Chasing Daybreak

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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Fri May 27, 2016 5:21 am

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2015-2016 Entries
IDTitle
L1What Kind of Shinobi...
L2Training #1
L3Training #2
L4Training #3
L5The House of Terumī
OOC Note: In as much as anything I write could be considered worth reading, it wouldn't be any of the lonelies I wrote in or before 2016. Brave these at your own discretion.
2023 Entries
L6Training #4
L7Training #5
L8Training #6
L9Training #7
L10Training #8
L11Training #9
L12Training #10
L13Training #11
L14Training #12
L15Training #13
L16Training #14
L17More than Duty
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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Fri May 27, 2016 8:07 am

What Kind of Shinobi... First Posted 31/12/2015
Events are centered on a 12 year old Kinsue

Kinsue walked hurriedly towards Kiri's main gate, berating himself for his lateness. What the hell was he doing, messing around for so long before his mission? He was usually the first to arrive, always ready for whatever Kirigakure no Sato had to throw at him, yet as he reached his destination he found that not only had his 2 Genin partners arrived, but so had the noble that they had been tasked with protecting. Idiot!

The 2 other Genin both seemed to be of an age with Kinsue, the one closest to him was clearly male, a tall, muscular child whose pale skin and white hair marked him for a Kaguya, even without looking at the 2 dots on his forehead. The other Genin seemed to be a girl. Younger, or at least smaller, than the Kaguya, there seemed to be something familiar in her dark hair and bright eyes. Is that... Akari? It was indeed Matsou Akari, one of the other students from his class in the Academy, proficient enough in lijutsu to pass on her first attempt, but not particularly talented. The Noble that they were set to guard was of middling height, but seemed to be able to look down on you regardless. He must have been about 40.

He addressed the Noble first, bowing deeply he said Ohayō gozaimasu, I am Karagata Kinsue, your third bodyguard for this trip.” The Noble smiled, returning the bow Ohayō gozaimasu Kinsue, I am Takeda Hiroto. I am sure that you will all serve well as my guards.” Despite his natural condescending look, Hiroto seemed to be a friendly enough guy. He had definitely guarded worse people before. He turned to Akari, the only familiar face among the three,and said: ”Matsou Akari? We were in the same class at the Academy, it's good to see you again.” He offered his hand to the 12 year old girl, and she promptly accepted. “It's good to see you again. Kinsue right? Karagata Kinsue.” It was good that there was someone that he knew on the team. Not only did he know more or less what her abilities were, but it would help ease any tension between the Genin. ”This is Kaguya Daiki, I've been paired with his in a few missions. He's a good partner.” she said, turning to the last of the three people. Upon closer inspection he realized that, contrary to his initial belief, Daiki was the eldest of the 3 Genin. The child, who must have been 13 or 14 years old, examined him coldly.”So you're our partner, thanks for finally showing up. We'd better get going.” Of course he was right. The road that they were taking had a history of bandit attacks, they had met up early to minimize how many nights they would need to spend on the road. An advantage that would be lost if they wasted any more time. With Daiki in the lead, the group set off.
”This seems like as good a spot as any, we'll stay here for the night.” The son was setting on the second day of their four day journey. With Hiroto accompanying the three ninja, they made slow progress, but no bandits had shown their face so far. Daiki and Akari didn't seem to believe that any bandits would show up either, ”We're more than a match for them, and they know it.” He had said. He was probably right too, the Kaguya had far more mission experience than either Kinsue or Akari, and looked to be a prodigy even amongst his clan. As they made camp for the night he started a fire and cooked some of the food that they had brought for the journey, while Akari looked over the map that they had. ”It's hard to tell, but at this rate we should get there ahead of time. Maybe there will be time for us to go out as a team before she have to go back.” There was an unmistakable happiness in her voice at the prospect. Kinsue could tell that she was interested in Daiki, a feeling probably born during the other missions that they had been paired for. If he returned those feeling however, he gave no hint of it. For Akari's sake, Kinsue hoped he did.

They ate a fine supper, and prepared to sleep early as they had the day before, in the hopes of rising early as well. ”I'll take the first watch” He offered, walking to a spot where he figured he'd be able to see potential enemies from every direction. He felt a hand on his shoulder, and turned to see Akari. ”We don't need to set a watch tonight, do we?” she asks with a pained expression on her face. ”Akari, even if we could take on any bandits in a fight, you don't need skill to kill someone in his sleep. I'd like the rest as much as anyone, but we need the watch.” He said what needed to be said, as much as he may have agreed. ”Kinsue's right Akari, I'm sorry” Daiki sounded like he wanted to sleep as much as Kinsue, but he was glad for the support nonetheless. ”Maybe... Maybe, if we set some traps. It'd give us as much warning as you could.” By this point he started to wonder if Akari really was cut out to be a ninja. Having your sleep cut by a third when you're already traveling all day was hard, but not this hard. Most shinobi he knew would have just dealt with it and moved on, he already had at least. ”We're keeping a watch, even if I have to take your shift.” He said with as much of a sense of finality as he could muster, turning away from Akari.

The rest of the group soon fell asleep, the 2 other Genin grateful for what rest they did get. As he had the night before, Kinsue soon grew bored of keeping watch, and his thoughts drifted to home. His father and eldest brother were both in the village, most likely making sure their role in the shipping industry was filled. His mother was with a group of other Jōnin, on some mission or another, and Kaito... Kaito probably wasn't doing anything, knowing him. Perhaps he had been assigned a mission with some of his friends... The thought of friends quickly drove his mind to his own friends from the academy. Toukai, Aiso, there weren't many of them, but they were all good people. He was proud to have had friends like that, and wished that he could still see them. Naohiro had teamed up with his for a bit, but they hadn't seen each other for a year now. It had been even longer with the rest, and he missed all of them.

He looked up, fully alert, as he heard a slight noise behind him. Pausing and checking for the noise again, he couldn't hear anything. As he started to relax again, however, he could have sworn he heard the same noise, a slight rustle, again. ”Akari, Daiki, wake up.” He whispered, shaking the Kaguya. They both rose silently and on alert. ”Where?” Daiki asked simply, before bing answered by Kinsue's pointing finger. They waited in silence, ears pricked, and weapons (or bones in Daiki's case) in hand. A moment passed. Then two, finally Akari spoke up, ”I don't know what you heard Kinsue, but no bandit could be this quiet.” Daiki nodded his agreement, and the two of them lay down again, ready to sleep.

And the kunai came whistling threw the air, straight into Hiroto's neck.

Shit! Running on instinct, he formed a series of quick hand seals, ”Fuuton, Divine Wind!” and formed 3 tornado pillars in a line facing where the kunai had come from, the next weapons thrown were harmlessly deflected. Kinsue turned, and saw Daiki quickly getting to his feet, he lifted Akari to hers ”Akari, see if you can heal Hiroto, quickly!” It was no good, the girl only stood, shock etched onto her face. Daiki, however, was up, and ready to respond, they turned back to the tornadoes, just in time to see a column of flame fly straight towards it.

The flame hit the middle tornado, and was fanned near twice it's previous size. SHIT! Kinsue dived right, Daiki left, and Akari only stood, shock etched onto her face... The flame engulfed her, dragging her screaming body to the ground.
The rest of the fight ran by in a blur, they had fought back to start, Daiki with his bones and Kinsue with his ninjutsu. He even caught one of the enemy in his water vortex, but he only broke through it, and fought back with even more powerful jutsu. Before long they knew they had to escape, and managed to gain some distance between them and the enemy. They both knew it wouldn't last.

”One of us has to get back to the village.”Daiki said breathlessly, his leg had been cut open, and he was limping heavily. ”... You're faster” Wait... What? ”No! We can still beat them, or-or we can both get away” ”Just shut up Karagata, the village has to know about these ninja, how do you think they'll find out if you don't tell them? So hurry up and go", and Kinsue went, the Kaguya was right. So he ran away, and trusted another to fight his battles.

Is this really all I can do?

What kind of shinobi is this weak?

Who am I, to even call myself a ninja...
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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Wed Jun 08, 2016 11:49 pm

Training #1: Instinct First Posted 22/03/2016
Training takes place while Kinsue is 14 Kinsue sat, cross legged, across from the elder of his two brothers. Between them lay a board covered in pieces, on which various markings were engraved. Kinsue reflected that, despite the numerous threatening situations into which he had been thrust during his time as a shinobi, he had never actually felt so hopeless as he did in that moment. In the end, the game of Shogi really did a number on him, mostly because he was terrible at it.

The matches that he now played against his brother, Katsurou, on a regular basis first became a fixture a few weeks before. The young man had brought the board home one evening, telling Kinsue that Riki, the young man's bodyguard, as well as Kinsue's sensei, had recommended that he begin to play. As it turned out, Katsurou and Riki played somewhat frequently, both when they had free time on official Karagata business, as well as during the days where they would spend time together whilst not needed. The two of them had become close friends over the last few months, to the point where Kinsue saw the special Jounin at least once a week, alongside Katsurou.

Regardless of the friendship between the two men, Riki had suggested that Kinsue learn the art of the game, so that he would be able think on his feet more effectively. Riki referred to the art of strategising in the midst of battle as "Urahara speed Shogi.", and would often state his belief that playing the game itself was almost identical to forming plans for a real battle. As a result, Katsurou insisted that Kinsue learn the game by playing with him.

The young genin supposed that it was possible that he wasn't that bad at the game. Riki frequently praised Katsurou's skill at the game, stating that he himself only won matches against him on very rare occasions. Katsurou would often retort that he had let the shinobi win, and Kinsue was almost convinced enough by his brother's skill to believe his side of the tale. He had never faced Riki though, the man had never had enough time whilst Kinsue was there, so he wasn't able to say with certainty how good either he, or Riki was at the game.

Katsurou though, was a damn prodigy at the game. Kinsue couldn't help but think that if the man was a shinobi himself, he would be a master tactician. Smart enough to outwit even Jounin, and overcome a significant disparity in power between his opponent and himself.

He couldn't have set himself a more difficult goal then, as he knew that he wouldn't give up until he was as skilled, or even more skilled, than his brother.

He was never able to find another opponent to play besides Katsurou, and so he spent countless hours where the game consumed almost every fiber of his being. He found entire scrolls dedicated to the various strategies of the game, and read all of them... Multiple times, he had learned the uses of the Yagura castle, while finding out how to exploit it's weaknesses at the same time. He had spent more time than he could keep track of hunched over a shogi board, trying to discover new moves and strategies that he could use against his brother.

Suffice to say, he had begun to obsess about the game.

Just like in any other game, Kinsue knew that he was fighting a losing battle almost from the first move. One thing he had begun to realize about shogi was, it didn't matter how much you learned the set tactics, or the concepts of the game. There was far too much variation between matches for there to be set tactics for the late stage of the game, and so victory really went to the player who knew how to improvise. He supposed that was the key reason that he was being taught it at all, the concept could be applied just as well to warfare. It didn't matter how detailed and planned out your strategies were, it made no difference whether or not you had the skill to execute your plans to perfection. In the end, you can never predict your opponent, and no plan survived first contact with the enemy as a result.

That particular game, his attempt at an Anaguma Castle had been taken apart before it even had a chance to form by Katsurou's fast attacks. He hadn't been expecting that the older Karagata would try an aggressive strategy like he used, but it really just went to show the extend of his prowess at improvisation. As it was, Kinsue was struggling to avoid being taken out of the game altogether.

"I'm losing track of how many times I've told you this Kinsue, you need to adapt. Anaguma Castles don't work if I can get behind your lines before you even finish it. A piece of mine reaches your camp before you're ready and it's all over. It would have been a better strategy if you had converted to a Mino castle when you saw the assault coming, instead of trying to just push through." Katsurou had a habit of advising Kinsue with how he should have dealt with each attack that he didn't deal with correctly. He knew the advise helped, and would always try his best to take it in. Sometimes he just wasn't in the best of moods, especially during a loss in progress at the hands of his brother, to take his brother's words well.

"I understand brother." The young genin said with a sullen tone. Trying to figure out how best to deal with the Lance at his doorstep. Not long after, his bishop moved, to his almost instant dissatisfaction when Katsurou's pawn, a pawn of all things! took the piece. How did I not notice that?

"Calm down Kinsue, slow down your moves, and think through whatever you're about to do." That was perhaps the hardest part of the game to Kinsue, on Katsurou's insistence, saying that it would not help the shinobi if he could spend as long as he wanted on each move, the two brothers played with a timer. More than once, the pressure that the clock introduced would cause the boy to feel as if he was under an overt amount of pressure, almost always leading to a stupid move. This time he made sure he thought carefully through the possibilities, looking at each of his pieces in turn. thinking: What is the best option here...

Only to be disturbed by the sound of the clock, as it hit 0. "It's good that you're taking your time, but perhaps... A little faster than that." The young man said with a smile.

