[Denied][Character] Kikai,Ginmaru

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Theme songs
The nerd beneath the suit phpBB [video]	IRONMAN! phpBB [video]

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Kikai,Ginmaru
Ironman, Walking armor,

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General Information Age: 19
Gender: Male
Height: 170 cm
Weight: 55 kg
Physical Features:Gin is shorter then most and on the scrawniner side. He is soft faced and skinny yet muscular for his size. He has long blond hair kept in a pony tail and soft blue eyes. Blue eyes making him appear weak. Leaving most people shocked to see the person beneath the suit being so frail looking and short.
Clothing/Accessories:On a day to day basis he wears high brown boots and a slightly darker set of pants tided around his waist with a belt. He wears a white shirt tucked in his pants with a yellow vest over. Having his work googles around his neck in case he needs to do any emergency reparations.
Personality:
General: Gin is a nerd socially awkward and soft-spoken yet incredibly intelligent being able to create plans, special engineered armors and even find and repair issues that are discovered. He's rather self conscious about himself often caring to much about how he looks or acts for his own good. He is quite the nerd for chakra, engineering and powerful ninjas and wants to be exactly like them in his own little way. But this all changes as soon as he puts on his special suit of armor. He becomes confident,brave and more combative if insulted. He becomes less caring in his armor having no problem to hurt others for answers. He also likes to keep it by the books, simple and quick. This is combined with his voice modifier and commanding tone making him him seem like a completely different person.
Hopes/Dreams:Hopes to continue his work and create the best model for his armor. Gain confidence in himself and learn to not be self-conscious. Wants to be accepted for how he is and all his little quirks, And increase the standing of Iwagakure further,
Fears:Losing his research and forgetting his knowledge. Having his armor completely destroyed and unrepairable. Being shunned and outcast.
Combat Mentality:Gin uses his armor to overwhelm his enemies with Strength durability and superiour combat tactics at close range preferring to be heavily armored close range damage dealer. But can switch up with different suits and tactics. When outside his armor he prefers to quickly close the distance get a few strikes in the back off, while picking apart his opponents then adapt to use the best strategy.

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Battle Information Village:Iwagakure
Rank:Jounin

• Ninjutsu:25
• Taijutsu:25
• Genjutsu:10
• Stamina:25
• Control:40
• Strength:20
• Speed:15
• Instinct:40

Equipment:

V.U.L.T.U.R.EShow

Might is an metallic armor that he enhances through channeling metal chakra though allowing it to move.
The armor expels so much heat that it needs a cooling system by using water and letting steam seep out in the air through the armor. The armor stands tall at a height of 195 cm (6'5) and weights 300 kg (661 Ibs)
The armor can be disabled through destroying the tubes or cogs but only in the designated part so if a cog that moves the arm gets destroyed will prevent Gin from using that arm. These are located where his joints would normally and the tube being behind his head. The armor also has a voice modifier giving him a heavier and more industrial voice.
B-rank robot
Stats

• Durability:30
• Mobility:28
• Strength:30
• deftness:1

ModificationsShow

Modifications

V.U.L.T.U.R.E Vertical up liftng tactical utility rampage exo armor	V.U.L.T.U.R.EShow The Metallic Vulture flies phpBB [video]V.U.L.T.U.R.E Is a modification to his armor leading him to rename the suit. This allows him to fly up to 30 meters and has special 360 degree rotors allowing him to slash an equal to the robots Strength. These have a wingspan of 6 meters (19 ft 8 inches) And flies at a speed equal to the robots mobility. The wings are thin and sharp allowing for slashes and and easier flight. This takes up 2 modification slots.
Overdriver Core:	The Overdriver core allows the user to directly boost the armor at a cost of their own stats. Not only this but boost the armor an additional 4+stats with no drawback. This takes 4 mechanisims.
Armor plating:	The V.U.L.T.U.R.E is covered entirely in metal plates protecting the cogs and the tune, Made through kouton chakra As a result, these plates are capable of taking up to 45 strength worth of damage before breaking. This takes 6 mechanisms
Protective shields:	ShieldShow The armor has a two hidden shield in the arms that folds out and covers 2 meter in height and 2 meters wide, This has a defense of 35 strength This takes up 2 mechanism
Senbon blasters	Senbon blastersShow The suit is equipped with a special senbon launchers for use in close range over his wrists and are activated by squeezing a pressure plate on the hands, It fires out a spreed of 5 senbon spreading from each other at a range of 20 cm and a total range of 20 meters. These fly with a strength of 25 and speed of 25 and has a range of 20 meters This weapon is loaded with 100 senbon. This takes up 2 mechanism slot

