Naruto Saigen Roleplay

<r>Edited Lie Detector to a different technique. Hopefully that one is D-Rank worthy. <E>:(</E><br/> <br/> Edited Thermometer to have a set range, while still having a small inaccuracy amount.<br/> <br/> Scent Notation is trickier. The Doujutsu was written with this line - "Further jutsu can be used...

<r>edited ranges and duration for the Doujutsu.<br/> <QUOTE><s>[quote]</s>"A vague idea (to within 5~10C, maybe) might be passable. (Control+Inst.)/2 is again quite a vast number for this rank of tech, I would put it at /5 or so at this level."<e>[/quote]</e></QUOTE> Which is why the technique says ...

Sounds good to me.

Edited as requested.

<r>So, it looked like Gene was on board for a bit of research. Which was good for her, the more eyes and hands she had looking through things, the more apt they were to finding what they need. But then, that's brings back Gene's question doesn't it? What else does she know about this place? The trut...

<r><QUOTE><s>[quote]</s>Just a note that whichever mod would otherwise accept this might request a nocode of the entire post that's being editted (ie your entire app cause Aikou is only a one post character) so you might want to just post one up in case.<e>[/quote]</e></QUOTE> <S><s>[s]</s>That migh...

<r>Aikou took the bag from Gene happily, opening it up and pulling the first item she could from its contents. Taking a big bite, the girl tried to eat as quickly as possible while still maintaining etiquette. She was almost certain she didn't manage to do the later, as a few crumbs almost instantly...

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<r><COLOR color="#090"><s>[color=#090]</s>"That all depends, would you mind cleaning your mess?" <e>[/color]</e></COLOR><br/> <br/> Oh right, Aikou looked down to the table where she was working, it was indeed a bit untidy. She scooped up the scroll quickly, rolling in it up with one hand while she ...

<r>Fanho took her sidelining rather well, he didn't look flustered. At least not that Aikou could tell anyway. Again though, She wasn't exactly sure if that was good or bad, this friendship thing wasn't what the girl was used to, not for a long time now. She was apparently earning the friendship of ...

Fair enough.
I removed the jutsu from the line up. Should all be good now.

<r>The girl was sat in a field, a blanket underneath her sprawled out the grass. A boy sat beside her, a cup in one hand and a pastry in the other. He smiled at her, a warm familiar smile she had seen a thousand times. She couldn't help but smiling back, like it was programmed in her. She took the c...

<r>Made all edits you asked for except one.<br/> <br/> "Dark Palm <- Needs the medicine concentration."<br/> <QUOTE author="Medicine"><s>[quote=Medicine]</s>The fundamental skill of <B><s>[b]</s>[Medicine]<e>[/b]</e></B> describes the user’s mental and physical ability to perform traditional and mai...

<r><COLOR color="dodgerblue"><s>[color=dodgerblue]</s>"Ballistic Release, Iron Binding, Doppelganger... ugh, no none of these help at all."<e>[/color]</e></COLOR> Aikou sighed and began rolling up the scroll that she had at the table in front of her. Tying the string around the tightly winded parchm...

<r><COLOR color="#090"><s>[color=#090]</s>"What was that? Did the great Satsui Aikou just praise the opposite gender? I think history has been made tonight, humanity has taken one giant leap!" <e>[/color]</e></COLOR> Aikou rolled her eyes at this, and continued up the gravel path towards the patio. ...

<r>It looked as though Aikou really didn't have to worry about losing Gene during her ramble, he picked everything up. His reply though, startled her a bit, it held an implication that she hadn't thought of something before. And while it was a bit of a blow to her ego for him to make the assumption,...

<r> <COLOR color="#090"><s>[color=#090]</s>"Sure, I don't mind. I'm eager to hear more about what steals your time these days."<e>[/color]</e></COLOR><br/> <br/> He caught to up Aikou quickly, and matched her strides just as the two started onto the Konoha streets. Aikou took the lead of course, as ...

<r>While normally people in Aikou's life were rather ignorant in the create and application of sealing techniques, luckily it seemed that Gene had some sort of knowledge on them. His reaction showed he had at least some sort of understanding on the complicated nature of the work that she had describ...

<r>The female shinobi had been looking at her hand, watching the quick flick of her finger that played with the wooden shard between them when Gene's sudden reaction to her words flared. She missed it completely, probably to his benefit, maybe to hers, Aikou probably would never know. None the less,...

