Naruto Saigen Roleplay

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I can't find anything wrong curse you

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Team Name: Class 1A

Members Involved: Tydie, Kabu, ShinobiTruth, &Aes Sedai

Characters Involved: Hatsume Ieyasu, Kyozu Jun, Arashiyama Ookurikara, & Kenshin Yasu

Plotboards Completed:

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Sorry to be the bearer of bad news but someone is currently using the image you have on an active character

Everything else is good to go otherwise.

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Corrupted Kunai, Corrupted Senbon etc - Techniques like these need a formation speed and strength of projectile we don't do passives by ranks anymore. You also have a broken quote tag on the D-Rank Corrupted Techniques. Any weapons that can be thrown or used at range must be +1 rank so ranged debuf...

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Hey noticed you are missing the history section on your application. If you could fill out a few bits about his birth, childhood and anything else noteworthy in his life up until this point. I strongly suggest reading your clan's history if you haven't done so already so you get an idea of what kind...

Hey so the Fukusha have only been in Iwagakure for roughly 10 years or so meaning your character would have most likely been born when the clan was nomadic.

Other than that history seems fine

Edited thanks for pointing that out Wright

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Denied upon request.

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Disciplines are basically passive Taijutsu traits so while it allows your palms to physically connect to the blade without any serious injury you would need a manoeuvre still to perform the actual deflect itself. Taijutsu become a blend of Disciplines, Stances and Manoeuvres all being used in conjun...

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Shizumeru • [Basic Realm Empowerment]
Shizumeru • [Intermediate Realm Empowerment]
Shizumeru • [Advanced Realm Empowerment]
- These should be split up into individual techniques to enhance the realm to be honest it is too much for a single jutsu.

Your augment concentration has a typo

* Kūgāpou • Soft Paws - At D-Rank I don't think this should allow them to completely negate the effects of pushing away a blade but I don't think they should be very severe either like at worst bruising after prolonged use there should also be a manoeuvre to complement the discipline. * Kūgāpou • Sl...

Fukusha clan insignia is now a broken link

Howdy

Application: https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=83&t=8340270 Change: Changed Uchiha to Fukusha Changed Sharingan to Shogo-Zumi Swapped Uchiha Tai archives for Fukusha Tai archives Payment: Free due to clan changes Username: ♦ Varian Points: 79/107 Prestige Perks: 0/0 Stat Trainings...

Yuji frowned a little at the idea of dying quickly. "I will try not to create too much paperwork for you Sensei." The Fukusha moved over towards the table undoing the sash around his waist. Removing the gown draped around his shoulders as he strode over, leaving only a black high necked sleeveless t...

Yuji frowned at the greeting from the bannin. "And here I thought I was on time." The great hall was impressive to say the least, long benches lined tables equally as long. The hall still seemed empty however without the many men and women of Jousai filling it. The Genin walked further into the room...

Yuji woke up as the sun began to rise. Orange scorched the sky like fire in the night. The Fukusha slipped from his bed standing there in nakedness for a moment. Slipping into some clothes he began to make his way downstairs. The hall was empty this morning, the twins were at the academy, Eiji was s...

The attendant waited after rapping his knuckles against the ornate wooden door of the Yukari residence. The entrance opened allowing some of the interior light to pour forth from the hall out into the grim day. A strong gust of wind blew his coat sideways as the door was pushed further open. "Greeti...

Centuries of erosion has formed a large canyon. Various rivers branching off from one another has created a series of island like pillars within this canyon. In a small abandoned bandit camp on one of these island pillars lies the scene of a massacre. A group of thieves who could not agree on how to...

Surrounded by mountainous terrain on all sides there is an old run down dojo. Enough of it remained standing for it to still be considered a building. The large holes within the walls and roof would have many feel otherwise. The gardens that once surrounded this temple gifting it much beauty were no...

The land of plains and seas is well known for it's fertile lands and warrior culture. Along the coast of the land of plains and seas a vast array of cliffs loom over the vast ocean. Along such a cliff a vast cavern faces out to sea and at it's very centre a shrine to a legendary samurai who was said...

His clan were a highly perceptive bunch by nature even without their Shōgō-zumi and as such Yuji's eyes followed the ball of Katon. Despite this it moved a such a speed his brain was behind on processing what his eyes saw. Not only would his body not be able to keep up with moving at such a speed. T...

Team Name: Team Kotaru

Members Involved: Varian & Kao

Characters Involved: Yuji & Kotaru

Plotboards Completed:

A brisk wind swept the village of Iwagakure, dust rolled through the surface streets. The clouds parted occasionally to let brief sunlight and warmth through. A trio moved through these streets with purpose. Many stood aside when they came across their path for they were known amongst the village. A...

It limits a pure caster build from what it could be I suppose

Yeah

Malevolence: Iza
Crown: Zippo
Chest: Joker
Creation: Tsedas

It was the early hours of the morning in Iwagakure. A chuunin sat in an office bored out of his mind, face planted firmly on the desk trying to fight off sleep. The chuunin sat back in his chair rocking it slightly as he did. Shifting the headband that had slipped down over his brow, bringing it bac...

Yuji looked puzzled at the expression on Kotaru's face when he talked about this bloody mess of a girl. "It sounds like you admire her almost; despite your description of her." The genin smirked a little with his remark. Although he had not known Kota long he could tell that the facial expression th...

Yuji noticed Kota's eye roll, a slight irritation forming and squashed as a result. The Uchiha gave Aiko a wave as she announced her departure. Yuji rose an eyebrow a little as he watched the way Kotaru looked at Aiko walk away. So that was his type? Yuji was surprised that the bannin even had a typ...

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