Blasting tortoise armor/"Blastoise armor"Show

Sea sentinel emerges!
phpBB [video] Blastoise is an metallic armor that he enhances through channeling metal chakra though allowing it to move. Instead of letting heat of by shooting of steam through the armor it instead has a more advanced water coolant. This however requires more water to work and has a large water tank in the back for cooling and ammo for various attacks. The armor also has an air tank so the user will beb able to traverse water more easily. The armor is the largest and stands tall at a height of 220 cm (7'2ft) and weights 600 kg (1332 Ibs)
The armor can be disabled through destroying the tubes or cogs but only in the designated part so if a cog that moves the arm gets destroyed will prevent Gin from using that arm. These are located where his joints would normally and the tube being behind his head. The armor also has a voice modifier giving him a heavier and more industrial voice.
D-rank robot
Stats

• Durability:11
• Mobility:1
• Strength:1
• deftness:1

ModificationsShow

Modifications

Respirator:	The suit is equipped for water traversal which as a result has an respirator tied to an air tank allowing him to breath while submerged in water. And can even save him from breathing harmful gasses. This takes up 7 modification slots.
Water Cannon:	the suit is equipped with a water cannon that is able to both blast foes and propel himself in both water and air. Allowing for both traversal and combat. This cannon shots a stream of high pressure water at a strength and speed of 30. This takes up two mechanisms.
Armor plating:	Blastoise is covered entirely in metal plates protecting the cogs, tubes and tanks Made through kouton chakra As a result, these plates are capable of taking up to 35 strength worth of damage before breaking. This takes 6 mechanisms.
Propellers	The armor has propellers allowing for water traversal at equal to it's own mobility. The propellers are hidden in metal compartments in the armor. The propellers are hidden under the boots palm and on both sides of his shoulders. And in the center of his chest and back. This takes up 1 mechanism.
Water splitter:	The suit is equipped with a blades attached to the forearms that get covered by chakra designed to split open suiton based attacks. Allowing him to split and push out water currents negating damage. he can do this by putting his forearms together splitting the water then pushing out with his arms. He can only do this to suiton attack equal to the puppets strength. This takes up 1 mechanism slot.
Aquatic security:	By using the suits large water tank the puppet can create a shell of water that protects the user and is extra effective against water based attacks. This aura has a strength of 35. This takes up 4 mechanism slot.

NOT EARNED!!!Scorching armor/"Scorch"Show

"Scorch" is an metallic armor that he enhances through channeling metal chakra though allowing it to move.
The armor instead of letting heat by shooting of steam through the armor. Instead has a more advanced water coolant. This however requires more water to work and has a large water tank in the back as consequence. The armor is the smallest and stands at a height of 190 cm (6'3ft) and weights 250 kg (551 Ibs)
The armor can be disabled through destroying the tubes or cogs but only in the designated part so if a cog that moves the arm gets destroyed will prevent Gin from using that arm. These are located where his joints would normally and the tube being behind his head. The armor has a large heat source used to achieve the scorching effects to the weapons. The armor also has a voice modifier giving him a heavier and more industrial voice.
E-rank robot
Stats

• Durability:1
• Mobility:1
• Strength:1
• deftness:1

ModificationsShow

Modifications

Power source:	The suit is equipped with a large flaming source filled with fuel attached to the back. Takes up one modification slot.
Flame throwers:	The suit is equipped with a flame throwers attached to the palms allowing for deadly infernos to spread. The flames have a strength and speed of 35 and a range of 25 meters. And can cause third degree burns. The flames have the ignition effect and the fire spreads at 1/3 this means the flames spread at a speed of 12. This takes up two mechanisms.
Armor plating:	Scorch is covered entirely in metal plates protecting the cogs, tubes and tanks Made through kouton chakra As a result, these plates are capable of taking up to 35 strength worth of damage before breaking. This takes 5 mechanisms.
Combustion:	A devestating AOE attack. By overcharging the Power source it will combust in to a massive S-rank explosion around the user keeping the armor and user unharmed.