Kinsue had gone straight from his match with Katsurou, back to his scrolls, he had run the Anahuma Castle at least 4 times, and had made sure that the mistakes he had made that day would not be repeated. The day after he had played against his brother once more, and this time he was determined, perhaps more than he had ever been, not to fail.

The game started pretty well, all thing considered. He had gone for the Yagura Castle as an opening, and managed to complete it with minimal interference from his opponent, he had even managed to take the first piece that game. Much to his brother's approval. Of course, it did not go perfectly for the genin, Katsurou came back with a vengeance, as might be expected, and by the time of the final phase of the match, Kinsue knew that his chances of winning were slim to none.

He had one slight opportunity, in the form of a few pieces that he had managed to get up the board. If he timed his next drop well enough, and managed to fend off his opponents attack at the same time, he could even secure a victory.

"Look at that!" Katsurou said at the boy's next move, "You've done well this game Kinsue, I have to say. A lot better than you've ever done before." He moved his rook, putting Kinsue in a painful position in defense, but for once that wasn't his focus. He dropped the bishop that he had taken from his brother earlier that game, putting Katsurou's King directly in the line of fire.

Perhaps it was a testimate to Katsurou's skill, or to Kinsue's lack of the same, but that was the first time that he had managed to get into such a position. The older of the two brother's took a second to respond at all, before a great grin broke out on his face. "Now that, Kinsue. That was well played!" The boy supposed that his brother was happy at his progress, as he never even responded like that when he won a match, and the happiness was contagious. A great smile overtook his face as his opponent moved.

It remained for about 2 turns, before Kinsue found his king staring down the barrel of the rook that he had so pointedly ignored earlier. "You did a hell of a lot better today Kinsue" the young genin's brother said with a devilish look on his face.

"but that doesn't mean that you don't have quite a way to go."
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Post by Jinan B » Wed Jun 08, 2016 11:59 pm

Training #2: Ninjutsu First Posted 22/03/2016
Training takes place while Kinsue is 14 The morning mist of the village was, as always, almost overly present as Kinsue woke that morning. He knew that the rest of his family wasn’t there that day, Kosuke and Katsurou were both representing Kinsue’s branch of the Karagata family in a trade meeting that involved the entire family, whilst Riki was to attend as a bodyguard. Despite the fact that all those at the meeting were bound by blood, the Karagata was an aggressive group, and so it wasn’t entirely unheard of for there to be fights during the meetings. Himari had been gone for near to a week, off to a mission in the North of Water Country that no one else in the family knew even the slightest details of. Kaito, while he wasn’t off on a mission, as one might have expected given his position as a shinobi, had fought with Kosuke the previous day, and had announced his intention to spend the week away from the family with a group of his friends. He didn’t even know that Kinsue would be his only relative actually present in the Karagata household that day.

Such absence gave Kinsue what he thought of as a bit of a unique opportunity, while he had long been content with his strengths in Suiton and Fuuton, as well as the signature mist Style of Kirigakure no Sato, he had recently begun to feel the need for a third element to complement his abilities. After spending long hours in the library located in the 1st tier of the village, the largest source of knowledge in the area, as he had known for a while, he had taken several scrolls out on the Katon element, hoping to discover whether or not he would be able to use the element to any amount of sufficiency.

That morning, when the rest of his family had left the home, and he was left to his own devices, he brought out the first scroll, written on the basics of forming chakra suitable for katon techniques, and began to read.

Just as Suiton chakra has been described as cool and dense, fuuton chakra as wild, ration chakra as swift and unpredictable, and doton chakra as solid, and heavy. Katon chakra is best described as being like the element itself; hot, and light. When a shinobi attempts to create katon chakra, it is likely that it'll form erratically. As a result, fine chakra control is crucial if one wishes to use the element to it's full potential.


"OK." Kinsue said to himself, aware that there was no one else within the household to hear what would quite possibly end up sounding like rambling. "First is to try and form the chakra itself then, I suppose." He finished.

With that said, he began to form a few hand seals, focusing on forming the necessary chakra that he new he would need in order to succeed. The first thing he discovered was that the scroll was in fact right, the task of forming katon chakra was proving to be far more dificult than he had initially imagined. While it wasn't quite as difficult to contain as fuuton chakra, the pure difference between the katon chakra and anything else that he had tried to form before was enough to throw him off of his game entirely. More so than that, contain the chakra burned, almost as if he was forming actual katon within him. Not at all like the calm chakra formed through suiton, which he was most familiar with.

Unsurprisingly, his first attempt at creating the chakra that he knew he would need for any future jutsu failed miserably. Instead of anything that could remotly be described as workable katon chakra, the young genin only ended up with a disputed mess as a result of his attempt. He simply hadn't expected that burning sensation that he had felt when he tried to contain the chakra. He either needed to find the balance between controlling it too loosely, and too tightly, or simply learn to deal with the feeling.

"It has got be controllable, surely katon won't be any harder to use than any of the other elements." He said aloud, as he prepared to try again. He began forming a short series of hand seals once more, this time seriously focusing to the best of his ability on containing the formed chakra, but without completely crushing it, doing that, he now knew, would only serve to distract him as a result of the burn, and make it nearly impossible to complete any kind of jutsu.

As the chakra began to form, Kinsue almost lost control of it completely several times, but as he got used to the balance needed, it began to seem almost natural to him. He repeated the same set of hand seals, making sure that he never released the chakra that he formed, not only would it, in it's unrefined state, not be viable to use in a battle at all, but it would also, being katon, burn his house. That was not something he wished to do, especially considering his family. After several attempts, he began to think that he had the balance to a tee, and thought that he was ready to see if the chakra that he created really was katon.

He formed a new series of hand seals, attempting to form a small amount of katon chakra. He knew that the chakra, no matter how well it was formed, would have no use in a battle just yet, for he'd need to actually learn some katon jutsu for him to get any sort of advantage from the chakra, but this would be the first step. If he could form a small amount of raw katon, he would know if he'd be able to use katon as a style in battle in the future, and he would begin to learn the jutsu he'd need to make use of the element.

As he finished the hand seals, he released the small amount of katon that he had created, resulting in... Nothing. It seemed as if the katon that he had tried to make was not right, and the young boy stopped to think of what it was that he needed to do. It was already obvious that he had not made the katon correctly, and so, when he eventually began the hand seals once more, he payed extra attention to the chakra that he was molding. He put more pressure on containing it than he might have liked, increasing that sensation of burning that he had tried to avoid before. It seemed as if it was just going to be something that he would have to deal with in the end. It wasn't as if the sensation was anything that he would not be able to cope with after getting to used to it after all.

And so he continued to compress the chakra, making it significantly denser than he would have made fuuton chakra, but not quite so dense as suiton chakra. In the end, the chakra came out a little similar to how the chakra that he molded for his mist techniques felt, aside from the additional feeling of a minor burn.

As he came close to finishing the hand seals, the chakra suddenly began to flare, as if it had a mind of it's own, and wished to not be contained in the manner that the young genin was currently containing it, unsure as to what he should do in order to form the katon, he made a split decision to keep the pressure that he had been applying on the molded chakra constant, and he dealt with the increase of the burning sensation that came alongside containment to the point where he almost refused to believe that ninja had to deal with the burn each and every time they used katon. Is it because I'm just not suited to use the element, or is there another reason?

As he finished the hand seals however, Kinsue would realize that the burn came not as a result of a mistake, as the burst of flame came forth from his hands, proving that he was capable of wielding the chakra nature. Good, now all I have to do is... Oh shit! Kinsue had begun to lose focus, just as he noticed that his flame had set a piece of furniture alight. He quickly formed another set of hand seals, this time moulding the far more familiar element of suiton chakra within himself. Suiton, Water Orb Technique" He yelled, just before he spat a ball of water at the flame, promptly destroying the flame, and the danger to the house.

Unfortunately for the young genin, the flame had cause damage to the chair that had caught alight, and the water hadn't greatly improved the situation. It was most definitely going to be noticed by the rest of the boy's family once they returned from their various matters of business.

I really should've done this somewhere else...
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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Thu Jun 09, 2016 12:01 am

Training #3: Ninjutsu First Posted 17/05/2016
Training takes place while Kinsue is 14 It was an especially cold morning in the village that day, the mist seemed to be thicker than was the norm, drifted slowly and complacently through the streets that made up the 2nd tier of the village. The tier of the Shinobi.

It was in a rather well furnished hall in the tier that Kinsue found himself that morning, dressed respectively in his finest kimono and his new cloak with the deep red Kraken of the Karagata burning fiercely against the material. Surrounding him was shelves upon shelves of books, all documenting some aspect or another of the Shinobi arts. In his immediate vicinity, however, stood 2 other Genin. The three of them were huddled over a particularly thick tome, detailing the specifics on the vast and complex subject that was Ninpou.

"I've already told you Kinsue, you can't figure out how Ninpou works just by reading about it. It's only defined by how it can't be defined." Kaguya Akashi, a slight child who hid under a mop of eerily white hair. He lacked the same experience that Kinsue had, but his Bloodline gave him unique insight into the subject that they were currently focused on. "The rules are different for every Jutsu. By understanding my bloodline, you won't get any closer to understanding the techniques of the Fushinkou or the Toukai." The boys high voice and whiny tone was starting to annoy the young Shinobi, but he tried his utmost to ignore the distraction. Despite all of his flaws, the boy was still the only member of his clan that Kinsue could convince to help him at all.

"We can still figure something out Akashi. Even if it is only how your bloodline functions." The last of the three Genin insisted. Kawazaiwa, Kazune was the smallest and youngest of the three Genin, but that didn't mean that he was the weakest. On the contrary, Kinsue could almost see some of his own father staring back at him beneath his cropped red hair. His own lineage made his insight valuable to Kinsue, and, as Akashi's partner, was the only reason that the other child had agreed to come. Beyond the fierceness that Kinsue saw in the young boy, he also shared a determination to discover the truth behind the abilities of Shinobi.

Ever since Kinsue had discovered his own latent bloodline, he had trained it tirelessly and tried to gain a greater understanding of why it was that he had access to the power. It wasn't that he was attempting to gain insight as to how to use the Bloodlines of other clans within the village. They were simply the users of another branch of Ninpou in Kinsue's eyes, and as such became a part of Kinsue's desire to understand what linked all the different Ninpou in the World.

An audacious hope perhaps, but it was one that Kinsue felt a need to puzzle out even if his only discovery would be to find that the problem held no answer.

"What do you think of this? Kinsue muttered after a moment, paying as little attention to the idle chatter (and complaints on Akashi's part) of his fellow Shinobi. He pointed out a section of the tome that detailed the Ninpou styles most commonly used throughout the Shinobi World. "They're so close to being elements in themselves, but they lack the same uniqueness...

"Yes of course Karagata, but we know that already. Is there anything new that you'd like to show us?" Akashi muttered sourly, before being silenced (at least for the moment) by a glance from Kazune. Kinsue did not respond, keeping his gaze on the tome as he tried to puzzle out something, anything, that would help him find some sort of answer to the questions burning in his mind.

"Kinsue, as much as I hate to admit it, Akashi is right, you're just pointing out what we already know. What I saw in the other books didn't look any more promising than what we've found so far in this one." He hesitated a moment, before adding, "What we're trying to figure out. It isn't some simple topic, if it were we would have known it before we had started. Maybe in the end, this is for the scientists to figure out. We're not scientists Kinsue, we're Shinobi. Out purpose is to fight on behalf of the village and spending so much time on this isn't going to help us in our task." The words stung Kinsue, he wanted. No, he needed to discover the answer, otherwise he felt as if the questions would continue to distract him as he tried to train and develop as a ninja.

"We aren't any closer to finding an answer than we were a week ago, but In the meantime, we've learned so much about the individual styles of Ninpou. Isn't that enough?" The tone in the younger child's voice drew Kinsue out from his reading. He could tell that the Kawazaiwa was as disappointed as he was that they couldn't find what connected the different branches of Ninpou. Sure, they had been able to piece together some of the answers relating to questions about individual styles of Ninpou, but they hadn't found that link. That connecting branch between all of the styles that Kinsue was sure had existed.

Perhaps it just didn't exist.

"I understand what you mean Kazune, but there was to be... Ok, if we don't find anything by the end of the day, I'll give up the search. Deal? He said, trying to come to terms with the fact that he had wasted so much time trying to search for an answer that just didn't seem to exist. No, I could still find it. "Deal." The redhead answered with as much enthusiasm as he could manage for the circumstances. For a second Akashi looked as if he was going to protest more, but he eventually managed a downbeat whisper. "Deal."

