[Accepted]Lumine

Lumine, A child of the mist

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Masamune, Lumine
Child of the Mist, Masamune's Lumine
[There is no other way]

General Information Age: 12
Gender: Male
Height: 4 feet
Weight: 34 kg
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Lumine has brown hair that goes up until his neck at the back, then gets shorter as you go around his bangs resting just a bit over his ears and his fringe in front occasionally covering his eyes depending on how his head is facing. He will sometimes style his fringe to have it rest in the middle and other times just brush it so it manages to stay above his eye line or at least does not disrupt his eye sight. He sometimes just goes out with bed hair as his straight hair stays relatively manageable regardless.

    Large eyes which seem to vary between green and blue depending on the light, seeming to be more of a mix between that since the actual color of his eyes are turquoise. While his eyes do sparkle in the light of a rainy day reflecting the droplets in them as if one of them, he has this ability to have his eyes look drained of all life going pale, but is simply an effect of him sometimes getting dry eyes from not getting enough water, and other times he can also have bags under his eyes for a short time when his sleep is not going too well.
  • Body: He seems petite at first glance, but is actually rather average with his frame not being too slender and or too chubby either, balanced in between he is rather frail, and to the untrained eye would seem weak, petite and squishy. The squishy part is true in terms of his cheeks having a mild squishy nature as well as his body in general, however his got no real notable fat though people did say he is heavier then he looks. His skin has a creamy color to it.
  • Notable Features: birthmark under his foot that can be seen if you look really closely, just looks like a slightly faded image of a wolf and even then is not really that noteworthy.
Clothing/Accessories: Blue or Black hoodies with a large middle pocket which he sometimes uses to keep explosives among other things. White or light creamy shorts that he uses the two side pockets to keep weapons, with a back pocket as well that he usually uses for keeping money.
While he sometimes wheres white socks with basic running shoes or trainers for getting around in general, he will sometimes just go in socks or barefoot as well depending on the mood, time of day and location.
He generally keeps a survival backpack with him for carrying most of his gear.
Also a hair clip for keeping his hair the way he wants it at times.
Forehead protector worn around neck since its a bit too big to fit properly on his head.
He has a muramasa crest on his t-shirts or hoodies and occasionally on the side of his shorts as well or shoes that he wears. His clothing are also products made by the Muramasa in general.

Picture:
Personality:
  • General: Luimine seems to have a rather up beat personality, though in truth he is more moody then anything else. Shifting in mood based on the weather and the situation he goes from calm laid back boy who sits in the back doing nothing, to being a bundle of curiosity full of questions and innovations. He is young and his personality has not seemed to firmly root itself down as of yet, though he does dislike others misbehaving even though he feels it is completely justified when he does it. However knowing this he does not bother people too much about it, he also dislikes waiting for long periods of time and will get irritable after some time passes.
  • Hopes/Dreams: While he hopes to one day see his mother again, his real dream in life is to one day create seven legendary swords as well as fly in the sky since flying is cool and walking is terrible at times.
  • Fears: His father, his mother and that lady with the beard
  • Combat Mentality: While in combat his emotions become a lot more controlled with him focusing on survival first, learning second. He will generally keep his distance using ranged attacks from his bow, but his greatest range is mid range where it is more ideal for the use of his ninjutsu. He will tend to avoid melee combat and in most cases will prefer to be partnered with someone to compensate for this weakness, he will generally use experimental jutsu in combat if not used before in order to learn more about it. However he will only do this when there is no risk involved other then wasting a bit of chakra. He may also spend time with a book in his hand if he feels the situation is safe while casting anything he is capable of in that condition to assist or support if needed

