Minor Country nin: Sugiyuki , Benjizen

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Minor Country nin: Sugiyuki , Benjizen

Post by Ottozeo » Thu May 19, 2022 1:09 am

Sugiyuki , Benjizen
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General Information Age: 25 (18)
Gender: Male
Height: 6’4
Weight: 260 lbs (91.6257 kg)
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Black hair, brown eyes, smooth but sharp face and jawline
  • Body: Muscular lean and slim body that has some bulk distributed across his muscle areas
  • Notable Features: x scar on left cheek and vertical cut over his right eye
Cool With:

Romance: Yes
Conflict: Yes
Perma death: maybe
Capture: Yes
Attack On Sight: Maybe
PVP: Absolutely

Clothing/Accessories:

Civilian attire:

He prefers comfort and practicality over looks. He is seen most of the time wearing a button down long sleeve shirt in light color variations such as blue, green, red, and yellow, with a combination of pants or shorts that come in the color of blue, black and gray. He wears sneakers or sandals with these. During the hot weather he rolls his sleeves up to past the elbow and when it is chilly he wears a wind break that has a crown wrapped around olive branches on the back. When in the village he wears his headband on his right arm.

During spring time when the weather is nice and warm, he likes to walk around in a plain white shirt, sometimes with other colored shirts, navy blue/ black pants, and a light-green, haramaki. In this outfit, a straw hat with a teal image of a flower growing out of a fallen tree on the left side of it.

Mission attire:

Benjizen wears elbow and knee pads under his uniform as well as chest armor. Over this he has a vest to give extra protection and to hold equipment. In addition he wears gloves that have the fingers caught off, made up of material used to grip knives, blades, and kunai. The pants he wears have two pocket sets in the back two in the front and one on each side. When out on missions he wears his headband on his head, sometimes turned to the side. He also wears silver shin, calf, and forearm guards.


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Personality: Benjizen can be a bit carefree. At times some may say aloof or hands off when it comes to things. However that is because of his outward attitude of, take the situation serious not yourself. In other words, act seriously with a level that requires it, but not stress about it so much you lose your hair or sleep about it. High places are a common place to find him, that or under a heavy shaded tree. A jokester on a mission, literally. He finds himself attempting to keep a cheerful mood and decent morale, believing mentally impacts a ninja just as much as their physical condition. So at times he makes jokes or puns….and shares them….even if they are terrible. Simple things are what he likes, but beyond that quietness and getting stronger. Some peace. A man with a growing ambition, practicing and getting better in his craft as a ninja always excites him and makes him happy.
  • General: Calm, goofy/jokeful, long fuse
  • Hopes/Dreams:Make his minor country renowned and respected as much as the great nations. Create his own village and make it flourish. Revenge.
  • Fears: Going too far
  • Combat Mentality:What’s necessary. Don’t waste. Don’t falter. Don’t abuse.

Battle Information Village: Konoha
Rank: Gennin (hasn't taken any exams)
  • Chakra Pool: 36
  • Endurance: 25
  • Control: 36
  • Strength: 16
  • Speed: 48
  • Willpower: 16
  • Power Rank: A / Jounin total: 160 P.R
Equipment: 5 kunai, 10 shuriken, 10m of wire , 5 exploding tags, 1 smoke bomb, 1 flash bang
Companions: (first one
Affinity/Specialization: Raiton,
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
Soseigan [will make]
Second Ability
Third Ability
Soseigan link: https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/vie ... &t=8344327[/url]
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
Ninjutsu: Advanced Channeling:
This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any Ninjutsu that is designed to be channeled, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method.
Fuuton Affinity:
Fuuton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an cutting effect.
Passive (Cutting)Show
Fuuton has a natural cutting property to it, that exists in all jutsu unless otherwise stated. This gives fuuton a unique opportunity to strike with additional power, and to act as a offensive defense. Regardless of their purpose fuuton jutsu passively cut with no distinct pattern at 1/2 the strength of the technique rounded down unless otherwise stated. This means if someone punched a 20 strength fuuton wall, they would get cuts on their hand applied with 10 strength. This also means that fuuton jutsu specifically designated to cut things can create devastating wound by essentially striking twice.
Raiton:
Raiton
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a shocking effect.
Passive (Shocking)Show
Raiton has the effect of shocking, which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area.

