Naruto Saigen Roleplay

<r>As Ryuu approached the figures, he noticed that three of them appeared to be city guards. The fourth man was the center of their attention, as the guards made strikes that were easily, almost inhumanly dodged. The man appeared to be drunk, perhaps, but was certainly making good use of his drunked...

<r>You've got a few broken tags (there's a [/b]) that I would change notably at the end of here:<br/> <QUOTE><s>[quote]</s>Physical Features:<br/> When you see Nagisa you see one thing, a person who has knowledge . Nagisa body is average nothing impressive, due to her natural fragile frame. She atte...

<t>Also I just noticed, but in choosing the four stats for your specialization, the description says you have to choose strength or speed for one of them...<br/> <br/> So you'd have to drop one of the others (Ninjutsu, Stamina, Control, Instinct) <br/> <br/> Unless I've misunderstood what the "*" me...

<r>If I remember correctly, since Shoshiki is a clan (#MakeIwaGreatAgain) you have to link the last name to the clan page. I've put the nocode for the last name only, below:<br/> <br/> <NOCODE><s>[nocode]</s>[url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5937074/1/#new]Shoshiki[/url]<...

<r><COLOR color="orange"><s>[color=orange]</s>“Phew.”<e>[/color]</e></COLOR> He had made his final few steps up to the top of the walls that surrounded Iwagakure. The walls weren’t so much walls, however, as Iwagakure was a valley; a vast plateau spread out for miles above the village. Because of th...

<r>Ryuu listened intently to Itsuki’s explanation. He had heard most of the info before; the Iwagakure Special Jounin captured by some lunatics in the north of Waterfall Country, and the retrieval of some information from the cult. He was almost disappointed there wasn’t anything more to it. But the...

<r>The trip had let Ryuu become more comfortable with Oohazure, even though the two of them hardly spoke. Oohazure’s early mistake of trying to use his jutsu on Ryuu seemed to be have been a passing lapse in judgement, as the man clearly seemed to have himself generally under control. That was good,...

Hayate:

Wed Mar 01, 2017 8:23 pm

Is that nocode up to date? Just making sure before I 2/2.

Yup! I removed the jutsu from before... So it's all good now! Ready for your 2/2

<r>Ryuu yawned. It was still very early in the morning; the sun had not yet poked its head over the horizon meaning that it was very dark. The moon was still in the sky, and it was by that light that Ryuu had been practicing. On his normal cliff side, Ryuu had to fight to the urge to look out over t...

Please deny this... I may fix and try again later

<r>Itsuki was not the man Ryuu had expected to brief his team, but he couldn’t place his finger on why. He was a tall and thin man, with the aura of someone far younger than himself. Bookish and taught, the man appeared not the type to be preparing warriors for battle. Then again, perhaps there was ...

<r>Ryuu took a deep breath as he began the hand seals once again. Back to his side of the cliff, he felt at home. Things were beginning to get warmer, and with the sun high in the sky, it was almost warm enough for Ryuu to be training without his jacket. Of course, he trained without his jacket even...

<r>Ryuu wiped a bead of sweat from his face. He knew learning this jutsu would be difficult, but he didn’t know it would be <I><s>[i]</s>this<e>[/i]</e></I> difficult. Ryuu had known for some time that his elemental affinity was Doton; he had been told by one of the Genkouyoushi elders when he was f...

<r><QUOTE author="Checkmate" time="1487940452"><s>[quote=Checkmate,(time=1487940452)]</s>Can you put all of the changes in the first post for clarity? <br/> <br/> @the training, you need another 60 words, that's it. <e>[/quote]</e></QUOTE>I just removed the jutsu; I'll make it longer an make another...

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<r>Ryuu stretched his arms as he looked out over the village. He was sitting in his normal training area; the cliffs that overlooked the village of Iwagakure. He let his legs dangle off the edge as he often did. Hakushiijin were strewn across the ground, remnants of Ryuu’s earlier work. As his arms ...

Malevolence for Ryuu Genkouyoushi

<r>I also added some quotes to make it look a little nicer<br/> <SPOILER title="nocode"><s>[spoiler=nocode]</s><NOCODE><s>[nocode]</s>[b]Username:[/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=2142841/]Acroticus[/url]<br/> [b]Points:[/b] 24/24<br/> [hr]<br/> [cen...

<r><QUOTE author="DirectorPr" time="1487640595"><s>[quote=DirectorPr,(time=1487640595)]</s>I went ahead and already edited the stats on the inactive app. Is there anything else you need done before I accept this?<e>[/quote]</e></QUOTE>I'd like to change the picture to <URL url="https://s-media-cache...

<r><B><s>[b]</s>Application:<e>[/b]</e></B> <URL url="https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=6105805/1/#new"><s>[url]</s><LINK_TEXT text="viewtopic.php?&t=6105805/1/#new">https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=6105805/1/#new</LINK_TEXT><e>[/url]</e></URL><br/>...

Creation for me please!

<r><QUOTE author="FluffyGinja" time="1486977104"><s>[quote=FluffyGinja,(time=1486977104)]</s>In this case, it is not that we are children or adults... It is not that we are just the strongest people either. Shinobi are basically on another tier of human all together. Chakra comes into play a lot. So...

