Senju, Noeru

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Post by Dot » Tue Jun 08, 2021 6:57 am

Senju, Noeru

General Information Age: 14
Gender: Male
Height: 155 cm
Weight: 53 kg
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Noeru is different from the rest of his clan members. He has BROWN hair, and wears it in a bit of a spiky mess. His facial features are friendly, but also house quick and sharp green eyes.
  • Body: Athletic build.
  • Notable Features: Always has his clans emblem somewhere on his outfit.
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Clothing/Accessories: On days off Noeru wears his high ninja boots, with loose jogger bottoms and a burgundy kimono like top.
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Personality: Noeru is an interesting character. He is always calm and collected. But in social situations he becomes very quick with words, funny, and pleasant at the same time. He finds it easy to blend in and make friends with other people.
  • General:
  • Hopes/Dreams: To finally be acknowledged by his clan, despite the color of his hair.
  • Fears: He doesn't have any yet.
  • Combat Mentality: Analytical, he isn't the one to rush into a fight. He's more likely to make the conversation with his opponent to gain information, or distract him.
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Battle Information Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
  • Chakra Pool: 10
  • Endurance: 5
  • Control: 15
  • Strength: 5
  • Speed: 8
  • Willpower: 5
  • Power Rank: D
Equipment:
Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity:
Senju:
Mokuton [Wood Release]
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Senju:
Mokuton [Wood Release] is a unique elemental affinity exclusive to the Senju clan. By mixing their natural affinities for Doton [Earth Release] and Suiton [Water Release] the clan is able to create strong, durable, living wood. As Mokuton is living, it has a growth effect.
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Growth:
A truly unique element, Moktuon users create life in the form of trees. Even after their jutsu is done, these trees continue to live and grow aided by the high density of chakra in them. This gives Mokuton the growth effect, which uses the residual chakra in mokuton jutsu to rapidly speed up the natural growth process for a limited time after creation, causing the jutsu to gain +2 strength per post for an amount of posts after creation depending on the user’s [Control] used in the jutsu.
  • 1-9: 3 posts
  • 10-19: 4 posts
  • 20-24: 5 posts
  • 25-34: 6 posts
  • 35+: 7 posts
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
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Mokuton [Wood Release]: Half-Dome
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Description: The user performs a short string of handseals while gathering their Mokuton chakra in the ground before them. Upon completion a wooden dome erupts from the ground, as if it were trying to form a shell. However it stops half way and protects only the front of the user, allowing him easy escape. The dome is wide enough to protect up to 3 people. The dome raises at a speed equal to the users [Control], and is able to withstand damage of anything up to and including the users [Control].

Mokuton [Wood Release]: Body Spike
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Description: After performing a string of handseals, the user will concentrate that chakra on any part of their body in order to grow a wooden spike the moves at a speed equal to the users [Control], and strength to the users [Control] + mokuton Passive, up to a distance equal to the users [Control].

Mokuton [Wood Release]: Deaths Grip
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Description: The user performs a string of handseals and upon completion will concentrate on their target. Then, roots will erupt from the ground, wrapping around the target to the point that they cannot move. The victim will require [Strength] higher than the users [Control] + Mokuton passive to break free of the bindings. This technique is named this way because it is able to absorb the victims chakra; D-Rank amount of chakra per turn, and it then uses this chakra to maintain itself. This technique can be multicast to capture multiple targets.

Mokuton [Wood Release]: Crown of Thorns
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Description: The user performs a string of handseals, and gathers chakra in the ground beneath. Upon completion the jutsu is cast and the result is a ring of hawthorns growing to the height of the users ankles. The user is then able to control the shrub, causing it to move in any desire direction at a speed equal to [Control], the strength of the jutsu is based on [Control], and governs the amount of damage that the jutsu can deal and how much strength is required to cut through the branches. The jutsu remains active for as long as the user remains in the ring, and requires more chakra to be added every [Control] / 5 posts.

Mokuton [Wood Release]: Creation
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Description: The user is able to create any object out of wood. The amount of chakra used is based on the object being created. But the general rule of thumb is that D-rank amount of chakra will create 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, and 20 Senbon. Any object that is created and the participants want to keep it after the thread, has to be priced by a member of staff and has to be paid by the character keeping the object.
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History
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Noeru was born to a respected serving shinobi of the Senju clan. His mother was not a member of the clan, and as a result Noeru was treated as a bit of an outcast due to his hair not falling into the usual colour donned by the clan. Black and brown were the norm, blonde did not go down so well. He struggled to make friends with other children his age that were from his clan, and so he spent most of his days playing with children he met at the academy. The knowledge of his clan was therefor minimal. He did not know what they specialised in and had to figure everything out on his own. Thanks to this he quickly learnt the importance of perseverance and learning from his mistakes.

