Hironaka, Bitoku

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Hironaka, Bitoku

Life is much simpler when we look at it through the lens of compromise.

General Information Age: 18
Gender: Male
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 145lbs
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Bitoku has a round, soft face with gentle features that gives him the illusion of being several years younger than he actually is. He has white hair (common in his village) and bright green eyes.
  • Body: Bitoku is quite short, only 5'4". He's slender but athletically built due to his training. He has very long legs with a short torso, and usually stands quite straight with his hands folded neatly behind his back or on his hips.
    Clothing/Accessories: A white vest, sleeves cut off to wear his protective armor down his arms (useful for blocking incoming projectiles). His pants are comfortable, flexible trousers lined with pouches to hold his Kunai and Shuriken. The pants are tucked into combat boots that are easy for him to move in.

    On days off, he prefers less form-fitting clothes and enjoys things such as robes or loose pants. He also tends to wear tons of bracelets and other jewelry, as if he finally gets a chance to dress up (even though he's just running to the store on his day off).
    Picture:
    Personality:
    • General: Bitoku is an extremely positive person, and always does his best to see things on the sunny side. He always maintains his cool, cheery demeanor (though it will occasionally falter in the heat of battle), and he loves to bring people together. In his free time, Bitoku enjoys exploring the various mountains surrounding the Hidden Cloud, reading, and most of all cooking.
    • Hopes/Dreams: Bitoku one day dreams of becoming the Hidden Cloud's chief diplomat, and hopes to bring the nations together in peace rather than conflict.
    • Fears: Put simply, he fears failing in his goal. He is terrified of conflict breaking out that he could've prevented should he have been in a position of power.
    • Combat Mentality: If given an opportunity, Bitoku always prefers to talk his way out of situations. He's quite silver tongued and very quick witted. However, if it comes to blows, he prefers to strike quickly and strike hard. He often uses projectile-based Taijutsu (sometimes paired with Ninjutsu to arc lightning through his weapons), but his more powerful gifts lie in his offensive Ninjutsu with his specialized Raiton abilities.

    Battle Information Village: Kumogakure :kumo:
    Rank: Chunin
    • Ninjutsu: 20
    • Taijutsu: 12
    • Genjutsu: 1
    • Stamina: 12
    • Control: 15
    • Strength: 7
    • Speed: 12
    • Instinct: 10
    Equipment: 30 Kunai (left leg pockets), 60 Shuriken (right leg pockets)
    Companions: (0/1)
    Primary Affinity: Raiton
    Abilities and Concentrations
    Abilities
    First Ability
    Second Ability
    Third Ability
    Concentrations
    NinjutsuRaiton Elemental, Sensory
    TaijutsuPerception, Acrobatics, Projectile Weapons
    GenjutsuNone

    Jutsu
    NinjutsuShow

    *Raiton • Static Shroud
    D-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
    After performing the correct hand seals the user covers their body in a layer of visible static which crackles around them for 4 posts. Anything which comes within 6 inches of their body will be repelled with a force of 5 strength and have the Raiton Shocking effect applied.

    *Raiton • Shock Double
    D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
    After performing the correct hand seals, the user will create a copy of themselves out of Raiton chakra. The clone will be able to move with the stats labelled below, while also exploding with the force of a single exploding tag upon death (which also applies the raiton passive effect). The clone will only last for 3 posts.
    Taijutsu: 2
    Stamina: 1
    Strength: 1
    Speed: 2

    *Raiton • Conductor
    D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
    After performing the correct hand seals, the user will coat a weapon they are holding in Raiton electricity for 5 posts. This causes the shock effect to be produced on any contact with a target, while also granting blunt weapons the ability to cut through skin to produce shallow wounds. This also works for thrown weapons, however if the projectile remains out of contact with the user for more than 2 posts the technique will dissipate early.

    *Raiton • Bright Bolt
    D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
    After performing the correct hand seals the user will extend two fingers toward a target. A bolt of lightning will jump up to 10 meters from their fingers at a speed of 6, striking with a strength of 4.

    *Raiton • Galvanic Zone
    C-ranked Raiton Jutsu
    After performing the correct hand seals, the user will seep Raiton chakra in an area around them with a 20m diameter. The user's Raiton techniques will travel 5 points faster when they travel through this zone for 3 posts. This technique ends the moment the user leaves this area. They also return to normal speed upon leaving the area. This technique does not apply the shocking effect.

    *Raiton • Sky Spear
    C-ranked Raiton Jutsu
    After performing the correct hand seals, the user will create a two meter long rod of lightning in their hand. They are then able to launch it at 15 speed in a single direction. Upon contact the spear will explode with the force of a single explosive tag and apply the Raiton shocking effect. If it has not been launched by the end of the second post it will dissipate.

    *Raiton • Jamming Pulse
    C-ranked Raiton Jutsu
    After performing the correct hand seals, the user emits a wave of electricity from their palm in a single direction. This is produced as a 10m wide line which extends 2m into the air and travels up to 25m from the user at 10 speed. The wave will apply the shocking effect and reduce the speed of any living thing it strikes by 5 points for 3 posts by electrically interfering with the brain's nervous signals.

