Naruto Saigen Roleplay

<r>Out of all the people from his past that were sent out to replace Hokori, Oohazure was glad that Hana was chosen, for a few reasons. The first, and most obvious, was that she was not stupid. Granted, she wasn't the smartest person in the world, but neither was he. If Ken were to be sent on this m...

<r>There was obviously some animosity between Ryuu and Oohazure, which the jinchuuriki ignored for now, as questions were definitely needed moreso now than some petty bickering. Granted, this could have been solved much faster had the Genkouyoushi just listened to his own request, letting Yumegokoch...

For the next week or so, I have a whole bunch going on. I'll try to check stuff, but I won't be able to do as much. ;_; Sorry guyssss.

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<r>Following her orders, just as he had done so many times prior, Oohazure stepped back, allowing the Youton user to complete her jutsu destroy the wall near the back of the cavern. While stone wasn't something completely difficult to destroy, it did help that Hana was able to be the muscle in this ...

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Mk, post when you get it.

Three days or so D:

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<t>Gonna see how far I get.<br/> <br/> Broken italics tag in the arrow dimensions.<br/> <br/> Note that you will only get up to B ranked warp, due to it being specialist locked.<br/> <br/> Basic jutsu shouldn't be on your app.<br/> <br/> Based on what you have your ninpou pyramid at, it is off.<br/>...

<r>Megumi sighed, knowing that this was for the best but it would be a very difficult task defending Osamu from the wrath of the town. But with the help of the two ninja, it would be a little easier, at the very least. <B><s>[b]</s><COLOR color="#E22882"><s>[color=#E22882]</s>"However, I do ask that...

Aww. Hope everything goes well.

<t>For the Sode, you'll need to state what it defends at, otherwise it is just for show, rather than being an actual armor.<br/> <br/> You don't actually say what Bone Breaker nor Butcher are.<br/> <br/> If your jutsu are all in the 'tomahawk style' why not just make a style description for it, so y...

You still have your clothing/accessories bolded.

You still need to go through with a spelling/grammer checker. D:

Your ninpo techs aren't organized correctly.

I'm counting 94 points for jutsu. Special Jounin get 90.

<t>You still have the issue of getting super Fuuton Empathy with touch.<br/> <br/> . Being able to taste poisons allows him to not ingest them, by simply realizing they are present (so he would taste it in wine and then be able to spit them out). <- That still isn't true. If you have tasted them, yo...

K, scoop was removed due to some discussion.

Nintai is both tai and nin, so you have fulfill all pf the requirements.

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Gonna skype convo this, cause that's kinda wrong.

<t>I used my starting equipment wealth to get two e ranked puppets and rank them up to C rank (4+4+6)x2 = 28, then a sword of 2 and then explosives of 5, making the starting 35 for weapons.<br/> <br/> The poison, which is nearly the same as the one on Ginjiro, is 10 points.<br/> <br/> Any other ques...

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Not really. D:
Discussed a bit on the box though.

<t>So, touch, which requires a 1 stamina, gives you wind empathy sensor? Talked with Director, and he said 10 meters sounds a lot better.<br/> <br/> For taste, if you've tasted them, they are already in your system. If you wanted you to spit them out or something of that sort, you'd need a tech to e...

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Talked with some people and Molten Core is doing too much stuff. I think you need to separate it out into multiple jutsu. The core+super hot stuff and then the super blast as another.

Other than that, you're almost there.

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Sorry about the wait on this.

Your age/gender/clothing/etc are all still bolded.

Again, could you go through your app and fix the spelling/capitalization errors? There are bunches. <o>

Looks good again. D:
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<r>Gonna disagree with Valk here about Paper Ignite. Bomb techniques have no strength of their own, but still have a speed.<br/> <QUOTE><s>[quote]</s>The other method is bomb techniques. These are techniques that have no strength, and must rely on explosive force. The jutsu as treated as having no s...

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, if not it is fire and forget. The bird will move with a speed of 15 and impact with a speed of 5.



This still:
Shield Formation has 10 additional stats that it can distribute between speed/strength.

<t>That's a picture of Cloud, so you can't use it. D: <br/> <br/> Just as a note, but your character is really bad in taijutsu and any sort of close range combat. Just making sure you are aware.<br/> <br/> In your equipment section, you need to list where you keep it all.<br/> <br/> For Moving Walls...

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<t>Tenkujutsu isn't a ninjutsu concentration, even though you have it there. D:<br/> <br/> Portable Pad needs a creation speed, and it needs measurements on it. 7x7 what? Inches? Feet? etc. This is common in a lot of your other barrier jutsu.<br/> <br/> Hidden Dagger needs seals, unless you get ninj...