Naohiro Mod. #13

Jounin, stats, perks, and some basic equipment

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Naohiro Mod. #13

Post by Valkier » Wed May 11, 2022 5:02 pm

Update 13 notes:

Application: Aisu Naohiro

Changes:
  • Revise his old [Connections] perk to [Scaled Connections] per recent rule updates
  • Adding Power Rank field
  • Age up from the great war timeskip
  • Increasing stat total & training counter to 168 (35/75)
    • Increase Control by 4 to 50
    • Increase Chakra Pool by 5 to 38
    • Increase Speed by 5 to 24
    • Increase Strength by 2 to 16
    • Increase Endurance by 1 to 19
    • Increase Willpower by 2 to 22
  • Rank up to Jounin. Adding scaled [Fundraiser] and taking the lump-sum [Omega] perks
  • Added a bit to history to cover some recent events
  • Revised appearance to account for recent events
  • Increase the strength of his flak jacket to 50
  • Purchasing armoured leg guards/trousers
    Protective TrousersShow
    Protective Trousers: Naohiro's dark trousers are custom-made from the same fiber and mesh as his flak jacket, but thinner, more flexible, and sheathed with a smooth material that minimises the sounds of movement. Several dark, dull metal plates are sewn into the outer layer, concealed and interspaced to provide excellent protection without the clinking noise of touching plates. These trousers cover him from ankle to belt and provide a protection of 50 strength against attacks.
  • Donate 100 ryo to HHD
  • Add HHD mask to clothing
  • Add HHD equipment:
    Organization equipmentShow
    Kaguya Bone Ghost Shuriken:
    A set of 5 specialized Senbon imbued with special chakra. giving the set two different effects. When thrown it will cause for the thrower to become invisible to the naked eye for the next four posts as long as the thrower does not exceed 1/3 of their [Speed]. The needles themselves are able to alter their course of flight to home in on their intended target for the next two posts but are unable to make radical changes in their course of flight. Able to swerve left and right up to forty-five degrees in flight to respond changes from the target and to bypass objects that come between the target and the weapon.

    Requirement: 14 Ryo added to Organization
Payment: = 115ryo total cost for this mod
Starting from 138/678, the nocode below has the points removed to give the new total: 23/678
Nocodes:
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[b]Username:[/b] [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=2112828/]Valkier[/url]
[b]Ryo:[/b] 23/678
[b]Prestige Perks:[/b] (4/4) Accountant [scaled]; Connections [scaled]; Sheer Determination [scaled]; Sheer Determination (2) [scaled]; Fundraiser [scaled]; Omega
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[big][b][i][color=#70CEE2]Duty is heavier than a mountain;[/color]
[color=#BAE0E2]Death is lighter than a feather.[/color][/i][/b][/big]
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[b][i][small][color=#BAE0E2]Naohiro, age 15[/color][/small][/i][/b][/center][c][center][url=https://i.imgur.com/MH6cmyl.jpg][img=118,164]https://i.imgur.com/MH6cmyl.jpg[/img][/url]
[b][i][small][color=#BAE0E2]Naohiro, age 12[/color][/small][/i][/b][/center][/table][/float][float=right][hr][center][b][color=#70CEE2]Jump to:[/color]
[goto=General][color=#BAE0E2]◊ General Information[/color][/goto]
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[goto=Techniques][color=#BAE0E2]◊ Jutsu Information[/color][/goto]
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[big][b][big][color=#70CEE2]// General Information[/color][/big][/b][/big]

[color=#BAE0E2][b]Age:[/b][/color] 24
[color=#BAE0E2][b]Gender:[/b][/color] Male
[color=#BAE0E2][b]Height:[/b][/color] 5'11" [1.80m]
[color=#BAE0E2][b]Weight:[/b][/color] 172lbs [79kg]
[color=#BAE0E2][b]Hair:[/b][/color] Black
[color=#BAE0E2][b]Eyes:[/b][/color] Pale blue

