Naruto Saigen Roleplay

The heat washed over his face as Kazuo watched the fireball successfully connect. He didn't look away, watching as it attempted to run, but the constant harassment of Koji and himself seemed to have been enough to drain it of much of its fight, now that it was burning to death it had nothing left to...

Hideki took a steady, calming breath when he disassembled the chakra signature into its baser parts. He could feel it approaching but let go of the technique, not wanting to expend any more chakra than he already had. They were a powerful opponent but from what he read they have not ever actively co...

As they were soaring through the air and getting closer and closer to their intended destination, Hideki released a pulse of sensory chakra. He was scanning each time they landed on another barrier, searching for any chakra signatures that were active within the zone of Shio's genjutsu. So far he ha...

Hideki's head turned towards Shio, one eyebrow raised, as he felt the soothing tone of the ten-year old's voice washed over him. He almost flared his chakra in response just out of instinct but felt no surge of chakra within his own system, just Shio's voice in his ears. It truly was a fascinating a...

Eyes flicking from happy face to happy face drew nothing from Hideki. No remorse at what was to come. If everything went according to plan, their lives would barely change in the immediate future. If things went awry, they'd all be dead by morning. In either case, Hideki didn't see people. Just numb...

It'd be 75 Points, the scaled rewards only apply after the initial rank up as far as I'm aware. Other than that, everything looks fine.

DENIED.

But seriously, I'm not even going to pretend to understand that clan and those jutsu. The rest look fine considering you scavenged them from other characters.

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The way you have this written is you're averaging your Speed and Taijutsu and then dividing it by 2 again. You can remove the /2 or change it to just the formula and remove the average wording.

Average of Speed and Taijutsu; or
Gene's (Speed + Taijutsu)/2.

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You've got a broken [ at the start of your weapon description.

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Okay so Shield Ward, Dragging Ward, Switch-Blade, and Windmill all have Taijutsu pre-reqs of 10 which makes them C-Rank Taijutsu. You can choose to either up-rank them or remove the Taijutsu requirement. Honestly none of them read as C-Ranks and don't require the uprank, so the choice is up to you. ...

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"Scanning as far as I am allows for very little in the way of detail. Finding a specific threat at this range is almost impossible without extremely taxing my chakra reserves. I'll periodically scan the area when you begin putting the locals to sleep. Any threats that are somehow unaffected will re...

Username: Sanjuro Owner: Higurashi Kazuo Stat Trainings: (0/25) [hr] Tsuyu General Information Type: Pet Gender: Female Age: 5 Appearance: Tsuyu's current appearance is a result of the experimentation she has undergone. A wolf of fairly standard size standing at 2'3" at the shoulder and being perha...

Before the blades he threw had even reached their intended targets, Kazuo had summoned and thrown another volley from either gauntlet, skewering the few that Tatsuo had missed. Not that there had been many. Kazuo eyed the Akari warily, unsettled by the sight of the strange, fleshy tendrils that whip...

As Kazuo completed forming his hole in the ground and Koji took a few more chunks from the beast, he noticed the lights vanished and swore under his breath. Switching to relying on scent and sound, he did his best to navigate the dark until a wave of air pressure pushed him back. He braced himself a...

"With Genjutsu. I may not have focused on the art as much as yourself, but I am capable of performing one or two Genjutsu that have incredible potency. Once the leader is loyal to me, there are a few options, though the one I would prefer to observe would be to make the illusion of loyalty permanen...

Hideki paused in his steps and turned his head to face where he knew Shio to be, even though he couldn't actually 'see' him at this moment. "What part of what I just said did you misconstrue as a desire to kill off the village? My intent is to ensure their leader's loyalty to our cause and in turn e...

[ Tremorsense ] A-Rank Taijutsu Discipline Kazuo is sensitive to vibrations in the ground and can automatically pinpoint the location of anything that is in contact with the ground within a 10-meter radius. While underwater, Kazuo can still use his tremorsense by backtracking the vibrations that ca...

"There are means of making Genjutsu permanent. Well, as permanent as anything can be in this world." Hideki replied. "And if you do not have the means of bending their will towards your own, then I will step in and handle it." The bright dot of blue that was Shio beside him flared brightly and Hide...

As they hit the ground, Kazuo's ears twitched, and his head moved towards the sound. "Well, you're not wrong about getting swarmed. We've already got company." Koji growled in response to Kazuo's hackles being raised but they continued to follow in Tatsuo's path, wondering just how long the flare wo...

Hideki stared at the cages before him, each shaking and rattling with all manner of strange and wonderful creatures. Creating the Spirit Division of the SRI may have been an afterthought, but it had proved to be a fruitful endeavour and now he had plenty of test subjects available to him to start ex...

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Application: Hideki Change: Updating his app to remove coding issues due to swapping from zetaboards. Swapping one of his Professor perks for Beast Tamer. Adding 35 Points for ranking from Jounin to Bannnin. Removing the following Jutsu that he had before all Tenkujutsu became its own pyramid inste...

"A wise decision." Hideki muttered. He couldn't see the writing so much as sense it. Even with his Mind's Eye as blurry as it was focusing on reaching out as far as possible, Shio was close enough that he could sense the shape the chakra was making. "Killing is usually a last resort. Live specimens...

Hideki merely observed as Shio ran through an extensively long set of hand seals. A-Rank, then. "Interesting. Oh, yes, that reminds me." As they walked Hideki closed his eyes and let his Mind's Eye reach out to touch Shio's chakra. It was a hassle, walking blind, but something he was accustomed too ...

The journey across the ocean had been long and unpleasant as far as Hideki was concerned. Perhaps he had simply grown lazy, having been working predominately within the village, or gotten accustomed to having the ability to bend space and appear wherever he wanted to be. Still, it had given him a ch...

"Well that sounds mildly disturbing. Also, just a little bit fun." The idea of being swallowed and then fighting his way out from the inside was gross and cool. The sight of the infamous creepy tentacles of the Akari sent a shudder down Kazuo's spine. "Let's get a move on then." Stepping off the le...

"Here we are!" Gendo yawned and stretched, blearily blinking the sleep from his eyes. After the… incident, the gang had been fortunate enough to run into a trader, Eizo, that had just emptied his cargo and was heading back to Chuuishi. Gendo, frustrated at all the running they had been doing and th...

Kazuo was not used to being outmatched physically. He had no doubt he was stronger but between this thing's girth and speed, Kazuo's strength was frustratingly inadequate. Koji was having the same problems. Even with the afterimages and the fear he had forcibly instilled in the beast, it was able to...

You still have Switch-Blade and Switching Blade that do the exact same thing. You can remove Switching Blade as Switch-Blade already covers swapping hands mid attack.

Okay so your poison needs an onset time, the period between getting hit with it and it activates. Something like this where its a direct attack would be like 1 post after being hit with it. The duration also needs a definitive length in terms of Posts, not just 'a long rest.'

With the recent changes to Puppet Bodies and Partial Puppet Bodies such as Sega, you can either remove your ability and simply use your limbs as they are or chose to use the new ability, in which case the stats of the limbs will need to be changed to reflect the new rules, which can be found here. I...

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You now have Switching Blade three times. Once that is fixed, 1/2