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by Suzuri
Thu Nov 24, 2016 11:01 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs
Replies: 20
Views: 3455

[Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs

<r><QUOTE><s>[quote]</s>Yes, I'm sure. Because as it stands E-ranks have little to no use unless its a relatively use for utility. IE sparking your snaps to create a fire. Or forming a sort of lighter. Or using an E-rank to use raiton to make a simple circuit work for a second. They're basic techniq...
by Suzuri
Tue Nov 22, 2016 2:42 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: There's No Place Like Home
Replies: 11
Views: 4081

There's No Place Like Home

<r>Disbelief replaced the woman’s defensive ignorance, and gave way to shock. Suzuri leaned over the table, putting her palms over Kemiko’s hands, and brought them together. Calluses of a dozen countries met the harsher calluses of the village. There was pain in her expression, Suzuri thought. And h...
by Suzuri
Sat Nov 19, 2016 6:59 am
Forum: Rock Country
Topic: Making Money
Replies: 10
Views: 6732

Making Money

<r>The threat tore Phil’s expression in two. <br/> <br/> <COLOR color="#008b5e"><s>[color=#008b5e]</s>“I’m a bad liar.”<e>[/color]</e></COLOR> He lulled. With a glint in his eyes, he shrugged off any attempt at subtleties. He looked down, shoulders sagging. <COLOR color="#008b5e"><s>[color=#008b5e]<...
by Suzuri
Tue Nov 15, 2016 4:11 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: There's No Place Like Home
Replies: 11
Views: 4081

There's No Place Like Home

<r>Greetings. Gratitude. Goodbyes. It all flowed together, like a melody assembling itself out of figments of gestures. A stumble through the pine-scented garden of the wreaths would step on an invisible chord, a voice would brush over a key note, and the omnipresent music seeped through the walls. ...
by Suzuri
Sat Nov 12, 2016 10:09 am
Forum: Rock Country
Topic: Making Money
Replies: 10
Views: 6732

Making Money

<r>Fire whipped her hip. Suzuri moved her lips in silent confusion and, from staring at the man, her eyes darted down. Her fingers touched the wooden shard sticking out from the edge of her hipbone, curled around it, sending vibrations up her spine. Her lips trembled. There wasn’t much blood. His ar...
by Suzuri
Thu Nov 10, 2016 3:02 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: There's No Place Like Home
Replies: 11
Views: 4081

There's No Place Like Home

<r>Suzuri’s smile traveled from the window to the ground into a nod, pausing to greet the man. <COLOR color="#736aff"><s>[color=#736aff]</s>“I’m a traveler,”<e>[/color]</e></COLOR> she spoke. <COLOR color="#736aff"><s>[color=#736aff]</s>“Sometimes people ask me to carry messages in their stead.” <e>...
by Suzuri
Mon Nov 07, 2016 7:07 am
Forum: Finished
Topic: Plotboard Issues and thoughts on solutions
Replies: 13
Views: 7004

Plotboard Issues and thoughts on solutions

<r>Onu (and Gun), I am wondering whether you ever considered 'why' you like the treads/stories/books that you do. Flow? The character's voice? The tension (which is created by detachment from the character's perspective, or by choppy sentences or something else)? Is it the descriptive bits that you ...
by Suzuri
Sat Nov 05, 2016 5:54 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Denied]Jinrai Honoka "The Geisha"
Replies: 21
Views: 3479

[Denied]Jinrai Honoka "The Geisha"

<t>(As I post this, I am relying on the rule that allows non-mod members to post in apps. If that was changed, I apologize)<br/> <br/> Although I emphatize with your wish to get writing quickly, bumping a thread repeatedly might not help. Mods are, like us, human beings, and their lives can be quite...
by Suzuri
Sat Nov 05, 2016 9:38 am
Forum: Finished
Topic: Potential Idea
Replies: 19
Views: 4715

Potential Idea

<t>Okay~ I'm not going to tackle all the progression parts, but I'll share my thoughts.<br/> <br/> I do not feel like speed and strength accurately represent Naruto from the anime. The idea is that stats from 1 to 5 are (quote) 'within the range of your normal human of varying degrees, from your nor...
by Suzuri
Sat Nov 05, 2016 8:00 am
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: There's No Place Like Home
Replies: 11
Views: 4081

