staff don't want to deal with it. We've discussed it several times and can't reach an agreeable conclusion or consensus, which is why it's unfortunately a no-go at the current time. Adding something that we see as being flawed on the basis that we might see abuse and correct it later ...
by Valkier
Mon Jan 21, 2019 1:19 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted][Companion] Tsuyu
Replies: 4
Views: 131

[Companion] Tsuyu

Cute doggie. Looks great overall. Only one very minor thing - not sure if [Apex Predator] could benefit from some ranges? Also you could probably increase the distance on [Tremorsense] by a decent margin if you wish, at A-rank. But I'll preemptively 1/2 anyway, incase the accepting mod thinks Apex P...
by Valkier
Mon Jan 14, 2019 4:34 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted] Reactivate.
Replies: 13
Views: 253

Reactivate.

Up to you, but just fyi you should be able to condense apps into fewer posts now if you wish - we're no longer limited to the same character limit per post as Zetaboards had! But totally ok to keep things separate if you prefer it that way.
by Valkier
Sat Jan 12, 2019 5:28 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Denied]Christmas Yama + Old Yama
Replies: 12
Views: 264

Christmas Yama + Old Yama

Your armour is also going to need a strength, please
by Valkier
Sat Jan 12, 2019 5:24 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Day 1,3,4,5,7,9,11, 12, 14, 15, 16
Replies: 21
Views: 428

Day 1,3,4,5,7,9,11, 12, 14, 15, 16

You're adding 30pts of jutsu but have only linked to 20pts of event rewards. Were there other claims you haven't included here? (if so, please edit the first post and add them to the payment) Otherwise you'll need to pay the difference with regular points. Rise of the Dragon S-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu...
by Valkier
Sat Jan 12, 2019 5:02 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Birthday Points
Replies: 2
Views: 114

Birthday Points

Please make a new post in that thread & link to it to record the claim, thanks.
by Valkier
Sat Jan 12, 2019 4:58 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Stat Pack
Replies: 2
Views: 81

[Accepted]Stat Pack

1/1
Spoke with the others, apparently the +5 cp was the Day 1 event claim - that should've been awarded in the daily claim thread if it was claimed there :) So I'll just approve the stat pack for now. If that's wrong & you're missing the 5cp, let me know!
by Valkier
Thu Jan 10, 2019 5:45 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Kiyoshi Mod. 1
Replies: 2
Views: 99

[Accepted]Kiyoshi Mod. 1

Application: Kenitsuna Kiyoshi Change: Fixing app coding from Tapatalk conversion Updating Upper Body conc to Close Quarters, per rule changes Adding Life Genma sheet, Jinch ability & mastery stat Claiming 13 stats from sealing PB. +5 Mastery, +5 Ninjutsu, +2 Stamina Minor update to pictures, appea...
by Valkier
Thu Jan 10, 2019 3:46 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Stat Pack
Replies: 2
Views: 81

Stat Pack

1/2
Stat pack looks fine for the +10 stats. Only reason I didn't 1/1 is because I'm not sure where the 5cp are coming from -- but I didn't want to just ignore them incase they were from some other part of the event!
by Valkier
Tue Jan 08, 2019 3:49 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Secret Santa Foxxy
Replies: 4
Views: 155

[Accepted]Secret Santa Foxxy

1/1
by Valkier
Mon Jan 07, 2019 1:44 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Main Pack from Christmas
Replies: 1
Views: 58

[Accepted]Main Pack from Christmas

1/1
by Valkier
Mon Jan 07, 2019 8:04 am
Forum: Catacombs
Topic: [Plotboard] What May Be Found
Replies: 10
Views: 338

[Plotboard] What May Be Found

Kiyoshi's robes billowed from the blast behind them as the tag detonated and she risked a glance backwards, then gritted her teeth and redoubled her pace as the boulder kept coming despite her efforts. In a moment it was closing in on them, and panic rose inside her. They couldn't escape. There was ...
by Valkier
Sun Jan 06, 2019 12:14 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Niku Mod 9
Replies: 2
Views: 81

[Accepted]Niku Mod 9

2/2
by Valkier
Sun Jan 06, 2019 5:22 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Secret Santa
Replies: 1
Views: 76

[Accepted]Secret Santa

1/1
by Valkier
Sun Jan 06, 2019 5:11 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Secret Santa claim
Replies: 1
Views: 67

[Accepted]Secret Santa claim

1/1
by Valkier
Sun Jan 06, 2019 5:07 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Quick fixes
Replies: 3
Views: 104

Quick fixes

1/2
by Valkier
Sat Jan 05, 2019 7:03 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Notome, Minori
Replies: 4
Views: 142

[Accepted]Notome, Minori

2/2
Great character, I like it!
by Valkier
Sat Jan 05, 2019 6:48 pm
Forum: Member Section
Topic: Chat Quotes
Replies: 1806
Views: 2611

Chat Quotes

It's an early contender, but in my book Sanj wins best chat of 2019 already. The raw contempt just warms my heart :wub:
by Valkier
Sat Jan 05, 2019 6:37 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Denied][Character] Hyōryū
Replies: 18
Views: 333

[Denied][Character] Hyōryū

Denied on request. Please let one of us know if you want to recover the topic or nocode at any point!
by Valkier
Sat Jan 05, 2019 6:29 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Points points and more points
Replies: 10
Views: 171

[Accepted]Points points and more points

2/2
by Valkier
Sat Jan 05, 2019 6:06 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Day 15 Mod
Replies: 13
Views: 208

[Accepted]Day 15 Mod

2/2
by Valkier
Sat Jan 05, 2019 6:07 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Stat Pack
Replies: 1
Views: 82

[Accepted]Stat Pack

Application: Hayashi Change: +5 Ninjutsu, +5 Strength & change stat counter to 292 Payment: List of santa rewards & Day 31 claim Nocode: [b]Username:[/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=2112828/]Valkier[/url] [b]Points:[/b] 85/533 [b]Prestige Perks:[/b] 0/...
by Valkier
Sun Dec 30, 2018 11:47 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: The Hayashi Track, 08
Replies: 2
Views: 85

The Hayashi Track, 08

Application: Hayashi Change: Rewriting app coding to fix tapatalk conversion errors. Combining jutsu into one post. Also adding the following jutsu: * Katon • Humble Avatar of the Divine Sun God, Amaterasu S-Rank Ninjutsu By channeling katon chakra into their body the user both protects themselves ...
by Valkier
Sun Dec 30, 2018 10:23 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Tani, Hitomi
Replies: 8
Views: 195

[Accepted]Tani, Hitomi

I think the changes since the last 1/2 are pretty minor, so I'm gunna 2/2 this and call it done!
by Valkier
Sun Dec 30, 2018 10:19 am
Forum: Kiri
Topic: [Graded]A Mauve-Letter Day
Replies: 14
Views: 3457

A Mauve-Letter Day

Atsuji's kick, though improvised and weaker than he'd have liked, was still enough to finish the already wounded clone. The trailing flames on his leg gave way to a gush of steam as his foot sank into and through its watery body, destroying it and also bringing some relief to his burn. He followed t...

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