[big][b][color=#70CEE2]/ Physical Features[/color][/b][/big]
With porcelain skin and eyes of a radiant blue, Naohiro has grown to epitomize the Aisu stereotype. The effect is heightened by chest-length black hair, sleek and well-cared-for, framing a symmetrical face that toes the line between handsomeness and beauty. A narrow jaw and high cheekbones lend him a proud and imperious bearing that is matched well with his tall and broad-shouldered build.
As an active shinobi, Naohiro trains continually to maintain high standards of fitness, resulting in a lean but hard stature. He is right-handed and sure-footed, and carries himself in a confident yet reticent manner. Usually seen with his hair secured into a topknot or high ponytail, Naohiro aims to appear composed and presentable at all times. Clean-shaven and well dressed, he doesn't just blend easily into Kirigakure’s noble caste; he [i]defines it[/i].
He does, however, carry a few lingering marrs on his person from his years as a shinobi. A thin, crescent-shaped scar runs around one side of his neck, old enough that it has faded to a faint white line that stands out even against his pale skin. Covering his abdomen and one side of his hips is a fractal web of white lines and discoloured flesh obtained from a severe raiton attack, although thanks to advanced iijutsu no sign remains of the puncture wound at its centre.

[big][b][color=#70CEE2]/ Clothing & Accessories[/color][/b][/big]
Raised among the ‘prim and proper’ upper society of the Aisu, Naohiro has inherited an appreciation for fine clothes and, to an extent, traditional fashion. As a ninja, however, he must admit that form takes precedence over function.
His standard mission attire consists of a very fine custom-made flak jacket of a midnight flue, worn over a dark gi and padded fingerless gloves. A belt of thin, carefully woven rope ornaments dark trousers, in addition to a kunai holder on his right thigh and dark ninja-tabi with sandals. A small, six-pronged silver snowflake pin is concealed on the inside of his collar.

While on assignment or traveling, he sometimes wears a nondescript black travelsack on his back to carry essential supplies. The attire is completed by several lengths of sterilised white bandages worn around his ankles, hidden there beneath his clothing. If on assignment with the HHD, he wears a plain white Standard Operator Mask with the symbol of Kirigakure prominently displayed on the forehead, with thin eye slits to see through. In stark contrast to his usual rich garb, this Head Hunter Division mask is devoid of any distinguishing markings at all.
When off-duty, however, Naohiro follows the expectations of his peers among the Aisu and dons all manner of haori, hakama, and yukata, typically of blues, whites, and greys—but always well-made and visibly dashing. The quality of the clothing only increases for formal events.

His forehead protector is usually secured around his neck, front and centre, where it can conceal a particular scar. As part of the Aisu, and therefore by extension part of the Hirohito family, he additionally wears a simple but refined silver ring on the thumb of his left hand, though this is removed when discretion is required. The inside of the ring is delicately carved to show the symbol of the Hirohito.

[big][b][color=#70CEE2]/ Personality[/color][/b][/big]
Like most of the Aisu, Naohiro has been subjected to strict family teachings from birth: Pride, loyalty, strength, and honour. He is a determined young man who brims with motivation to earn the respect of his peers. He wishes to become a reliable source of strength for his village and to the people around him, and places great stock in both his Aisu heritage and his position as a shinobi of Kirigakure.

Naohiro is respectful to all those who don't prove they deserve less, and while he is friendly to those close to him, his upbringing has inevitably lent him a reticence which can easily be mistaken for a standoffish attitude. This oft-taciturn public persona conceals a quick and careful mind, however, always hungry for knowledge and seeking greater strength. In this is revealed an almost scholarly attitude; when Naohiro finds something he doesn’t understand, he will go to considerable lengths to delve into its secrets. He enjoys traveling and experiencing new things, and is strangely unattached to luxury despite his comfortable home life among the Aisu and pristine appearance.

As a youth, Naohiro possessed a kind-hearted nature and a compassionate morality, which quickly came into conflict with his training as a ninja. The teachings of Kirigakure, bolstered by first hand experience and trauma in battle, soon forced him to develop a degree of mental separation between that naïve kindness and the duties that would otherwise break him. As an adult Naohiro has adapted to the change well, able to maintain his personable nature to friends and family, and mask it entirely when his orders demand it.