The three Shinobi must have gone through dozens of individual pages, sections and subsections relating to the Ninja Arts hat day, trying to find any and every connection between the Styles. Sure, there were some that could be found: Some styles, such as mud and ink Jutsu, seemed to share a close relation to the 5 base elemental styles, as well as the extension styles such as Kirigakure's own mist, but beyond it's connections to the elemental styles, there seemed to be nothing connecting them to the other branches of Ninpou. Iijutsu and Sunagakure's art of puppetry both form raw usable Chakra, but there was a clear refining process behind the uses of other types of Jutsu, such as Fuuinjutsu. Where the Sensor Arts came in, none of the Genin could discover.

"It's the end of the day Kinsue, and guess what. We still haven't found anything. We haven't found anything since we started. Just give it up already. Akashi had been getting steadily more frustrated as the day went on, but until then he had stopped himself from protesting outwardly. It seemed that despite the dislike Kinsue held for the child, he was at least a man of his word. At least that was something that Kinsue could bring himself to respect about the child.

"I guess so... Kinsue replied. He felt dejected, all that time spent trying to piece together unrelated factors, and all he would get for his efforts were strings of unrelated knowledge. At least it was better than nothing, but it was a far sight worse than the return he might have gotten thought spending the time to train.

Kazune seemed more frustrated than dejected, throughout the day he seemed to have come to terms with the fact that the three Genin had wasted the last week that could have potentially gone to more productive things, but that didn't necessarily mean that he had taken it well. With each book that they went through, his movements became less controlled and his tone became steadily more abrasive, more so against Akashi than against Kinsue however. Clearly it was not just the Karagata child that was easily riled by the Kaguya. "What a waste." He said sourly, shoving the last of the books that they had used back into place. Akashi looked like he agreed with his rival, and Kinsue found himself sharing the sentiment as well. All that time spent, and I failed to find what I was looking for.

He spoke up anyway though, as much to raise Kazuke's spirits as his own. "At least we found some answers, if not the ones that we were looking for. And hey, personally, I enjoyed working with the two of you." Akashi looked as if he thought the very opposite, and Kinsue wouldn't have blamed him for it, but it was Kazuke that answered the young genin. "Same here Kinsue. He said, with a slight grin despite his former annoyance. "If you ever need someone to train with, I'm game... As long as it's actually something worthwhile this time." The remark brought a smile to Kinsue's face.

At least it wasn't a total waste of time.
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Post by Jinan B » Thu Jun 09, 2016 12:06 am

The House of Terumī First Posted 27/05/2016
Events take place while Kinsue is 14 Kinsue's mind was filled with confusion as he made his way back to the 1st tier of Kirigakure, and the Karagata District of the tier. He was already quite exhausted, after a no-holds barred sparring session between his team and another trio of Genin, he doubted that anyone would blame him for heading back to his bed and spending the remainder of the day resting. As fate seemed to have had it, however, that was not to be, as Kinsue was oh-so rudely interrupted by the Awakening of some unknown Doujutsu. He was a Karagata for hell's sake, how many Karagata carried Bloodline abilities? He supposed it was a blessing, a Doujutsu would invariably be helpful in battle one way or another; if it wasn't, then what kind of Doujutsu was it after all, but at the time, after the boy had spent the day training, and then been stuck trying to explain his problem to several Medical Ninja in the hospital, it definitely didn't feel like a good Revelation.

The young Genin cast his mind back to his ancestry; was it possible that his mother had been misinformed when she told him of Terumī Kazuken, his great Grandfather, and his abilities. Or was it that she was simply withholding the truth from him? But why would she not tell me of an Ability of our family? Whatever the truth was, Kinsue knew for sure that he would have to speak to his mother.

Himari was not there once he had arrived at his family home, so he took the opportunity to sleep off the wear and tear that he had been accumulating thus far over the course of the day. He dragged his feet through the empty house, barely pausing to remove his weapons belt and clothing before he collapsed onto his bed. Hardly a moment later the boy was dead to the world.

He woke in a world of shadows, finding himself in the center of a field saturated with mist. Not more than 5 meters in front of him the world became a gray wall that he could not see through. He began wondering through the haze, trying to make sense of the strange world around him when a voice pierced the veil. "The contenders are both ready to battle. Begin!" A moment later, a kunai came flying through the mist, flying straight at the young boy. Shit! Kinsue's reflexes took over, and he flung himself sideways in order to avoid the deadly projectile. What the hell is going on?

A light laugh echoed through the field as Kinsue picked himself off from the ground once more. He couldn't place it, but he was sure that he recognized the voice of the boy who was laughing at him. The sounds made it through the veil of gray once more, this time accompanied by another kunai, but Kinsue was prepared for the assault this time. He drew a kunai from his belt, and blocked the projectile with it. "Stop hiding! Just come and face me already!" He yelled at his opponent, turning slow circles with his blade in hand.

He was answered only by yet more laughter, and another kunai.

Kinsue knew that he can't have been fighting his unknown adversary for too long, but it felt like an age. He ducked and dodged and deflected the kunai that were thrown at him, all the while screaming at the foe to show himself to the young Genin. However long it had taken, however, eventually he faltered, and a kunai buried itself in the boy's chest. When the laughter inevitably came, it was louder and more mocking than ever.

Oddly enough, there was no pain that came with being stabbed by the kunai. All Kinsue felt was a sense of weakness, as if the strength were being drained through his wound and replaced with a chilling numbness. He fell slowly to his knees, lacking the strength, or even the will, to stand any longer. "The contestant is unable to battle..." Wait, I can still fight... But even though the boy tried to find his feet again, all he could do was stumble, and remain on the ground.

"You aren't done yet son." A warm soothing voice drifted over Kinsue, washing away the chill that the kunai had brought to him, and he looked up to see a ghostly figure. The man seemed almost completely ethereal, almost as if he was more a part of the mist than he was a part of reality, but one feature about him was definitely real. His eyes practically shone, with the iris a blue so bright it was almost like electricity. The sclera on the other hand burned a vibrant orange. "You have what you need to accomplish your goals, so get up boy! Finish what you started." The fire in the man's voice intensified to the point where Kinsue could've sworn that he had been set alight, and the warmth continued to spread through his body, moving through his legs and chest before reaching his head. Kinsue screwed his eyes shut, trying to get his mind away from the sensation.

but the feeling faded almost as quickly as he had begun, and when Kinsue opened his eyes once more, it was as if he was in a different world. The veil of mist had disappeared completely, along with the man with the vibrant eyes. Instead, the world was orange. Kinsue could see to each end of the arena that he was in, he spotted a man standing off to the side of the arena, watching him intently, while the field itself was surrounded by stands filled with people. When he looked down, he realized that the kunai that had pierced him was no longer there.

The source of the laughter remained, however, a single spot of blue in a sea of red. Kinsue took out a kunai and threw it at the figure, and the battle began. The being seemed surprised that Kinsue knew where it was, and was caught off guard by the kunai, he managed to dodge it, but the attempt gave Kinsue the opportunity to form a set of hand seals and throw a massive ball of water at the boy. The ball enveloped him just as he turned to look back at Kinsue, and before long he lay still within it, trapped.

The young Genin began to walk to where his foe lay trapped, but with each step the world started to come apart; what was previously clear became gray and ghostly once more until it reached a point where Kinsue couldn't make anything out once more. "Go then. Finish what you started, Karagata...

...Kinsue?" Kinsue opened his eyes, and found himself back on his bed with Karagata Himari by his side. "This isn't the time for you to be sleeping Kinsue." She said sternly when she realized the young Genin was awake. "You should be training. Besides... You were yelling in your sleep." Figures.. Kinsue thought, of course Himori would try and disguise concern with sternness.

"Okasan!" Kinsue called as Himori turned to exit the room, "I need to speak to you."

"No." Himori said flatly to the young Genin once he had finished telling her of his story and his suspicions. "Kazuken was a sensor. Believe me Kinsue, when I was young I was told the same stories as you were, but there were... Other stories that were told about our ancestors; that he had an ability greater than that of Sensory Jutsu, that his eyes shone whenever he was inside his mist, but they weren't true. I believed that they were, I even tried to find some kind of proof, but Kazuken was already dead by the time I started asking questions, and all the answers pointed to the rumor being nothing more than a falsehood." By the time he had finished, Kinsue could tell that Himari had done more than simply ask questions in her youth. She must have been personally invested in the potential truth of the myth. Did she hope that she might have had that same power?

"I understand Okasan, but please. Could you tell my the story of our ancestor, I have some kind of Ability, that must is without a doubt, and if there is a chance that the myth will help me understand the source of it then I cannot take no for an answer."

"... OK, if you insist Kinsue. I will explain the story of Kazuken, and his supposed powers as well as I can. It might be best if you got comfortable." The women sounded... resigned, as if she had just submitted herself to take part in a fruitless exercise. Perhaps it will be, but the chance still exists that I'll be able to learn something from this. For the young Genin in that moment, even the slightest of chances was enough, and so he settled down and began to listen to his mother.

"In the days of the Sandaime Mizukage, one of the first Karagata to gain true influence within the village was close friends with one of the first Terumī Jounin. It was said that the brutal efficiency of both Ninja in the war of the time caused them to rely on each other. The Karagata was, as might have been expected considering his family's legacy, a skilled assassin, while the Terumī was proficient in the mist Style of the Village. The two made for a good match in combat in combat as a result, and it was not a surprise when the Karagata took the Terumī family under them in the years after their rise to prominence. There were always whispers, however, that the Terumī had developed a mutation in those years, the Ability to see through an entirely different spectrum. Terumī ninja with the power were common, but the Jounin was the first to realize the potential of the power when used alongside Mist Jutsu, and so his power reached incredible heights. In the successive generation, there were always said to be 2 or 3 Terumī with the power, always male, and always using the Mist Style to their advantage with the Doujutsu."

"Eventually the number of people born with the ability lessened, however. Where there used to be 4 Shinobi with the power per generation, there were 2, or even only 1. Some people thought that it was because of the Family's bloodline being muddied through marriage with others houses and family's, some thought that it was nothing more than the changing times. What remained, however, was the fact that those born with the Power were growing smaller in number, and there came a time where there were no Terumī that could use the Doujutsu. Our family became nothing more than any other Shinobi family serving the Karagata, and before long we grew into obscurity."

"About 2 or 3 generations after the last user of the family's Doujutsu, Kazuken was born, the second son of the current head of the family and our direct ancestor. He never told anyone, not even his family, that he had gained the Ability, but the rumors were always there. He used the Mist Style in the same style as the great Shinobi of old did, he mastered the same techniques, and used them in the same ways, but he surpassed all of them. There were those who wondered, myself included, how a Sensor would be able to achieve such skill when those with the bloodline of our family could not. In the end though, nothing could be proven. The man was a lone wolf of the most extreme degree, none of his friends ever fought beside him, and none of his foes who saw his powers lived to tell the tale." The women sighed, while Kinsue looked on, fascinated. "We can only assume that the Ability died generations ago, if it even existed in the first place." Himari finished finally, allowing Kinsue to speak up with glee.

"Okasan, you're wrong. I swear, our family's Ability is the same one that I am awakening, I'm sure of it!" The boy said, trying to keep his cool, but failing in light of all that he had just been told. "You said you asked question when you were a child, that you found some kind of answers even if they weren't the ones that you were hoping for. How did you find them?" There had to be some kind of link to Kazuken, something that Kinsue might be able to discover to aid him in understanding his new power. "... Everything I had on Kazuken... I kept it in his old house."

The house itself was ordinary enough, considering the man who had once lived there. A well decorated, if still somewhat bare by the standards of what Kinsue was used to, building in the 2nd tier of the village. "After my father died, I inherited the house, but of course I moved out after I married your father. No one has lived here in years." Himari commented as she brought out the key to the front door. Once they were in Kinsue could see what she meant. The house, while it had looked well-kept from the outside, was entirely covered in what amounted to an incredibly thick layer of dust. It was still definitely livable, the location of the home seemed to have kept any criminals away, but Kinsue would be damned if it wouldn't need some Spring cleaning first.

"All my notes on Kazuken are here." Himari said, pointing out a pile of books in the bottom corner of a shelf. "It might take a while to go through them, however, and I have business to take care of." The women handed Kinsue the key to the house, and turned to leave. "Just make sure that you're home by dinner."

Kinsue wasted no time in dusting off the old books, and got to reading. Over the next couple of hours the young Genin devoured every word that his mother had written all those years ago, every now and then finding another tome that she had referred to in her writings and reading relevant sections in those as well. In the few breaks that he allowed himself he explored the old home. In most aspects it was nothing more than an entirely standard house, but it had it's flaws from being unused for so long. There were several spots of mold in some of the colder rooms, and in the master bedroom Kinsue found several cracks in the wall, through which he could feel the warmth seeping out of the room. Oddly enough, however, during a break in the later part of the day Kinsue happened upon a spot that seemed to exude heat, almost directly opposite from the cracks that released it. He had seen several other houses joined to the one that he was in, and so dismissed it as a connecting wall to a fireplace of some sort, eager to get back to his research.