Wristblades:

Companions: (1/1)
Affinity: Kouton Doton

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Abilities and Concentrations

Abilities
First Ability Master of space and timeShow After discovering ninjas who could manipulate space and time. Gin set out to learn jikukan.(This allows him access to space-time ninjutus after gaining sufficient amount of points and doing a certain rank plotboard. Additionally, the user must have an Ninpou pyramid that supports 3 S-rank jutsu. This pyramid must be pure ninpou, meaning it cannot be built with any concentrations. In addition to the Ninpou pyramid, the user must have a combined 25 jutsu from other ninpou based concentrations (Sensory, Iijutsu, Fuuinjutsu, etc) Stat wise, the user must have an average of 36 between their Stamina, Control, and Ninjutsu stats.
Second Ability
Third Ability

Elemental Ninjutsu specialistShow

Ninjutsu: Elemental Specialist
Having devoted their lives to mastering the Elemental affinities, this shinobi is classified as an Elemental Ninjutsu Specialist. Elemental specialist are able to devote a total of 10 concentrations to elemental concentrations, unlike most people who are capped at 8. The user is not able to access any specializations that are marked for Ninjutsu Specialist, but instead, can now pick up concentrations marked for Elemental Specialists. Additionally, their two additional concentrations MUST be used for elements. They cannot use them for ninpou styles. However, they are only able to devote a max of 5 concentrations to Taijutsu, and a max of 5 concentrations to Genjutsu.[/center]

As a Ninjutsu Specialist, Gin is able to utilize Ninjutsu concentrations reserved for specialists, but cannot utilize non-elemental ninjutsu specializations. Additionally they are able to enter the God Tier [45+] on select stats.These stats are Ninjutsu, Speed, Control, Stamina.

Concentrations
Ninjutsu	Ninjutsu 6/6Show Doton Affinity A character with this concentration is able to utilize Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the doton affinity. Doton has a passive enduring effect. Passive (Enduring)Show Doton has a passive effect of Endurance, which means that it's power is retained throughout the entirety of the jutsu. All of a single doton jutsu retains the strength of the jutsu, even after the jutsu has been destroyed, and unlike other jutsu, doton does not fade when destroyed. This means that if a doton barrier with 25 strength is cut in half and falls to the ground, a part of that barrier could be picked up and carried as a hand held shield which would still have 25 strength, despite being a fractured part of a jutsu. This creates incredibly potent defenses, making doton a popular affinity among defensive fighters. Kouton Affinity A character with this concentration is able to utilize Kouton, and advanced form of Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Kouton affinity. Kouton has an resisting effect. Those without the Elemental Specialization cannot make custom Kouton jutsu. Passive (Resisting)Show Kouton has a resisting effect. This means that Kouton jutsu ignore the effects of other affinities, regardless of their nature. If a Kouton spear was thrown through a water shield, the spear would not be caught by the shield, nor would it be destroyed by Sankaton, or cut by Fuuton. This resisting effect does not apply to active effects by jutsu. This means a fuuton jutsu that cuts with 30 strength would still cut through a 20 strength kouton shield, but it would not be affected by the secondary cutting by Fuuton. This makes Kouton very effective for breaking through and penetrating defenses that opponents expect to protect them. It's hardy nature makes Kouton very popular amoung Doton users. Raiton Affinity A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a shocking effect. Passive (Shocking)Show Raiton has the effect of shocking, which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area. Additionally, the strength of the nervous effect on organic material from raiton jutsu is determined by the ninjutsu stat requirement. 1-10 Ninjutsu Requirement : Tingling, acute numbness 11-20 Ninjutsu Requirement: Loss of Sensation 21-35 Ninjutsu Requirement: Localized Paralysis 36+ Ninjutsu Requirement: Diffuse Paralysis Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu This user is able to utilize Storage Fuuinjutsu and Force Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Storage or Force Classification. Storage Fuuinjutsu can be used to store supplies, weapons, armor, or anything in between. Force Fuuinjutsu are used to release, counteract, and capture energy. Gin is able to use and manipulate metallic constructions by challenging Kouton chakra through them but it takes up a companion slot. These robots follow the same rules as puppetry
Taijutsu	Taijutsu 4/5Show The fundamental skill of [Projectile Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with weapons designed to attack from afar, such as bows, shuriken, senbon, launchers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Rigid Structure] describes the user’s ability to adeptly position and lock in their skeletal structure to efficiently absorb blows with minimal damage to their person. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Medicine] describes the user’s mental and physical ability to perform traditional and mainstream medicinal practices. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Power armor] indicates the user’s proficiency with heavy suits of armor with special mechanisms.
Genjutsu	Genjutsu 0/3Show NADA!!!