[big][b][color=#70CEE2]/ History[/color][/b][/big]
[spoiler=History]
Naohiro’s story is one of a dichotomy between innocence and ambition: The transformation from kind-hearted child to the embodiment of Kirigakure’s military ideals, and the lifelong quest to find harmony between the two—without losing oneself in the attempt.
Born into the heights of Kirigakure’s nobility as the scion of Aisu Naoshige—himself a strong, respected, and highly influential shinobi—Naohiro was expected from birth to excel. The importance of the family name was one of the core values instilled into him alongside formality, respect, and pride. His education began when he was just three years old and always emphasised his personal, social, and physical development. Loyalty, discipline, ambition and doctrine soon wove throughout his curriculum, preparing him for a life already decided.

What resulted was a serious and reserved child who relished the praise of his elders and peers, and in whom the indoctrination of the village was evident. Despite this, Nao’s youth was not absent of kindness; while his parents were strict in his teaching, they did so out of love, and raised him well. He developed into a kind and well-meaning child, quiet and painfully reserved—though inevitably somewhat aloof, arrogant, and naïve.
By right of family name, Naohiro entered Academy One when he was eight years old, and what might have reinforced those flaws instead helped to ease them. The academy was a gateway to a whole new world beyond the confines of the Aisu compound; surrounded by other children his own age, many of whom more carefree and rebellious than he knew how to be, his quiet shell began to crack. He quickly fell in love with the newfound freedom and formed lasting bonds with several other children. Among the closest of them all were [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5937772/1/]Kinsue[/url], a direct member of the powerful Karagata house, and [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5846674/1/]Natsumi[/url], a fire-hearted girl from the Jouchaku clan. In all, Naohiro’s time in the academy taught him just as much about how to enjoy life as it did how to become a ninja. Come graduation he had transitioned into a far more confident and friendly boy.
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As a genin, Naohiro soon came to learn that his lessons were still only beginning. His education took a rapid turn, evolving from fundamentals to exhausting detail in history, politics, strategy, and—of course—the shinobi arts. Through long hours of study and harsh training exercises, his father Naoshige soon helped him master his innate potential with the Aisu’s famed [i]hyouton[/i] release, after which he secured a position within a newly-formed four-man squad, [i][url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=90&t=8181614]Unit Twelve[/url][/i] alongside his old friends [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5937772/1/]Kinsue[/url] and [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5846674/1/]Natsumi[/url] who were joined and led by the special jounin [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5819598/1/]Jouchaku Karasu[/url]. Despite some initial success, Naohiro's and Kinsue's growth quickly outstripped the group and the two genin instead transitioned into a more conventional two-man rivalry squad.

With Kinsue as a rival, Naohiro progressed rapidly. His years of hard training and the daily challenge of keeping up with his new friend fostered an impressive foundation in offensive ninjutsu, particularly the clan's hallmark hyouton, suiton, and fuuton techniques. But his mentor of many years—an elderly and deceptively strict Aisu Hisako—sought to draw out additional talents in her young charge and supplemented his usual training with many varied lessons. One such opportunity introduced him to the basics of medicine at one of Kirigakure's largest medical centres, where his excellent chakra control and inquisitive mind allowed him to flourish. While not his main focus, Naohiro gradually developed a solid foundation in, and fascination for, medical iijutsu.

In the weeks preceding Naohiro's chuunin exam he sought out a meeting with the infamous [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=89&t=5942418]Kaikyo Kohon[/url], the former overseer of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist. He boldly petitioned the Jounin to teach him some improved taijutsu to cover a glaring gap in his skillset. Astonishingly, Kohon agreed, imparting the secrets of his [i]silent fighter[/i] style to the young Aisu.

