Naruto Saigen Roleplay

<t>The climb to the top had been formidable. If it weren't for Zakuro's strength and endurance, there was no doubt he would've fallen to his death, but he made it. The rumors of the top of the mountain drastically changing had filled the surrounding country. The skies above this mountain had blacken...

<r>Honestly, Zakuro was starting to think that these bandits were bad news. Everything just felt wrong somehow, and not just because he had bits of person on him. The note that Fahno found told Zakuro one thing, they were dealing with a bunch of crazies, and if Zakuro knows anything about crazies, i...

<r><SPOILER title="OOC"><s>[spoiler=OOC]</s>I currently don't have the bladed sword conc or the chained weapons conc, but they will be added when I add the sword jutsu to Zakuro. Just a heads up.<e>[/spoiler]</e></SPOILER> A smile suddenly spread across his face. Fighting was easily something that h...

<r>As per his usually routine, the blonde Chuunin walked down to one of the many training places littered across Konoha. For some reason, Zakuro decided this one above the rest, even though his typical training places were quiet and secluded. As Zakuro stepped foot out of the thicket of trees behind...

Emperor Hanzi's Fist for Gerudo, Zakuro

<r>Taking deep breaths to calm himself, Zakuro watched as Takeo's arm shot a shuriken towards him. The speed of the shuriken made it barely visible, but with enough focus, he could make out where it was headed. In a split second decision, Zakuro decided to run straight towards the shuriken and quick...

<r>Zakuro's arm was in the grasp of the bandit, putting him at a slight disadvantage, but Zakuro's body was a lot more flexible and acrobatic than it looked. He jumped into the air and wrapped his legs tightly around his opponent's neck, squeezing it with all of his strength. Then with his free hand...

<r>As his second kick made impact, he already came to the realization that he wasn't even hurting the guy. The wind rustled through Zakuro's hair, making a soothing noise as he flew through the air. It took him a few seconds to understand what had happened. Takeo must have pushed him into the air. O...

Alright, I added a weight at 40 lbs.

I added it for ya

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putting my name in for Mizukage

<r>Zakuro intently waited for the next question. He prepared his mind, ready for whatever came next, but a question never came. All that came was an analysis of what Zakuro had just said, then Aoi simply walked passed him. Zakuro was not expecting that in the slightest. Suddenly, the sound of poundi...

<r>The shock of what Aoi said started to set in. Throughout this entire conversation Zakuro thought of Aoi as a rock. Someone who couldn't be touched, no matter the hardship. This man was unbreakable in Zakuro's eyes, but the seriousness on his face as he told Zakuro what being a Chuunin really mean...

<r>Zakuro raised himself from the ground slowly. A very familiar sharp pain spread through his body. It was like the exams all over again. Looking around his body, he counted 8 senbon-like hair spikes sticking out of his body. That was just disgusting. He quickly pulled them out of his body. As soon...

<r>Reckless and dumb? Zakuro kept that in the back of his mind for the future. Zakuro always had a focus on bettering himself physically, but now, after hearing that, he thought that he may start going through some mental training. Something to prepare his mind for strategic thinking. His body was a...

<r>Zakuro stared directly back at the man questioning him. He ignored the chills down his spine caused by the pure menace contained in his eyes. This man didn't seem to feel very man emotions, or at least Zakuro got that impression from their current encounter. When the silence was finally broken an...

<r>After side stepping a kunai, Zakuro watched as three fairly strange looking figures stepped out from the tree line. They all looked very interesting, and a tad bit menacing with their masks. He now understood why the ANBU wore masks very similar to them. The blank, stationary expression of the th...

<r>Zakuro felt relived that he was getting an opportunity to actually fight. No more worries about getting attacked and trying to hopelessly defend himself. No, this was his chance to do the one thing he did best. Go on the offensive. Ever since that night, the night that took so many innocent lives...

<r>As soon as Zakuro walked into the room and Aoi addressed him, Zakuro knew that this man was different from all the other high ranking shinobi he's met. This man didn't like nonsense. He was straight to the point, and Zakuro understood that he needed to be too. His face looked familiar. This man w...

I made the fixes. Anything else?

