Naruto Saigen Roleplay

Oops, missed that one.

Fixed.

You have a broken spoiler tag in your history section.

I think you also swapped points and stats; a C rank hench gets 40 stats and 35 points, but it looks like you have 35 stats and 40 points of jutsu.

It'd be better if your picture was visible on your app, rather than requiring people to go somewhere else to see it. The [img]pic url here[/img] can be used to accomplish this. Also, your weapons should indicate where each item is held/carried on the character. For example, hip pouches can hold senb...

Fixed.

Niku had run into many shinobi during her time as one; there were many, like Mami, following in the footsteps of their clan or family members and many, like Essen, who had seen shinobi and admired their skill set. Niku was sure there were also some like Izaki who had suffered some sort of loss or ha...

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Application: Niku Change: Adding the follow jutsu (and required concentrations): [Ninjutsu • Finger Pull] E-Ranked Ninjutsu Utilizing the basics of Act of Tree Climbing, this technique focuses chakra to the tip of Niku's finger as she places it onto one of her chakrams. With just a touch, she can a...

In the "Swarm/Specialized 9th Stat:" quote - Currently, there are only 6 stats in this system... calling sync a 9th stat seems confusing with that in mind.

In the same area, both of those links do not work for me, says I'm unauthorised to read that forum.

Should we be reporting things (like app checks) to someone or here? Or will someone just find them at some point?

Niku wasn't sure why she was standing between this group of people and this oversized individual with a unique appearance. It was almost like her instincts kicked in and she moved without considering her options. She really had no horse in this race, she didn't care if this band of sailors beat this...

Application: https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=85&t=5951567 Change: Updated Age, Height/Weight, Physical Features, Clothing, Picture, Personality, Style Descriptions, and History. Redid stats and added a perk Removed 289 points worth of jutsu (added to point total) and will update...

Application: Vanguard Change: Updating to include threads. Payment: None Vanguard A squad initially comprised of chuunin with considerable offensive skills generally partaking in missions that are likely to contain combat. While the name does indicate that the squad would be in the front of any att...

Niku wasn't too pleased with how things had worked out. She'd inquired about joining Mamorinuku prior to becoming a chuunin. Because of that, she'd been given a desk job after a somewhat embarrassing recruitment by Zakuro. Despite having been promoted to chuunin since then, she was still working at ...

Your stats add up to 38, genin get 40 stats at start up.

Application: Juusha Change: Buying 25 stats, bringing him up to S rank and adding the 35 points for ranking up, changed perk to 0/1 Payment: 75 points Sadame Juusha Juu Perfection is attainable. [hr] General Information Age: 15 Gender: Male Height: 5'4" Weight: 190 lbs. Physical Features: Face/head...

Not sure if I added it up right.

You got:
1 point for 15 kunai
1 point for 15 senbon
38 points for 19 D ranks
12 points for 4 C ranks

Total of 52, genin get a total of 50 though.

C ranks are 3 points each and it looks like you have 3 C ranks total (2 raiton and 1 taijutsu).

That puts you at 9 points for C ranks, putting your total points spent at 53.

Niku realized that she hadn't given Izaki a chance to introduce himself, but she figured the days worth of travel would give everyone lots of time to get to know each other. In a way, this was a nice, relaxing way for the group to mesh as a unit. Niku was glad once everyone was up and they all began...

Niku, lost in thought mentally and physically lost in the mundane action of feeding herself, didn't notice as the large stranger in the corner began to fall. But, like everyone else in the restaurant, eventually her gaze and attention were pulled to the behemoth in the corner again as he floundered ...

Ah, one was supposed to be Polearm. Fixed.

Sadame Juusha Juu Perfection is attainable. [hr] General Information Age: 15 Gender: Male Height: 5'4" Weight: 190 lbs. Physical Features: Face/head: Juu's face is notably young looking, easily able to fit on a boy 2 or 3 years younger than himself. His eyes are an interesting yellow color and his ...