By the time Naohiro came to face Kinsui during their chuunin trial, both were significantly over-par for genin, and their battle was intense and tenacious. Naohiro sustained multiple injuries from Kinsue's impressive array of ninjutsu and on-the-fly strategising, but eventually—barely—he emerged victorious. The Aisu clan gave their approval to his promotion, and while recuperating after the combat, he found himself faced with a very different sort of challenge: betrothal. Originally set up as an arranged match, Naohiro met and quickly grew close to [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=8179156/1/]Aisu Megumi[/url], and the two decided to pursue a relationship on their own terms.
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After achieving the rank of chuunin, Naohiro allowed himself more freedom to develop a varied skillset. The branching into iijutsu and taijutsu, with a small coverage of fuuinjutsu, had ignited within him a desire for more. He soon began developing genjutsu and spent an increasing amount of time in the Kirigakure hospitals to improve his medical abilities, all the while continuing to hone his elemental ninjutsu arsenal while running missions with Kinsui.

One such mission saw the pair investigating a corrupt official in Water Country at the behest of the Water Daimyo. What began as a simple infiltration soon backfired, with the official, Onho Yukimura, calling upon hired mercenaries to capture and torture the two ninja. Eager to take advantage of the victory, Yukimura began using the two chuunin as arena showpieces to inspire and recruit soldiers, but he underestimated the talent and tenacity of the pair. When forced to face Kinsui in a fight to the death, Naohiro took a carefully orchestrated slash to his neck, pairing it with a powerful hyouton technique that allowed him to feign death and thus escape the clutches of captivity. He returned to free his friend only to find Kinsui had also escaped after revealing his value as a Karagata hostage to survive. Together, the pair hunted down Yukimura and gave unto him a swift and bloody end, before bringing damning evidence against him back to Kirigakure. The success of their mission against such overwhelming odds saw the pair promoted to Special Jounin.
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Naohiro's next challenge came with Kirigakure's failed operation to [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=211&t=8342076]annex Soul Country[/url]. The covert campaign, supported by Iwagakure, to infiltrate and subdue the small island nation quickly escalated into a contained international conflict as Kumogakure and Konohagakure, learning of Kirigakure's and Iwagakure's movements, commited their own shinobi in opposition. Naohiro's reputation and skills as a combat medic saw him chosen as a squad leader during the operation, and he led a team consisting of an Iwagakure chuunin, [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=83&t=8341209]Kinomichi[/url], one of Kirigakure's trainee Seven Swordsmen, [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=84&t=8277789]Mondai[/url], and the Jinchuuriki of the Etaigenma, [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=8072554/1/]Tsukino Nishiki[/url].
The squad's objective was to infiltrate and capture the strategic western tower of Soul Country, but despite their impressive roster they were unable to achieve their goal. As soon as they set sights on their target they were intercepted and broken by an encounter with the Ninth Raikage, [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?&t=5944838/1/]Nakajima Hayate[/url] and a second masked accomplice. The two opponents vastly outmatched the younger squad, more than making up for the discrepancy in numbers, and cut the group down before Naohiro's order to retreat could be realised. During the short but intense encounter, the Raikage hit Naohiro with no less than sixteen bolts of raiton in rapid succession, overwhelming his defences and forever scarring the Aisu special jounin. Only a moment of mercy from Hayate and some rapid remote support from the Kirigakure and Iwagakure base camp allowed Naohiro, Kinomichi, Nishiki and Mondai to barely escape with their lives.

The unit were whisked away from Soul Country and back to their home nations using teleportation jutsu at the final moment before recieving urgent medical care. After a short period of rest and recovery, Naohiro's insatiable curiosity forced him back to work: he simply [i]had[/i] to understand how their group had been saved, and to learn to use that power for himself. His rank and station in the village allowed him access to many private and restricted libraries, as well as the best tutors of the village, and before long he discovered hints and concepts of Jikukan ninjutsu. Then he began experimenting. He learned quickly, growing bolder with his attempts at jutsu manipulating space and time until he eventually mastered the art, tearing a hole in reality and traversing into a dimension of his own making.

