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by WrightJustice
Sat Aug 24, 2019 2:19 pm
Forum: Registration
Topic: Uchiha, Touma
Replies: 7
Views: 45

Uchiha, Touma

Oops just realised he wasn't supposed to have Engulfed Sight yet, sharingan doesn't give enough ninjutsu to reach 19 nin, so I swapped it for Great Fireball archive.
by WrightJustice
Fri Aug 23, 2019 9:05 pm
Forum: Kiri
Topic: It's Levitakinesis not Levitarrkinesis!
Replies: 8
Views: 72

It's Levitakinesis not Levitarrkinesis!

Nishiki watched with intrigue as Shinji stood his ground this time around and simply transformed to gain reptilian features much like that of a turtle, which he then used to not only full on block the incoming attack but to also send it flying back as the lightning shattered into pieces. Though the ...
by WrightJustice
Fri Aug 23, 2019 8:22 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Nori Special Jounin to Jounin
Replies: 3
Views: 10

Nori Special Jounin to Jounin

Username: WrightJustice Points: 4/36 Prestige Perks: 1/1 Beast Tamer Stat Trainings: (0/75) [hr] Yashiro, Nori "Norio" http://i.imgur.com/WYRx8tP.png "I go where my faith leads me and if that means I must bring judgement in the light of our sun, then so be it!" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EZ1xP...
by WrightJustice
Fri Aug 23, 2019 8:22 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Nori Special Jounin to Jounin
Replies: 3
Views: 10

Nori Special Jounin to Jounin

Application: Nori Change: Ranking him up from Special Jounin to Jounin. Rank changed. Age changed to account for both the three years trapped in the spirit world (though technically only a few months away from human world) and also just aging up with rank. History added to and personality a little ...
by WrightJustice
Fri Aug 23, 2019 7:42 pm
Forum: Registration
Topic: [REDO]Akari Vale
Replies: 3
Views: 33

[REDO]Akari Vale

You should link to the old Vale in your list of changes and it might help to show what is being bought with regular character points and not just a complete swap. It would be great if you could space out your jutsu so they don't run into each other, makes it easier to read them all. Raiton • Anasi's...
by WrightJustice
Fri Aug 23, 2019 6:56 pm
Forum: Registration
Topic: Uchiha, Touma
Replies: 7
Views: 45

Uchiha, Touma

I think I changed it to sound more C-rank.
by WrightJustice
Fri Aug 23, 2019 4:27 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Hijikata - More Jutsu
Replies: 7
Views: 63

Hijikata - More Jutsu

1/2
by WrightJustice
Thu Aug 22, 2019 8:55 pm
Forum: Konoha
Topic: Mamorinuku! The Next Generation!
Replies: 13
Views: 320

Mamorinuku! The Next Generation!

Naoyukino had to admit he was not expecting Zakuro to just suddenly stop before the barrier and then engage with Nikuya, which did make things quite a bit of a pain as he began to contemplate if trying to break his own jutsu was now the correct move as he may need to get past the wall and aid his ne...
by WrightJustice
Thu Aug 22, 2019 8:36 pm
Forum: Registration
Topic: Uchiha, Rei
Replies: 6
Views: 51

Uchiha, Rei

Genjutsu: Go for a Stroll <--- this seems too powerful for a D-Rank; making the user essentially fully invisible with no way to tell and distracting with a fake version.
I think just creating a simple illusion clone is enough for D-Rank.
by WrightJustice
Thu Aug 22, 2019 4:08 pm
Forum: Registration
Topic: Uchiha, Touma
Replies: 7
Views: 45

Uchiha, Touma

Fixed. Also subbed a toryuu jutsu.
by WrightJustice
Thu Aug 22, 2019 3:36 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: 200 stats lets go!
Replies: 2
Views: 14

200 stats lets go!

