Naruto Saigen Roleplay

<r><SPOILER><s>[spoiler]</s><NOCODE><s>[nocode]</s>[hr]<br/> [center][b][big]Jutsu[/big][/b][/center]<br/> [spoiler=Hisomujutsu][center]-- D Rank --[/center]<br/> <br/> [b][color=#041D4C][Hisomujutsu • Trip][/color][/b]<br/> D-Ranked Hisomujutsu<br/> [b]Spark:[/b] User: "Didn't mean to trip you up."...

<r><SPOILER><s>[spoiler]</s><NOCODE><s>[nocode]</s>[b]Username:[/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=337579/]Orius[/url]<br/> [b]Points:[/b] 48/209<br/> [hr]<br/> [center][big][big][b]Oohazure[/b][/big][/big]<br/> the Failure, the Unwanted, the King<br/>...

<t>K, gonna need to two post this. For making the third post, please use the Archives account. Splitting the posts here. First post will be the next post, with the points taken off. Second will be the jutsu post.<br/> <br/> Also, bolded his genjutsu concentrations, since they weren't before for some...

<t>A strange string of events lead to this point, with uneasy alliances and many new events to spring Kazouchi into an almost need to improve himself. Granted, being a missing ninja required that on an almost daily basis, as hunter nin would never stop coming after him.<br/> <br/> Then again, that w...

<r><QUOTE author="Golnax" time="1492402262"><s>[quote=Golnax,(time=1492402262)]</s>Went through a similar issue with my old laptop.<br/> <br/> My advice? Get a new one. ASAP. Your laptop is on it's final legs, get a new one and a Jumpdrive to transfer all important data ASAP.<br/> <br/> You do NOT w...

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<t>Last paragraph of the new masked beast ability has some punctuation/capitalization errors.<br/> <br/> So long as one of them lives, Kenji's main body can be revived at the cost of one of the Masked One's hearts. <- I would like a time limit to be placed on that, a la Ishiki. It doesn't have to be...

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Code is being silly, so posted the full code there, so you just have to edit, then copy paste it.

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Infiltration Route should still be a maneuver.

Predator's Step should have Padded Step as a prereq.

<t>Wakana was born to the Furuta family in Sunagakure no Sato, which were deeply religious, harmonious, and one with nature, which was partially contradictory to what one would expect from Sunagakure no Sato. While not openly discriminated against, the family held their own beliefs to themselves, ma...

<t>Chakra to make things brigher is hiton. Fire can make light, but manipulating that is not in the realm of katon. For example, fire makes heat, but manipulating heat is heat release. Rocks can make sand, but manipulating sand is sand style. Etcetc. Light is a byproduct of fire, not the main produc...

<r><QUOTE><s>[quote]</s> No because the blast is directed outward, and all energy is being focused at the point of contact. This would mean any jutsu that explodes, IE Fist explosion no jutsu would cause damage to the user, and make it completely nonviable. This is why I specified where the explosio...

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<r>up to 20 meters or less. < - Redundant.<br/> He is able to wield and hold this jutsu for 2 posts. <- Can he move it? Needs a bit more definition. <br/> <br/> <B><s>[b]</s><COLOR color="#fe0"><s>[color=#fe0]</s>Raiton • Ragnarok's Roar<e>[/color]</e></COLOR><e>[/b]</e></B> <- Should have an origin...

<r><B><s>[b]</s>Perceive<e>[/b]</e></B> <-This should have some build up. Also, double period at the end. Also, a C ranked tech that lets you see if you are in a genjutsu, ignoring the instinct/gen requirements? I think not.<br/> <br/> <B><s>[b]</s>Infiltration Route<e>[/b]</e></B> <- At a glance? N...

*having a staff chat about the ability*
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<t>Katon • Ghost-light: Foolish Fire <-- Seems like a hiton tech. <br/> <br/> [Strong Fist Style • Demon Shout] <-- Use your parenthesis. Strength + 1/2 Stamina is different than (Strength+Stamina)/2.<br/> <br/> Katon • Creeping Ghost-Light: Tonberry Dance <- Due to the sheer number of flames that a...

<t>Mosquito bites hurts more than that! <- Should be C rank, imo.<br/> <br/> Blind <- Biome, not bio-me<br/> <br/> That it?! <- B rank.<br/> <br/> Flipping slash and crash <- Missing a line break after the jutsu rank.<br/> <br/> Scorpion crater <- Should be at 3/4ths the user's strength, max. Also n...

Post when you're done adding jutsu and stuff. <o/

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<r>Since he is the equivilant of a special jounin, he wouldn't have 5 tails yet. D:<br/> <S><s>[s]</s><br/> [Shadow Senbon Technique] <- This should probably have the stealth concentration.<e>[/s]</e></S><br/> <QUOTE><s>[quote]</s><COLOR color="#e6e774"><s>[color=#e6e774]</s><B><s>[b]</s>[Suanni • P...

Gonna say two days or so. <o>

Gonna give you until the 22nd to fix this up. D:

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I'm gonna be working with her on the S rank, cause it needs a LOT of work.

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Mk.
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<r>Ken's own mental formations were ticking as Oohazure took a sip, quietly placing his cup down and letting his former teammate contemplate exactly what was needed for this situation. While it was partially a test of Oohazure's trust of Ken'ichi's mindset, he also wanted to see exactly what the ban...

O_O

Ginjiro for Envy. viewtopic.php?&t=6206042/1/

<r>The statue, with Hana's help, easily moved and was drug out of its tiny corner, revealing a passageway behind it. While not overly decorative, it was obviously something that was meant to be hidden from prying eyes. Oohazure motioned forward, knowing that Hana's silence was a bit strange, now was...

<r>Iaso noted his own oddness, which prompted the jinchuuriki to right himself, answering her fairly bluntly, <COLOR color="#AFAD00"><s>[color=#AFAD00]</s><B><s>[b]</s>"Nothing. Just overthinking, I think."<e>[/b]</e></B><e>[/color]</e></COLOR><br/> <br/> While it was partially the case, Oohazure wo...

Edited. It is the ones that they have used.