Additionally, the strength of the nervous effect on organic material from raiton jutsu is determined by the Strength stat range they fall into.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: Tingling, acute numbness.
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Loss of Sensation
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Localized Paralysis
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Diffuse Paralysis
Doton:
Doton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the doton affinity. Doton has a passive enduring effect.
Passive (Enduring)Show
Doton has a passive effect of Endurance, which means that it's power is retained throughout the entirety of the jutsu. All of a single doton jutsu retains the strength of the jutsu, even after the jutsu has been destroyed, and unlike other jutsu, doton does not fade when destroyed. This means that if a doton barrier with 25 strength is cut in half and falls to the ground, a part of that barrier could be picked up and carried as a hand held shield which would still have 25 strength, despite being a fractured part of a jutsu. This creates incredibly potent defenses, making doton a popular affinity among defensive fighters.

Taijutsu
Close Quarters Combat:
The fundamental skill of [Close Quarters Combat] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.
Deft Hands:
The fundamental skill of [Deft Hands] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.
Acrobatics:
The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Stealth:
The fundamental skill of [Stealth] describes the user’s proficiency in remaining silent, unseen and unnoticed as they go about tasks. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Perception:
The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Medicine:
The fundamental skill of [Medicine] describes the user’s mental and physical ability to perform traditional and mainstream medicinal practices. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Genjustu
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Jutsu
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*[Basic Jutsu • Transformation Technique]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After completing the needed handseals, the user of this technique will be able to alter their physical appearance to match that of another person. By consistently emitting chakra throughout their body, the user is able to keep their appearance adjusted at the cost of their Chakra Pool draining over time. As this technique is quite strenuous to uphold, experienced shinobi may see more clearly through this delusive disguise. This technique lasts for a number of posts equal to that of the user's (Chakra Pool/2).

*[Basic Jutsu • Act of Tree Climbing]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
By focusing chakra into his/her feet, the user is able to walk up trees and other vertical surfaces in a similar fashion to walking along the ground. This chakra amount must be precise, and although all shinobi learn this technique, the user's control stat will determine how well this jutsu can be executed. Users with low control 2 or lower will often fall during the use of this technique, while users with average control 3 or higher will be able to use this technique functionally. It lasts for a number of posts equal to the user's Chakra Pool.

*[Basic Jutsu • Act of Water Surface Walking]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
A variation of the Act of Tree Climbing technique, this jutsu requires the user to focus a precise and balanced amount of charka into the soles of his/her feet. By doing so, the user is able to walk on the surface of water as though it were a solid surface. Users with low control 2 or lower are much more likely to fall through the surface of the water, while users with average control 3 or higher will be able to use this technique functionally. It lasts for a number of posts equal to the user's Chakra Pool.

*[Basic Jutsu • Kai Release]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
A rather simple technique that allows the user to escape from a genjutsu. The user will form a single ram seal and focus to reset their chakra system to purge themselves of foreign chakra. The stat requirements for this technique can be found in the genjutsu rules.

*[Basic Jutsu • Change of Body Stance Technique]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After completing the necessary handseals, the user is able to quickly substitute his/her body with a nearby object that is at least 2/3rds his/her size, but no bigger than their body. This substitution allows the object to take the force of the attack that was meant for the user, additionally allowing the user to create distance between him/her and the opponent. The object used in this jutsu may not be objects that are imbued with chakra or controlled by it, and they may also only be single, solid objects within a 10 meter radius of the user. This technique may only be used a total of one time in a single thread, give or take how many times Shunshin no Jutsu has already been used.

*Fuuton • Wind Bullet
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the required hand seals, the user expels a basket ball sized ball of wind from their mouth. This ball of wind travels up to 10m at [Control] speed, and explodes with [Control] Strength on contact with solid matter or at the end of its range.

*Raiton • Lightning Armament
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After the correct hand seals are performed, the user coats themselves in a thick layer of lightning. This armour of lightning forms near instantly and requires [Control] Strength to break. During this time, the user's physical strikes apply the Raiton shocking effect.

*Raiton • Bright Bolt
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will extend two fingers toward a target. A bolt of lightning will jump up to 10 meters from their fingers at [Control] Speed and Strength.

*Raiton • Sky Spear
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will create a 1 meter long rod of lightning in their hand at [Control] Speed. They are then able to launch it at their Strength in a single direction. Upon contact the spear will explode with [Control] Strength. If it has not been launched by the end of the second post it will dissipate.

*Raiton • Conductor
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will coat a weapon they are holding in Raiton electricity for 5 posts. This causes the shock effect to be produced on any contact with a target, while also granting blunt weapons the ability to cut through skin to produce shallow wounds. This also works for thrown weapons, however if the projectile remains out of contact with the user for more than 2 posts the technique will dissipate early.

