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by Golnax
Thu Jun 20, 2019 9:09 pm
Forum: Kirigakure no Sato
Topic: [OPEN] Mother...?!
Replies: 23
Views: 9573

[OPEN] Mother...?!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CAclNG3opgQ Aimi's speed was impressive, but the streets of Kirigakure were like a labyrinth at the worst possible moments. He dashed by as quick as his legs could carry him, leaving nary an after image of himself behind and a trail of wind that kicked up debris and ...
by Golnax
Fri Jun 14, 2019 3:08 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [JFCMHT] Amazing Grace
Replies: 2
Views: 1594

[JFCMHT] Amazing Grace

Hours had passed since the fight on the roof had ended. Aimi and Fuhen had both been disarmed and brought back down the tower from whence they'd come, marched back the way they had came, and were put into cells for holding for the time being. Mo was not brought with them this time. Instead, she had ...
by Golnax
Fri Jun 14, 2019 2:53 pm
Forum: Kirigakure no Sato
Topic: [Plotboard][Closed] Something Wicked This Way Comes
Replies: 8
Views: 4284

[Plotboard][Closed] Something Wicked This Way Comes

https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=76&t=8340276 Aimi landed with a dull thud outside of the gates of the Karagata compound on the balls of his feet, his knees bent to absorb the shock of landing. He stood up straight and fanned his wings out for a moment before bringing them to a cl...
by Golnax
Fri Jun 14, 2019 2:09 pm
Forum: Kirigakure no Sato
Topic: [OPEN] Mother...?!
Replies: 23
Views: 9573

[OPEN] Mother...?!

The effect of his jutsu had more of an effect than the jounin had anticipated. He watched from afar as the winds were disrupted, the mist dispersed and his flames consuming the thin veil of protection that the Genma, presumably the Genma, had made for itself. He watched as his flames died out, quick...
by Golnax
Fri Jun 14, 2019 1:44 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: Main Pack
Replies: 1
Views: 848

Main Pack

Application: Aimi Kaguya
Change: Addin' 35 points
Payment: viewtopic.php?f=107&t=8340358&p=4165999#p4165999
by Golnax
Wed Jun 05, 2019 3:21 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding
Replies: 26
Views: 8159

[JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding

As anticipated, Aimi's opponent had been able to block the strike that had been aimed at him. Sacrificing one of his spears in the process didn't seem to bother the man as he threw it to the side without a care for his weapon, perhaps viewing it more as a tool rather than a part of himself. What cam...
by Golnax
Sun May 26, 2019 10:29 am
Forum: Kirigakure no Sato
Topic: [OPEN] Mother...?!
Replies: 23
Views: 9573

[OPEN] Mother...?!

It occurred to Aimi that he would have a better vantage point not by flying straight but by going up. He recalled how the magenta chakra of Yoshimitsu was quite distinct and imagined it'd be easy to spot against the seemingly endless expanse of blue that was the ocean around them. Thus, he changed h...
by Golnax
Thu May 23, 2019 11:51 am
Forum: Kirigakure no Sato
Topic: [OPEN] Mother...?!
Replies: 23
Views: 9573

[OPEN] Mother...?!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qJRSEUWKEn0 Elsewhere, in the Kaguya compound. Aimi Kaguya stood naked in his kitchen. He stood with a knife in one hand, a cutting board beneath him on the kitchen counter, and a potato in the other that he was slowly sliding over the wooden board and chopping into ...
by Golnax
Thu May 16, 2019 2:49 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding
Replies: 26
Views: 8159

[JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding

The rooftop crowds cheered on the combatants while the judges, guards and Mo stood on, watching on baited breath. Aimi could hear the cheers and jeers of the crowd over the pad of his feet, the swish of his sword, the sound of rushing air as his opponent's spear came at him, and yet it all seemed mu...
by Golnax
Sun Jan 27, 2019 3:38 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Day 26 Cash In
Replies: 7
Views: 2309