Keeping these achievements to himself, he next sought out Kirigakure's infamous Head Hunter Division. After blazing through a series of ardous physical and mental trials, he met and was vetted by the Division's notorious Commander, [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=84&t=5971127]Karagata Shiv[/url], before being put to work as one of their many masked operatives. His goal to harden himself into a better, more efficient soldier was tested when, not long after his recruitment, the Fourth Great Shinobi War erupted across the continent...[/spoiler][/justify]

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[justify][float=right][center][b][big][color=#70CEE2]// Statistics: [/color][color=#BAE0E2]170 (37/75)[/color][/big][/b][/center]

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[center][b][big][color=#9BC4E2]Kirigakure no Sato[/color][/big]
[color=white]Village Rank:[/color][color=#F43F4F] Jounin[/color]
[color=white]Power Rank:[/color][color=#F43F4F] A[/color][/b][/center]

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[center][b][color=#BAE0E2][u]Chakra Affinity:[/u][/color]
[color=#15AABC]Hyouton[/color][/center]

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[center][b][color=white]Chakra Pool:[/color] [color=#BAE0E2]39[/color]
[color=white]Endurance:[/color] [color=#BAE0E2]19[/color]
[color=white]Control:[/color] [color=#BAE0E2]50[/color]
[color=white]Strength:[/color] [color=#BAE0E2]16[/color]
[color=white]Speed:[/color] [color=#BAE0E2]24[/color]
[color=white]Willpower:[/color] [color=#BAE0E2]22[/color][/b][/center]

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[goto=Combat][color=#BAE0E2]◊ Combat Information[/color][/goto]
[goto=Techniques][color=#BAE0E2]◊ Jutsu Information[/color][/goto]
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[b][big][big][color=#70CEE2]// Combat Information[/color][/big]

[color=#70CEE2]/ Combat Style[/color][/big][/b]
A skilled ninjutsu user, Naohiro prefers to engage his foes at medium range and ensnare them in a web of techniques ready to catch them off-guard. While competent fighting in close-quarters, he tends to do so with supplementary ninjutsu techniques rather than relying on raw physical prowess alone. Regardless, he generally takes on a central role in a battlefield and attempts to aid his comrades by occupying the attentions of his opponents or by identifying and striking at vulnerabilities. He is adept at analysing and judging the flow of a battle, and believes strongly in strategy on the field.

