Naruto Saigen Roleplay

It was early in the morning, Yoru had arranged to meet the kiri kunoichi known as Asamai. Today he was meant to train her, he had pondered why she had asked for him to show her the techniques they we’re after all freely accessible in scrolls that she could find within her own village. Though he had ...

This should probably be on hold till the companion version is approved

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Can you add a nocode and I'll 2/2 this

One small thing - If Mariya is in a crowd of chakra users it would be possible to tell her apart from anyone else in the crowd via sensory methods. Do you meant wouldn't? It seemed the idea of this chakra was that it would blend into a crowd, just wanna double check before we move forward incase you...

[Taijutsu • Multitude of Colours-Providential Oni's Poison] - They can only maintain it for a series of posts equal to [endurance] divided by two.

This post count is far too long, at max stats you could hold his for 25 posts. The max for a B-rank would be 4-5 posts at the most.

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Yoru didn’t react to the man as he seemed as though he was going to slam against the table, at least not outwardly. He pondered what the man was attempting to do, was it a strange rouse, a joke or simply pure aggression? Either way it didn’t really matter to Yoru, he had no interest in people’s pers...

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Application: Aizawa, Yoru
Change:

Please remove Will of Fire Concentration and associated jutsu on page 3.
Refund 11 ryo.

Payment: N/A

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Spoke on the discord.

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Change his primary Affinity to Kaerujutsu < Not sure if this is allowed, I'll ask though

As this has had some changes, the 1/2 from Zao will be removed.

With archived jutsu there is a * in front of them, this is left to indicate that they are archives and don't need to be checked. Could you add this back into all the archives and then I'll go over your jutsu. Example: * Suiton • Defensive Barrier D-Rank Ninjutsu After performing the correct hand sea...

Again, this will need to be approved by fox.

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Yes, I'd rather Fox signed off any things being spent in the coffer as he's the org leader correct?

The link for HHD doesn't go to the org and also has this being approved by Fox, he's the current HHD leader right?

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Can you add a nocode and I'll 2/2 this

Can you add a nocode and I'll 2/2 this?

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Yoru, Katsu & Nishki The water cyclone hit it’s mark, the electricity ripping through it licked and nipped at her skin paralysing her entire body. The clone glared at the woman, his single hazel eye hovering over her as he dispelled the cyclone of water his entire body still covered in the ration o...

So is Maido donating this to HHD?

Sorry, I'm confused what this is?

Isn't this also an unobtained companion on Maido's app?

OOC: If the byakugan was activated I would have said you could see through the smoke. However I think Onu makes a good case, but I’m going to agree with in this instance.

Ruling in favour of Onu.

He nodded as she specified what she wanted to do “Jinchuriki wrangling is no easy task, I purposefully poked the bear to test myself had I attempted to wrangle your sensei I perhaps wouldn’t have made it out alive.” His fingers ran across his pale porcelain cheek as he thought for a moment “Communic...

The old man trudged through the storm, the wind was powerful, whistling as it hit his old frame. The man had wondered for over decade now, simply being. He had no interest in politics or the war that had just passed he simply wished to wander. He knew he didn’t have long left to live and seeing the ...

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Yoru’s gaze shifted between the pair as they both spoke, it seemed something world changing was getting set in motion. The countries they suggested taking control of would truly cause a rift between the various nations, perhaps could even bring on a second great war. He hoped the pair truly knew wha...

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All fixed

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Might be good to add a nocode:

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Personal Realm –
All others suffer a continual drain of -5 Endurance per post within the realm, stacking for up to 4 posts.
I don’t believe personal realms are allowed to cause any negative physical effects, damage or debuffs.

Other than that, everything else looks good.

I think overall just go through the style and write ‘attempting’ in a few places, some are written as though they are absolute. Such as a White Tiger's Oblation, makes it seem that any weapon strike that breaks the shield is just trapped. [Byakko no Tsume • Puma's Grace] • I’m just confused how you ...