There's No Place Like Home

<r>The cold front hit like a punch in the lungs. Her breath stopped. The blizzard raged. It burnt Suzuri’s face, shook the earth and flooded the air with white. It stole her away. Nearly. Her eyes shot towards her teacher, his firm grasp telling her what she couldn’t make out over the wind’s roar. C...
by Suzuri
Tue Nov 01, 2016 3:57 pm
Forum: Introductions & Departures
Topic: Excited to be here!
Replies: 18
Views: 4591

Excited to be here!

Welcome! ^_^ Looking forward to having you around!
by Suzuri
Tue Nov 01, 2016 2:16 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs
Replies: 20
Views: 3455

[Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs

<r><QUOTE><s>[quote]</s>I'm gonna go ahead and say make the area smaller.<e>[/quote]</e></QUOTE> Wish granted~ 15m radius, or 30m diameter.<br/> <QUOTE><s>[quote]</s>I'll go ahead and say no to the calculable post count. Make it a flat 2 posts. <e>[/quote]</e></QUOTE> Are you sure? Because that's wh...
by Suzuri
Mon Oct 31, 2016 1:06 pm
Forum: Water Country
Topic: Heartbeat Clocktower [Solo]
Replies: 2
Views: 2449

Heartbeat Clocktower [Solo]

<t>Light turned to darkness, and then to light again.<br/> <br/> Suzuri woke underneath soft blankets. Her sticky eyes turned around in a haze of pink, before the image crystallized into heavy drapes wrapped between the four posts of a bed. The bed was wider than she was tall. A groan left her lips,...
by Suzuri
Mon Oct 31, 2016 11:32 am
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: There's No Place Like Home
Replies: 11
Views: 4081

There's No Place Like Home

<r><COLOR color="#736aff"><s>[color=#736aff]</s>“Don’t joke like that.” <e>[/color]</e></COLOR>A knuckle rasped against Zanto’s arm. The girl turned towards the red glow that marked his eyes in the darkness, her face trembling in an uncertainty of laughter and crying.<COLOR color="#736aff"><s>[color...
by Suzuri
Mon Oct 31, 2016 11:30 am
Forum: Introductions & Departures
Topic: Muse
Replies: 7
Views: 2916

Muse

*hugs* ;.; Take care! I can imagine it's pretty tough. Good luck with everything. And if you want to return when you'll have time, we'll be really glad ^^
by Suzuri
Sat Oct 29, 2016 9:13 am
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: There's No Place Like Home
Replies: 11
Views: 4081

There's No Place Like Home

<r>A fire is a step-by-step performance.<br/> <br/> First comes the tinder. Some say it’s worth its weight in gold, but those value their lives too cheaply. The girl knelt down, shielding the budding smoke between her palms just as she fed it with her breath. Suzuri might freeze near to death in mou...
by Suzuri
Wed Oct 26, 2016 12:28 pm
Forum: Rock Country
Topic: Making Money
Replies: 10
Views: 6732

Making Money

<r>He had something of a devil about him, standing in the canopy with light shining down on him, his features obscured and twisted in anger like the ones of a samurai in a woodblock painting. Suzuri shielded her eyes from the sun, her gaze automatically fixing on the golden sash. ‘Then wear the gold...
by Suzuri
Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:06 pm
Forum: Rock Country
Topic: Making Money
Replies: 10
Views: 6732

Making Money

<r>There was something in the way that their attacker handled his twin kunai that spoke of experience. Of toying with his prey. Suzuri timed her breathing, ready to jump at any time. This wasn’t a man she could beat with strength alone. The black cat crouched between scaly branches, redirected from ...
by Suzuri
Sat Oct 22, 2016 5:09 pm
Forum: Rock Country
Topic: Making Money
Replies: 10
Views: 6732

Making Money

<r>A sharp whistle shot through the trees. It scratched the highest chords of one’s hearing, pulling Suzuri around by a string just in time to see her friend collapsing on one knee. For an instant, she glared, uncomprehending, at the blood splatter stretching on his thigh.<br/> <br/> <COLOR color="#...
by Suzuri
Fri Oct 21, 2016 4:18 pm
Forum: Water Country
Topic: Heartbeat Clocktower [Solo]
Replies: 2
Views: 2449