[big][b][color=#70CEE2]/ Tools and Equipment[/color][/b][/big]
[spoiler=Tools and Equipment]
[list][*][b]Flak Jacket:[/b] Naohiro wears a Kirigakure flak jacket as part of his standard mission attire. The jacket is dyed a deep midnight blue and covers the entirety of Naohiro’s torso and back from shoulder to beltline, with side protection, shoulder pads, upper arm guards, thigh pads and a stiff collar. The vest is padded with tightly woven high-strength fiber and is reinforced with a fine internal steel mesh, protecting the wearer from stabbing, slashing, and blunt force impacts with a strength of 50. The vest weighs around 12kg, but offers many practical pockets and concealed pouches within which equipment can be stored and readily accessed.
[*] [b]Protective Trousers[/b]: Naohiro's dark trousers are custom-made from the same fiber and mesh as his flak jacket, but thinner, more flexible, and sheathed with a smooth material that minimises the sounds of movement. Several dark, dull metal plates are sewn into the outer layer, concealed and interspaced to provide excellent protection without the clinking noise of touching plates. These trousers cover him from ankle to belt and provide a protection of 50 strength against attacks.
[*] [b]Kaguya Bone Ghost Senbon[/b]: A set of 5 specialized Senbon imbued with special chakra. giving the set two different effects. When thrown it will cause for the thrower to become invisible to the naked eye for the next four posts as long as the thrower does not exceed 1/3 of their [Speed]. The needles themselves are able to alter their course of flight to home in on their intended target for the next two posts but are unable to make radical changes in their course of flight. Able to swerve left and right up to forty-five degrees in flight to respond changes from the target and to bypass objects that come between the target and the weapon.
[*][b]Kunai ×12[/b]: Ten are stored in Naohiro's kunai pouch on his right thigh. One is kept in his left trouser pocket, and one concealed beneath the lower back of his vest at waist height.
[*][b]Shuriken ×12[/b]: Three are kept available in each of Nao's left and right trouser pockets. The remaining six are kept in his kunai holster on his thigh.
[*][b]Explosive Tag ×6[/b]: Stored in small scroll compartments within his vest pockets.
[*][b]Flash Tag ×4[/b]: Stored in small scroll compartments within his vest pockets.
[*][b]Smoke Bomb ×5[/b]: Stored in small scroll compartments within his vest pockets.
[*][b]Blank Scroll ×6[/b]: Stored in small scroll compartments within his vest pockets. Each scroll is six inches in height and, when unrolled, three feet in length.
[*][b]Waterskin, 0.5gal (2¼L)[/b]: Kept inside his vest.
[*][b]Reinforced rope (12m)[/b]: A long, thin coil of white rope consisting of a 3mm diameter steel ninja-wire core surrounded by 2mm of fine woven white hemp fibres. The steel core grants the rope incredibly high tensile strength and durability, making it resistant to slicing and snapping while allowing it to be a fraction of the diameter of an equivalent-strength standard rope. Naohiro keeps this tied around his waist, woven into the shape of a fashionable belt.
[*][b]Fine-toothed comb ×1[/b]: The mandatory accessory of any Aisu that has a shred of pride, this comb has been carved from a single small shark bone and has had the Aisu crest carved into its bleached white spine. Five inches in length, it is usually kept in Hiro's right trouser pocket.
[*][b]14m clean white bandages[/b]: These bandages have been pre-soaked in a sterilising alcohol solution, ensuring their suitability for field medicine in a pinch. 4m of bandages are wrapped around each of Naohiro's ankles, with a further 6m wrapped around his right thigh beneath his kunai pouch.[/list][/spoiler]

