Naruto Saigen Roleplay

<t>that's just "balance" for the sake of equality, I'd rather see the minimum trainings discount nixed entirely than just hamfisting balance for the sake of balance.<br/> <br/> 100 words off the minimum does not in any way force players to play a certain way. For starters, it'd be interesting to see...

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<t>A few quick things while I give your jutsu another once over.<br/> <br/> Under personality, you have these:<br/> <br/> Hopes/Dreams: He has only one dream. That is to become the Fire Daimyō. He has been the right hand man for the current Fire Daimyō for over 8 years and with the right guidance, h...

affinity =/= elemental concentrations. We could get rid of the affinity section on an app right now and it would barely change anything

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Mon Jul 09, 2018 6:21 pm

Affinities are already interesting

Affinities currently are useless 90% of the time. Outside of one genma and some sensory stuff, affinities have no impact on the site.

Looks good to me, 1/2.

However, FYI, with 25 Ninjutsu, and 25 Instinct, Tenzin gets 1000 words off ninjutsu trainings, which means the total needed for those C Ranks should only be 600 each.

<t>Meh. Every style of jutsu has its own advantages and disadvantages. I don't see why each needs its own equivalent advantage. One example of this is single pyramids for tai and gen. Nin doesn't get that benefit but it's not a big deal. This discount is a neat way to make affinities interesting wit...

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<t>Mtg is Magic the Gathering.<br/> <br/> While I also agree more than one option would have been nice, it's not that big of a deal, just list your preferences in a post. For example, I voted for a sitewide Chuunin Exam. I would also like to see a social/training festival, and Ninja Soccer, although...

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Looks like it's been applied, but it's still here so...

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So it still says you only have 8/8, but it seems that was cleared up on discord, so presumably you're all good.

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<r>Hi, so unlike stat trainings (of the same stat), jutsu trainings can't be combined like this. You can have them all trained in one post, but the need to be clearly delineated, each with their own word count. Luckily, from a cursory glance it seems you trained each jutsu, but they need to be separ...

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<t>Hi, great app!<br/> <br/> I just have two issues that should be pretty easy to resolve.<br/> <br/> First, I think the last stage of your poison suggests something a bit strong for a d-rank. Personally, I would say to get rid of the "unbearable" and just have it as "excruciating." Unbearable to me...

<r>A couple of minor things:<br/> <br/> If you want to, I'd recommend cleaning up your elemental specialization writeup by replacing the last sentence with:<br/> <br/> These stats can only be Ninjutsu, Speed, Control and Stamina.<br/> <br/> It looks a bit cleaner imo, but that's subjective.<br/> <br...

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<t>A few grammatical mistakes: <br/> Under Physical Features/Body:<br/> "Body: The shinobi sports an athletic body of a runner with slender but tones arms and legs, with only a slightly muscles chest along with visible but not defined abdominal muscles. Scars can be found on his across the upper tor...

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Sorry for the delay in response. My understanding from talking with mods is that clans that have abilities that can use jutsu need a pyramid (which, admittedly, has been missed occasionally), so you'll have to make an S-rank pyramid for the clan.

<t>Hey, I think it's neat you're opening up your ability to the forum as a clan. I'm gonna assume since the ability has already been accepted on Fuhen, it is good to go, but an actual mod will have to make that clear.<br/> <br/> That said, there is a requirement that all clans include an S-Rank pyra...

With 15 ninjutsu, you can only have 4 ninjutsu concentrations. You currently have 5.

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<r><SPOILER title="Training"><s>[spoiler=Training]</s>Instinct (14-15)<br/> Training 21<e>[/spoiler]</e></SPOILER> On top of the already dismal mist, today it was pouring. Although usually, Arashi Takumi felt comfort in the mist, and even the rain, today it just made him feel exhausted. The drowsy w...

Claiming for 11/8.

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<t>"Water is comprised of two things, one of them being oxygen. Even then phosphorus still burns underwater ICly,..."<br/> <br/> This is super pseudo science-y and frankly the science doesn't make any sense. Just because the water molecule is a compound consisting of Oxygen and Hydrogen does not mea...

<r>The morning mist hung in the air as Takumi walked through the massive crowd to get a good vantage point. Today it seemed the mist, usually so thick, was welcoming and comfortable, as if even it knew today was cause for celebration. After all, it wasn't every day that a new Jinchuriki was announce...

You're gonna have to make him an elemental specialist for custom chiton.

(just fyi, trainings have been decreased to 1000 and are stackable, so if you converted those two 1500 word trainings into one post, you could get 3 instinct.)

For C-rank iijutsu you need 10 control.

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It says on the HHR page that the org had 216 renown. Why is it so low for the conversion?

<r><URL url="https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5937082/1/#new"><s>[url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5937082/1/#new]</s>Senju Clan<e>[/url]</e></URL>: <QUOTE><s>[quote]</s>Traits: The Senju clan posses a few unifying traits such as: Their hair tends ...

can you have two characters in the same organization?

<t>While I agree that Sia should definitely be able to lotto for the pauldron, and won it fairly, I can attest that not everyone was aware that the rule was not as set in stone as the plain language makes it appear. I personally didn't know that the ability to apply for later items was the practice ...