*Doton • Binding Formation
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling doton chakra into their foot the user will slam the ground within 5 meters of a target's feet with their heel, causing a formation of rock to shoot upwards at [Control] speed binding the target's feet at [Control] strength

*Doton • Dirt Cloud
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a 1 meter diameter ball of loose dirt in front of them, launching it off up to 10 meters away at [Control] strength and speed. Upon impact the ball of loose dirt breaks apart forming a vision-impairing cloud of dirt with a 5 meter radius.

*Doton • Wall
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a solid stone wall up to 5 meters away from them at [Control] speed. The wall has [Control] strength and is 3x3x1 meters large.

*Doton • Trip Fault
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will cause a 1/2 meter pot hole to appear at [Control] speed somewhere within 5 meters.

*Doton • Landmine
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will tap their foot on the ground charging a 25 meter radius around their foot with explosive chakra. This is armed at [Control] speed. For the next three posts if anyone other than the user steps on the area it will explode with at a [Control] Strength explosion.

*Doton • Tremors
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals and holding the last one, the user will stomp their foot on the ground, releasing their chakra in it and causing it to tremor violently for one post. The tremors radiate out from the user in a 25 meter radius, knocking down anyone standing on the ground without a stability taijutsu technique of a rank equal to [Control]. Lasts as long as the last seal is held, for up to 3 posts.

*Doton • Spike Shot
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a stone spike directly in front of them roughly 1.5 meter long and 1/2 meter in diameter at it's thickest point before launching the spike forward up to 25 meters away at [Control] strength and speed.

*Raiton • Galvanic Zone
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will seep Raiton chakra in an area around them with a 25m diameter. The user's Raiton will constrict and paralyze jutsu and people who enter it. They will lose -1 Speed per post for 2 posts or until the user ends the jutsu.

*Raiton • Shock Double
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary hand seals, the user will create a clone out of their Raiton chakra. This clone will have the users stats. It lasts for [Control/5] posts.

*Raiton • Voltaic Zone
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will seep Raiton chakra in an area around them with a 25m diameter. This will produce an electric current on the ground in this area visible as crackling lightning on the surface. Any other than the user who step into this zone will have the shocking effect applied and their legs will sustain [Control] Strength shocks. This current lasts 3 posts, while it ends immediately if the user leaves the area.

*Raiton • Jamming Pulse
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user emits a wave of electricity from their palm in a single direction. This is produced as a 10m wide line which extends 2m into the air and travels up to 25m from the user at [Control] Speed. The wave will apply the shocking effect and reduce the speed of any living thing it strikes by 3 Speed for 3 posts by electrically interfering with the brain's nervous signals.

*Raiton • Castle of Sky
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will first perform the correct hand seals before releasing a basketball sized orb of lightning 15m into the air. The orb will then cascade sheets of lightning down in the shape of a dome over the caster, with a 40m radius. This dome, apart from being exceptionally loud, forms a sort of protection against attacks. It comes into being at [Control] speed, and is able to redirect hits of up to [Control] strength in a downward direction. These sheets of lightning also serve as a visual obscurity. This technique lasts for up to 3 posts depending on the user's discretion.

*Raiton • Thousand Birds
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user of this technique will gather a concentrated amount of Raiton in their hand after they perform the hand seals for this technique. The lightning causes a sound similar to thousands of birds chirping over the top of each other while it is in existence. The user will then dash at full speed toward a target and attempt to thrust their hand into their target's body using their strength and momentum. The lightning then jumps from the user's arm into the opponent's body where it ravages the insides with a [Control] Strength surge of Raiton chakra.
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History
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Born in a far away piece of land within the Fire. In a section of the nation of Konoha, the environment of ‘easy’ was practically non-existent for Bejizen’s family. His father, an old retired shinobi from The village Hidden the Leaves, and his mother a simple craftswoman. The family spent their golden ages farming and doing simple things. With Bejizen’s fathers duty done, although the man was fourty when his son was born, he was pretty much set up for the rest of his days with his family. Money well saved, pension on its way steadily, and moving to a location where the cost of living was a lot cheaper and there was not much of a need to use money on. There was nothing to worry about. A hands-on type of man, the father spent his time taking care of their small piece of land and doing the simple things that provided for his family. Benjiken had an average youth, growing within a military history family. He was getting small lessons on being a ninja as soon as he could listen, and activities as soon as he could talk and call. These would slowly grow in progress in the years. His father doing his best to groom him for ninja service if he wished to. This went on till Benjiken was 10.