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Jutsu

NinjutsuShow

FuuinjutsuShow

D-rank

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*Fuuinjutsu • Tool Storage
D-Rank Storage Fuuinjutsu
After drawing a seal formula on a surface, appropriate in size to the weapon being sealed but no larger than 3x9 inches, the user forms the needed hand seals then may place as many of that singular object into the scroll as desired. When done, the user performs another set of hand seals and touches the seal closing it off as the seal condenses to the shape of the object stored. This seal is the only known sealing applications that allows depth storage and unfortunately this cannot be done at larger sizes. Tools can only be released at a maximum of 10 at a time, and are released with zero force.

*Fuuinjutsu • Explosive Tag
D-Rank Force Fuuinjutsu
After drawing an 2x5 inch seal formula on a surface the user forms the needed hand seals then touches the seal, arming it with their chakra. Upon being kai'd, the tag releases it's stored energy as a D-Rank Explosion of concussive force outward from itself.

*Fuuinjutsu • Tattoo
D-Rank Storage Fuuinjutsu
Developed for clandestine operations originally, instead of using ink and paper, the user draws a seal onto their body the size of the item they are sealing into their body. Upon doing a set of hand seals, the user then slides the item into the tattoo and performs a second seal, causing the seal to go dormant. When kai'd the seal releases the stored item. C-rank

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Kouton • Storage: Robot
C-Rank Fuuinjutsu
Prerequisite: 5 Control
By writing out the needed fuuinjutsu on a scroll, the user is able to seal robots into scrolls. Unlike other storage fuuin, this is able to store much more. However, whenever the robot is removed, the user is only able to connect their chakra waves to the robots and are unable to use any non-engineering jutsu for the rest of the post. robots can't be sealed this way in combat.

Fuuinjutsu • C-rank blast
C-Rank Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu
After drawing an 4x10 inch seal formula on a surface the user forms the needed hand seals then touches the seal, arming it with their chakra. Upon being kai'd, the tag releases it's stored energy as a C-Rank Explosion of concussive force outward from itself.

KoutonShow

D-rank

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Kouton • Wire Trap Technique
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After creating incrediably thin wires of Kouton, the Engineer is able to attach them to objects, then solidify pieces of the kouron someone is passing by, causing them to trip if they don’t notice the invisible wire.

Kouton • Robotic control Technique
D-Rank Ninjutsu
A fairly simple jutsu, this one uses the wave of chakra to carry the Engineer's voice to the robots, so it will sound as if the robot is talking when in reality it is the Engineer's words. If it is equipped with a sound vibrating device, the voice can also be changed to whatever the user wishes it to be.

Kouton • Wave Toggle Technique
D-Rank Ninjutsu
By releasing less chakra into his chakra wave, The robot is effectively able to 'turn off' some of his chakra strings, giving them no ability to pull or retract anything. In order to accommodate this, the wave will lengthen and shorten so they don't react to anything that they are attached to. The wave can be reactivated by putting a bit of chakra into them, letting the user use it again. This can also be used to attach wires to someone, and then deactivate the wires so they aren't able to feel the wires at all until they are needed. The wave can still be removed as if they were on, though.