Battle Information Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
  • Ninjutsu:10
  • Taijutsu:1
  • Genjutsu:1
  • Stamina:14
  • Control:10
  • Strength:1
  • Speed:2
  • Instinct: 1
Equipment:
  • Survival backpack for carrying stuff, all arrows are kept inside backpack
    A short bow normally hanging around over the back, may also be kept inside backpack
    A short sword with a 40cm blade and the Muramasa crest etched into the hilt that is attached to the lower back in a horizontal fashion similar to how single daggers are kept
    Arrows x 30
    Explosive Arrows x10
    Mist Arrows that explodes to cover a 10mx10mx10m area and shortens vision through it to 4m Number of arrows is x5
    Net Arrows with a strength of 3 that spread out to cover a 2mx2mx2m area before closing on the target when it makes contact x10
    Kunai x 15 split up with three in left pocket, three in right pocket, three in left backpack pocket, three in right backpack pocket and the last three on top of backpack secret compartment.
Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity: Water
Abilities and Concentrations Ninjutsu: Elemental Specialist
Having devoted their lives to mastering the Elemental affinities, this shinobi is classified as an Elemental Ninjutsu Specialist. Elemental specialist are able to devote a total of 10 concentrations to elemental concentrations, unlike most people who are capped at 8. The user is not able to access any specializations that are marked for Ninjutsu Specialist, but instead, can now pick up concentrations marked for Elemental Specialists. Additionally, their two additional concentrations MUST be used for elements. They cannot use them for ninpou styles. However, they are only able to devote a max of 5 concentrations to Taijutsu, and a max of 5 concentrations to Genjutsu.

As a Ninjutsu Specialist, [User] is able to utilize Ninjutsu concentrations reserved for specialists, but cannot utilize non-elemental ninjutsu specializations. Additionally they are able to enter the God Tier [45+] on select stats, and meaning as a specialist they can select stats to break into the God tier. These stats can only be [Ninjutsu or Instinct], [Speed or Strength], and 2 of [Control, Instinct, or Stamina].
Chosen Stats are Ninjutsu, Speed, Control and Stamina
Abilities
First Ability
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
Suiton:
Suiton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Suiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Suiton affinity. Suiton has a passive enveloping effect.
Passive (Enveloping)Show
Suiton's effect is enveloping, meaning that suiton passively surrounds anything that it makes contact with. Suiton techniques that do not last over periods of times (i.e, exploding techniques) drench their opponents, but long term techniques will envelop anything they come in contact with and maintain a hold on it with the 3/4th strength of the technique, rounded down. This means that if a suiton wave is shot forward with 17 strength, it will envelope and move anything with it that does not have more than 12 strength to resist it. This allows Suiton to fill a very powerful role in eliminating tools from opponent's access and capturing targets.
Fuuton Affinity:
Fuuton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an cutting effect.
Passive (Cutting)Show
Fuuton has a natural cutting property to it, that exists in all jutsu unless otherwise stated. This gives fuuton a unique opportunity to strike with additional power, and to act as a offensive defense. Regardless of their purpose fuuton jutsu passively cut with no distinct pattern at 1/2 the strength of the technique rounded down unless otherwise stated. This means if someone punched a 20 strength fuuton wall, they would get cuts on their hand applied with 10 strength. This also means that fuuton jutsu specifically designated to cut things can create devastating wound by essentially striking twice.
Mist Release:
Mist Release
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Mist, an extension composed of Fuuton and Suiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require Mist. Mist has an encroaching effect. You must be a former or present Kiri shinobi and have both Suiton and Fuuton to utilize this concentration.
Passive (Encroaching)Show
Mist naturally encroaches. This causes all mist jutsu to grow over time. Mist jutsu will passively grow at 1/10th their size per post, allowing them to not only become larger, but also refill areas within themselves that has been displaced. While Mist has limited offensive power, it's a supplementary superpower that can completely alter the course of battle by manipulating the battle field, and the people on it.
Taijutsu
Projectile Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Projectile Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with weapons designed to attack from afar, such as bows, shuriken, senbon, launchers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Genjutsu[Place them here]

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
Mist StyleShow
D-RankShow
*Hidden Mist Technique
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Kiri-nin
Kirigakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Hidden Mist Ninja. After forming the required hand seals, the ninja creates a blanket of mist which covers the area around them. The mist covers 20x20x20m area. The mist limits the visibility of those inside to 4 meters in any direction. This technique lasts a number of posts equal to 1/2 the user's stamina.

*Mist Anchor
D-ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user slowly moves their hand down, stabilizing the mist in the area. D-rank fuuton jutsu will still work in the mist, but will no longer displace it, allowing the mist jutsu to be maintained easier. Additionally, the duration of the mist will be extended by 2 posts.