During his childhood days, Benjiken did not just study and worked. He played and was a child. One of his happy pastimes was making crafts with his mother to tell and traveling with her when she sold items. The family even took early trips to sell items further out of the land of Fire, even at times visiting other places like the Land of Ligtening or Stone. Benjiken took this time to ask many questions and enjoy the wisdom from his parents. He loved every aspect of the trips. The rain, the rocking of the wagon, the happy faces of products sold, and the skillful banter that his mother and father always had when dealing with customers or fellow sellers. For the most part, he just remembers this, not many other kids out where they lived. But the few he did see he made friends with and had a friendship with.

However, one day on their yearly trip. Their wagon was attacked. And even though his father was retired he was still a trained Shinobi. It wasn’t the first time this happened. It would not be the last. And his father would make them run away scared like always. However, this time it was not simple bandits with weapons. But Shinobi. Rogue Shinobi. As strong as Benjiken thought his dad was, it was tough for a ninja to fight a group of other well trained Shinobi. And so…he was killed. Then his mother, Benjiken taking scars on his body as he blew into a rage when he saw his body fell. Using the simple justus he had been able to learn and control easily during the tutelage of his father. The last thing he remembers was being in front of his mother when he felt a blade’s cold steel on his face.

He awoke later..he did not know how long. But there was only his father’s body in front well it had fallen. And his mother’s body, covering his.
On this day, Benjiken became an orphan and for the next few years he simply…existed. Cold, bitter, and angry. But…weak…ashamed….and…lonely. He had not returned home. The house…it brought back too many memories. Too much pain. It made the scars on his flesh tingle with pain…and rage. Then one day, a lady came. One that apparently was an old friend of his father. One that he had saved on a co op mission a long time ago. One that was a newbie at the time, but now was at the age of 20. Senju, Ridia. They spent the next 8 years together. Working as a team to do jobs. It was the only thing Benjiken could think of to make a living. And…to slate his ever growing need for more power.

He….would never let a day like that happen again.

Without nothing more to do he found himself going back to the land of Fire. In those years, being a ninja for the nation that his dad had once been a part of. And time...found that he was a senju, a close relative of one in fact. But...even with this name with no history or people on him now, potentially.

He still felt empty.

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Ryo: 0/0
Prestige Perks: 0/0
Stat Trainings: (0/75)
Last edited by Ottozeo on Tue Jun 14, 2022 10:23 pm, edited 14 times in total.

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Post by Taiga » Thu May 19, 2022 11:44 am

As a note, there is a lot of typos + broken BBCode. It'd be much easier to read if you could go through and clean it up.

While you are free to be as old as you want, he's quite old for a genin.

Start ryo isn't included in your profiles Ryo, so you can leave it 0/0

16(4D) + 12 (2C) = 28 points 15 stats x 4 = 60.

88 ryo total, but genin only receive 50.

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Post by Ottozeo » Fri May 20, 2022 6:10 pm

updated with feedback. hope its all correct and easier to read

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Post by Ottozeo » Fri May 20, 2022 6:11 pm

personal note:

Chakra Pool: The Chakra Pool Stat, usually shortened to Chakra, has a single purpose, in expressing how much chakra you're capable of putting out. The larger your chakra pool, the more jutsu you can use, and ultimately, the longer you can fight. If you use up all your chakra, you will die, but usually reaching 0 in combat means you pass out, as your body will conserve a tiny bit to keep you running.

Endurance The Endurance stat has two purposes. The first is to determine how many hits you can take before you can't take anymore. Characters with higher endurance stats can take more hits, and endure more damage. The second is to determine how much physical output you're capable of. Characters with higher endurance can use more taijutsu without damaging themselves.

Control: The Control stat has two purposes. The first determines the maximum strength of your ninjutsu. Your ninjutsu default at a Speed & Strength equal to your control stat (though you can choose to lower this to conserve energy). The second determines how efficiently you use your chakra, higher control means you expend less chakra doing when performing your techniques making your chakra pool last longer.

Strength: The Strength stat has a dual purpose. The first determines how powerful your strikes are. A character with high strength is able to exert immense physical power against the world through, and resisting, strikes. Strength and Endurance are closely related, and characters with high strength but low Endurance risk hurting themselves with their own raw power. The second determines how much damage your can resist. You would have a hard time cutting off the arm of someone with high strength, and an even harder time stopping them from continuing to fight if they have high Endurance along with it.

Speed: The Speed stat has a single purpose. It determines how quickly the individual is able to perform gross movements. This means running, jumping, punching, kicking, and so forth. The closer you are moving to your max speed, the less you are capable of doing, including the speed in which you can perform hand seals for ninjutsu.