Heartbeat Clocktower [Solo]

<r>425 steps later and several locked doors to the side, the corridor came to an end. It opened up into a large chamber with a cream wooden floor, where daylight seemed to scatter through cracks in the ceiling. The edges of the room disappeared behind the many mismatched bookcases. Tomes and scrolls...
by Suzuri
Wed Oct 19, 2016 2:47 pm
Forum: Rock Country
Topic: Making Money
Replies: 10
Views: 6732

Making Money

<r>Location: A narrow grass path slithers between elder, red-bark cypress trees. Their branches weave together high above, filtering light into dusty columns that violets are quick to colonize. Only rarely does a woodpecker tap into the silence of the soft wood.<br/> <br/> Characters: Two young peop...
by Suzuri
Mon Oct 17, 2016 5:11 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs
Replies: 20
Views: 3455

[Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs

Changed Drizzle to C-rank, and increased the volume back to 20m cubed due to this.
(and it still won't be a 'large amount' =P )

Added a D-Rank (Water has no Memory) to stabilize my pyramid.
by Suzuri
Mon Oct 17, 2016 1:40 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs
Replies: 20
Views: 3455

[Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs

<r>Basic jutsu - Done~<br/> <br/> Now, the techs with the # are archive jutsu in which I changed handsigns for advanced channeling.<br/> <br/> Water Patch - Edited...<br/> <br/> Drizzle - I would argue (don't tempt me, I'll re-find the graphs and statistics) that the size of the droplets in a drizzl...
by Suzuri
Sun Oct 16, 2016 1:45 pm
Forum: Water Country
Topic: Heartbeat Clocktower [Solo]
Replies: 2
Views: 2449

Heartbeat Clocktower [Solo]

<t>There was once a cruel noble who broke people for fun. Once, he knocked over an inkstone, and the floor bloomed in clusters of violent black. The tatami-mat was new, soundless. He shouldn’t have done it. So the kidnapper must’ve thought, as she turned over the tatami, sweeping this sign of resist...
by Suzuri
Sat Oct 15, 2016 4:06 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: Once more, with feeling
Replies: 11
Views: 3883

Once more, with feeling

<r><COLOR color="#736aff"><s>[color=#736aff]</s>“My mukker?”<e>[/color]</e></COLOR> Suzuri asked, enjoying the way that the word rolled off her tongue. Mu-kker. She shook her head.<COLOR color="#736aff"><s>[color=#736aff]</s> “He can be a bit brash, I think – his kind isn’t known for niceties, but, ...
by Suzuri
Sat Oct 15, 2016 6:36 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs
Replies: 20
Views: 3455

[Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs

<t>Thank you for the extension!<br/> <br/> On the subject of huge mods, while I'll try to do better, it's hardly my fault that the requirements on minor-country-people-having-to-learn-basic-jutsu-IC took me one year on threads to fulfill (with the resulting one year of points to spend) =P <br/> <br/...
by Suzuri
Wed Oct 12, 2016 12:50 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs
Replies: 20
Views: 3455

[Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs

Extension, please?
by Suzuri
Tue Oct 11, 2016 1:02 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: Once more, with feeling
Replies: 11
Views: 3883

Once more, with feeling

<r>Suzuri had always been a person of words. She picked up ideas from her travels like navigators picked up sand on tallow lead-lines as they gauged the depths of foreign seas. If you cut her, she’d bleed ink. But the journey in search of Zanto had bled her dry. The girl stared at the stone-winged m...
by Suzuri
Tue Oct 04, 2016 5:29 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs
Replies: 20
Views: 3455

[Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs

<r>I split the original modification in three <S><s>[s]</s>horcruxes<e>[/s]</e></S> threads. This thread is currently focusing on techs alone; I could split things more if you'd prefer?<br/> <br/> Changed the tilde for a hashtag.<br/> <br/> Changed Water Patch to 1 strength. Reduced duration from Co...
by Suzuri
Tue Oct 04, 2016 4:58 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted][Modification] Wizard of the Coast: Concentrations, Weapon
Replies: 2
Views: 1220