Application: Nori Change: +2 Taijutsu [b]Stats:[/b][list][*][b]+Ninjutsu:[/b] 35 [*][b]-Taijutsu:[/b] 30 [*][b]-Genjutsu:[/b] 10 [*][b]+Stamina:[/b] 25 [*][b]+Control:[/b] 25 [*][b]+Strength:[/b] 25 [*][b]-Speed:[/b] 25 [*][b]-Instinct:[/b] 25 [*][b]Total:[/b] 200[/list] Payment: 5 CP and 10 OPHP
by WrightJustice
Wed Aug 21, 2019 6:59 pm
Forum: Registration
Topic: Uchiha, Touma
Replies: 7
Views: 45

Uchiha, Touma

Username: WrightJustice Points: 0/0 Prestige Perks: 0/0 Stat Trainings: (0/50) [hr] Uchiha , Touma https://u.cubeupload.com/WrightJustice/Uchiha3.jpg "My path. My Way. THAT is my creed." https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U7vRQdtApLE [hr] General Information Age: 27 Gender: Male Height: 5'8" Weight: 1...
by WrightJustice
Wed Aug 21, 2019 10:45 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Birthday Points
Replies: 2
Views: 10

Birthday Points

Application: Nori
Change: +5 Points

Oh also fix the color code on Tornado Pillar I suppose.
Payment: viewtopic.php?f=96&t=4022309&p=4166869#p4166869
by WrightJustice
Wed Aug 21, 2019 10:42 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Hyuuga, Hisei
Replies: 2
Views: 52

Hyuuga, Hisei

1/2, perfect first character.
by WrightJustice
Wed Aug 21, 2019 10:33 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Meiyo Souta
Replies: 3
Views: 41

Meiyo Souta

1/2
by WrightJustice
Wed Aug 21, 2019 10:24 am
Forum: Registration
Topic: Arashiyama Ookurikara
Replies: 5
Views: 98

Arashiyama Ookurikara

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by WrightJustice
Tue Aug 20, 2019 7:32 pm
Forum: Kiri
Topic: It's Levitakinesis not Levitarrkinesis!
Replies: 8
Views: 72

It's Levitakinesis not Levitarrkinesis!

As the lightning shot forwards it suddenly seemed to flow straight through Shinji which momentarily shocked Nishiki causing it to shoot slightly off course but he quickly took back control and held it still, then he made haste to pull it back as he felt a shiver of a vibration behind him as the afte...
by WrightJustice
Tue Aug 20, 2019 7:15 pm
Forum: Questions and Ideas
Topic: Specialization Discussion
Replies: 2
Views: 51

Specialization Discussion

I put yes in the sense of just the custom locks.
by WrightJustice
Tue Aug 20, 2019 2:42 pm
Forum: Registration
Topic: Arashiyama Ookurikara
Replies: 5
Views: 98

Arashiyama Ookurikara

Raiton • Thunderclap Sigil <--- I'm not sure you need the bit about boosting by half, it should be fine just giving 2 strength and speed no matter what. You should have a possible bit of an explanation of why his mutation occurred, perhaps a spirit passed through his mother or something when she was...
by WrightJustice
Tue Aug 20, 2019 2:11 pm
Forum: Registration
Topic: Hyōryū
Replies: 11
Views: 147

Hyōryū

Just want to make sure with your poison metal: For each post a target inhales the toxic metal or for each injury sustained the target(s) will lose one [-1] stamina for the remainder of the thread Is this intended as a stack or just a flat -1? The injury part sounds like a stack for each one, like if...
by WrightJustice
Mon Aug 19, 2019 8:25 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [ACCEPTED] Nishiki Jutsu
Replies: 5
Views: 48

Nishiki Jutsu

I think I fixed them up. Tempest is an archive but changed to channelling so archive version would need fixing also, figured 5 posts makes sense. Reworded both the raiton and doton tanker jutsu, hope they can work and suppose I should fix the older ones at some point also (do not wish to expand this...
by WrightJustice
Mon Aug 19, 2019 7:29 pm
Forum: Kiri
Topic: It's Levitakinesis not Levitarrkinesis!
Replies: 8
Views: 72

It's Levitakinesis not Levitarrkinesis!

Nishiki watched as Shinji cracked his neck before suddenly jumping in on his training, instructing him to attack with his ninjutsu which was not what he was expecting at this time but nonetheless he figured it would create a good moving target that could at least withstand any of his blows. "Oh... S...
by WrightJustice
Mon Aug 19, 2019 6:59 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Nori PB claims
Replies: 2
Views: 16

Nori PB claims

Application: Nori Change: +4 Taijutsu and stat total [b]Stats:[/b][list][*][b]+Ninjutsu:[/b] 35 [*][b]-Taijutsu:[/b] 28 [*][b]-Genjutsu:[/b] 10 [*][b]+Stamina:[/b] 25 [*][b]+Control:[/b] 25 [*][b]+Strength:[/b] 25 [*][b]-Speed:[/b] 25 [*][b]-Instinct: [/b] 25 [*][b]Total:[/b] 198[/list] Payment: ht...
by WrightJustice
Mon Aug 19, 2019 10:25 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [ACCEPTED] Hijikata Stat Training #23-27
Replies: 2
Views: 19

