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Post by Trucro » Mon Jul 11, 2016 7:07 pm

Hey everyone! I have been working on a taijutsu style for my Iwa character (#MakeIwaGreatAgain), but I have never made a taijutsu style before. I was hoping I could get some feedback on my ideas so that I know everything is alright. I'd also like to hear ideas if anyone has any! Let me know:
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Karakorun Style

Karakorun is a fighting style used by the Tenrai who inhabit the steppes of Rock Country. The Tenrai had little use for attacking with a heavy blow, as their opponents were generally other lightly armored soldiers. Made to fight against people wearing light armor, the style heavily relies on instinct and speed to dodge attacks, only striking after finding a weak point in the opponent’s movements. This style is not well known to those outside of the steppes, even to people in other areas of Rock Country.
  • Requires:Deft Hands and Acrobatics

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Karakorun Style • Great Mane
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
This move was adapted for the user to defeat the opponent through a quick and unstoppable attack. While moving forward, as the opponent attacks towards the user’s head or upper torso, the user with pull their head in and turn sideways, successfully dodging the attack if it’s speed is lower than the user’s instinct+speed/2. The benefit of this technique is that it allows the user to keep their momentum while dodging an attack.

Karakorun Style • Gallop
D-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
This stance was created by horsemen in the even that they fell off their horse. The user will begin this stance while running, lowering their shoulders and turning their legs slightly inward. This prepares the user for dodges more easily, providing torque in the legs and maneuverability in the shoulders.
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Post by Tsedas » Fri Jul 15, 2016 7:19 am

as they’re opponents were generally other lightly armored soldiers <- their not they're(they are)

only striking after finding a week point in the opponent’s movements < - weak not week

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Post by Trucro » Fri Jul 15, 2016 7:52 am

FisterRoboto:
Fri Jul 15, 2016 12:19 pm
as they’re opponents were generally other lightly armored soldiers <- their not they're(they are)

only striking after finding a week point in the opponent’s movements < - weak not week
Well spotted. XD
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