Day 26 Cash In

Made edits to both Dance of the Seedling Ferns and Life's Finale. Reduced the range of both to 60 meters. Removed the part about merging with the bones of Dance of the Seedling Ferns as per mod suggestion, though I may make that a separate technique at some point in the future! Also removed the addi...
by Golnax
Tue Jan 22, 2019 8:56 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Day 26 Cash In
Replies: 7
Views: 2309

Day 26 Cash In

Yeah I'm going with a hard no on that one. Death Bone Pulse • Heterotopic Ossification A-Ranked Ninjutsu The user creates a spike of bone with three hook like prongs in the palm of their hand then rams it into the target's flesh. Pulling their hand away, the user leaves behind a skull shaped "plug"....
by Golnax
Sat Jan 19, 2019 1:53 am
Forum: Kirigakure no Sato
Topic: [Graded]Practicing the art of battle!
Replies: 28
Views: 9227

Practicing the art of battle!

Household servants. Slaves, most likely given that they weren't trained in the use of chakra. That wasn't so unusual, really, for those who were directly connected to the major houses to have growing up so Aimi paid that no mind. What he heard next, though, only confirmed what had been budding suspi...
by Golnax
Sat Jan 19, 2019 1:20 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Day 26 Cash In
Replies: 7
Views: 2309

Day 26 Cash In

Application: Aimi Kaguya Change: Addin' in some jutsu, 2 specifically, one bought via the December give away and one trained. Death Bone Pulse • Dance of the Seedling Ferns S-Ranked Ninjutsu The user will channel to ossify the bones in their body, sending the bones underground where they will form ...
by Golnax
Tue Jan 15, 2019 12:09 pm
Forum: Kirigakure no Sato
Topic: [Graded]Practicing the art of battle!
Replies: 28
Views: 9227

Practicing the art of battle!

Aimi's left hand continued to flex behind his back as Shinjiro informed him of his upbringing, at least partially, and it was enough to make a red flag stick up in the Kaguya's mind. Starting training young was not something that was uncommon within the village - most academy students went in before...
by Golnax
Wed Jan 09, 2019 1:10 pm
Forum: Kirigakure no Sato
Topic: [Graded]Practicing the art of battle!
Replies: 28
Views: 9227

Practicing the art of battle!

Yet again Shinjiro displayed his lack of wisdom with his response, tears welling up in his eyes and the plain as day expression of holding them back easy for the Kaguya to read. He let out a sigh, unable to not feel annoyed at the boy's ignorance, at his own self pity, at him using his self pity as ...
by Golnax
Fri Jan 04, 2019 10:43 am
Forum: Kirigakure no Sato
Topic: [Graded]Practicing the art of battle!
Replies: 28
Views: 9227

Practicing the art of battle!

The urge to strike Shinjiro across the cheek as he talked back to him was strong, very strong, within Aimi. It wasn't the tone that made his anger prickle and his hands ball into fists but the exact phrase 'his potential is limited'. It showed a very distinct lack of wisdom within the genma host tha...
by Golnax
Fri Jan 04, 2019 9:47 am
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding
Replies: 26
Views: 8159

[JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding

It was a rare treat for the Kaguya to come across an opponent who was anywhere as nearly proficient in taijutsu as he himself was. The exchange had been brief thus far, the movements happening much quicker than those of the two younger combatants across the way from them, but from the slight exchang...
by Golnax
Fri Jan 04, 2019 9:15 am
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [Graded][Beach Party] Foxy Edition
Replies: 15
Views: 5131

[Beach Party] Foxy Edition

As Nishiki reverted back to his base form, the Kiri proctor relaxed and the crowd cheered. An exciting match it had been indeed, many of them had found enjoyment in it though an equal number also looked on with a critical eye, examining not just Nishiki but his opponent Rei as well. Rei, still uncon...
by Golnax
Fri Jan 04, 2019 8:40 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Day 15/24 Cash In
Replies: 11
Views: 3035

Day 15/24 Cash In

Changed Pin-point so that it can't be bigger than a single meter. The wording should read that the size is changeable.

Also changed Pressure to be just channeled. Honestly forgot that the wording in my document with all of my customs was different from what I changed it to on here when I C/P'd it.
by Golnax
Thu Jan 03, 2019 10:44 am
Forum: Kirigakure no Sato
Topic: [Graded]Practicing the art of battle!
Replies: 28
Views: 9227

Practicing the art of battle!