The young genin had been hoping to find some sort of connection that had eluded Himari's eye, perhaps as a result of his own experiences with the Doujutsu, but as he scanned page after page of information related to the legend of the Terumī Doujutsu he began to realize that such a connection would not be nearly as easy to find as he might have thought. As the day neared it's end he was no closer to success than he had been when he had started, though he still had a massive amount of information to look through. One last break, then the next time I stop, I'll go home.

The boy went back to the master bedroom of the house, and found himself drawn once again to the spot that seemed to radiate heat. He put his hand over the area, and began to realize that it was not a broad area that was hotter than the rest of the wall, as it would have been if the souse of the heat was an adjacent fire. Instead the heat seemed to be incredibly localized, almost as if it were a specific shape in the wall itself. What is this...

Suddenly a thought popped into Kinsue's head, whenever he had somehow managed to use his eye, the world had shown up in various degrees of blue and orange. When he thought back on the times where it had happened, however, he began to realize that it might have been more than that. Is it possible that the Doujutsu let's me see heat itself? If it could, than Kinsue would be able to see the precise source of the heat in the wall. It's worth a try... Besides, I'll have to learn how to use this power sooner or later.

He thought back to how the Ability had activated before, first when he had lost control of his chakra during the sparring session that morning, and then when he had been aided by the Chakra conductive paper. Both times it had been caused by a rush of Chakra to his head, but would he be able to replicate the same results without any help? He tried to manipulate his Chakra, channeling it towards his eyes in the hopes of achieving something...

...And jumped back as his efforts suddenly paid off. His head began to pound as a result of the chakra usage, but he had achieved what he had needed to achieve; voluntary use of his Ability. He looked down at his hands, and realized that he seemed to be right. While the room was painted in various shades of blue, his own body was a rich and vibrant orange. So red is hot, blue is cold then... The boy raised his head, looked at the spot where the heat had been coming from, and gasped.

Imprinted into the blue wall of the house, was a clear red hand-print.

This.... Is incredible. Kinsue thought as he stared at the hand embedded in the wall. He reached towards the source of the heat, placing his palm over it until the two hands matched perfectly. Then he pushed, and the section of the wall gave way beneath his palm.

"Ah shit!" the boy suddenly exclaimed as his vision returned to it's normal state. His forehead was pounding like a drum, and he needed to rest for a bit in order to try and curb off his migraine, but before long he felt well enough to allow his interest to guide his movement once more, and he looked at what he had just found.

Inside the wall itself, someone had buried a small box, it must have originally been made of dark wood, but the years had slowly begun to rid it of it's color to the point where it ranged in hue from a medium brown to almost pure white. The inside of the box, as Kinsue found when he opened it, was entirely unspoiled however, with the wood it's proper dark color, bordering on black. Contained within it, Kinsue found two small books, bound in plain red leather, and almost entirely unspoiled by the passing of time. Between the books was a single white sheet of parchment. Incredible... How long has this been here for? The young Genin took the sheet of parchment in his hand, and began to read.

I cannot say with certainty how long it will before before this message is found once more, or even if it will survive long enough to be found at all, but if this is being read, then perhaps I will be able to rest easy in the knowledge that my legacy has been secured.

Since the dawn of our family, the rumors of our Doujutsu, the Toramugan, have run rampant through Kirigakure. By now you no doubt now that such an ability exists, seeing as you have had to use it to find this message at all. Our gift is a potent one, and something that cannot be mastered without years of expertise and training, a daunting task perhaps, but it as with any other art of the Shinobi.

For you, however, I present two gifts that may yet ease the Journey ahead of you. The first is the complete truth about myself, a useless present perhaps, but I have tired of lying to all those that I know on a daily basis. It will be good to know that one day, someone will know what really occurred over my lifetime.

The second gift you may prize more. It is a guide on how to use the gift given to our family to it's full potential. I trust that you will use it well, for it has been too long since another Shinobi has been blessed with our gift, and it deserves a ninja capable of wielding it as proficiently as the Terumī of old.

I have worked long to secure the legacy of our family, hopefully you will be able to continue my work, and finish what I started.
Terumī, Kazuken.


Kinsue grinned as he put down the message, and gazed at the books once more. He knew that it would be far from an easy journey, but he had all that he needed right there, in his hands. One day, he promised himself.

One day I'll be more powerful than Kazuken ever was.
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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Thu Jul 06, 2023 11:21 am

Training #4: Chakra Pool
Training takes place while Kinsue is 24
The sun had not yet risen when Karagata, Kinsue made his way into the second tier of Kirigakure. He breezed past the familiar streets and alleys, making his way towards an old, inauspicious home within the district. Once, he had lived there. His mother Himari rented her home to him when he first moved out from his parents’ roof. Then, once he had the money, he bought it outright. He hadn’t been in since he resigned from service, however. It was a poor look to be a civilian noble living in a lower tier of the village.

Now that he had decided to act as a shinobi once more, however, he found himself drawn to his old home. This was where he had made his greatest strides in power as a shinobi. He had learned the most powerful techniques he knew here, not least of which were the arts of kinesis. Not only that, but his mother’s line trained here, compiling their knowledge and storing it in this old house.

It seemed the most natural place to return to strength.

Kinsue hadn’t truly trained in ninjutsu in over half a decade. When the hunters from Ocha Province had attempted to collect his bounty, that lack of familiarity had almost been his undoing. He wasn’t about to allow that to happen on a real mission. The young man was already pointedly aware of how he was likely perceived within the family. He wasn’t about to fail so easily.

It was to the private field accompanying the home that Kinsue went. He had installed a fountain here before, in order to allow him to practice aquakinesis without inconveniencing himself. He’d start there, he decided, familiarize himself with the most dangerous weapons in his arsenal.

He performed a short set of hand seals, and placed his hands within the fountain. Slowly, strangely, he felt his chakra leech into the surrounding water. Once this had been second-nature to him. He hoped that it would be like that again soon, but for now he felt the separation he had created from his former life.

The technique he had performed reached its full extent, and he began to (ever so slowly) manipulate the water that he had infused. The flow of the water around him was gentle, sedate, as he moved into the first of the forms he had learned so long ago. A drill, designed as a beginner’s guide to moving with suiton. He remembered it well, yet his body was unfamiliar with it after so long. It would need to become used to the movements once more.

He moved through the full drill once, his body acclimatizing quickly to the motions, and began to pick up his speed as he rotated back to the starting position. Slowly, ever so slowly, he ramped back up the pace he had run through this back when he was 19. There were errors, that was for sure, and maintaining the kinesis was more draining than he remembered. Yet, he could still do it. He was still capable of this.

Once he was satisfied, he allowed the water to drift back into the fountain from where it had come. His breathing was ragged, another thing he would need to work on in the days ahead. Yet he did not doubt that he could do it. The shinobi smiled, as he began to move into his next drill.

Today would be a start, the first of many days to come.
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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Fri Jul 07, 2023 4:00 am

Training #5: Chakra Pool
Training takes place while Kinsue is 24
”Kinsue! It’s good to see you training." Himora, Riki’s voice carried through the field where Kinsue was training. The red-haired man waved eagerly at him, and made his way closer.

”I heard from ‘Tsurou that you’re re-enlisting," he said. It was hardly surprising, seeing as the two of them lived together. The evident joy in the older man’s face brought a smile on the Karagata’s. Riki took that as confirmation, and continued: ”It’s about time. I was starting to wonder if you’d ever figure it out."

Kinsue returned the smile. ”I still have a lot to figure out, but it’s good to feel like I’m on the right path again." Feeling motivated to train in the first place was one part of that, after so long of keeping himself holed up unless forced.

”I’m proud, seriously. Mind if we train together? For old time’s sake." Riki looked across the yard, clearly measuring distances in his head before speaking again: ”Polo?".

Kinsue chuckled. ”I thought you were suggesting we train?"

”It’s been a while, figured you could ease into it."

Polo was an odd game, with a total player base of two particular shinobi. Riki and Kinsue had both mastered kinesis of water and earth, and so they had devised a training exercise to assist their control of it. Each of them infused their chakra into a small bundle of each element, and then marked out goals on each side of the field.

Riki signaled for them to begin. Kinsue stepped into form, raising his arms and lifting the water he was controlling with it. Riki waited for his move in a solid ready stance. The Karagata, still feeling his way back into control over the element, stepped forward and thrust out his arms. The water moved swiftly towards Riki’s goal, following a curving trajectory, only to be stopped in its tracks as the older man raised a wall in front of the goal.

Then, Riki switched from defense to attack, abandoning his control of the earth and beginning to manipulate his own suiton. So the game went, neither one of them able to both attack and defend at the same time. It was still a game, to be sure, and there were more effective ways to practice; but switching from one element to another was an important component of their art, and playing over long periods of time drained the chakra in a manner it had no right to.

And it was something to be enjoyed. Both shinobi were smiling, giving it their all to prove themselves the victor on the day. Kinsue found his awkward movements ease as his muscle memory began to reform. His stamina wasn’t what it once was, and he quickly began to feel the toll that the game was putting on his body, but he pushed on. Before he resigned, he had nearly been Riki’s equal in this. He wasn’t going to give up without a struggle.

In the end, it was something of a foregone conclusion. Kinsue’s rotations became sloppier as he tired, and Riki’s endurance proved to be greater. Finally, his waterball would find its way past the Karagata’s goal line, and the game would be over.

Riki walked over to him. ”Not a bad place to start from, Kinsue," he remarked. The younger man smiled back at him. It was good to be on the right path again.
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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Fri Jul 07, 2023 8:33 am

Training #6: Endurance
Training takes place while Kinsue is 24
”Now that up and about again, don’t you think it’s time you started putting yourself out there?” Riki asked, as he connected a fierce kick into Kinsue’s abdomen. Pain flared through the Karagata from the blow, his breathing stopped for a moment as he was thrown towards the ground.

Instinct kicked in just in time, the otherwise out of control tumble transforming into a controlled backwards roll. He regained his footing shakily, just in time to dodge out of the way of another errant strike from his old mentor.

They had moved on from ninjutsu training into hand-to-hand sparring. Most likely a good thing that they had too. Kinsue had never been good at close combat, or taking blows. He certainly needed the practice.

”I bet you could reach out to Kazune again. Invite him out for some Kyōgen. He always had far too much patience with you.” Kinsue raised his leg for a kick, before jumping off the other foot and snapping his leg over the point of contact he had fainted for. It must not have been a strong attempt, as Riki seemingly with ease caught it with his wrist and spun Kinsue out of the way; back onto the ground once again.

The older man gave him some space as he got back onto his feet. It was hardly a surprise that Riki was so much better at this than him, but that certainly didn’t make any of the blows he had taken so far hurt any less. He squared up against the jounin once more, putting aside the pain as he tried to focus on his next moves.

”Please, what would my family think if I did that?” He said, trying to cover up his ragged breathing. Riki charged forward, tucking his shoulder low and trying to ram into the Karagata and push him off balance. Kinsue held until the last moment, before leaping up and over his mentor’s back. Spinning in mid air, he tried to grapple the older man, but caught an elbow to the face for his trouble. He stumbled back, allowing Riki time to recollect.

”You worry too much about your family. It’s not like you’d be the only one, your cousin’s been with a Toukai for years. He said, moving in to continue the spar.

”A Toukai and a Kawazaiwa are two very different things. Shinji is exactly who I’d be worried about. All thanks to that business with the Kaguya, he thought. Inter-family tensions certainly haven’t improved since he had resigned.

Then, he saw an opportunity. Moving through the pain from his collective wounds, he made to kick Riki’s legs out from under them. Anticipating the man’s movement, he quickly shifted from the low sweep into a higher kick. Riki had been too focused on his romantic commentary, it seemed. If he were taking it seriously the Karagata did not doubt that he would be able to evade such a simple strike. Or maybe he simply hadn’t expected Kinsue to move through the pain he was feeling by this point.

Either way, the kick connected solidly into the jounin’s stomach. Leaving Riki gasping for air for once.

”Now, if you’re done talking about my romantic life, maybe it's about time for a break.”
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Post by Jinan B » Fri Jul 07, 2023 3:26 pm

Training #7: Speed
Training takes place while Kinsue is 24
Kinsue sat patiently outside a public training park in the first tier of the village. Through the ever-present mist, dawn would be breaking soon. With it, would come his training partner for the day: Ishida, Seiji. The pair had originally met more than a decade ago, in the village’s first academy. Seiji hadn’t been the student Kinsue felt closest to back then, but they had been good friends, and the man had been a talent with Taijutsu even then. Now, as a special jounin who had mastered the art, he seemed the perfect man to ask for help.

Seiji was a tall, skinny looking man with a shock of golden blond hair cropped close to his neckline. He didn’t seem the type to specialize in physical combat (or the type to specialize in combat at all, for that matter), but Kinsue knew well enough by now that shinobi came in all shapes and sizes.