Will Power: The Will Power stat, usually shortened to Will, has a dual purpose. The first determines your ability to exert and resist the hypnotic effect of genjutsu. Characters with high Will Power are not only able to cast stronger genjutsu, but resist them easily, where-as characters with low Will Power quickly fall to the effects of the genjutsu. The second determines your ability to persevere through mental effects, less Will Power means you are more susceptible to the effects of confusion, hypnosis, mind control, intimidation, and the like.

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Post by Zao » Thu May 26, 2022 10:52 pm

Rank - Should be A-rank (jounin equivalent for an MC)

Stats - At A-rank/Jounin you receive 160 stats at start up. Currently you have only used a 150.

Currently you have Mokuton and Kouton

Was this character's dad suppose to be a Senju? This is what I'm assuming. If not what village was he from?

Kouton would require that you are a current/previous shinobi of Iwa to have learned this.
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Post by Ottozeo » Thu Jun 02, 2022 4:28 pm

removed Mokuton and Suiton affinity and the assocated justus. Updated stats with regard to feedback

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Post by Kabu » Tue Jun 07, 2022 12:15 pm

You have some broken bold tags somewhere and for your image use this instead
[img]https://i.pinimg.com/564x/84/a9/28/84a928e7124c3dad84f7664cf2b5432c.jpg[/img]

For your abilities can you give them a description of some kind? Give us an idea of what they can actually do?
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Post by Kanade » Thu Jun 16, 2022 2:54 pm

Your pyramids are not scaled right:

for your pyramids they must be arranged as thus:
B
C-C
D-D-D-D

Or if you want to bypass the restrictions for 2 of the like kind on the bottom you must have:
5 D's and 5 C's for that particular element/concentration so it'd look like:

Infinite S's
Infinite A's
Infinite B's
C-C-C-C-C (at least 5 C jutsu)
D-D-D-D-D (at least 5 D jutsu)

Right now you have 4 D rank jutsu for both Doton and Raiton which means you can have:
2 C's and if you have 2 C's you can have
1 B
0 A's
0 S's
of each element. PM me if you have questions about the pyramid.
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Post by Valkier » Mon Jul 04, 2022 4:20 am

Hi Otto, how are you coming along with this? Will give it another week before timing out

I'd recommend moving your modification for the Soseigan here, combining the two since you should register the eye on this character directly.

What is the "Age: 25 (18)" referring to? I'm not sure why there's two ages
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Cool With:

Romance: Yes
Conflict: Yes
Perma death: maybe
Capture: Yes
Attack On Sight: Maybe
PVP: Absolutely
Just to make sure you're aware, we don't have these options built-in as rules I'm afraid. I don't see a problem if you want to keep this in your profile, but remember that other people aren't technically obliged to obey them outside of being polite.

Rank: Genin — this is still a village rank but from the read of your history, you're not part of Konoha as a ninja, but rather a Fire Country civilian. I'd change this field to say something like "A-rank" or "Civilian" or "N/A" etc. so it's clear.

Your pyramids are almost correct now - you just have one too many C-rank raiton techs. A quick correction to Chiaki's comment above, in order to have 2 B-rank Raiton techs you'd need 3 C-ranks and 4 D-ranks, whereas you currently have 2B, 4C, 4D. To fix it you either need to add another D-rank or lose one C-rank, that's all.

I currently count 114 ryo of jutsu and 177 stats. At A-rank you'd only start with 160 stats, but can buy up to 15 extra using your ryo allowance at 4ryo per stat. Starting ryo allowance at A-rank is 155. So, subtracting your jutsu cost leaves 41 ryo, so you could spend 40 on +10 stats to give you 170 total. Note I haven't accounted for you changing your jutsu due to the previous paragraph.

Lastly I notice you have lots of Taijutsu concentrations taken, but no jutsu that require them. This isn't a problem per say, but it's advised against - once taken, concentrations can be difficult (expensive) to get rid of and change, so I'd recommend you only take them as-and-when you actually need the skill. The concentration by itself serves no purpose except when used with jutsu. Taking the concentrations alone now only restricts your options in the future in case you decide to change the direction of your character's growth/skillset. But if you're certain, it's ok to keep them.
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Post by Valkier » Sun Jul 10, 2022 3:58 pm

Extension granted for another week on request
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Post by Kanade » Mon Jul 18, 2022 9:59 am

Week has elapsed, ant progress?
~~My characters~~
Iwagakure Jounin: Kanade Enkouten
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Kirigakure Genin: Achiyo
Heart Samurai: Kyudo-ite, Kasuri
Sunagakure Genin: Kouseki, Kagayaki
Sunagakure Jounin: Naegi, Aihachi

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Post by Valkier » Wed Aug 03, 2022 11:43 am

Timing for now, please let a mod know if you need the code sending to you for another attempt
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