*Mist Bath
D-rank Ninjutsu
While inside the mist, the user will form a series of hand seals, then hold a hand forward. From their hand 5 marble sized bullets of mist will form and shoot forward through the mist at 5 speed, with 5 strength.
C-RankShow
*Mist Clone
C-rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct seals, the user materializes and creates a clone of themselves. When destroyed, they explode in a poof of *Hidden Mist Technique. The hidden mist will release and burst outward from the clone. This acts as a good container and transportation for the mist jutsu. These clones can only use taijutsu. These clones have a taijutsu of 3, stamina of 3, strength of 1, and 5 in Speed. The clone exists for a maximum of 4 posts before detonating early.

*Mist Constriction
C-rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct handseals, the user will focus on a 3x3x3m area of mist. This mist will then become extremely dense, weighing down with 10 strength. Anyone caught within this area with less than 10 strength will be unable to move.
Suiton StyleShow
D-RankShow
*Suiton • Defensive Barrier
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will spray water created from the inside of their chest through their mouth. Once the water is expelled, it will form an umbrella shape that is concave to the user and about two meters in diameter. This defense is somewhat solid and can be formed in any direction the user can spit, up to five meters away. The defense is shot at a speed of 5 and has a strength of 5 and unless completely destroyed it lasts for three posts before falling lifelessly to the ground.

*Suiton • Wet Spot
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will expel a 3 meter diameter sphere of water from their mouth at speed of 5 up to 10 meters away. Upon impact it will burst spilling all over the immediate area making it extremely slippery. Those without 5 taijutsu or higher will not be able to hold their footing on this wet spot and will slip around.

*Suiton • Propel Leap
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra into their hands the user will fire two jets of water from their hand, essentially hurling and propelling themselves in the opposite direction of their jets as if thrown by a strength of 5. Can be used once to throw themselves with 5 strength.

*Suiton • Water Shuriken
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a shuriken of water that can be thrown approximately 6 centimeters in diameter in their hand. When kai'd, this shuriken explodes with a force equal to a D-Rank explosion and covers the immediate area in water. If not consumed, this technique lasts for three posts.
C-RankShow

*Suiton • Crashing Wave
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user expels a massive tidal wave of water 10 meters wide and nearly 5 meters tall. This wave travels forward at a speed of 10 and with a strength of 10 for up to 15 meters before losing it's steam and failing.

*Suiton • Clone
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user creates a clone of themselves comprised completely of suiton chakra. This clone is incapable of jutsu, however it's liquid nature makes it a very capable taijutsu combatant. This clone lasts for 5 posts.
  • Taijutsu: 6
  • Stamina: 8
  • Strength: 7
  • Speed: 6
Fuuton ElementShow
D-RankShow
*Fuuton • Enhanced Launch
D-Ranked Fuuton Jutsu
After doing the needed hand seals, the user gathers wind around their feet. Then, the user will use the wind to blast them from the ground, enabling them to leap into the air an extra 10 meters at 3 extra speed. The user also has 3 less Taijutsu until they once again touch the ground. Those with less than 5 Taijutsu (after deduction) will stumble and fall when trying to land. The Fuuton passive is not applied in this technique.

*Fuuton • Redirection
D-Ranked Fuuton Jutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, the user covers a projectile they are holding in fuuton empowered wind. Then, when the weapon has been thrown as normal, the user is able to change it's direction by up to 90 degrees once with no drop in momentum on the projectiles part. This technique only lasts one post.
TaijutsuShow
GenjutsuShow
Place Genjutsu in here

History
Historical AccountsShow
Lumine was born under the light of the silver moon as his mother gave him the name Lumine to reflect the feelings of the moonlight as she raised him until he was only six years old, his father had long time joined the military of Kirigakure and was apparently dealing with some civil war as his father always came back to teach him a few things from his escapades. However his father was not too interested in him as he did not possess the strong physical battle hardened or tough body other boys had. He was rather frail and only had some talent for controlling chakra as his mom helped to teach him a few things. Before his mother retired after giving birth she was a shinobi of kirigakure who fell in love with the military man and while they shared a passionate love, having this child brought them together only for a short while. Once his father learned that his body was not suited for the military life he felt disappointment and at times even Lumine noticed this. His mother had been a mistress of the hidden mist teaching him her mist style in order for him to better make use of his talents, however unlike his mother he also had a strong affinity for the suiton element to begin with, resulting in her enrolling him in the academy at a young age.