”So you’ve returned to us, Karagata? We were sad to see you go," he said by way of greeting. The two of them clasped hands, and pulled each other into a hug. ”And you’re as reliable as ever. Thanks for agreeing to this," Kinsue responded. He was sure that many of his old classmates would’ve refused. Many of his fellow shinobi in general. It seemed unlikely that he was a popular figure in the village, after all.

The pair found a space for them to train, and Seiji turned to Kinsue. ”Well, how about you show me where you are first. Not sure what I can offer without knowing what you’re capable of,” he said, stepping aside and motioning for Kinsue to make a demonstration.

Kinsue was happy to oblige. He began to work through the techniques that he had learned over the years; largely acrobatic jumps and high kicks. His arsenal was certainly limited, but he had identified his weakness in physical combat even when he was a genin, and taken steps to address it.

After a few minutes of drills and demonstrations, Seiji held up his hand for his old classmate to stop. ”There’s promise, sure, but you’ve built up too many bad habits. I’m guessing you taught yourself some of this?" It was a little disheartening to hear that so clearly identified by the other man, but Kinsue nodded and gave no comment. Pride had no place here, he knew.

”What can I improve?"

”You’re too… Hasty. Best we go back to basics, I think. Remember; speed is a combination of timing, control, and fluidity.” One of their old sensei’s favorite phrases. ”Let me show you.”

The pair squared up against each other, and Seiji advanced. He moved in close, making it as though he were going to strike Kinsue in the gut. Kinsue reacted, attempting to bring up his arm to brush Seiji’s aside. Instead, the more experienced combatant, anticipating the maneuver, used Kinsue’s quick motion against him; ducking under his arm and connecting his strike.

”Timing. Fluidity. Control. It’ll feel natural eventually. We can start with a drill, so listen close…"
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Post by Jinan B » Sun Jul 09, 2023 12:11 pm

Training #8: Willpower
Training continues on from Training #7
”About what you said earlier; what did you mean by it?”

Seiji looked up from his drink. ”Mean by what?"

”You said ‘we were sad to see you go’. Who are you talking about?” The comment had stuck with him throughout their training earlier that day. The last couple hours had been spent on fierce training with his old classmate. He had made some progress, he thought. More importantly, his old friend had been happy to agree to more of it down the road.

Now, they were sitting at the famed Bloodriver Bar; nursing sake and catching up. The two of them had been good friends, once, but hadn’t seen each other in almost a decade. The bar itself was sedate, and relatively empty.

”Oh. Well, some of us from the Academy, I guess. Natsumi; Tenjiro; Naohiro obviously-but you knew that-, most of us that were close then, really.” Kinsue didn’t understand. Why would it have mattered to them that he had left service. It wasn’t like he had died, after all.

”Why did you care about whether I served or not?” He asked, mystified.

Seiji shrugged. ”Alumni pride, I guess? We were starting to think that you’d make it far." He said it so nonchalantly, but the Karagata came away with even more questions than answers.

”...Me? You’re not serious.” now it was Seiji’s turn to be confused. He beheld Kinsue for a moment, before the befuddlement turned into a smile.

”I think I get it now; why you quit,” he said. Kinsue kept a frown from appearing on his face. He hoped that his old friend had it wrong. He held his silence, waiting for Seiji to continue.

”Shiv is where it starts, I guess. Your first famous cousin. I remember how our senseis used to compare you to him.” The Karagata thought back to it. Taka-sensei had been the worst, berating him for his lack of talent when it came to Taijutsu. They had all participated here or there, though.

”You get out of the academy, and eventually you pair up with Naohiro. Him when it could’ve been anyone else. It’s a blow when he beats you in your Chuunin Exam.” Those crushing blows, that had pushed Naohiro ahead of him in rank as well as in truth.

”Then, another cousin is selected to be Jinchuuriki. Shinjiro outpaces you at every turn, he’s a Jounin at the age you became a Chuunin. He’s even greater than Shiv was.” The shame that came with facing his younger cousin, feeling the gap in their skill levels despite how much time Kinsue had been given.

”They send you to Soul. You’re brushing shoulders with four Kage and even more Bannin. You’ve spent your whole life in second place, seeing excellence as normality, and you can’t equal them; so eventually it’s too much, isn’t it? It’s so simple, I can’t believe I hadn’t realized it before." Seiji laughed. It was as though a puzzle had finally clicked together for him.

Kinsue, on the other hand, was equal parts relieved and annoyed. Just because Seiji hadn’t been completely right didn’t mean he hadn’t touched on a sore spot. ”Fine, you got me. What does that have to do with anything?”

”You don’t get it, do you?” The man sighed. ”How can I put this… We always knew that only a few, one or two, of our class would make it all the way as shinobi.” The senseis had made that point to them all once. Even the finest Academy in the village could only produce a few shinobi who might aspire to greatness.

”First it looked like it might be Tsubasa, but she got too overconfident too quickly. You know how that ended.” Kinsue winced at that, she had been killed by his own brother, but Seiji continued.

”Then we wondered if it might be Natsumi, until she never managed to make it past Chuunin.” She had served as a member of Unit 12, briefly. Back then, Natsumi had outshone both him and his rival.

”Might be some of us wondered if it might be me, but I’ve come pretty close to my peak, I think. I might still make Jounin, one day, but I’ll never be famed as one.”

”Then there’s Naohiro, and you. It seems pretty clear now that Nao’s the best of us all. My money’s on him being a Bannin soon enough.” It was almost common knowledge in the village that the Aisu was next in line. He had performed great feats in the war that had even reached the Karagata’s ears (distant as he had been).

”Naohiro was always better than I was.” Kinsue retorted. It seemed a foolish comparison to make, especially now.

”He’s always had one advantage over you. He doesn’t get in his own way.” Seiji was serious now; his eyes boring their way into the Karagata’s skull. ”Kinsue, you spent more time as a Genin than as a Chuunin, that’s not normal. You have the talent, the ability to improve, the mind for this; but you get in your own head. Maybe you aren’t going to be the most powerful in the world or the village, but so what?” He was almost angry now.

”It’s as if you’re a big fish in the ocean, and you’ve convinced yourself you’re nothing because all you can see are sharks.”

Kinsue frowned, but before he could speak Seiji would continue. ”You’ve already achieved what most shinobi don’t, just by becoming a special jounin. With what I saw today, you’ll make Jounin too if you keep moving forward. Honestly? I think you could go further if you get your mind right… The village saw it too; or do you think it was by chance that they sent you to Soul?"

Something clicked, then. Soul had been such a secretive operation. If the village had wanted to send more shinobi they could have, but they needed to keep their numbers low. So many of the best shinobi in the village had been sent.

And him.

Moments passed in silence. Seiji drained his cup, and no words were spoken.

”I think it’s time for me to go. Until next time, Kinsue." Seiji stood to make his way out, but paused for a moment before walking.

Kinsue spoke. ”Seiji. You’ve given me a lot to think about.. Thank you.”
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Post by Jinan B » Sun Jul 09, 2023 5:13 pm

Training #9: Speed
Training takes place while Kinsue is 24
Timing. Control. Fluidity. Resist the temptation to strike with haste instead of speed.

Seiji’s words sounded in Kinsue’s mind. His old classmate had told him one of the critical weaknesses in his Taijutsu, and he would be remiss if he failed to address it. His thighs tensed, feet pushing against the ground as he leaped into the air. His leg arced out, and narrowly missed a small chunk of earth flying past it. He landed gracefully, and looked to his training partner. Getting the timing right wasn’t proving to be as easy as he had thought.

Riki looked back at him. He pulled his arm back, stopping the earth with the gesture, and pulling it back towards him. ”Almost, Kinsue. Ready for take two?” They had began training together more regularly ever since Kinsue had re-enlisted. The noble wasn’t sure how he found the free time, if he were honest.

The Karagata nodded, and his old sensei thrust his arm out again. He lined himself up with the incoming projectile, preparing for his next attempt.

”So, Seiji seems to be very interested in your career,” he teased. Kinsue jerked slightly as he kicked. His foot went wide, again. ”Focus, won’t you?”

Kinsue’s landing this time was less graceful, and he fell to one knee for a moment before regaining his balance. ”Are you kidding me?” He said; exasperated. He was starting to grow tired of the older man’s commentary. It was hardly the first time that he had done this.

”What? Think about it. He’s a noble, well regarded, friendly, single, quite handsome (if I may say so myself), and bled for the Karagata. No ‘what would my family think’ bullshit this time. Another?” Kinsue rolled his eyes. ”Fine.”

The projectile traveled back to Riki’s side, and then out again a moment later. Kinsue, properly focused this time, kicked off the ground and struck out at the target. This time, he was on target, his kick struck the mound perfectly, knocking it onto the ground.

”Good! Now, about Seiji-”

”I’m not asking him out, Riki. Discussion over. Now, maybe we could make these a little more complicated.” Changing up the dynamic of the exercise would be a good next step, at least.

”Of course. How about we try something like... this.” The target curved back around to Riki, then rose up above him. A moment later, a second target rose up next to it. They held in place for a moment, then the first began to fly towards him. This time, it came on a curving trajectory. Kinsue observed the incoming target, and saw the one behind it begin to follow it behind.

He re-positioned himself, thinking over the best way to strike both as they moved past him. He lifted his leg, kicking at the first projectile and knocking it out of the air. Then, before his foot reconnected with the ground, he jumped with his other leg, arching around and connecting solidly with the second target. Perfect.

Except for the landing. Kinsue wasn’t able to get his first leg back beneath him in time, and he fell directly onto his side. He’d have to work on that, at least.
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Post by Jinan B » Sun Jul 16, 2023 9:27 am

Training #10: Strength
Training takes place while Kinsue is 24
It was mid-morning when Kinsue made his way to his old home in the second tier of the village, though one would never have been able to tell thanks to the omnipresent mist that blanketed the village. Helping Naohiro with the administration of the shinobi corps had kept him busy of late, and it was high time he redoubled his training efforts.

Unlike his last couple escapades, this time Kinsue had not asked another for assistance in his training today. He appreciated the help of Riki and Seiji, of course, but a time had come that he needed some solitude in his training. What he had planned for the day wasn’t going to imbue him with any bad habits, anyway.

He wove through the quiet streets, finally arriving at the home and making his way inside. Then, he grabbed a large, wide brass bowl and took it into the garden adjacent to the house. He set it down in the center of the grass field, and began weaving hand signs as he turned towards the fountain that he had installed. Once through, the Karagata placed his hands in the cool water of the fountain, and infused it with his chakra.

A step back later, his arms would lift. Manipulating the infused liquid and slowly moving it over to fill up the bowl. The oldest training in the world, it was. Old enough to be made into fables passed on in small remote villages in the minor countries. The tales of the young trainees disappointed at what they were made to do at the dojo, only to be stunned by the power they had become capable of.

And power was what Kinsue needed to gain. His ninjutsu skills were excellent, his speed and coordination passable, but his strength had fallen behind for many years. The man was under no illusions, he was not the kind of shinobi to compete at the highest level in hand to hand combat. He would never match either of his cousins in that regard, nor the legendary shinobi such as the Tsuchikage or the host of the Earth Genma, nor even some of his old classmates from the academy, like Seiji. Nevertheless, he needed to be able to match B and A ranked opponents if he truly wanted to up his game as a shinobi.

His flat palm slammed into the pristine surface of the water, producing a wet thudding sound and spilling some of the water onto the surrounding grass. He raised his hand again, and slammed it back into the bowl. Again, and again, water falling out with each strike as Kinsue relentlessly hammered away at it. He kept a count in his head, reaching 10 before switching to his other palm, and then switching back again after a further 10 strikes. Before long, his hands were red from the repeated contact, but he refused to allow his pace to slow. There was only one way for him to improve, and that was to break himself down and away from the weak state in which he had entered.

He wasn’t aware of how much time had passed, but eventually he found that his palms were contacting the brass bottom of the bowl rather than the water that had been gathered there. Taking a deep breath, he would walk back towards the fountain, and infuse it once more with his chakra.

Today was going to be a very long day, indeed.
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Post by Jinan B » Tue Jul 25, 2023 5:12 pm

Training #11: Strength
Training takes place while Kinsue is 24
The sun was high in the sky, struggling to break through the impermeable mist that hung over the second tier of the village. Kinsue, as had so often been the case recently, found himself in the training yard of his first home. He was wearing training garb, loose and flexible so as to not impede his taijutsu.

The man standing across from him was there for the first time. Barely shorter than Kinsue, though certainly far more heavily built, the man was shirtless and stood with his arms up in a boxing stance; ready to spar. His hair was shorter than Kinsue’s; carefully styled into a few points over his forehead. His eyes, however, were the same dark blue as his younger brother’s. The Karagata certainly could not have expected Kaito to come to him after so many years spent apart.

