Naruto Saigen Roleplay

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Just be aware that with your stats as they are you cannot use Heavenly outside of Form.

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Okay, let's deal with the easy stuff first. First, your companion's Username: should have an actual link since [me] reflects the user rather than the poster, and it'd be reposted using someone else's account and not your own regardless. Also, the cosmic body ability has broken coding or misplaced co...

Assuming everything is fine with the ability changes, 1/2.

Thunder Dragon's Cloak - Needs a duration.

History is kind of short for an A-Rank nukenin. Try fluffing it out a bit? How'd he earn his reputation? You don't go from Chuunin to A-Rank Nukenin instantly, even if they did kill someone pursing them.

"That would be the East or South, master Iyashii." Gendo replied haughtily, lifting his nose to point straight up in the air. "And I shall have you know that there is nothing sinful to be had in enjoying oneself as long as it harms no other." He looked down at the duo over his nose and smiled, givi...

Application: Kazuo Change: Removing Sight Genjutsu for the whole 1 free Conc removal, adding [Projectile Weapons] to his Taijutsu concentrations, and adding the following techniques: [ Blade Clash ] D-Rank Taijutsu Manoeuvre As long as Kazuo can react to an incoming attack and his Strength is highe...

Thud. Thud. Thud. "I know I should keep my skills sharp, but man this is boring." Kazuo tossed the kunai up, caught it by the ring pommel, and threw it at the target with a casual flick of his wrist. It whistled for a moment before yet another thud echoed through the training hall, another bullseye ...

Kazuo tossed the bag to the grinning Akari and set to work on swapping out some dried meat and food rations for more water and a few of the iodine pills. "So… giant creepy animals that aren't spirits, cool. I'm not gonna lie, I kind of want to try one." He tossed the bag over his shoulder and tossed...

Eh, yeah, after going through the current archives and reading the rules on how Fuuin works at the moment, there is no reason this can't work with the rules as written. I still think it should be C-Rank, just for the capacity of detecting any rank of Genjutsu, but I'll leave that for someone else to...

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Okay, I'm gonna be honest from the get go and tell you I'm coming at this with a bias, because I hate 9th stat abilities that are just used to buy a bunch of other abilities. With that warning out of the way, here we go. Chugi: I don't like the fact that you're using this as a means to bypass your n...

Between when you were staff and now another decision must have been made then because I'm only reitterating what I was told to change on my own app less than a month ago, in regards to Strength ≥ Speed for acceleration purposes. And I understand all of that, but what I'm saying is why would a D-Rank...

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You need 1 more B-Rank to balance your pyramid, atm you have 3 A's and 3 B's. Also you have 161 stats.

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Tendril whip is still kind of unclear. Is the entire length 3 meters or is each 'section' 3 meters? Do you want it so that at all five lengths it is 15 meters? Not really sure what you're aiming for here.

Thousand Birds - You can create lightning with Charge Fuuin but not the Raiton passive without the Raiton conc as a prereq, so that'll need to be edited.
Flying Swallow - Fuuton isn't invisible and just to specify can't have the Fuuton passive without the Fuuton conc as a prereq.

It would seem that Gendo had found people that wanted to save the world and make it a better place in their own small ways. The thought brought a warmth to his chest that slowly expanded to fill his fingers and toes. While he himself was only on this quest out of a sense of duty and guilt, it was he...

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Raiton • [Amp Burst] C-Rank Ninjutsu After channeling raiton chakra into one of their hands, electrical charges will visibly flow along the user's forearm. Upon making contact with an opponent, it will explode outwards with a strength of 10. If not used, the jutsu will dissipate after 4 posts. Actua...

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Pressure needs to be either hand seals or channeling specifically, can't be optional/both.
Pin-Point you can say either Up to 1x1x1 meter, so it's a controllable size, or you can put like 0.5 meters but in general we prefer to keep sizes standardized.

I'm not sure I understand how this is working to remove scent detection. By lingering in an area longer, you're leaving more of your scent behind, not less, and my crawling all over everything you're just giving it more surface area. I would suggest having it include a knowledge of wind direction an...

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Your max strength/speed at all times stance should require Strength greater than or equal to Speed since max accerlation requires higher strength. So should No Breaks. But thing I have an issue with is Fuuinjutsu • Foreshadowing . I don't see why or how this would pick up any rank of genjutsu being ...

Application: Kazuo
Change: +6 Stamina, +5 Taijutsu
Payment: 5 Points, Secret Santa

Kazuo's smile turned feral when he saw the rat slow down and Koji start tearing more chunks from its hide. His eyes were adjusting to the lack of light, Kota's flames providing just enough that he could follow the battle without being completely blind. Pressing his left foot hard against the ground,...

Gendo clapped a meaty hand on Sato's shoulder and smiled broadly at the young, earnest samurai. "Each man is destined to walk his own path how he chooses. Who am I to deny you yours, hm? I would be more than happy to have your company as we walk." Turning to Fuhen, who was lamenting the state of the...

"Giant roaches save you from giant rats. This place is so strange. I love it. But at least if we get hungry, we can cook and eat the big bastards, eh?" He heard it before Kotaru began his warning. Letting out a shrill whistle, Kazuo ordered Koji to attack and the wolf responded with a bloodthirsty ...

His small, beady eyes were watching the butterflies movements with earnest. For as much as he didn't trust them for simply being what they were, the Omens had defended his life more times than he could count in recent years. They protected him and while he knew that they represented death and his ow...

To be honest tracking reads as Sensory and Signature is borderline. The Byakugan has 360 Degree, Telescopic, and Penetrative vision that let's them see Tenketsu but not Chakra outside the body. She definitely requires the Sensory concentration to be able to use the Tracking technique. Assuming you a...

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Mk so your Dreamer's Voice has been given the okay. As to your Sage Mode, should specify no Living Creatures 'cause animals and shit are part of nature. Your flight is in direct conflict with needed to remain still in order to use sage techs. Also, could we get some example Sage Jutsu? Just so we ca...

Currently discussing with staff since I don't actually have the authority to make a decision on it, but personally I feel that using Augment to extend Genjutsu should be specific instead of generic. Like Charge can make specific things to happen that mimic Ninjutsu, each Augment should be specific t...