Kouton • Robotic Transformation Technique
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Much like the original Transformation Jutsu, the Engineer does the needed handseals and creates kouton around their body to take on the appearance of their own body and their own body into the appearance of their robot. By consistently emitting kouton chakra throughout their body, the user is able to keep their appearance adjusted at the cost of their stamina draining over time. As this technique is quite strenuous to uphold, experienced shinobi may see more clearly through this delusive disguise. This technique lasts for a number of posts equal to that of the user's stamina.

Kouton • Change of Body Stance Technique
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After completing the necessary handseals, the user is able tto create a kouton chain that pulls the robot instantaneously. This pulling technique allows the object to take the force of the attack that was meant for the user, additionally allowing the user to create distance between him/her and the opponent. This technique may only be used a total of two (2) times in a single thread, counting towards the (2) teleportation limit. C-rank

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Kouton • Activate!
C-Rank Ninjutsu
The kouton Technique is a Ninjutsu technique used by Gin. By releasing chakra from their hands, Gin is able to release chakra wave from palms. These strings are able to move a max of X times 2 meters away, where X is equal to the Engineer’s control stat. This jutsu allows the Engineer to attach their chakra waves to inanimate, chakra-less objects at a speed of 10. While an inanimate object is being controlled, it’s treated as if it has a speed equal to the average of the Engineer’s taijutsu and control.

Kouton • Repair
C-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling the user is able to repair their robot or their modifications if destroyed. Taking 4 posts to fully repair a destroyed robot and taking 2 posts to fully repair modifications

Kouton • Multiple projectile creation
C-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling the jutsu, the user can create up to 10 projectiles out of metal. This includes kunai, senbon, shuriken, chakrams and other similar sized throwing weapons.

Kouton • Activate! Manual control mode
C-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling the jutsu, Gin is able to channel a small amount of his chakra to control and steer robots form the inside if it is available effectively turning the robots in to power armor. This is makes it so that Gin's stats is based of the robots but does not effect instinct,control,taijutsu,ninjutsu and genjutsu
B-rank

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Kouton • Automata
B-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling the user is able lend some of their chakra (maximum is equal to 1/3rd the user's stamina) to the robot allowing them to move and act on their own without needing to focus on using chakra waves to control the robots. The robot still follows commands from the Gin if commanded to do a specific task. The amount of posts they stay active I determined by the users (Ninjutsu+Control)/2

Kouton • Rumble dome
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the required hand seals, the user will cause metal to surround them in a dome like shape, becoming 3 meters high and 3 meters wide at 20 speed. This metal will guard the user with a strength of 20 for 4 posts.
A-rank

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Kouton • Kouton Legion
A-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling the user is able lend some of their chakra (maximum is equal to 1/3rd the user's stamina) Allowing multiple robots to move and act on their own without needing to focus on using chakra waves to control the robots. The robot still follows commands from the Gin if commanded to do a specific task. The amount of posts they stay active I determined by the users (Ninjutsu+Control)/2

RaitonShow

D-rank

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*Raiton • Stun Gun
D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
By Canneling the jutsu, the user will channel Raiton chakra to two of their fingers. They will then be able to fire up to three total bullet sized balls of concentrated lightning from their fingertips. These bullets will travel at 5 speed, but will not have any physical force. Instead, they will apply light electrical burns similar to a sun burn and will apply Raiton's shocking effect.

*Raiton • Bright Bolt
D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
By channeling the jutsu, the user will extend two fingers toward a target. A bolt of lightning will jump up to 10 meters from their fingers at a speed of 6, striking with a strength of 4.

*Raiton • Static Shroud
D-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals or by channeling the jutsu the user covers their body in a layer of visible static which crackles around them for 4 posts. Anything which comes within 6 inches of their body will be repelled with a force of 5 strength and have the Raiton Shocking effect applied.