    *Raiton • Thunderous Lightning Cannon
    B-ranked Raiton Jutsu
    After performing the correct hand seals, a beam of lightning will erupt from the user's hand. The lightning will travel 50m at 20 speed and explode with the force of 4 explosive tags on contact, while applying the Raiton shocking effect throughout the explosion's area.

    *Raiton • Castle of Sky
    B-ranked Raiton Jutsu
    The user will first perform the correct hand seals before releasing a basketball sized orb of lightning 15m into the air. The orb will then cascade sheets of lightning down in the shape of a dome over the caster, with a 15m radius. This dome, apart from being exceptionally loud, forms a sort of protection against attacks. It comes into being at 20 speed, and is able to redirect hits of up to 20 strength in a downward direction. These sheets of lightning also serve as a visual obscurity. This technique lasts for up to 3 posts depending on the user's discretion.
    TaijutsuShow
    *[Flawless Aim Style • Repeater Shot]
    D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
    Preparing multiple projectiles, the practitioner launches each of the projectiles at one or more targets. For each target beyond the first, the accuracy of each of the attacks is decreased, suffering a -1 Taijutsu penalty for each additional target.

    *[Flawless Aim Style • Rapid Reload]
    D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
    After years of training, the practitioner has learned how to quickly and accurately access their ranged weapon stores at all times in combat. This cuts the effective "reload" time by half, up to a maximum speed equal to the practitioner's Speed score. This also applies to returning unused projectiles to their storage containers or switching between types of projectile weaponry.

    *[Flawless Aim Style • Evasive Maneuvers]
    C-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
    The practitioner has learned how to accurately launch projectiles while moving through the flow of combat. This Discipline represents the practitioner's ability to accurately launch projectiles while moving at full Speed, while jumping, rolling, sliding off the ground, or while performing other basic combat movements.
    GenjutsuShow
    None

    History
    Historical AccountsShow
    As a citizen of the Hidden Cloud, Bitoku was born into a happy and somewhat privileged lifestyle in his village. He had a doting family, a happy home, and a fantastic childhood. At a young age he'd decided to be a Shinobi, as his parents were before him, but he always struggled with his long-term goals. Even without any particular direction in mind, he was quite successful as a young ninja. He graduated from the Academy and near the top of his class, and developed a talent for Raiton-style ninjutsu very young.

    He graduated from the Shinobi Academy without much incident, but never was able to form a regular team. Bitoku has always been someone who liked to be friends with everyone, and due to the sort of free-form approach to Genin teams in Kumogakure, he ended up bouncing around a lot and learning from lots of teachers and former classmates. It ended up making him quite well rounded in a lot of ways, as well as teaching him how to work well with other Shinobi even after knowing them for only a short time.

    His Chunin exam was a solo C-rank mission, as is custom in Kumogakure. While not entirely dangerous, his mission was quite a long one. He had to travel all the way to Konoha, and then onto Suna to collect medicinal herbs (due to the lack of farmland in Kumo). It was his first time traveling such a vast distance, and aside from a brief scuffle with some bandits, it was a fairly uneventful journey.

    Meeting with the other villagers and seeing the different cultures absolutely enthralled Bitoku. It inspired him to travel more, to meet more people. He developed a fascination for the vastly different political constructs of the other villages and countries, even those he’d yet to visit, from every book he could get his hands on. For the first time in his life as a Shinobi, he felt a true fire and inspiration. He had no desire to become the Raikage, or to become the strongest Shinobi ever. What he wanted was to bring people together, like he always had, but on a much larger scale. That is when Bitoku made his declaration to become the chief diplomat of the Hidden Cloud. If he could grow his talents as a Shinobi and reach a level of social influence in his village, he could achieve that goal. And given Kumo’s neutrality in the current political climate, he fancied himself a mediator between the lands to bring the world together.

    A high ambition for a single Shinobi, but Bitokuis nothing if not confident.
Last edited by Piper Towel on Fri Nov 22, 2019 1:13 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Hironaka, Bitoku

Post by Niro » Fri Nov 22, 2019 1:05 pm

I suggest holsters and pouches for all those kunai/shuriken. You can detail them in his clothing and then in his equipment please detail where exactly he keeps his shuriken/kunai. Otherwise looks good
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Hironaka, Bitoku

Post by Piper Towel » Fri Nov 22, 2019 1:28 pm

Fixed!
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Hironaka, Bitoku

Post by WrightJustice » Mon Nov 25, 2019 3:37 pm

Discussed with the OOCs and the Chuunin exam portion can't 100% happen as written (which I believe impacts your RP with Serv a little too but that is easy to fix).
Basically Kumo and Konoha are new friends and there is a village further out from Konoha where Kumo people would go first for trade and whatnot and Suna has yet to join so could not have been reached, certainly not for a chuunin exam.

Iza explained it more properly here:
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Post by Niro » Sat Nov 30, 2019 12:39 am

2 days
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