He graduated the academy as one of the best in his year and has since been placing alot of time and effort into improving his skills in order to be acknowledged by his clan members. Something bugged him about his own family spending a lot of effort and time trying ignoring someone they lived next door to.

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Ryo: 28/28
Prestige Perks: [Inheritance: 309] 1/1
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Last edited by Dot on Sun Jun 20, 2021 2:26 pm, edited 10 times in total.
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Post by Dot » Tue Jun 08, 2021 7:20 am

RyoShow
Breakdown:
Character Creation Ryo: 50
Reincarnation (10%): 30
Total: 80 Ryo

Used:
Jutsu: 20
Stats: 32

Remainder: 28 (Add to character Sheet)

ReincarnationShow
Ryo: Unspent = 155

Jutsu:
D Rank: 11 = 44 Ryo
C Rank: 9 = 54 Ryo
B Rank: 7 = 56 Ryo

Total: 309 Ryo
Reincarnation (10%): 30
Remainder: 279
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Post by Diatenshi » Tue Jun 08, 2021 2:44 pm

Hey buddy ^_^ one senju user to another I wanted to remind you that being a senju clan member counts as an ability and the wood release goes under abilities and not concs, not taking up a slot.
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Post by Dot » Tue Jun 08, 2021 5:08 pm

Fixed
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Post by Ace Trainer » Sun Jun 13, 2021 7:06 pm

You have a broken bold tag somewhere in your jutsu.

Your inheritance has been accepted so you can include the
[Inheritance: ###] perk, as well as your initial 10% of ryo.

If my math is right your currently have 52 ryo of jutsu/stats on this so yo'll need to spend 2 ryo from your inheritnace.
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Post by Dot » Mon Jun 14, 2021 1:26 pm

All sorted, and yes thats correct. I have written a break down of by ryo/stats/jutsu in the second post
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Post by TheLacarix » Tue Jun 15, 2021 11:03 am

Most seems fine, however currently the rules on clan physical requirements have not changed and you will need brown hair. Least until these rules change. Also, I think the image is a little to close to the mark on the popular media rule and it just seems to be Naruro in different attire.
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Post by Dot » Tue Jun 15, 2021 5:12 pm

This guy doesn't have brown hair and he passed. And I don't see how that is too close? The only thing that is somewhat similar is the hair color.
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Post by TheLacarix » Tue Jun 15, 2021 6:22 pm

Then 'this' guy shouldn't of passed but his description says ' messy mop of dirty blonde, almost brown hair. His hair seems to be darkening with age, matching his fellow clan me' and it looks very similar to naruto, facial structure, eye shape, colour and style. Only real difference is the outfit.
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Post by Dot » Wed Jun 16, 2021 2:29 pm

But he did, which means outliers are do happen, but if 'darkening with age' is going to fly I can do it for you :). The pic I have after this has brown hair, he just looks a little too old to use for a 14 year old :(.

Lets have a look at naruto:
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As you can see the hair color is different. IMg im using has a pale yellow, whereas narutos is fairly vibrant. Narutos eyes are blue, char im using has green eyes, and they're more rounded. Jaw line, once again, more rounded, and don't forget the lack of the whisker things. The style, i don't even know what you're talking about here.
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Post by TheLacarix » Wed Jun 16, 2021 5:34 pm

As I said, he shouldn't of got approved either. The current ruling is brown hair for Senju and the image has blonde hair and is clearly Naruto.

Those are the rules, as an apprentice you need to make yourself familiar with the rules and need to have a clearer understanding. They must be followed.

You'll need brown hair and a new image.
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Post by Ace Trainer » Wed Jun 16, 2021 5:52 pm

I'll let the image pass since it could be argued its an OC who's linework is based off of Naruto. Its pushing the envelope but I don't care enough about the popular media rule to push this one.

As far as the hair goes, it will have to change, however. The only exception would be in the event he doesn't have access to Mokuton. Otherwise, the gene that allows him to utilize Mokuton also causes him to have hair in shades of brown or black, or whatever the in-universe argument is.
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Post by Dot » Fri Jun 18, 2021 12:49 pm

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Post by Dot » Sat Jun 19, 2021 5:07 pm

Brown haired picture updated
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