Raiton • charge!
D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
This only works if he is in his power armor. By channeling the jutsu. Gin will focus Raiton chakra to speed up all the working parts. He can increases the robots mobility by 3 but it lowers his own control -3

Raiton • Shocking chain
D-ranked Raiton Jutsu
Prereq: 9 ninjutsu 9 control
After performing the correct hand seals or by channeling the jutsu. Gin will create a chain of lighting that he can throw at a range of 10 meters and at a speed of 8 and holds the enemy at a strength of 10 and applies the shocking effect.
C-rank

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*Raiton • Galvanic Zone
C-ranked Raiton Jutsu
By channeling jutsu, the user will seep Raiton chakra in an area around them with a 20m diameter. The user's Raiton techniques will travel 5 points faster when they travel through this zone for 3 posts. This technique ends the moment the user leaves this area. They also return to normal speed upon leaving the area. This technique does not apply the shocking effect.

*Raiton • Voltaic Zone
C-ranked Raiton Jutsu
By channeling the jutsu, the user will seep Raiton chakra in an area around them with a 20m diameter. This will produce an electric current on the ground in this area visible as crackling lightning on the surface. Any other than the user who step into this zone will have the shocking effect applied and their legs will sustain first degree electrical burns. This current lasts 3 posts, while it ends immediately if the user leaves the area.

*Raiton • Jamming Pulse
C-ranked Raiton Jutsu
By channeling the jutsu, the user emits a wave of electricity from their palm in a single direction. This is produced as a 10m wide line which extends 2m into the air and travels up to 25m from the user at 10 speed. The wave will apply the shocking effect and reduce the speed of any living thing it strikes by 5 points for 3 posts by electrically interfering with the brain's nervous signals. B-rank

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Raiton • The Shocker
B-ranked Raiton Jutsu
By channeling the jutsu, Gin focuses Raiton to his fists giving every hit the shocking effect. This technique is extremely disabling if hit multiple times. This lasts for 5 posts.

Raiton • Emperor lightning
B-ranked Raiton Jutsu
Prereq: 20 control
By channeling the jutsu, Gin focuses Raiton to his palms and fires electrical discharges at speed and strength of 20 with a max range of 30 meters. This jutsu applies the shocking effect. A-rank

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Raiton • Electric Crippler
A-ranked Raiton Jutsu
By channeling the jutsu, Gin channels Raiton chakra his legs and then sends out a wave of lighting around them at 45 meters through the ground paralyzing anyone other then the user standing on the ground. This is especially effective if standing on a metallic surface. This wave crawls on the ground at a speed 25.

TaijutsuShow

Iron giantShow

After sufficient practice with his armor Gin is able to utilize it's superior weight and strength to overwhelm and break apart his opponents [upper body] [Rigid structure] [Perception] [Power armor]

D-rank

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Power armor training
D-Rank Taijutsu discipline
After using and testing his suit multiple times Gin has no problem moving around his armor and doesn't drain him from using it over long periods of time.

Gutted like a fish
D-Rank Taijutsu maneuver
A fairly simple technique which involves Gin running up to his enemy then gut punching them Dropping their stamina with 1- if it lands properly.

Stomp!
D-Rank Taijutsu maneuver
Another simple technique with great effect when he sees an opportunity Gin will stomp his foot on an opponent's foot or hand breaking it if he has 5 more strength then his enemy

Human slingshot
D-Rank Taijutsu maneuver
If Gin is in range he will grab the opponent. If grabbed by the legs Gin will spin around them then release sending the enemy hurling trough the air. If grabbing someone by the chest Gin will pullback his arm then throw the enemy sending them flying. This attack requires Gin to have higher strength then the opponent

Metal tackle
D-Rank Taijutsu maneuver
In this attack Gin will charge at an opponent and tackle them. He will then lift them up and see a hard structure
either the ground or wall and smash them to the ground stunning them for 2 posts. This only works if Gin has higher strength then the enemy. C-rank

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Metal beat down!
Prerequisite: Metal tackle
C-rank Taijutsu maneuver
During his attack after he lifts them over his shoulder Gin will smash them to the ground then proceed to throw two double hammer-fists on the opponent beating them to the ground, This causes the opponent to suffers -3 stamina for 3 posts If they have 5 less strength then Gin.