The elder brother advanced, taking two steps forward before ducking under Kinsue’s kick and attempting a strike at the younger’s abdomen. Kinsue took a step back, just barely avoiding the blow, and directed his foot towards Kaito’s shin. His leg redirected midway, but his brother had already fallen for the faint. He attempted to bring his leg back, and was off balance by the time he realized he had misjudged where the attack would land. He could only bring up his arms in front of his chest at the last moment, and Kinsue’s foot struck his arms hard. Kaito’s feet carved through the dirt of the training field, failing to keep from sliding back under the force of the kick. Kinsue was stronger than he had been the last time they spared, that was clear enough.

”You shouldn’t have fallen for that.” Kinsue’s voice was cold. He remembered how these battles had gone when they were children. Taijutsu had always been Kaito’s strength; and there was a time where his overall power was far beyond his younger brother’s. The spars hadn’t been even, by design. Broken bones and bruises abounded. No longer; Kaito’s strength had plateaued and Kinsue’s was greater than ever.

Kaito let out a mad roar, charging at the young Karagata. The poor response to the provocation was predictable; he had never needed to learn how to fight with a clear mind. It was simple enough to dodge to the side of the charge, and then press the attack with another kick; knocking the older man off balance and sending him tumbling to the floor. Kinsue may not have been able to match his brother’s sheer might, but he had too many other advantages to compete with.

As Kaito rose to his feet once again, Kinsue took to the offensive. He stepped in, brushing aside his brother’s strike and grabbing onto his arm. He wanted to turn it in on itself, breaking it and sending Kaito to the hospital for once. He began to try and apply the pressure necessary, but his strength was still insufficient for it. Kaito pulled back and slammed his fist into Kinsue’s chin; forcing him back.

Yet, Kinsue’s strength was rising. The blow would no doubt have broken him once. One day, he would have the power to turn the old dynamic between the pair around.
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Post by Jinan B » Tue Aug 01, 2023 3:17 pm

Training #12: Willpower
Training continues on from Training #11
”I want you to train me.”

Out of the blue, Kaito had appeared on his younger brother’s doorstep that morning. The two of them hadn’t spoken in years, not since Kinsue was a child. For his part, he would not have been caught dead seeking out the elder among them. He had thought the feeling was mutual, until today.

Today, which the two of them had spent sparring; holding no bars as they tested each other’s power. Kaito had fared poorly; unlike how this had always used to go between them. His strength had peaked as a boy, and Kinsue had grown far stronger since their childhood bouts. Once the sun had begun to set behind the everpresent mist; the pair made their way inside Kinsue’s old home. Out of habit more than anything, he had offered his brother tea and food as they recovered from the strain of the day’s work. Neither of them spoke as they drained their cups. A tension was clearly felt by the both of them.

Eventually, Kinsue spoke. His voice struggled through the silence.

”Why?”

Why ask for my help? Why bother to see me at all? Why now? All his questions condensed into a single word; summarizing everything he couldn’t understand about the day.

For his part, Kaito was uncharacteristically abashed. He did not answer for a moment, seemingly searching for the words. Eventually, he would speak. ”I’ve already tried to find other members of the family.” He strained for a moment, trying to keep going but struggling as he did. ”None of them want anything to do with me.”

”Why now?” The man had spent the better part of the last decade trapped in mediocrity. He had never seemed to care before. More importantly in the younger man’s mind was whether he cared for Kaito’s reason. What reason could he possibly give that could move Kinsue into training more after the day.

”...Everyone thinks I’m weak; don’t pretend you disagree. I’m sick of it.” Kinsue could see that he was trying to keep himself calm, and doing a poor job of it.

For his own part, Kinsue couldn’t help but begin to sympathize. Kaito wasn’t the only Karagata seen as weak by the rest of the family. Between the two of them, their branch of the family had been a stain on their grandparents’ legacy. The drive to prove otherwise mattered almost as much as anything else to him.

”It’s obviously been years since you last seriously trained. You made it through the entire war at a plateau. Now you’re sick of being weak?” Kaito would have lashed out at him for saying that, once. Not today, he still held himself back.

”You spent years as a trader. Now you’re back. People change, Kinsue.”

A long moment of silence came over the two of them. Maybe Kaito was earnest after all? He took a long sip from his cup, thinking it over. Eventually, he would nod.

”Very well. Maybe you can change as well.”
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Post by Jinan B » Fri Aug 04, 2023 8:23 am

Training #13: Chakra Pool
Training takes place while Kinsue is 24
Surprisingly, it was a fine day for Kirigakure. The mist had parted, and the damp streets shone in the late morning light as Kinsue made his way through the noble tier of the village. He didn’t live far from his destination, and soon enough found himself at the door of his childhood home.

A servant answered his knock and showed him in, and Katsurou was already waiting for him; hot tea in both hands. It was always good to catch up, and conversation passed easily between the two of them.

”Uncle Kinsue!” Their discussions were interrupted by a cheerful call from the home’s stairs. A young boy rushed into the room, and Kinsue stood quickly and picked him up as he came near. ”Kousuke! I’ve missed you.” Working with Katsurou had given the young man plenty of chances to help raise his nephew; allowing him to be almost as much a part of his life as Riki or Katsurou and Mariko themselves. It had been a rare highlight of the past half-decade.

”I’ve been training. Wanna come see?” Kinsue looked up at Katsurou, who raised his eyebrow back at him. ”He’s been looking forward to this for days. I don’t think you can say no here.” The young man rolled his eyes, and gave an exaggerated sigh as he began to make his way to the house’s garden.

Kousuke hopped out of his arms as they crossed onto the carefully maintained back lawn of the home, and ran forward a couple meters before turning back and facing his uncle. He formed a short set of hand seals, admittedly rather clumsily, before releasing a surge of chakra. The clone that was created showed off one of the most basic jutsu, taught to all academy students though made impressive by the fact that Kousuke had not yet been enrolled. ”That looks good! You’ll do well in the academy.”

The moment passed, before the young man spoke again. ”Can you do it again?” he would ask. The boy formed another set of hand seals, and another clone would be formed. Kinsue could see a slight sweat begin to form on his forehead.

”It gets draining quickly, doesn’t it? Try it again, you’ll get stronger by pushing at your limits.” The young man formed hand seals of his own; expelling a mass of Suiton and then quickly separating it into three large, floating spheres. ”I’ll train with you. Maintaining my control over the water will tire me out. You keep forming clones until you can’t push yourself any further.”

”Got it," Kousuke would say; eager to impress. The pair would continue on for some time, Kinsue passing the time by telling his nephew stories from the assignment he had just returned from. Eventually, both he and Kousuke would tire. The spheres began to lose their coherency as he struggled to keep them afloat. For his nephew’s part, he entered into a new set of seals; but fumbled them half way through. The boy was barely on his feet at this point, but he was undeterred and began to make another attempt. His drive was powerful enough that Kinsue wondered whether he would knock himself out in the attempt.

”I think that’s a good place to end,” he said, allowing his spheres to fall and gently folding his nephew’s hands shut. ”You should be proud of yourself; not everyone is as determined as that.” The pair began to move back into the home, and Kinsue smiled. His nephew would make a fine shinobi, he was sure of that.
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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Fri Aug 04, 2023 4:14 pm

Training #14: Willpower
Training continues on from Training #8
The dimly lit city streets were obscured by the everpresent mists that blanketed Kirigakure. It was early in the morning, and traffic was low as Kinsue crossed through the second tier of the village. He had frequently made his way to his old home in the tier, working hard to improve his skills ever since he had returned to service as a shinobi. Today, he had a different purpose in mind. A visit to his mother: Himari.

After Kosuke had died, Himari had found herself expected to move back to the second ring of the village. Neither Kinsue nor his brother had been happy to go along with it – especially at a time when they were all in mourning – but they were hardly in the position to push back against the status quo of the entire village. At least she had the wealth to buy one of the finest homes in the entire tier; and not far from where Kinsue had lived at the time either.

Today, however, Kinsue’s thoughts were far from Kosuke or their status among the village. He had recently trained with an old classmate of theirs, Ishida Seiji, and what the man had told him had left a mark on his mind. Had he truly stunted his own potential through his own self-doubt? The idea had occupied his mind and resisted any attempt at resolution or expulsion. Perhaps his mother (someone who not only knew him well but was an accomplished jounin and instructor within the village) would have guidance for him.

”Kinsue? You’re early.” Himari looked well. She had retired from active service some time ago (understandably, seeing as she was now over 50), but had kept in fighting shape in order to serve as a good example at the academies. The two of them sat and spoke for a while, catching up on the last couple weeks since they had last seen each other. Breakfast, the ostensible purpose of the visit, was served and enjoyed by the both of them before Kinsue raised the real reason he was there.

”I was training with an old friend of mine recently. He told me… He thought I had what it takes to be a Bannin. Or; he thought that I could if I wasn’t stunting my own potential.” It was an awkward explanation to give, and Himari raised her eyebrow as she heard it.

”I see. Well, do you think he’s right?” Her response gave little away as to her own thoughts. Although she didn’t seem surprised by the topic.

Kinsue took a sip of the coffee provided to him before speaking again. ”I’m not sure. I know I haven’t always been among the most devoted; but there are so many who reached greater heights than I have in so short a time.”

”Like your cousins.” Himari paused, seeing deeply into her son. ”I was hoping that you’d realize this yourself. But, hearing it from a friend is better than from me I suppose.”

”So you agree? He supposed he had expected her too. That was the reason he had come, after all. Not that it had made it any less disappointing to hear how she had expected him to understand it himself.

”Kinsue, I’ve trained a lot of young shinobi in my time. He has a point when it comes to how you treat your service. A Shinobi isn’t supposed to recognise any limitation. You spend all your time focussed on yours.” There was a clear disapproval in her tone. The young man wondered how long she had believed this. Had it only been when he resigned, or since he had been a child?

”I see. Let’s say, then, that I agree. What am I supposed to do to fix it?” He truly did believe that his place in the village was to be unremarkable; a mark of shame within the Karagata. He wanted to be more than that, but as far as he was concerned; he had already failed.

”I think I have something that might help. I’ll be back in a second.” Himari stood, and made her way out of the room. A moment later she would return; a small folder in her hand. ”Here, take this.”

Kinsue took the file, and opened it. He frowned as he saw its contents. ”A mission request?” It wasn’t even a particularly impressive mission; guard duty of a minor noble as they traveled through one of the provinces. ”This is something a couple genin should be sent on.” How was this going to help him overcome his mental blocks?

”Exactly. I get a couple of these every now and then. The village wants me to recommend promising graduates from the academy. Teaching shinobi doesn’t end once you become a genin.” Of course, Kinsue thought, acting as a genin was entirely about learning. Yet, he wasn’t entirely sure where Himari was going.

”I think if you get involved in this, it might help you see how you fit in among the village. I’m sure your friend in the Division would be able to grant you some access if you asked. You’ll find, I think, that in order to assign missions effectively you’ll need to learn a great deal about the people you’ll be assigning. Their strengths and weaknesses, and what experiences they might need in order to best improve. You’ll find that other special jounin and even jounin have undergone a journey just as drawn out and hindered as yours.” Himari paused, seemingly proud of herself and her solution.

”That’s all well and good, but why would Naohiro give me access to this kind of information? I don’t exactly have much of a record in my favor.”

Himari’s smile faded at that. ”Well… the village hasn’t been at its best lately. The bureaucracy is the worst it's been in a long while. Losing the council, not to mention so many of our bright minds in the war; there aren’t a lot of people with the experience and the desire to do this kind of work. I think Naohiro would welcome a hand.”

That seemed to put an end to it, then. Kinsue agreed to try; and hoped that it might help him in climbing to new heights. The rest of their time together was less eventful, until finally it was his time to leave.

At the door, Himari spoke once more. ”Kinsue. For what it's worth; I’m proud that you decided to enlist again…”

”I want you to be a greater shinobi than I ever was.”
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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Sat Aug 26, 2023 11:44 am

More Than Duty
Lonely takes place after the end of Kinsue’s Long Winter
It was an unusually fine morning in the village. The sun had broken through the otherwise ever-obscuring mist and painted the facades of the noble district a finer shade than they had been in weeks. The home of Karagata Katsurou seemed particularly splendid to his brother’s eye; the dark red timber framing the doorway gleaming in the light.

There was a slight shake in his hand as he knocked on the door and jittery nervousness that he could not be bothered to suppress as he waited. Being forced to be the bearer of bad news had never concerned Kinsue before. Ships being lost or deals falling through was unavoidable in their business, and Katsurou understood that. Of course, it was not every day that he had news of this magnitude to bring.

News that he wanted to resign from his post.

Years ago, Katsurou had offered him a dignified way to abandon his duty as a Shinobi; a way that prevented him from being seen as a coward or a traitor. As far as the noble was concerned, even 5 years later he had not paid back the debt he owed his elder sibling for that. Yet now, with no warning and no successor he intended to put all of his ongoing projects back in Katsurou’s already filled hands. All to go back to the calling he had once so vehemently refused.