<r>Just as he anticipated, Takeo found someway around his attack. Of course, he wasn't expecting to get jabbed in the throat. The punch caught him off guard, and sent Zakuro into a raging fit of coughing. His began watering due to the hit, but, let it be known that he was NOT crying, regardless of w...

<r>Zakuro blinked. That was the worst mistake of his life. When his eyes opened, there stood the 5'11" Jounin, with his leg outstretched. Zakuro already knew that his taunt was going to make the next few seconds of his life hell, but hey, it'll probably be worth it. The Chuunin, grin spread across h...

<r>Zakuro had opened his mouth to ask what Takeo wanted him to do when the Jounin lunged at him at incredible speeds. By the time he realized that he had been attacked, Takeo was already preparing a well placed kick in the chest. The first hit had sent his head reeling, the second sent his body flyi...

<r>Zakuro's hand met the Jounin's with a firm grasp. He had a smirk spread across his face.<COLOR color="#ffd166"><s>[color=#ffd166]</s> "Gerudo, Zakuro, nice to meet you. By the way, this isn't my first time training with someone a lot stronger than me, and I don't think it'll be the last. Don't wo...

<t>Shaking from excitement, a newly promoted Zakuro was asked to train with an elite ninja from Konoha. Little did he know that this ninja was more than likely going to be the next Hokage. Zakuro didn't know much about the man other than the fact that he was extremely powerful. Up until now, Zakuro ...

<r>Once Zakuro saw the barrier collapse, he knew something wasn't right. The man showed no sign of catching himself. He didn't appear to be too physically strong, so a fall like that could do some serious damage. Zakuro quickly turned his attention from striking to catching, but the body was interce...

<t>Zakuro felt the familiar pain of the sharp senbon digging into his skin. His body felt like hell and it probably didn't look much better either. He could feel a wetness covering his skin, but he couldn't tell if it was sweat, blood, or both. He really didn't want to think about it. What little br...

<r>Zakuro looked out towards the battlefield, but saw nothing but a blur. A single tear rolled down his face, hidden to the outside behind the plethora of sweat that already sat there. The pain that shot through his body was nearly unbearable. He couldn't think straight, but at this point there was ...

<t>If there was one thing that Zakuro was trying to avoid, it was getting hit by those senbon again. He did not like the feeling of those sharpened metal rods sticking through his body, piercing his skin, littering his body with burning pain. It was something that he would rather not feel again, and...

<t>With a simple snap of his fingers, Zakuro's entire world had changed. The fight hadn't even started yet. The entire thing wasn't real, yet he could still feel the pain of those damned needles digging into his flesh. With each breath wavering, he needed to think of something fast. The sound of the...

<r>Zakuro, catching his breath, listened to what the Yamanaka had to say. Honestly, the guy sounded a little cocky. Suddenly, a slight grin grew on Zakuro's face. <COLOR color="#ffd166"><s>[color=#ffd166]</s>"Eh, I'm going to have to go with option D, none of the above."<e>[/color]</e></COLOR> Zakur...

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<t>As they left the abandoned tea shop, the tension in the air seemed to spike. Zakuro's heart started pounding. Was he ready for this? Of course he had been training to go on missions all of his life, but he had no idea what he was getting himself into. Most shinobi with shinobi parents were actual...

<r>Tall grass littered the ground beneath the two shinobi as they slowly approached a tea shop in the distance. Fahno obviously tried to cheer Zakuro up. It work a little, but he still felt nervous about the whole ordeal. He didn't feel any different from anyone else, and he was especially no more t...

<r>The loose fit of his new clothes slowly began to drive Zakuro crazy. He constantly shifted his outfit for it to feel more comfortable, but it barely helped. The soft clicking of hooves hit the gravel road, signaling to Zakuro that it was time to move. God, was he actually ready to leave the villa...

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This is just a very small thing. For height, you have it written as 4,0. I'm assuming you mean 4 feet 0 inches. If that's the case it should be 4' 0" or just 4'. Fix this and I'll give you a 1/2.

<t>Zakuro instantly recognized the face of Fahno, the Awai that he had met earlier in the year. He had heard that Fahno became a chuunin, but never actually confirmed it. Well, it seems like Fahno actually did it. His heart pounded at this news. It means he was overtaken by one of his fellow comrade...