As the injured Mondai and the mysterious flying shinobi departed, Aimi turned back towards Shinji as he began to speak. He was a bit surprised to see that the young shinobi had adopted a fairly submissive posture, head lowered, only raised when he spoke up in defiance, a few steps having been taken ...
by Golnax
Mon Dec 31, 2018 11:05 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Day 15/24 Cash In
Replies: 11
Views: 3035

Day 15/24 Cash In

Wht exactly can't I use feet? I understand that meters are the standard measurement, but this technique is supposed to be small in scale. A meter is actually pretty large, 3 times larger than as it's written. I wouldn't exactly call this technique "pinpoint" if it covers a fairly larger area, which ...
by Golnax
Sun Dec 30, 2018 10:56 am
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding
Replies: 26
Views: 8159

[JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding

Now there was a surprise for the Kaguya. Not only had the spearman countered his own counter, but he seemed to have an instantaneous respect for the Kaguya and his skills from just a single display. Aimi had heard before of warriors who were well versed enough to get to know their foes from but a si...
by Golnax
Sun Dec 30, 2018 10:35 am
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [Graded][Beach Party] Foxy Edition
Replies: 15
Views: 5131

[Beach Party] Foxy Edition

Nishiki's actions were swift and efficient, showing off the toughness of every Kirigakure shinobi as he pushed through the pain in his hand and feet and acted accordingly, shooting a large cone of water out at his opponent who was unable to dodge at this range! The water barreled into the dark skinn...
by Golnax
Sun Dec 30, 2018 9:20 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Day 15/24 Cash In
Replies: 11
Views: 3035

Day 15/24 Cash In

Changed the debuff to -2 in Pressure. Made Unworthy a B ranked Stance.
by Golnax
Sun Dec 30, 2018 9:10 am
Forum: Kirigakure no Sato
Topic: [Graded]Practicing the art of battle!
Replies: 28
Views: 9227

Practicing the art of battle!

"A sparring partner, huh?" Aimi asked, shifting his eyes to look over at the bearded almost-specter as he landed and spoke. No sooner had the words left his mouth, though, than his eyes were practically forced to turn back to the spar at hand, watching as the overzealous genma host rushed forward a...
by Golnax
Sun Dec 30, 2018 7:51 am
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [Graded][Beach Party] Foxy Edition
Replies: 15
Views: 5131

[Beach Party] Foxy Edition

Nishiki's blow would land as intended, the claws piercing through the Iwagakure genin's clothing and digging into his stomach, blood welling up against his finger tips. In the same instant, however, the genin's jutsu would activate, lava dolloping up and bursting out from the point of impact, caking...
by Golnax
Wed Dec 26, 2018 2:55 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Day 15/24 Cash In
Replies: 11
Views: 3035

Day 15/24 Cash In

[Ninjutsu • Pressure] isn't a ranged debuff technique, it's an AOE technique. Think of it as a bubble, a pulse or a shockwave of chakra that the user pushes out from themselves to effect anyone within the 10 meter area. The user is the epicenter of this technique, they can't projected out like throw...
by Golnax
Mon Dec 24, 2018 2:32 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Day 15/24 Cash In
Replies: 11
Views: 3035

[Accepted]Day 15/24 Cash In

Application: Aimi Kaguya Change: Adding 10 points worth of jutsu, as per the day 15 reward, and nabbing the Connections Perk while I'm at it! Katon • Pin-point D-Ranked Ninjutsu The user channels their katon chakra into their finger tips. Then, with a snap of their fingers, the user ignites a small...
by Golnax
Mon Dec 24, 2018 12:59 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding
Replies: 26
Views: 8159

[JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding

'...Iyashii?' Aimi asked himself internally, wondering if this was the first time that he'd heard the samurai's full name. He was pretty sure that it was in fact the first time. He would have wondered why he'd never bothered to ask before then if it weren't for the fact that he knew, not so deep do...
by Golnax
Sun Dec 23, 2018 7:42 am
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding
Replies: 26
Views: 8159

[JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding

Being paraded through the streets was, oddly enough, a relatively new experience for Aimi. He'd been to festivals before in Kirigakure and he was obviously not shy by any means, as one look at his choice in attire would tell you, but the fact that he was specifically being held out in the open by an...
by Golnax
Sat Dec 22, 2018 12:29 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding
Replies: 26
Views: 8159

[JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding

Aimi slowly turned his head and looked over at the raven-haired ronin, considering what he'd said carefully. His words were like a great bell and every time that it rang, a bit of fog was cleared from his mind. Yes, it was true that he'd told them that he was a shinobi... but he had in fact not said...
by Golnax
Fri Dec 21, 2018 8:18 am
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding
Replies: 26
Views: 8159

[JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding

It was true that Aimi could have killed the guards as they walked towards them - hell, before they had entered the room, really. He probably could have killed the captain, the guards, and anyone else who stood in his way as he made his way out of the holy city. That wouldn't have been hard. What was...
by Golnax
Mon Dec 17, 2018 10:32 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Day 5/11 Cash In
Replies: 4
Views: 1407

Day 5/11 Cash In

That's a good point. I hadn't thought about that. Edited in that it requires the user to be in the stance for 5 posts before they can release and do the aoe thing.
by Golnax
Sat Dec 15, 2018 12:59 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding
Replies: 26
Views: 8159

[JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding

"We what?" "You what?" The twin questions had been asked at nearly identical times, both the captain Yui and the Kaguya jounin turning their heads to look at the samurai who had spoken up. Mo, too, looked at Fuhen with a strange look of confusion that seemed to be stuck dawning on her face, still c...
by Golnax
Fri Dec 14, 2018 5:10 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding
Replies: 26
Views: 8159

[JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding

It'd been a mistake to let Fuhen talk first. As he began his rambling, the jounin couldn't help but give him a sort of... look. The kind of gaze that spoke volumes, that asked many a question along the lines of 'what in the hell are you doing?' His eyes darted to the frog from the moment that he men...
by Golnax
Thu Dec 13, 2018 1:24 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [Graded][Beach Party] Foxy Edition
Replies: 15
Views: 5131

[Beach Party] Foxy Edition

Seeing that his opponent was trying to keep this fight at a distance, and knowing that he was beginning to run low on chakra himself, the Enkouten opted to move this battle into a more close quarters fight as he saw the demonic fox dodge his attacks and prepare a counter attack! Changing his traject...
by Golnax
Thu Dec 13, 2018 1:05 pm
Forum: Completed
Topic: [Accepted]Day 5/11 Cash In
Replies: 4
Views: 1407

[Accepted]Day 5/11 Cash In

Application: Aimi Kaguya Change: Oh you know. Cashing in 20 points worth of custom jutsu. Should be quick and easy right? Right? [Ninjutsu • Invisible Ink] C-Ranked Ninjutsu Prerequisite: 15 Control The user makes the handseals and then swipes their hand over a written fuuinjutsu seal, sending thei...
by Golnax
Tue Dec 11, 2018 10:48 am
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding
Replies: 26
Views: 8159

[JFCMHT]A Simple Misunderstanding

As the captain came to inspect the cart, Aimi set it down and stepped away, rolling his shoulders and throwing his head from side to side in order to stretch out his muscles. He hadn't been carrying the cart for very long, and it hadn't been much of a burden to him while he had carried it, but he co...
by Golnax
Tue Dec 11, 2018 9:40 am
Forum: Completed
Topic: Day 4 Cash In
Replies: 7
Views: 1849

Day 4 Cash In

Good call. No I would not. I changed it to just Multiple Chakra Kai.
by Golnax
Sat Dec 08, 2018 1:26 pm
Forum: Other Countries
Topic: [Graded][Beach Party] Foxy Edition
Replies: 15
Views: 5131

[Beach Party] Foxy Edition

https://cdn.gamerant.com/wp-content/uploads/super-smash-bros-amiibo-new-character.jpg.optimal.jpg To whom it may concern. Admom has requested that I take over running this chunnin exam, as he is having trouble keeping up with it. I have graciously accepted and will be playing the proctors and the E...

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