The door opened, and a servant of Katsurou beckoned him in. Katsurou was working, of course, but Kinsue’s arrival was expected and welcome. He was to find his brother on the upper floor, in his study. It was always so after he arrived from travelling, so the servant allowed the noble to pass and left him to his devices. He knew the home intimately and quickly found his way to his sibling.

The study had once belonged to their father Kosuke, who barred entry to his children. Kinsue had only become familiar with it after the man had passed and the house given to Katsurou. Now, the older Karagata saw him through the open door. He smiled.

”Welcome back. It’s good to see that you aren’t hurt, Katsurou said as he rose from his papers and beckoned for his brother to enter. ”How was it exactly that a group of bounty hunters were able to disguise themselves so thoroughly as merchants?”

Kinsue returned the smile as he entered.

”Nishio was versed in the trade; he had me well fooled. Frankly, I'm lucky to have survived the province.” He took a seat across from Katsurou; drawn into the comfort of its familiarity. He had come here to discuss his ventures so often it was almost a routine.

”You’ll have to give my thanks to your bodyguards, then. Who knows what I’d do without you.” Katsurou’s face turned serious for a moment, before transitioning right back into joviality. ”I must say, though, you look pretty upbeat for ‘lucky to be alive’. You hit it off with someone?” He chuckled to himself, looking at Kinsue’s nonplussed face before silently conceding the topic.

”We can find other partners there. A few petitions came across my desk recently.” He reached for one of the small bundles of files strewn across the table, but Kinsue raised his hand. The elder brother paused, eyeing him curiously.

”Actually, I wasn’t here to talk about business.” Katsurou’s eyebrow raised at that, waiting for him to continue. ”I, uh… I’d like to resign. Re-enlist as a shinobi.” Kinsue looked closely for his brother’s reaction; expecting disappointment, hostility even. He wasn’t expecting him to smile even more broadly. ”...You’re not surprised?”

”Hardly.” The man was practically beaming now. He reached down towards one of his desk drawers, bringing out about a dozen neatly filled folders. ”Have a look at these,” he said as he passed them over to Kinsue. Curious, the noble opened the first folder and glanced over its contents. The details of trade deals with one of Iwa’s smithing guilds lay within, summarised well for someone to understand with no experience. The second folder concerned more local dealings, produce moving between Kawazaiwa farms and the old Land of Fountains. ”...These are my dealings?”

”Check the last one,” Katsurou said, and Kinsue obeyed. It was a profile and behind it a contract. ”Who is Karegata, Shiro?” He looked at the contract in more detail, seeing the specific responsibilities that would come with Shiro’s work. What Katsurou was getting at clicked just as he began to speak. ”He’s the man I’m going to hire, to take over your projects.”

He could see the puzzle forming in his younger brother’s eyes; and continued. ”Kinsue, when I offered you this work I always expected that you’d back out one day. You do a fine job hiding your thoughts from people who don’t know you, but it’s always been clear to me that you hate this… I hoped you’d ask when the War broke out; when the Heart Empire Invaded; even when Kasai died. Now I’m just glad that you’ve finally seen sense. Working as a shinobi; I could tell how much pride you used to take in it. It wasn’t just a job to you."

”So! Give me a week of your time, and help me catch Shiro up on the work you’ve been handling. Then, you’ll be free to go.” With a wink, he finished; ”I’ll even let you keep the Warai.”

Kinsue was silent for a moment, processing all of what had just been said. Eventually, he spoke again with a quiet voice. ”A week is a short time to turn it all over.”

”I know; Masuda will have to support him, at first.” Masuda, the aide. ”He knows the substance just as well as you do; it’s why I’ve kept insisting he shadow you over the years.” Of course he had, Kinsue thought to himself.

”Then I guess you have this all figured out… Thanks, Katsurou. I won’t forget this.” He passed the files back to his brother, seeing his future open out before him; just like that. It seemed that everything was done then. With business over, Kinsue stood up and began to walk back out.

”One last thing.” Katsurou’s voice made him stop in his tracks. The older man was standing now, that damned know-it-all smile still all over his face. ”Who was it that finally talked some sense into you? My money’s on the Aisu, that old rival of yours.” He really was a know-it-all, and he read Kinsue’s face just as easily. ”Let him know he made the right choice reaching out, ok?”

Kinsue returned the smile, wholeheartedly. ”I’ll do one better. I’ll show him he made the right choice.”
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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Mon Dec 11, 2023 10:53 am

Training #15: Chakra Pool
Training takes place while Kinsue is 24
The Warai had set sail early that morning before the sun even had a chance to pierce the veil of mist over Kirigakure. Its passengers were few, only two Jounin (one experienced and one freshly promoted) in addition to the regular crew of the vessel. Their destination: a plot of land owned by the Karagata on one of Water Country's abundant islands. A new training ground that the shinobi intended to make full use of.

They arrived shortly after sunrise, the two Jounin swiftly leaving the crew to their mooring procedures. They moved quickly towards their destination, exchanging no words as they ran past the small docks that the isle hosted. The elder of the pair, Himora Riki, knew his companion was troubled; though he knew not why. The time for talk would come later, he figured.

A humid heat had set in by the time they reached their grounds. It was modest, by noble standards, perhaps a square kilometre of unsettled jungle. The younger man had obtained it for a bargain price a few weeks prior.

”Looks good. I’ll start clearing from the North, we can meet in the middle,” Riki said. The younger man only nodded and got to work. Each one of the pair made their way to their side of the land and began to form hand seals. They each knew a wide variety of jutsu capable of clearing the vegetation and levelling the land. The greatest obstacle, such as it was, was the bounds of their endurance. Clearing the land would be only the first step. Following that, the pair would need to mould it into the shape that they had planned. Only then, could their real work begin.

The younger man, Karagata Kinsue, had near-perfect control over the exercise of his chakra. The bounds of his energy were great as well, but there was still much room for him to improve. It was in this area that he focussed his mind as he began the process of clearing, reaching beyond the limits he had previously established in search of new chakra to use. A process he had undergone many times before, establishing new limits and breaking them not long after. The strain of training as a shinobi was almost as familiar to him as the act of breathing itself. A strain he was almost born to bear.

Soon, the clearing was complete. Next came the real set-up. Kinsue and Riki had planned for this, and they both knew what needed to be done. Doton walls began to grow out of the bare earth, forming first a handful, and then a collection of barren buildings. A facsimile of a small village or town. A central square, village hall, open-air market, and residential dwellings were all created in quick succession. Guided by the two shinobi’s expertise in Doton and their pre-arranged set-up. The work was draining, to be sure; the level of fine control needed to create such a thing was enough to wipe out even prestigious ninja. Yet the strain was familiar to these two, and they finished their work in short order.

They sat down in the village that they had created, the perfect urban training ground, and began to rest. ”One hour,” Riki said, ”Then we can begin."
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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Sun Dec 24, 2023 2:41 pm

Training #16: Willpower
Training continues on from Training #15
The pair sat together on a moulded earthen bench, breathing slowly as they restored their reserves of chakra. The day they had planned ahead was going to be beyond draining. More than that, it would be competitive as well. Neither of them was ready to lose to the other, even if it was just a series of exercises. Once it would hardly be a competition. One had spent years as the student of the other, their respective skills on entirely different levels. Even more recently, the student's ability was atrophied. Their competitions had proven definitively one-sided.

The student was driven, however. He had grown and grown, exceeding his old peak in the course of a mere couple of months. Then, he had shot right past that peak, and grown to new heights altogether. The pair stood closer together than ever before. Perhaps they would even drift apart in time, their positions reversed as the student achieved his full potential.

The elder of the two, however, had something else on his mind. His old student; his long-time friend; his brother-in-law in all but name, had been affected by something. His downcast silence was deafening; both during their voyage on the Warai and their work assembling their training field. It was about time he found out what had brought him down to this.

”Kinsue. Now’s as good a time as any to talk about what’s wrong.” The younger man looked up at him, taken aback.

”That obvious?” He considered himself difficult to read. He was - to others.

Riki smiled, the broad grin that came so easily to him. ”You ought to know better by now; nothing gets by me.” Maybe so, Kinsue considered. They had known each other too long for that. 10 entire years. Tumultuous ones, too.

He said nothing, for a moment. Riki was about to prod him again before it finally came. ”I’ve been promoted.” Kinsue’s gaze was fixed on the earth in front of them. He sounded like he was sharing news of a friend’s death, not that of his own success.

The older man’s eyebrow raised. Was that it? ”That’s great. You deserve it.” Even as he said it, he could tell Kinsue was doubtful. ”Do I?”

It was one of Kinsue’s greatest flaws as a shinobi, so far as Riki was concerned. Perhaps his greatest failing as a mentor, allowing his self-doubt to festor instead of eliminating it while he was still a boy. ”We’ve spoken about this enough times already -“ but before he could continue, the Karagata spoke up again.

”That’s not what I mean. I know I have the skills to be a Jounin, Riki. My ninjutsu is a match for anyone in the village, I’ve mastered 5 elemental releases, and my physical skills are adequate enough. Even my instincts are strong. But… I’ve seen what people manage before they earn this promotion, and I don’t compare. In a couple months, or a year maybe, I’d have the record to be given the rank; but I don’t have that yet.” He paused, allowing his words to settle.

Riki too, was silent. He knew that Kinsue had taken on the burdens of the critical administrative work within the village. At his mother’s request, as far as he recalled. The older man had needed to distinguish himself in the war before he became a jounin. So many promotions had been handed out after the invasion of Tea Country, the pinnacle of so many careers. Most bled for the Karagata, of course.

And Kinsue’s own record? A handful of Nukenin put down; an operation in the Northeast against some pirates. Even if his participation in the Soul Country attack was counted, it was hardly a worthy collection.

”It’s left me wondering, what else is going on? I can’t shake the feeling that I’m being… used, somehow.”

The silence between them resettled, while the sensei considered the meaning behind his student’s words. Was another Karagata rushing Kinsue’s rise through the ranks; putting as many members of their family in positions of authority as could be managed? Or was someone else pulling the strings, trying to brew a lingering resentment from others more worthy of the younger man’s newfound title? Perhaps it was neither, but instead, an attempt to generate a debt owed to be paid off towards an unknown purpose. None of it made sense to him. Not in Kirigakure, where only the strong were recognised. Kinsue was strong; maybe someone had simply recognised that without the need for further missions.

But, things weren’t as they usually were in the village. Tensions had been raised for months, and an air of unease and distrust were as present as the mist itself. The thought of it whole set Riki on edge. No matter what the true reason was, he had an unearthly feeling that it was going to blow back on them. Someday soon, they might understand what secret price Kinsue had paid for this.

Yet at the same time, a meagre sense of pride battled against the unease. He had assumed this was a show of weakness from his old student. Yet he couldn’t have been further off the mark. His friend was no longer the same boy he used to be.

”Maybe it doesn’t matter why?” There was, after all, little that they could do about it. The decision had been made, and whatever strings were being pulled the decision could hardly be reversed now. Not without making things even worse, at least.

Kinsue grunted his agreement. ”I guess so. All I can do now is prove I’m worthy of the title.” He pushed off from the bench and turned to Riki. ”About time we got to work, don’t you think?”

He’d certainly grown, Riki thought, as he took Kinsue’s outstretched hand. ”Good man. Whatever happens, I’m with you. And for what it’s worth, I think you’ll make a great Jounin.”

Whoever thought they could take advantage of his student, had certainly taken on more than they could bear.
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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Wed Jan 03, 2024 3:01 pm

Training #17: Endurance
Training continues on from Training #16
The world was awash in shades of blue and red, as Kinsue carefully made his way through the shrouded market. His every sense was alert for any sign of his opponent, ready to pounce upon any opportunity that presented itself. The pair had finally gotten to the purpose of their excursion, flooding the fake village with their mist and outlining their competition. With all offensive ninjutsu banned, it was simply a context of sensory and clone techniques, alertness and physical skill. Each of them had the task to hunt and take down the other.

Aside from Naohiro, Riki was the man Kinsue had trained the most with as a teenager. Since he had returned to service, he had even eclipsed his old rival as a training partner as the Karagata sought to increase his strength. They were both intimately familiar with each other’s techniques.

He turned a corner, feet gliding over the flattened earth as he headed towards one of the proxy residences. He’d need to proceed carefully, clearing them one by one as he sought out his old mentor. He imagined he knew his mentor’s strategy: to saturate the space with clones that might get the jump on him as he advanced. As Kinsue crossed the threshold into one of the buildings (an approximation of a bar) it became clear that he was right. A clone sweat down from the rafters, but the Karagata was prepared. He ducked down and shifted backwards, allowing the clone attack to pass right over him before grabbing at its leg. Riki’s momentum was against him now. He tumbled out of control, as Kinsue shifted his own weight and threw him to the floor. With no chance to adjust and defend himself in his vulnerable position, the Karagata moved up the side of him at blinding speed and struck him against the temple. Just like that, the clone disintegrated. The man allowed himself a slight satisfaction, Riki had clearly underestimated him.