[big][b][color=#70CEE2]/ Abilities: [/color][color=#BAE0E2](1/3)[/color][/b][/big]
[spoiler=Hyouton Chakra Element][color=#15aabc][b]Hyouton Chakra Element[/b][/color]
Through a genetic mutation, members of the Aisu clan are able to simultaneously use the elements of [color=dodgerblue]Suiton[/color] and [color=lightgreen]Fuuton[/color] to create [color=#15aabc]Hyouton[/color], or Ice Release. Capable of rapidly reducing the temperature of objects, and even the air around them to freeze defenses and create weaponry from moisture in the air.
[spoiler=Passive(Cooling)]The Aisu clan is able to dynamically [b]cool[/b] the temperature of things around them through their jutsu. In most of their jutsu, this occurs through the creation of ice using suiton jutsu, or the moisture already existing in the air. While Aisu are naturally resistant to decreased temperature, even they can succumb to the biting frost of their techniques. The temperature decrease, and the area they can decrease, is determined by the rank of techniques, making elder Aisu more deadly than their youngest, able to create snap freezes that can kill with ease. The only exception is freezing organic material directly, which requires higher ranking techniques.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[big][b][color=#70CEE2]/ Concentrations:[/color][color=#BAE0E2] (13/18)[/color][/b][/big]
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[b][color=#BAE0E2]Ninjutsu Concentrations:[/color][/b][c]
[spoiler=Suiton Affinity][color=dodgerblue][b]Suiton Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Suiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Suiton affinity. Suiton has a passive [color=dodgerblue][i]enveloping[/i][/color] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Enveloping)]Suiton's effect is enveloping, meaning that suiton passively surrounds anything that it makes contact with. Suiton techniques that do not last over periods of time (i.e. exploding techniques) drench their opponents, but long term techniques will envelop anything they come in contact with and maintain a hold on it with 3/4's the strength of the technique, rounded down.[/spoiler][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Fuuton Affinity][color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an [b]cutting[/b] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Cutting)]Fuuton has a natural [b]cutting[/b] property to it that exists in all jutsu unless otherwise stated. This gives fuuton a unique opportunity to strike with additional power, and to act as an offensive defense. Regardless of their purpose, fuuton jutsu passively cut with no distinct pattern at 1/2 the strength of the technique rounded down unless otherwise stated. This also means that fuuton jutsu specifically designated to cut things can create devastating wound by essentially striking twice.[/spoiler][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Ninjutsu: Advanced Channeling]
This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any Ninjutsu that is designed to be channeled, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Sensory Ninjutsu][b]Sensor[/b]
Sensors are shinobi who are able to activate a sixth sense which can locate and read chakra sources. Sensory is advantageous as it allows shinobi to perceive without using any of their conventional senses, which can easily be deceived. Sensors are able to collect a lot of information through the interpretation of this sixth sense.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Jikukan Ninjutsu][color=#666699][b]Jikukan Ninjutsu[/b][/color]
Practitioners of this art are able to manipulate [b]Space/Time[/b] to create localized pockets within either, or both, that they have control over. An extremely advanced form on Ninjutsu, it demands a firm control and complex understanding of the fundamentals of chakra.
[spoiler=Realm: Fragment of Eternity]
[center][b][i][u][big][big][big][font=Andalus]Fragment of Eternity[/font][/big][/big][/big][/u][/i][/b][/center]
[justify]Upon Aisu Naohiro’s tearing asunder of reality with Jikukan ninjutsu, the universe’s self-correction spun out the [i]Fragment[/i] as a parallel, personal realm. The Fragment consists of a vast floating ice crystal hanging in an endless void of space, it’s many facets forming an oval gem-like structure some 200 x 200 x 200 metres in size, lit from within and without by a steady ethereal light.[/justify]
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[justify]Naohiro’s penchant for Hyouton ninjutsu is evident within his realm; the crystal and its contents are frigid to the touch and shine in a kaleidoscopic range of whites and blues reminiscent of real ice, and exert a continuous aura of Hyouton’s [i]Cooling[/i] passive through the entire structure, dropping the ambient temperature to as low as -30C. Being the both the Architect of the realm and naturally attuned to Hyouton, Naohiro experiences negligible effects of the cooling and can choose to extend this resistance to other willing persons entering the realm. All others suffer a continual drain of -5 Endurance per post within the realm, stacking for up to 4 posts.

The giant crystal is largely semi-translucent, though many internal features are an opaque white or fully see-through, revealing a helical structure of chambers, stairs, corridors and rooms all of the same freezing, flawlessly beautiful faceted crystal. Beyond the outer walls of the crystal is an imagined backdrop of deep space; some parts are a black and featureless void, while in other quadrants lie distant nebulae, stars, and numerous astronomical oddities. Forever out of reach but always tempting the eye, they represent Naohiro’s ceaseless curiosity and pursuit of bigger questions.

The crystal, by contrast, is a world in which he is the master; his heart, blood, and mind made manifest. The thick gleaming walls of ice respond to his touch and thought, growing, shattering, twisting and solidifying to his whim at the speed of his [control], and are impervious to damage. At its core is a pillar of vibrant white light running the height of the crystal, bathing any central chambers in powerful illumination—to the point that the innermost heart of the crystal can be formed into a near-featureless pure white chamber where shadow does not exist—and fading in intensity to that of an overcast sky at the crystal’s edge.