Hijikata Stat Training #23-27

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by WrightJustice
Mon Aug 19, 2019 10:20 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Hijikata - More Jutsu
Replies: 7
Views: 63

Hijikata - More Jutsu

Iado is now accepted, make sure this mod is up to date.
by WrightJustice
Mon Aug 19, 2019 10:00 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Iaido Rework
Replies: 21
Views: 199

Iaido Rework

[ACCEPTED]
by WrightJustice
Mon Aug 19, 2019 9:24 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Toryu Rework
Replies: 4
Views: 54

Toryu Rework

[ACCEPTED]
by WrightJustice
Mon Aug 19, 2019 9:05 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Shinden Rework
Replies: 4
Views: 60

Shinden Rework

[ACCEPTED]
by WrightJustice
Sun Aug 18, 2019 7:07 pm
Forum: Kiri
Topic: It's Levitakinesis not Levitarrkinesis!
Replies: 8
Views: 72

It's Levitakinesis not Levitarrkinesis!

Nishiki closed his eyes as he held his hands up towards the ball of lightning and began to focus on it, trying to delve deeper into just how it felt and behaved so that he could more easily manipulate it to its maximum potential. Though he knew not to go too far in his comparisons to the other eleme...
by WrightJustice
Sun Aug 18, 2019 5:28 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [ACCEPTED] Kiyoshi Mod. 2
Replies: 4
Views: 32

Kiyoshi Mod. 2

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by WrightJustice
Sun Aug 18, 2019 2:49 pm
Forum: Registration
Topic: Hyōryū
Replies: 11
Views: 147

Hyōryū

Your new poisonous metal needs to have the doton passive reduced by half compared to regular doton to maintain both passives.
by WrightJustice
Sun Aug 18, 2019 2:30 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [ACCEPTED] Kiyoshi Mod. 2
Replies: 4
Views: 32

Kiyoshi Mod. 2

It seems to me that form 1 does not allow you to age people up, only down, which needs at least form 2 to perform and as such Fountain of Youth should not have the ability to do so if it only requires form 1.
by WrightJustice
Sun Aug 18, 2019 2:04 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Style Pack
Replies: 12
Views: 90

Style Pack

Acidic Mist: Care Package <--- Speed should not be more than double that of strength, also I was a little confused at first with the list of stats at the top. Also seems like you shouldn't be able to add those extra anti-sense to your acid mist since its too many blocks and is running on two passive...
by WrightJustice
Sat Aug 17, 2019 1:24 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Doin the thing
Replies: 4
Views: 47

Doin the thing

1/2
by WrightJustice
Sat Aug 17, 2019 11:36 am
Forum: Kiri
Topic: It's Levitakinesis not Levitarrkinesis!
Replies: 8
Views: 72

It's Levitakinesis not Levitarrkinesis!

*[Levitakinesis] A-rank Ninjutsu Having achieved notable mastery over Raiton, the user is capable of shaping, directing, and manipulating existing bodies of the element without the need of hand seals or an existing technique. The range at which the user can manipulate the element is equal to the us...
by WrightJustice
Fri Aug 16, 2019 7:21 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Doin the thing
Replies: 4
Views: 47

Doin the thing

Checked and Doton archives appear to have changed a bit since you been gone so gotta fix up some of the jutsu on the sheet; you should be able to click on the quote button and grab the character code to fix stuff but if not I can send it over. That's all I can tell, the other stuff seems fine, thoug...
by WrightJustice
Fri Aug 16, 2019 3:46 pm
Forum: Introductions & Departures
Topic: Slow re-entry
Replies: 6
Views: 57

Slow re-entry

Yojo, welcome back!
by WrightJustice
Fri Aug 16, 2019 12:22 pm
Forum: Registration
Topic: Toukai,Jinshi
Replies: 5
Views: 85

Toukai,Jinshi

Username:memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=4065175 <--- Should codify it like so: [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=4065175]MiracleJerker[/url] Toukai,Jinshi <--- Same for Toukai name: [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=84&t=6198036]Touk...

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