Fuu, Seshoma

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Fuu, Seshoma

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FUU, SESHOMA
Sessy

[Sometimes It is how you wish it wasn't.]

General Information Age:16
Gender:Male
Height:5'11
Weight:170
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Round, Brown eyes, Mole under left eye. Short curly black hair
  • Body: Dark Skinned, Well built like a swimmer
  • Notable Features:----
Clothing/Accessories: Typical Kirigakure shinobi outfit with two front pockets to hold equipment.
Picture: None for now.
Personality:
  • General: Calm but easily excitable.
  • Hopes/Dreams: Hopes one day to achieve a position in the 7 swordsman
  • Fears: Not being strong enough to protect himself or the ones he loves.
  • Combat Mentality:Aggressive fighter who isn't afraid to risk life or limb. Will be the first one into battle and the last one out.

Battle Information Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
  • Ninjutsu: 5
  • Taijutsu: 9
  • Genjutsu: 1
  • Stamina: 5
  • Control: 4
  • Strength: 5
  • Speed: 9
  • Instinct: 2
Equipment: Chokuto with a black handle strapped to waist with a black sheath. 30cm long blade, 20 cm long handle 20 strength

Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity: Raiton Style
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu1/3
Raiton Affinity:
Raiton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a shocking effect.
Passive (Shocking)Show
Raiton has the effect of shocking, which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area.

Additionally, the strength of the nervous effect on organic material from raiton jutsu is determined by the ninjutsu stat requirement.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: Tingling, acute numbness.
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Loss of Sensation
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Localized Paralysis
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Diffuse Paralysis
Taijutsu2/2
Sword Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Sword Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with swords and sword-like weapons such as knives, daggers, sword-breakers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Perception:
The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Genjutsu0/0
[TBA]

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
RaitonShow
*Raiton • Static Shroud
D-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user covers their body in a layer of visible static which crackles around them for 4 posts. Anything which comes within 6 inches of their body will be repelled with a force of 5 strength and have the Raiton Shocking effect applied.

*Raiton • Shock Double
D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will create a copy of themselves out of Raiton chakra. The clone will be able to move with the stats labelled below, while also exploding with the force of a single exploding tag upon death (which also applies the raiton passive effect). The clone will only last for 3 posts.
Taijutsu: 2
Stamina: 1
Strength: 1
Speed: 2

*Raiton • Conductor
D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will coat a weapon they are holding in Raiton electricity for 5 posts. This causes the shock effect to be produced on any contact with a target, while also granting blunt weapons the ability to cut through skin to produce shallow wounds. This also works for thrown weapons, however if the projectile remains out of contact with the user for more than 2 posts the technique will dissipate early.
TaijutsuShow
Iaido StyleShow
D-rankShow
*[Iaido • Clouding Eyes]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite(s): 8 Speed.
A simple technique meant to cripple the target's vision, the practitioner draws the sword from its scabbard and aims a quick slash at the eyes. This technique can be done in any single direction to either target one or both of the opponent's eyes.

*[Iaido • Weapon Mastery]
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Since Iaido is a style that prioritizes speed over brute strength, wise usage of the blade is paramount to the practitioner's success in the style. This Discipline represents the practitioner's knowledge of their weapon's strengths and weaknesses in combat, allowing them to use the weapon more efficiently both inside and outside of its use in Iaido techniques and avoid unnecessarily presenting their weapon's blind spots to the opponent.

*[Iaido • Ancestral Focus]
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
The hallmark of Iaido is its practitioners abilities to launch an attack even when their swords are sheathed. This Discipline represents the practitioner's capacity to consistently execute a sword draw and slash all in one movement by gripping the edge of the scabbard and pulling the scabbard slightly forward before drawing the sword. This Discipline enables the practitioner to immediately draw their sword and attack at the start of combat.

*[Iaido • Deathly Weight]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite(s): 8 Speed.
An extension of the disabling effects of Clouding Eyes, the practitioner draws the sword from its scabbard and slashes at the back of the opponent's leg, severing the muscles and tendons responsible for walking and supporting their weight., rendering the opponent unable to walk on the targeted leg. This penalty lasts until the opponent is able to receive medical attention.

*[Iaido • Fading Touch]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite(s): 8 Speed.
An extension of the disabling effects of Clouding Eyes, the practitioner draws the sword from the scabbard and slashes at the opponent's arms or elbows. Landing this technique can sever the muscles and tendons connecting in their arm, rendering the opponent's arm useless. This penalty lasts until the opponent is able to receive medical attention.
C-rankShow
*[Iaido • Shinigami Draw]
C-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Losing the use of one's hand or arm in a fight can be a death sentence, but Iaido has found a simple, elegant response to this desperate situation. Using their free hand, the practitioner momentarily braces the edge of their sword against the inside of the scabbard before drawing. While it does not confer the instant acceleration benefit of its parent technique, this Discipline does allow the practitioner to use Iaido techniques at their normal speed even with only one hand.