[Accepted][Modification] Wizard of the Coast: Concentrations, Weapon

<r><B><s>[b]</s>Application:<e>[/b]</e></B> <URL url="https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5944939/1/"><s>[url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5944939/1/]</s>Suzuri Rinrin<e>[/url]</e></URL><br/> <B><s>[b]</s>Change:<e>[/b]</e></B> <br/> <U><s>[u]</s> Con...
by Suzuri
Tue Oct 04, 2016 4:54 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Stats, Specialization
Replies: 7
Views: 2100

[Accepted][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Stats, Specialization

<r><B><s>[b]</s>Application:<e>[/b]</e></B> <URL url="https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5944939/1/"><s>[url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5944939/1/]</s>Suzuri Rinrin<e>[/url]</e></URL><br/> <B><s>[b]</s>Change:<e>[/b]</e></B> <br/> #1. Stats<br/> Th...
by Suzuri
Sun Oct 02, 2016 11:51 am
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: Once more, with feeling
Replies: 11
Views: 3883

Once more, with feeling

<r><COLOR color="#736aff"><s>[color=#736aff]</s>“Warm.”<e>[/color]</e></COLOR><br/> <br/> Suzuri took an arm from under the blankets, and slowly flexed her fingers in front of her face. Still all of them. She breathed quickly, startled by Zanto’s admission. Of how close she’d been to not being. She ...
by Suzuri
Wed Sep 28, 2016 10:13 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs
Replies: 20
Views: 3455

[Denied][Modification] Wizard of the Coast : Techs

<r><B><s>[b]</s>Application:<e>[/b]</e></B> <URL url="https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5944939/1/"><s>[url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5944939/1/]</s>Suzuri Rinrin<e>[/url]</e></URL><br/> <B><s>[b]</s>Change:<e>[/b]</e></B> <br/> <U><s>[u]</s> Tec...
by Suzuri
Mon Sep 26, 2016 10:38 am
Forum: Fire Country
Topic: The criminal
Replies: 4
Views: 2258

The criminal

<r>There was no way out.<br/> <br/> She had hunted before. She knew how to slip in the mind of the prey, trace its steps before they happened. Now she forced herself into the mind of the predator. Forced her breathing to go quiet, so she could hear her enemy. Turned her ear to the ground, to better ...
by Suzuri
Sun Sep 25, 2016 10:46 am
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: Once more, with feeling
Replies: 11
Views: 3883

Once more, with feeling

<r> Suzuri didn’t remember when she peeled off her clothes, or later, when she kneeled in tears because trying to take off her beads only left her with broken tangles of hair. Somehow she managed to curl up and, prodded by Kiriko, to roll the heavy furs around herself. She fell asleep with whiskers ...
by Suzuri
Tue Sep 20, 2016 1:00 am
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: Once more, with feeling
Replies: 11
Views: 3883

Once more, with feeling

<r>A forceful gust of wind reached the water at the same time as Zanto’s reflection. The stream reached out – or was it the girl? – curling up in puddles and clinging to rocks, to fight against the force pushing it away, as it had done long before the chakra infusion had given it a reason to. The gi...
by Suzuri
Thu Sep 15, 2016 7:56 pm
Forum: Lightning Empire
Topic: A colorful lake
Replies: 3
Views: 3724

A colorful lake

<r>This didn’t bode well for the Guild. <br/> <br/> “Simple or with salt?” A jokester prodded the befuddled innkeeper, and Suzuri’s lips automatically curled into a smile. The surprise filling the room turned to chuckles. “Let me see if I have enough o’ those, lad.” The innkeeper resignedly gestured...
by Suzuri
Mon Sep 12, 2016 8:49 am
Forum: Water Country
Topic: The Tower of Sin
Replies: 2
Views: 1939

The Tower of Sin

<r>Some people are like gold. They don’t have any intrinsic worth, but other people can be conned into finding them valuable. They fight for them, they risk their lives for that fiction. Tsuyomaru had been thoroughly swindled. Otherwise, why would he accompany a foreign girl across the borders of se...

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