Though their position, size, and exact makeup shifts with Naohiro’s influence, the crystal typically houses a number of standard chambers and passages. These include:[/justify]
[list][*]A helical staircase spiralling around the outer shell of the crystal running from top to bottom, from which various horizontal paths split off into a cross-cross of tunnels leading deeper into the body of the crystal.
[*]A large, multistorey library and adjoining study, featuring ornate staircases, seating, desks, and shelves all of immaculately carved white ice. The shelves and desks are ordinarily bare, but fill with tomes, documents, accounts and memories recalled by Naohiro as he wills.
[*]A dual-purpose surgery and interrogation room, complete with numerous operating tables, cells, operating tools, restraints, and medical facilities.
[*]A vast hemispherical arena which can expand up to 80 metres in radius and height, decorated with fractal, hexagonal patterns across a faceted dome and floor. A number of small booths housing tiered seating, reminiscent of a threatre, line its upper edges.
[*]A small isolated meditation chamber, whose walls turn flawlessly transparent, reflective, or opaque as Naohiro desires. No doors or features mar the walls of this room, and its perfectly even lighting shifts based on its current location in the crystal.
[*]A central hub, located near the white pillar of light at the core of the crystal, with radially positioned alcoves each with ample room for fuuinjutsu seals on the floor or walls, and with pedestals for Anchored items.
[*]A large armoury and exercise area, including many training mannequins, racks, and shelves. Like the library, the armoury is naturally empty unless Naohiro wills the ice to form specific objects, however there are impervious transparent pedestals, cabinets, and mounts for safekeeping of physical objects brought into the realm from the real world. While in these protective casings, Time is Closed on such objects, preventing decay or damage with age or due to the cold conditions.
[*]A vault hidden in the depths of the crystal, containing numerous unmarked sub-chambers with ample storage for bulk items and currency brought in from the real world.
[*]A private chamber, inaccessible except by Naohiro creating a doorway, with all the comforts expected by a noble-born man for a good nights’ rest. Unlike most other areas of the crystal, this area remains relatively stable and is filled with many personal effects and physical items of furniture, decoration, and comfort brought in from the real world.[/list]
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[spoiler=Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu][color=#222222][b]Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu[/b][/color]
This user is able to utilize Storage Fuuinjutsu and Force Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Storage or Force Classification. Storage Fuuinjutsu can be used to store supplies, weapons, armor, or anything in between. Force Fuuinjutsu are used to release, counteract, and capture energy.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Charge & Augment Fuuinjutsu][color=#222222][b]Charge& Augment Fuuinjutsu[/b][/color]
This user is able to utilize Charge & Augment Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Charge & Augment Classification. Charge Fuuinjutsu are used to create jutsu-like effects using seals. Augment Fuuinjutsu are used to enhance or limit the power of whatever they are placed on.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Iijutsu][color=#008b5e][b]Iijutsu[/b][/color]
This concentration allows for the user to user chakra to affect the biological processes of a living creature. This includes modifying, speeding up, or slowing down the biological processes. Iijutsu is known for its advanced nature and requires precise chakra control to work effectively. It can be differentiated from normal techniques by the faint light green colour of the chakra used in Iijutsu techniques.[/spoiler][c]
[b][color=#BAE0E2]Taijutsu Concentrations:[/color][/b][c]
[spoiler=Close Quarters Combat][b]Close Quarters Combat[/b]
The fundamental skill of [b][Close Quarters Combat][/b] indicates the user's proficiently to efficiently make use of martial arts and complex combat moves involving the body, such as advanced kicks, punches, grapples, and more.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Perception][b]Perception[/b]
The fundamental skill of [b][Perception][/b] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Stealth][b]Stealth[/b]
The fundamental skill of [b][Stealth][/b] describes the user’s proficiency in remaining silent, unseen and unnoticed as they go about tasks. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/spoiler][c]
[b][color=#BAE0E2]Genjutsu Concentrations:[/color][/b][c]
[spoiler=Status Genjutsu][b]Status Genjutsu[/b]
This user has learned how to utilize Status Genjutsu that impose mental and cognitive effects on their target.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Sight Initiation][b]Sight Initiation[/b]
This user has learned to use visual cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to perform actions, or draw the eyes to something to capture their targets in a genjutsu.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Sound Initiation][b]Sound Initiation[/b]
This user has learned to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu.[/spoiler][/table]
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Post by Zao » Wed May 11, 2022 7:59 pm

Looks good.

Only thing I see is the leg armor pricing. Armor comes with a base 10 str when bought. So should only be 20 ryo to scale up to 50 str.
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Post by Valkier » Thu May 12, 2022 4:16 am

Thanks mate, updated mod/nocode points accordingly
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Post by Zao » Thu May 12, 2022 2:55 pm

1/2
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Post by Taiga » Fri May 27, 2022 1:22 pm

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