<r>So, I've been thinking about this for a while, and I may have even brought it up before, but I don't think I ever saw it through. The lore/information provided about countries in the discussion tab are pretty off from what I would expect from each country in a real life scenario. Just a few examp...

<r>Juro wiped a bead of sweat from off his face. He had been working on his next Fuuton jutsu for nearly an hour, and he was having more trouble than his last training. Perhaps that was because this jutsu was supposed to me more complicated, but it was still far beneath his skill level. He was disap...

<r>Juro was confident; this practice was going to be far easier than his last one. Now that he had used Fuuton jutsu before, he would be able to learn another, hopefully more easily. It shouldn’t be that difficult; he was a high ranking ninja, and was also relatively good at learning jutsu. Nonethel...

<r>Juro stuggled to catch his breath. He was a bit embarrassed at the difficulty he was having. The jutsu, known as the wind bullet, was an extremely basic technique. All Jinrai had Fuuton chakra nature, and most of the ones who became shinobi were capable of manifesting wind style jutsu. However, J...

Also, History has been edited (I checked and it should be all good this time!)

<r><QUOTE author="Hayate" time="1486508089"><s>[quote=Hayate,(time=1486508089)]</s><QUOTE author="Acroticus" time="1486506357"><s>[quote=Acroticus,(time=1486506357)]</s><QUOTE author="Hayate" time="1486505863"><s>[quote=Hayate,(time=1486505863)]</s>like "If the opponents strength is 5 or more less t...

<r><QUOTE author="Hayate" time="1486505863"><s>[quote=Hayate,(time=1486505863)]</s>like "If the opponents strength is 5 or more less than the users, hey get knocked out, if it's between 5 and equal, this disorients them for a post, if the opponents strength is greater, no effect" type deal. Except m...

<r><QUOTE author="Acroticus" time="1485917307"><s>[quote=Acroticus,(time=1485917307)]</s><QUOTE author="Gunshanks" time="1485885133"><s>[quote=Gunshanks,(time=1485885133)]</s><QUOTE><s>[quote]</s>30 small darts that can be fired from his flute kept in a pouch around his waist.<e>[/quote]</e></QUOTE>...

<r>Juro couldn’t believe he was doing it again. Back in the large practice room within the Jinrai family’s castle, the ninja once again was piling bales of hay to act as targets for his jutsu practice. He was surprised there were this many left, but for whatever reason after his last session, the ba...

<r><COLOR color="#D10056"><s>[color=#D10056]</s><B><s>[b]</s>“Hmmmm..”<e>[/b]</e></B><e>[/color]</e></COLOR> Juro hummed as he thought to himself. He continued on his route, walking across the small living room to the table that sat just above the ground, in the center of a seating area. Juro paused...

<r><COLOR color="#D10056"><s>[color=#D10056]</s><B><s>[b]</s>“Ugh!”<e>[/b]</e></B><e>[/color]</e></COLOR> Juro grunted as he placed another bale of hay on top of the last one. It definitely was thankless and boring work; stacking bales of hay to serve as dummies for his jutsu practice. More than tha...

<r>Juro rolled his shoulders forward and back for a few minutes as he prepared himself for another day of training. The Jinrai Castle had a rather large training room, and it was highly convenient, especially for days where the weather was bad or it was particularly cold. Juro had spent many hours i...

<r><QUOTE author="DirectorPr" time="1486231699"><s>[quote=DirectorPr,(time=1486231699)]</s>Please repost a redo of your stats, and I'll change accordingly/accept afterwards.<e>[/quote]</e></QUOTE>Wow thanks! <E>:)</E><br/> <br/> Actually though... I've been thinking about this, and decided its proba...

<r><QUOTE author="Checkmate" time="1486040297"><s>[quote=Checkmate,(time=1486040297)]</s>Strength: 12<br/> Speed: 30<br/> <br/> ^-- Strength needs to be at least 1/2 of your speed.<e>[/quote]</e></QUOTE>I don't know what to do about this. It was accepted after the website reboot. Does that mean I ca...

<r><B><s>[b]</s>Application:<e>[/b]</e></B> <URL url="https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=6105805/1/#new"><s>[url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=6105805/1/#new]</s>Ryuu Genkouyoushi<e>[/url]</e></URL><br/> <br/> <B><s>[b]</s>Change:<e>[/b]</e></B> Chang...

<r><QUOTE author="Gunshanks" time="1485885133"><s>[quote=Gunshanks,(time=1485885133)]</s><QUOTE><s>[quote]</s>30 small darts that can be fired from his flute kept in a pouch around his waist.<e>[/quote]</e></QUOTE> What are the darts made from? Measurements on them?<br/> <QUOTE><s>[quote]</s>A vile ...

I had to cut and past the History down here because with the added info about the civil war, it was too long to fit in just that one post....

In any case, with the history down here, the App is ready for another check!

<r><CENTER><s>[center]</s><B><s>[b]</s><BIG><s>[big]</s>History<e>[/big]</e></BIG><e>[/b]</e></B><e>[/center]</e></CENTER><SPOILER title="Historical Accounts"><s>[spoiler=Historical Accounts]</s> Juromikawa was born into the Jinrai Clan, the wealthiest clan in all of Kumogakure. Neither of his paren...