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Your nocode has also removed the Charge & Augment fuuin concentration, was that intentional?

Which Al? Weird? Phonse? Capone? Gore?

Kotori accepted the offered protective jutsu willingly, especially given that it originated from Natsumi, whom she'd had a rather fruitful recent meeting. She could trust Natsumi and her techniques. The swarm was new and excited for her, though, and while they walked she marvelled at the small butte...

Application: Head Hunter Division Changes: Add new members: Kaguya Li, Aisu Hatsuyuki, Shiimu Kozan, Nakiya Ryoko, Karagata Kinsue, Itotsuki Abari, Fuskinkou Tomoe Updated donation and thread trackers +8 ryo from this grading which mistakenly didn't pay out to HHD (6's for Ryoko+Chikaki = 24/3 => 8...

The Outsider Bloodriver Bar, Kirigakure, Two Weeks Ago… - [hr] - Aisu Naohiro toyed with a rogue lock of hair. Blonde hair, cropped short, as tousled and unkempt as one just risen from an uneasy night’s sleep. He grimaced and let the disgust show openly on his face, letting the twisted expression c...

Naohiro heard the approaching footfalls before his accomplice for the night turned into the courtyard, and waited quietly with his back turned, counting her steps. His training with the Division made it relatively simple to pinpoint her position from the sound alone, and he often made a little game ...

Tomoe's thrust deflected away from the new shield with a sudden clonk of steel on hard wood, sending her arm ricocheting wide and making her gasp silently with the surprise of the block. Where had that come from?! She wavered for just a moment while the other woman fell backwards along the ground be...

Naohiro listened impassively at first, inclining his head just slightly as Abari explained his logic. He was a good thinker, laying out a sensible and methodical approach to the hyopthetical problem. It was more thorough than he'd expected, honestly, though his apprehensiveness grew right up until t...

The hammering footfalls of horses echoed through the mountains as Watabe Jun’ichi, lieutenant of Lord Naratame’s first reconnaissance company, led his unit on a wide-ranging sortie. Their purpose was to scout and search as outriders at the extreme flanks and fore of the main host, to find the best g...

I guess. Since it's you.
Accepted!

"Yeah, you can say that again," Kotori scoffed, then hesitated and shrank back a little under the intensity of Shizuo’s gaze. For the most part he’d so far seemed earnest and friendly with her, and certainly more direct than others she'd met recently. She was beginning to like him, even. But someth...

Kotori's attitude towards Kanada sobered as the conversation went on and she came to understand the depth of the woman's experience—and something of her station, too. This was no run-of-the-mill shinobi, but someone about whom stories would one day be told. She didn't know much about Kirigakure, exc...

[hr] ~ ~ The Fragment, Year 1230: The third year of the Fourth Great Shinobi War. Following Naohiro's encounter with Hizashi Yoshino, First Sword of the Sun, during the Invasion of Oasis Country... https://i.imgur.com/vUnhIo8.jpg ~ ~ [hr] A shining rent appeared in the cool air of Aisu Naohiro's per...

Naohiro walked slowly around the table until he stood opposite the chuunin, staring at him all the while. He thought the poor man might be shaking, just a little, for all that he otherwise kept a tight rein on his fear. It bode well for him that he could still speak clearly. Reluctantly, Naohiro rea...

"Okay. Shizuo-san." She shook his hand, finding his touch surprisingly gentle despite the way his palms dwarfed hers. She nodded along to his explanation about the Tenkujutsu Research Institute; Shoshiki Heiya had explained some of what that school of study was all about. Namely spirits, and people...

Hirohito Junko watched each of her counterparts travel through the city towards the Mizukage's tower. She passed Kawazaiwa Ichase hobbling his way over a bridge just an hour past, listened to Karagata Izune as he took breakfast, and handed Muramasa Hana her haori as she prepared for the day. Not per...

The Shogo-zumi taijutsu will need to be custom jutsu I'm afraid - Niro was mistaken in his comment - i.e. more than just throwing a new name on the clan archives. Clan archives are not accessible to transplant recipients unless you somehow have a means to learn directly from the clan. Some basic tec...

Kotori had to resist the urge to raise an eyebrow; who was this woman, to chide her so? Yes, she was a little late, but not terribly so, and the mission was only marked as a low-risk one. But she schooled her face to calmness and bowed her head in acknowledgement all the same. Like it or not, this K...

Kotori fell into step beside Amaya as the crowd began to depart, walking along on the opposite side of the Shoshiki as the young lad from the crowd. She did not sing, even when Amaya encouraged her and showed her some words formed from glass in her hand. Kotori read them and glanced up at Amaya, but...

tomoe jumps and slashes downwards @ Str: 15 Spd: 20 and throws two shuriken @ 15str/spd kasuri fires two arrows @ 13 str/spd, knocking the shuriken aside and bouncing the arrows in towards tomoe from either side Tomoe's dark eyes flickered and widened as the two arrows lanced outwards from the woman...

Kotori ceased her own search through the muck of debris of the camp, looking up and breaking out into a smile as Setsuna discovered their prize. Then she clambered out of the remnants of her doton technique, pulling herself free and wiping off as much of the much as she could before following her co...

No sooner had Abari been engulfed by the mist than he gained a shadow. A small figure, solitary, black-clad and moving in utter silence, slipped from shadow to shadow some distance behind him, watching and waiting. The librarian's report had come swiftly, and the Hunter was its answer. A threat, is ...

The mist lay thick and heavy across the island of Kirigakure in the fading half-light of a late evening as Aisu Naohiro strode around the engawa walkway around his estate, head buried in a small ledger. He stopped and looked up, frowning, as a flicker of shadowed movement and rapid footsteps broke t...

Also think it's ok

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Kanade may have made a point of being early, but Hachiya Kotori, young kunoichi and jinchuuriki of Iwagakure, was blessedly unburdened by such concerns as punctuality. Instead, she sat perched upon the parapet of the legendary village wall, kicking her legs against the stonework and smiling up at th...

Just posting to say that my being present in a topic—if that is being used as justification—where a similar technique was used and not challenging it at the time isn't necessarily an endorsement that it & related techniques are necessarily fine, haha. I'm not always checking every action, sometimes ...

Twisting lines of fuuton wrapped and wove around Naohiro's fingers as he stepped forwards to meet the two bodyguards, eyes flicking between both. The swordsman moved first, closing in and leaping with his blade raised to strike. At the apex of the jump, as the sword flashed down towards him, Naohiro...

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This is fine but I will not remove the 20 ryo from the org as you're doing here - because that will screw up your Amaya mod where you're pulling payment from HNK. Mixing mods is bad!

Nevermind, found the discussion on Discord, you're good
Probably my mistake originally since I misunderstood that rule!

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Your archived character can be found here: viewtopic.php?f=85&p=4200182#p4200182
Please refer to that link in the future when modifying the character

Please add a link to the Jinrai from her surname You're a few stats short, I count 36 instead of 40 A rather oversized guitar it measures a total of 140 meters (...) I never took you for such a connoisseur of understatement! I assume you meant 140 centimetres or 1.40 metres? @ the guitar, I'm not qu...

Please can you add in a "Power Rank: A-Rank Henchman" or equivalent somewhere? Just because only a small subset of members know what Heart's 'Hatsubushi' rank is.

You don't need to increment your stat training counter for purchased stats, only if they're trained instead I notice you're also trying to change the boosts given by your warrior spirit in the new codes. I'm unsure if we're allowed to do that, so I'm going to ask the other staff for a concensus bef...

Can you link to where the previous payment was incorrect? Help us understand the mistake please