Application: viewtopic.php?f=85&t=5951567
Change: Adding 20 stats to Desire, bringing it to 21.
Payment:

• Protect the Route - 4
• You Get a Sensei! - 5
• Desire - 1
• Promotion - 7
• Takin' Care of Business - 2
• Recon or Stalking? - 1

Niku had arrived to Cha Outpost, situated on the border of Fire and Tea Countries, the day before. Now, she had gone out to explore, and hopefully find the dojo where her grandfather had been trained. She hoped to find that one because he had told her of the infamous Reincarnation Draw, a technique ...

Niku smiled warmly as the large boy came and sat on the bench. She couldn't help but wonder what kind of shape the boy was really in, his size suggested he may need some endurance training before he could be useful in combat situation. Her report indicated that the boy was a taijutsu user, like hers...

Application: https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=82&t=8272254 Change: Updating Ki Sabre. Removed a bunch of the requirements as they no longer seemed necessary. Removed the ranks for coating, since that no longer makes sense. Tweaked some of the jutsu. Payment: Niku Ki Sabre Descrip...

Control x5 - 2501/2500 words The clouds covered the sky, leaving the world grey and darker than most other days. Despite the darkness, there was no rain or lightning though there was a good deal of wind, making the temperature feel a bit cool. Even with the weather as it was, Niku wasn't the only on...

This could probably be moved to finished, at least unstickied.

Application: https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5951567/1/ Change: Adding 2 jutsu: [Skitter Step • Night Vision] B-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline Prerequisites: a form of Senses Open active Niku's Opened vision allows her to see more clearly than normal human vision: this technique is...

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While the coded template spells the word correctly, the nocoded template section misspells Willpower, leaving out the e.

So what you're saying is: "we can't change how we do things cause it would change how we do things"? From a guy who just said "who cares?" about revamping the entirety of the site... that seems like a completely valid response. For the record, I'm not in favor of this but to summarily discard the su...

Niku nodded in affirmation as Raizou asked to take the lead. While Niku had learned Mind's Eye sensory, her range was still embarrassingly short; she knew genin that could do better than she could. This guy is probably one of them, she mused as the two headed down the trail along the cliff. Despite ...

Niku's eye caught motion in front of her, causing her to look up. She realized that the man for whom she'd bought lunch was waving at her, though his head was still completely hidden. For a moment, she wondered if the guy was a missing ninja cause he was so focused on hiding his identity. I mean, he...

Everyone had seemed impressed with Niku's progress since the successful mission with Raizou and Fanho. It wasn't surprising, Nku had played a vital part in completing the mission and during the debriefing, Niku was all but promised that a promotion was in her future. Paperwork was in the pipeline, i...

Maybe include a nocode of the style description?

Niku was surprised as the big guy she'd followed into the restaurant tried to steal another man's soup. She was about to step in, see if she could help, but the owner or manager did so before she could and quickly the place was back to normal. She wondered what the man had gone through to be so hung...

Despite not being in her hometown of Konoha, Niku felt relaxed and comfortable. These weren't her people and any one of them could attack her at any moment, but it felt like Konoha to her. None of the people carried amazingly large weapons or had death-inducing auras about them, everyone just seemed...

Hey yo!

Niku felt bad for bringing up the chuunin exam, it was definitely something she hadn't needed to say. In an attempt to make herself seem closer to him, she had in fact led Raizou to focus on his own shortcomings. In truth, Niku knew she had waited quite late to take the exam; so while she had passed...

The travels hadn't taken nearly as long as Niku had expected, but had done a significant job of tiring her out. Maybe she'd moved too quickly instead of properly pacing herself. Oh well, she mused, aware that what's done was done. Luckily, she'd been able to rest a couple days at the Cha Outpost, be...

* Fuuton • Flying Swallow A-Ranked Fuuton Nintaijutsu Prerequisite: Sharp Weapon Focusing wind type chakra to his or her blades, the user of this technique is able to enhance the sharp quality of their wind-element chakra, invisibly extending the reach of the weapon by up to 1.5m. The cutting edge ...