Naruto Saigen Roleplay

Application: [Central Organization] Kirigakure no Sato Change: Claiming Kiri's topic earnings from the last quarter, for a total of +98 ryo. This also takes the org to X-Rank and so increases the equipment ryo pool from 150 to 250. https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=77&t=8345717 : ...

Moved back to regs

Having followed Setsuna's command and fully dunking her head beneath the surface of the glowing pool to drink her fill, Kotori shook herself to fling the loose droplets away and then wasted no time in following her team leader as they rushed to regroup with Kotetsu, heading now directly towards the ...

Kotori sank down against the wall in the corner, deposited there by unknown hands as far away from the chaos as she could get within the confines of the pocket dimension. She shook silently and wrapped her arms around her knees, unable to tear her eyes away from the hellish scene before her. She sho...

[hr] https://i.imgur.com/bR76oFB.png [hr] The meeting within the command tent erupted into an intense back-and-forth discussion as the varied generals and shinobi adjusted to the new situation, their plans changing at the eleventh hour following Katuki’s report. Passionate appeals from the water cou...

Any rush of elation that Kotori might have felt from the successful strike of her rock control technique was tempered by the stomach-churning sight of the spirit creature tearing itself apart before her. It's form shifted and bulged with the writhing of appendages, the glinting turn of teeth in its ...

I see you have Youton in his ability slot as well as his ninjutsu concentrations, is that intentional? I'm not sure what the "Affliction level" ability quotes are. Nowadays the fusion releases are all just concentrations (but can be incorporated into ability slots if necessary) Otherwise everything ...

Nolosha stirred again as her siblings roused, reacting in varied ways to the news of Aturasu. They spoke in turn, but it was at Vorashu's input that Kotori felt a wave of emotion from the phantom beast of life. An intertwined mix of compassion and disdain. "He was always so disparaging of your kind,...

Looks good! Just a couple of small quick things: @ Kodamaton [Tree Spirit Release] Concentration - I find the "cooldown based on stat average" a bit strange, can we base it on Stat Total instead? I think it'd be be more consistent with other things in the system (power ranks, etc.) @ Kodamaton • Gol...

Any progress on this? Also a quick question r.e. Signature modulation: "this also means that jutsu cast by another sealed individual would function like your own, should you have the pre-requisites to use it." -> Can you elaborate on this please? What does it mean; is it a way to let Ayana control j...

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Hi, any updates on this? Been a few months

No news on this and the poster has been inactive since Nov 27th, so I'll deny it for now. But Mugen if you come back and want to continue this please let a staff member know and it can be moved back for you later.

2/2 - But waiting until the character is approved before this can be finalised

Application: [Clan] Aisu Changes: Removed the scaling Control effects from the Aisu passive to bring the clan in line with recent rule tweaks. It should just have a static effect that dynamically scales based on Control vs. target's Strength: Kekkei Genkai: Hyouton Chakra Element By fusing together...

For a reincarnation character, please add the link and point tracker to the perk field (along with any inherited perks), e.g.: Presitge Perks: (1/1): [ Reincarnation: (43/427)] Where the number on the left is the amount unlocked so far that you've added to your char. I linked it to this registration...

Hi, welcome! This is a fantastic app - almost entirely perfect! It's rare to see such even from some of our experienced members, haha! Nicely done. I notice only one minor mistake in that you've forgotten to allocate any stats to her Chakra Pool. Once that's included (must be a minimum of 1) I think...

Junko kept her face carefully impassive as the so-called "Holy Mother" wafted into to the room like an unpleasant smell, all billowing silk and false sighs. It rankled her to have this painted whore stand before them and openly consider herself their equal, but, once again, the other family heads di...

Kotori exhaled slowly and concentrated on the sensation of life all around her, carefully picking through the influx of feelings and information within her mind to identify the people in her vicinity. She recognised Kotetsu's signature immediately, breaking away as he did from their group and headin...

Naohiro nodded and allowed himself a smile. He quietly resheathed the kunai and clasped his hands together again. "Excellent. I'll be your direct supervisor in the Research and Development Branch of the Division. From this moment onwards, you report to me. Before all others," he clarified with a rai...

Tomoe ducked lower down behind the angle of the roof ridge as she heard the tell-tale th-thock of four arrows hammer into the tiles right besdie where she'd thrown her shuriken from only a moment earlier, then continued to run along its length. I was seen immediately, she reasoned, assuming that her...

I think it is just the phrasing and grammar that make it very difficult to interpret. For example, "In order for this connection to be linked, the user must study the target for 2 posts, gather enough information about the targets behavioural patterns, speech and combat style. " This reads like a li...

Kotori stepped very slowly forward and started to crouch so as to seem unthreatening to the cat-spirit, right up until its hisses turned into a gut-churning howl. Immediately all the hairs on her arms rose to stand on end, and a chill ran down her spine. She was momentarily thrown back into memories...

Algorithm still doesn't make any sense to me (and not only because I don't really watch any MCU) Generally when someone asks you to rewrite and clarify a jutsu... We don't want a separate explanation here in the comment section, we want the actual jutsu to be updated. The jutsu writeup itself is not...

Excellent first app! Most of it is perfect, I only see a few minor tweaks to do please: - Please add a link from her Awai surname to the clan page here: https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=85&t=5937076 - Please pick only one primary affinity. The primary affinity gives a discount to ...

Sorry about her uncle. Collateral damage, that's all. Honest!
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I believe these customs would behave as ranged debuffs, correct? Meaning unfortunately they need to be up-ranked by one tier to have those effects.

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Enjoy your new stars!