History
Historical AccountsShow
Seshoma was the child of two jonin, One day on a nature walk through the country with his parents a rouge ninja appeared and tried to mug them. Seshoma's parents tried their best to defend themselves and were wounded by the rouge, right before the rouge dealt the finishing blow one of the legendary swordsman of the mist appeared and struck the rouge down in a mighty display of kenjutsu. This singular moment inspired Seshoma to pursue the path of the shinobi.
In the academy Seshoma was a decent student. Competing in taijutsu but not dominating and averaging out in ninjutsu. Seshoma was never much a tools user always saving his energy for practice with the sword. His teachers noticed his enthusiasm and love for the way of the sword and tutored him in the Iaido style. He passed the academy with higher than average scores in taijutsu and average in everything else.
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Post by Sia » Thu Sep 26, 2019 7:26 am

You have a missing ] in your concentrations.
A Compilation of Things to Keep in Mind on NSRPShow
Onu:
And then he tried to bang me and I asked if we could just cuddle so he knows I’m still upset about it
Kao:
Do you have one of him looking at daddy angrily
Kao:
boo fucking hoo
Onu:
validusrex#1137 — Today at 12:28 AM
25% American is still 100% FREE BABY LETS FUCKING GO
This Delightful Exchange:
Sinpoder: Where can I find a mentor?
Sinpoder: or is that Sia?
Nick: Sia is more of a palpatine than a mentor
Valkier:
Sia's the opposite, they know the system better than any of us but then ignores it to try do/allow whatever regardless 😛
Hayate:
Your intention doesn't matter if your action creates pain
Validusrex, Size of 15 Ryo Puppet Boat:
Half a kayak, large enough to fit one person bent-over or crossed-legged.
Siatupid:
There is peace in being trash.
Wright:
calling people pussies, bitches or whatever and threatening to hurt people makes you very much less than a man and much like a young boy
Onu:
You intentionally handicapping yourself is not a reason to change the system.
Onu:
It is not the mods job to build ideas for you, its our job to make them systematically acceptable. If there is a core concept to it that isn't acceptable, there is nothing any mod can say that will magically make it work.
Onu:
"Over half of the questions asked in the box can be answered by reading the rules."
Sia:
"Everything is banned until balanced."
Kabuto:
"Tourneys bring out the worst in people."
Tydie:
And part of why I scooped him is cus I wanted to make him a Toukai and people told me they thought it was a bad idea :/
so now Ryoga is a constant reminder to always do what I WANT to do, not what others think I should do
Tydie:
saigen is like the dysfunctional family you choose to be part of
Methtastic:
Crazy how elaborate the system is for a group of people who only finish a fight a tenth of the time after 2 months of arguing over 3 seconds of combat
Varian:
If you want to speed up the process you can just talk to one of the other staff members about it.
Most of them have been around longer than Director and can actually read.
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Post by Niro » Fri Sep 27, 2019 4:53 pm

Hair/Face - what color is his hair? What color are his eyes? Are they shaped any particular way?

Body - what kind of Welbilt? Is he built more like a swimmer? Maybe like a bodybuilder?

Goals - what does he want to achieve? It says he wants to achieve but doesn't finish

Fears - why is he scared of genjutsu?

Chokuto - how long is it? Does it have a sheath?

You are missing some asterisks it looks like on some archive d rank Jutsu in your iaido spoiler
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NameVillageRankTeam
Tatsuo [color=#940839][b]IwaTsuchikageTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b]Kiri - MND-Rank
Yamato [color=#C71585][b]KiriA-Rank

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Fuu, Seshoma

Post by Bwaxy » Sat Sep 28, 2019 5:28 pm

Updated


Where would i post to get approval on an special ability?

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Post by Kao » Mon Sep 30, 2019 8:53 pm

You can go ahead and post it on the app and we will look at it here
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Komiya ShizuoJounin Iwagakure no Sato [color=#209DD3]
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Enkouten Mai Jounin Iwagakure no Sato [color=#CE5412]
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Awai FusaeA-Rank MNKonohagakure no Sato[color=#D95FEA]
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Sakata KannaIwagakure Councilwoman [color=#3DA43B]
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Post by Niro » Tue Oct 08, 2019 9:42 pm

3 days
#MakeIwaGreatAgain
NameVillageRankTeam
Tatsuo [color=#940839][b]IwaTsuchikageTeam 18 Jousai
Kinomichi [color=limegreen][b]IwaBanninJousai
Kotetsu [color=slategray][b]IwaGeninTeam 7
Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
Sai [color=#FF14A1][b]Kiri - MND-Rank
Yamato [color=#C71585][b]KiriA-Rank

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Post by Bwaxy » Thu Oct 10, 2019 7:24 pm

Updated

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Post by ShinobiTruth » Sat Oct 12, 2019 2:07 pm

Hello! Hope you're having a good day today.

Alright, I'd like to attack the first part of the app, since fixing jutsu and stuff that might need to be fixed is less up to interpretation and is just a matter of making sure all the numbers check out.

I'm gonna ask that you try to flesh out these descriptions. They don't have to be massive paragraphs for each one, but especially since you don't have a picture for reference, it is important for a variety of reasons (both involving combat and otherwise) that people who read this app have at least enough to build a reasonable picture of how your character looks and acts before RPing with them.

Here's an example of how you can bulk up the descriptions a little bit more:
Example:
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Seshoma has a round, defined face with intense brown eyes and short, curly black hair styled with a simple even cut an inch thick.
  • Body: Seshoma is dark-skinned, and despite how slender he is, due to his training with taijutsu, his body is covered in lean, toned muscle, much like a swimmer.
  • Notable Features: Under his left eye, Seshoma has a small, unusual mole, akin to a beauty spot.
The same goes especially for your personality. We're not asking for a novel, but you'll want at least four, maybe five sentences per section. For your Combat Mentality, it's true that this is talking about the character's perspective when they're in a fight, but it's also usually appropriate to allude to a small portion of your character's overall strategy.

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Post by Varian » Mon Oct 21, 2019 12:47 pm

3 days
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Post by WrightJustice » Sun Oct 27, 2019 8:14 am

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