Then, a fist thudded against his abdomen. Shocked, Kinsue turned and saw… Riki - the real one this time - as well as another strike coming directly for his jaw. He backed out of the way, just barely avoiding the second attack, still reeling from the pain of the first. How has the tables been turned on him so quickly? He thought his senses were more than enough to see and hear his mentor coming. Evidently not.

The pain threatened to overwhelm him, but Kinsue was far from ready to give up now. Riki had the advantage of the engagement. He needed to back off, recover, and come in from a stronger position. Breaking contact with his mentor would be the first step, and not one as simple as just running away. Riki, eager for complete victory, moved in once more. A kunai flashed out through the mist and was narrowly dodged before the man closed the distance between them. The first punch was dodged, the second brushed aside by an arm, but Kinsue was too slow to avoid the kick that came for the back of his knee.

Instead, he moved with the attack, ducking into a forward roll out through the door of the fake bar. From his position low to the ground, a swift kick struck out against the ever-advancing Riki. Finally, something went Kinsue’s way. His mentor, caught off guard, took the blow and stumbled back. The chance to break away was here.

He quickly got back to his feet and disappeared into the fog. At first, he sprinted, changing his path randomly to confuse the inevitable pursuit. Then he slowed down and re-entered the slow and methodical movement he had adopted at the beginning of the challenge. Round 1 of this fight was over. He had come out worse than his opponent. The blows he had taken might’ve put him out once, but the man was determined. He had something to prove, and no amount of pain was going to stop him now. The second round, and the match, was going to be his.
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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Thu Jan 04, 2024 10:06 am

Training #18: Strength
Training continues on from Training #17
Kinsue kept his breathing slow as he resumed his advance, trying to ignore the pain lancing through his abdomen every other second. It came as little surprise that his ability to take a hit was incredibly lacking, but he was still in it. Riki hadn’t come out of their engagement unscathed. A decisive enough attack, and he could still come out as the victor. As long as he could put enough force behind it.

First, he needed to regain the element of surprise. Riki had gotten the jump on him, much to his surprise, and the course of their skirmish had become practically predetermined the second it began. Kinsue had allowed himself to be drawn in by his old mentor’s clone. This time, he needed to make sure he had the real body first.

He could pass the burden of the chase to Riki, if he wished, but the man would likely send clones in his place. Perhaps Kinsue could win that way, using his advantage over the clones to take them out until Riki’s stamina was spent. If he could take out enough clones to get to that point. If Riki didn’t chance his tactics along the way. His old teacher would probably still say it was the safest bet. It’s what he would expect Kinsue to do.

He decided to take the offensive. If he was right, and Riki intended to keep his real body safe, then it narrowed down the options of where he could be hiding. Tracking down the older man that way seemed like Kinsue’s real chance. A small bit of prideful thinking went into it as well, though he wouldn’t admit it. A safe defensive play, winning by a hair over his old teacher, wasn’t enough for him.

Moving ever silently, Kinsue began to move to the outskirts of the pseudo-village. Each turn, alley, and doorway was a veil to a potential threat, but Kinsue’s ability had been honed by the Division. Even when he came too close to one of Riki’s clones he was able to evade it; and continue working his way outwards.

Soon enough, he had proven himself correct. Riki had shielded himself in a small labourer’s hut near the edge of the mist. Even then, it was a trap that had been laid. Kinsue had only been able to detect not by sight, but by the sound of his breath on the other side of the thin earthen wall. Another skill he had the Division to thank. No doubt his mentor had his own eyes on the entrance to the building, ready to strike if Kinsue found him.

It was a dilemma, but the Karagata had one certainty illogical scheme left in his mind. The pair had constructed their training ground using far less than the full power of their ninjutsu; both to conserve their energy and to better reflect the material of a genuine village. That meant he could try something a little crazy.

Silently, he drew a Kunai out of his pouch and closed his fist around it. He listened carefully, pinpointing his comrades breathing and, more important, the exact location of his head. He drew his fist back, gathered his full night into it, and let it fly.

Amazingly, it worked. His fist slammed right through the thin layer of earth, just barely missing Riki’s neck as it flew past him. Abruptly startled, the man could do little as the hand and Kunai grabbed him into a chokehold. Movement would mean death, no matter what the man might try.

It was over. Riki’s surrender came quickly.

Once the Karagata had extracted himself from the newly made rubble, both men dispelled their mist techniques. Riki looked at his old student with pride. He and Kinsue were equals now, and his performance was the proof.
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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Sat Jan 06, 2024 5:54 am

Training #19: Endurance
Training takes place while Kinsue is 24
The early morning held a different energy in Iwagakure no Sato. Absent was the ever-present mist of his home; diffused light shifting over the wood and dirt of Kiri’s streets. The whispers of the perimeter lake, impossible to get away from, reduced the world to a sort of screaming silence in their lack. This world was made of stone, torchlight, and echoes. Far removed from anything he had travelled to in his lifetime.

Different wasn’t always a bad thing, of course. The change in circumstance was refreshing, even as certain other things were familiarly disheartening. The pain from the wounds he had taken in Grass Country was far from faded, even though he had been fully discharged from his ally’s medical system. Today was the beginning of his true recovery; getting himself back into fighting shape.

With the aid of some helpful directions; he had made his way to one of the village’s public training grounds. This at least was most similar to Kiri. In the early hours of the day, only a small handful of dedicated practitioners had gathered and were moving through a series of spars and training exercises when he arrived. He hesitated for a moment, watching, before joining them himself.

Even stretching was an unexpected trial, his abdomen flaring up as he transitioned through his movements. The process of recovery was sure to be slow, and difficult as well. There was little for it, other than to get better at avoiding such wounds in the future. As he continued his minor exercise, he felt the strain gradually begin to ease. His stretched scar tissue was adjusting well and showed no sign of re-opening or otherwise causing any problems.

The Karagata supposed he was lucky that his speciality didn’t lie in the physical. For someone like that, their recovery would probably be most challenging and lengthy before they could regain their full ability. Even then, the skills they relied on most heavily would likely atrophy during the healing process. Kinsue, on the other hand, had the vast majority of his ability as long as he could weave hand signs, and perform the movement needed for his kinesis. Hand signs were easy enough, and the pain was not close enough to impede his concentration as he moulded the flow of chakra.

He formed a small pool of water before him, infused with his chakra. Then he began, slowly, to enter a stance to manipulate it. The water rose, collecting itself into an even sphere as it hovered before the shinobi. He began to move through the simplest of the forms that he had been taught, stretching the water and then bringing it back into its smaller form. He split the water apart, shifted it around himself and pieced it back together again. He formed barriers on each side of him in succession. Then, he began the sequence again, steadily increasing in speed as his body proved capable of handling the strain.

Over and over, the movements proved easier to complete with each repetition. Even though his recovery and rehabilitation were only just beginning; it was a promising start in the eyes of the Karagata. It would be some time until he could engage in close quarters, but at least with this, he could take on missions again as soon as he returned to his home village. After all, the man had no intention of letting his injury prevent him from keeping on the swift pace he had built up. There was also the matter of Iroh Hideyoshi; the man who had stabbed him. Taking care of that unexpected mess was his responsibility now.

Eventually, Kinsue slowed down his pace and began to move through his final repetition. He would come back tomorrow of course, but enough progress had been made for one day.
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Wordcount: 635/300 (1000 reduced by 2x Scaled Sheer Determinations and Q1 training event. Down to 300 word minimum) 2 endurance trained.
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Karagata, Kinsue
Jounin
Kirigakure
HHD

Mediumseagreen
Kenitsuna, Ko’ichi
Genin
Iwagakure
None

Lightsteelblue
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Chasing Daybreak

Post by Jinan B » Wed Jan 10, 2024 3:33 pm

Training #20: Willpower
Training continues on from Training #14 and Kinsue’s meeting with Shinjiro
Kinsue paid little attention to the familiar streets of his home today. Just as ever, the cobbled path was obscured by the morning mist; the activity of the day muffled by the veil. The Karagata walked a familiar path, through and then out of the noble district; and towards the all too familiar streets he had once roamed. The place he had bought his first home and, not far away, the place where his mother now lived.

It hadn’t been long since his audience with Shinjiro, but so much had happened in that time. The attack on Rock Port, his unfortunate stint in Iwa’s hospital, and his promotion but to name a few of the occurrences. But, that conversation had stuck with him nonetheless. It was expected in some ways, they had discussed the terrifying prospect of a civil war after all, but not so in others. What stuck out to Kinsue the most wasn’t that his cousin seemed happy to gamble the lives of their people against themselves, but how he responded to perceived threats against his family.

That stuck with him. Even if he and Kinsue had rather opposite ideologies; perhaps there was merit to what he had said then. Perhaps Kinsue had been too passive, too permitting of acts he had known to be unjust. If that was true, then it was also true that he could still take action now; even if it should have come years ago.

A knock on the door and Kinsue was led to a living room to wait for Himari. A few minutes passed - she must have been preoccupied when he arrived - before he heard her footsteps descending the stairs. ”Kinsue? This is a surprise,” she said.

”A welcome one, I hope.” He supposed he had never made a habit of this kind of unannounced visit. For much of the last half-decade, he had hardly bothered to visit at all. Something else he should have changed, before now.

”Always. Can I get you some tea?” She put a small pot on to boil, and the pair exchanged pleasantries while the tea was prepared and served. Exchanging stories on their work: Himari’s students and Kinsue’s journeys from the village (and his own students most recently). Things seemed to be going well for both of them, even in the face of Kiri’s growing instability. That seemed to hang over Kinsue’s mind no matter what he was discussing these days.

Eventually, the topic would turn to the reason for Kinsue’s visit. Himari knew well enough that he wasn’t one to make unannounced house calls just for the joy of it.

The Karagata, for his part, was blunt. ”I’d like you to consider moving in with me.” Himari, clearly taken aback, did not respond. ”Or with Katsurou, if you’d rather live in the old house. I’m sure we could buy somewhere if you think it’s best.” Kinsue spoke the options as if they were as simple as the walk into the noble district. Himari seemed far from convinced.

”There was a reason I came here when your father died, Kinsue. The nobles won’t allow it.” He remembered well enough. Kosuke hadn’t made himself any friends among the family, marrying a class down. Even though Himari was more than respectable; more so than many born into the highest caste. Once he was dead, she had been forced out. Her children powerless to prevent it.

”I don’t think they’ll try, this time. Katsurou plays too great a role in the business now, and between us and Riki threats won’t do much good. We’ll fight if we’re forced to.” She still seemed sceptical, and he hesitated before continuing to speak. ”…Shinjiro will support me if I ask him. If we need his help.” With that, Himari was truly surprised.

”I didn’t realise you and your cousin were so close.” Didn’t realise the two of them spoke at all, was more like it. Kinsue couldn’t help but let out a chuckle at that. ”Close? Maybe not, but we’re not who we were as children. He has a certain perspective I found… refreshing, I suppose.” That resolute determination to guard that which he held dear; even if it invited chaos and death. Perhaps Kinsue disagreed with those he had decided to protect, but the principal: that was something that resonated with him.

”Hmm, so that’s your hope? Browbeat the nobles into compliance against the village’s tradition.”

”Maybe that is what I’m doing, but what happened to you wasn’t just. I have no interest in upholding those traditions.” The Karagata paused, judging Himari’s reaction. Even though she spoke against the idea, he wasn’t convinced that she would reject the proposition. Rather, it was as though she were making sure he had thought this through. Just like he was one of her students, even now.

”The way I see things, you’ve been beyond respectable over your career. People like Shinjiro will respect your strength - more than those in the caste who purely handle the business; anyway. I have some sway of my own in those circles now, and if anyone should take issue; we’ve more than enough force to put them down.” He forced a grin onto his face, hiding the distaste he had at the thought. Hopefully, it wouldn’t come to that.

But he was done making concessions to the fools who upheld such law.

For her part, Himari seemed contemplative. ”You can think it over, no need for an answer now.” She nodded her ascent, and just like that the conversation turned mundane once more. Hardly a hint of what had just been proposed.
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Wordcount: 938/300 (1000 reduced by 2x Scaled Sheer Determinations and Q1 training event. Down to 300 word minimum) 3 Willpower trained.
Last edited by Jinan B on Fri Jan 19, 2024 5:28 am, edited 1 time in total.
Characters
NameRankVillageOrgColour
Karagata, Kinsue
Jounin
Kirigakure
HHD

Mediumseagreen
Kenitsuna, Ko’ichi
Genin
Iwagakure
None

Lightsteelblue
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