When Lumine first joined the academy he seemed to fit in nicely until classes went underway, it was not clear at first as he seemed to have trouble at times he managed to pass most theory though was generally always average in his marks. Not standing out much they finally noticed him lagging behind in the physical department, he was the weakest, he had barely any talent for anything. He was at least semi-decent in speed managing to avoid dead last though at a later stage he managed to build up his stamina, however stamina did not help his being so slow. The sparring training became even worse as everyone in the academy beat him, from being tossed into the air like a feather weight, to being hit so hard to the face he got knocked out, to simply being pushed out of the fighting area and told he was trash. After some time the few friends he had drifted away not wanting to be part of the bullying and feeling he was too weak to partner up with. When it came to basic ninjutsu training he seemed to keep up with the class, but for the most part he always got distracted resulting in failed attempts and further ridicule.

However in secret he practiced his hidden mist techniques and had not let it out that he managed to learn at least four of the mist techniques his mom had taught him and he also had exceptional control over his chakra, along with good stamina. However he could not show this off in spars and for the most part he did not want to stand out anymore. He began to live in his own world and had a happy life at home until some people came to their house. His mom was requested to go out on a mission requiring her misty talents and so she left him behind having secured funding to cover most of Lumine's needs. However after she left a part of him died deep down inside and he became more down then usual and while the instructors who caught onto his talents a bit due to him always looking fresh after jutsu practices, they could not pass him since he was too lacking in other areas. While he joined the academy at age seven, he only managed to graduate at age ten which was not easy for him as he just barely passed with his physical scores being so low if it was not for his complete mastery of the academy techniques and theory they would have never let him pass. They simply had nothing more to teach him and it was best for him to get more physical training done then waste more time in the academy, that and all the other children either passed already or did their genin trials and failed only to take up time in class to try again and again.

Lumine managed to live out his time doing basic D-rank missions like capturing the white fox, gathering herbs and delivering mail as he simply did simple jobs for the time being. Now at the age of twelve he wants to actually learn more about his mother and while his father had him kicked out of their home the moment he graduated saying that he should learn to look after himself he wondered the streets generally sleeping in the library or in places away from the military in general since his father disliked him and some military people also disliked him for that too. He was not good enough for his father's house of which it is not spoken about, as it puts others in danger. His father having just enough fatherly pride not to simply end his child's life, but being too proud of his standing to stoop to looking after a child with such little talent. Since he rarely used jutsu in front of others it ended up leaving a bad impression, also the details of his mother's mission ended up having her branded as someone bad as he had heard a few rumors and so drifted away until some merchants passing through the slums were attacked by bandits, feeling bored and realizing the bandits were untrained he managed to defeat them. As thanks he was later given a contract with the Muramasa, he was rather weak compared to other members of the family and the branch family to which he belonged just did basic work like making swords and basic equipment which he sometimes would assist with. His current family is the Masamune, who are under the muramasa and looked down upon as just being decent sword makers.

He lives in a small one room home with a bathroom and a small kitchen.
Last edited by Lumine on Tue Feb 12, 2019 8:31 am, edited 2 times in total.

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Post by Ace Trainer » Sun Feb 10, 2019 10:53 pm

Im not entirely sure how an arrow explodes into a cloud of mist, but if it does so I think you'll need to specify the area of covers when it detonates since it'll be used in jutsu.

Otherwise looks good.
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Post by Lumine » Sun Feb 10, 2019 11:20 pm

edits were made

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Post by Ace Trainer » Sun Feb 10, 2019 11:20 pm

1/2
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Post by Lumine » Tue Feb 12, 2019 8:45 am

edited to fix the jutsu pyramid

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Post by Valkier » Tue Feb 12, 2019 3:10 pm

Looks good to me -
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