<r>"Trust me, you don't have to worry about me running away anymore. Though you've been M.I.A for a while now, what's the deal?"<br/> <br/> Aikou stopped then, feeling her heart skip a small beat before she continued on, acting as nonchalant as possible. While a normal question to anyone else, answe...

<r>The Chuunin introduced himself and held out a hand. Aikou recognized the name, but her mind was far more focused on the gesture that Gene had made to figure out his identity from it. A handshake, so then Aikou had to choose here wither or not she trusted the guy. A bit of a problem, she didn't re...

<r>As the dust settled away and Gene turned to face Aikou, he no doubt saw her troubled expression, as she didn't even think of trying to put up a poker face. Her mind was a-buzz with other thoughts and it clouded her tactical side. None the less, the chuunin appeared to keep steady in the situation...

oooh. okay i understand now. my bad.


okay all tags added in.

<r>So not even Fanho had the details on this package? Well, whoever paid for this mission didn't want people to know - that was obvious - but it only spurred Aikou's imagination even more. A low ranking mission, something simple as this, wouldn't carry super sensitive information, that didn't mean i...

<r>She had been only sitting upon the grass for a minute, watching the sun slowly die over the Konoha walls. The bit of time to herself, and the relative quiet set her at ease, and she was glad to have it. Even at the Satsui house she had trouble getting some time to herself with Toukiki and her mot...

<r><QUOTE author="Kabu" time="1493717594"><s>[quote=Kabu,(time=1493717594)]</s>It doesn't matter which section of the app they're located in.<br/> <br/> All jutsu need to be labeled as something along the lines of X-Rank Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu<e>[/quote]</e></QUOTE>yes... that's why they are c...

<t>Removed the Renown and Coupon lines, my bad there.<br/> <br/> I edited the description of the Doujutsu, hopefully explaining it a bit better. Basically it simply lets him see varying speeds and pressure in the air around him, and alerts him of chakra infused air. Further jutsu can change this, bu...

<r><QUOTE author="THP" time="1493565508"><s>[quote=THP,(time=1493565508)]</s>Going off what Shikon said, you might be able to do it via some complicated ability that works off of the pet owner's chakra instead of the pets or something. Or maybe a fuuinjutsu system that makes the elemental body and w...

Id guess no. pet's can't mold chakra on their own, and need their master to help them do it. So the pet would not be able to keep their body in a solid shape without constant help.

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<r>The young Kunochi had been waiting too long, perhaps only a few minutes or so, but still she was starting to get a bit restless. Fanho may be in a briefing, he did out-rank her now after all. Perhaps he was just getting back from a different mission, and didn't know about the new assignment yet? ...

All done.

<r><COLOR color="Green"><s>[color=Green]</s>"If I set the trigger activation as a preclude to the transformative clause, then let the action clause stand as a- no, that won't work."<e>[/color]</e></COLOR> Aikou sighed to herself softly as she quickly scribbled out the characters she was drawing on t...

Be careful everyone, She's a SoCalian. Her kin plan to overthrow my Central Valley tribes-people and force us to make orange juice for them year round.

I wouldn't trust her.

<t>In Progress:<br/> <br/> A lone target stood in the field behind the Satsui House. Normally left alone, and otherwise forgetful. But today Aikou had her training to do. She had so little time to work on her shinobi skills lately, and while Toukiki normally assisted her in her training, today he ha...

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<r><COLOR color="#fe0"><s>[color=#fe0]</s><I><s>[i]</s>"You think you can just hide from the past? It will catch up to you eventually you know."<e>[/i]</e></I><e>[/color]</e></COLOR><br/> <br/> The words ran through Aikou's mind on repeat, like a record skipping over one portion of a song, over and ...

<r>Edits made-<br/> <br/> Would that work?<br/> <br/> I understand your press for having it be an opposed strength check. Experience in learning close combat, and pins/grapples/submissions lets me know it's not <I><s>[i]</s>entirely<e>[/i]</e></I> up to who is stronger though. There is leverage, joi...

<t>Shado-Ken; Stealthy Hand <- This style should most definitely require the perception concentration<br/> <br/> ---Fair Enough, edited<br/> <br/> Flowing Hand (Tan-Fut Sao) <- Maneuver<br/> <br/> -- Edited<br/> <br/> Hooking Hand (Fook Sao) <- Should probably be their strength vs the user's own<br/...

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