ROBOT SMASH!
C-rank Taijutsu maneuver
By smashing his hands together rapidly. Gin is able to create a large crash noise with his armors gauntlets if his
Strength is higher then his opponents (Strength/Stamina)/2 at a 2.5 meter range stunning his opponents for 2 posts

Furious slam
C-rank Taijutsu maneuver
Prerequisite: Gutted like a fish
After punching them in the gut Gin will lift his enemy over his head and then slam them on the ground making them land on their back.
This causes the opponent to suffers minor fractures in the back If they have 5 less strength then Gin's armor.

Face masher
C-rank Taijutsu maneuver
Ín this technique if an opponent is close enough Gin can grab their opponent around the head then deliver a devastating knee to the face causing the opponent to suffers minor fractures in the skill If they have 5 less strength then Gin's armor.

Breaker of fists
C-rank Taijutsu maneuver
If Gin predicts an attack he can catch the attack with his hand and begin to violently squeeze with his hand until it whatever he is grabbing breaks. This causes the opponent to suffers minor fractures If they have 5 less strength then Gin' armor.
B-rank

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Choking Iron slam!
B-Ranked Taijutsu maneuver
In this technique when an enemy is close enough Gin will grab the opponent by the throat lift them up and then smash them in the ground causing trouble breathing and recovering -6 stamina if the opponent has 5 less strength then Yama. For 6 posts

Smasher of limbs
B-Ranked Taijutsu maneuver
Prereq:Breaker of fists
If Gin predicts an attack he can catch the attack with his hand and begin to violently squeeze with his hand until it whatever he is grabbing breaks. This causes the opponent to suffers major fractures If they have 5 less strength then Gin' armor.

Raiton • Paralyzing grab
B-Ranked Nintai maneuver
Prereq:Raiton • The Shocker
After channeling Raiton to his fist, Gin will move in and grab the opponent whether trough predicting the strike or by charging at them. When he has grabbed an enemy he will keep hold of them Shocking them constantly, If the opponent can't escape after 2 post of being grabbed. The enemy will be paralyzed for 4 posts. Only works if Gin has higher strength then his enemy.

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Gin was born during the rainy season of Iwagakure in an average family trying to get by his father Asumaru owned a store where he made and sold toys while his Mother Sakura sold clothes and made clothes. His father thought Gin how to make toys and accidentally sparked a passion for the boy. Gin would take scrapped, destroyed or discard parts and make new toys for himself and the store. Gin was incredibly smart and creative who somehow always found a way to adapt to any situation. He also developed an interesting passion for ninjas after hearing about their power in fighting and ability to manipulate element or minds to change the field of battle. So whenever he could he would buy books or scrolls and learn more about them. And one day he learned about the ninjas of sunagakure and their hidden yet intriguing skill to manipulate puppets, and immediately he thought about his toys someday maybe he can use them to the same extent. One day he requested his parents to allow him to go, seeing no harm in a child following his dreams and could potentially help the store by bringing fame by being a powerful ninja. When he joined the academy he learned that he had a hard time talking to other and was quite shy. Then when the physical trails came he realized he was a weak child and got bullied. But his ninjutsu compensated enough for him to advance to Genin. However not quoite enough to get him trough Chuunin. He was demoralized when he heard that he had quite the low chance of graduating. But then his mind came to work again and it did what it did best. It became creative and adapted. After spending hours at home creating a special frame made from kouton that surrounded his body, Gin was able to enhance his strength, speed and durability in his limbs. So when he came back he would dominate not because he was more skilled stronger or faster but outsmarted everyone. He would be rank up to Chuunin after his battle.

He would continue to work on his physical enhancer over the years learning more about kouton and channeling. He reached jounin before being able to fully create a suitable model.

It was an armor that had a helmet with a voice modifier and increased his height because of the working parts and metal. Making him appear and sound scarier in contrast to his soft voice and features. And dubbed his suit might armor. His first suit ever made he was able to make the suit move through a technique similar to sunagakures puppetry. He could even make them act on their own through channeling. He would dub this robot and himself and engineer of robots. While weak at the moment he is determined perfect his armor and make it something to be rivaled with...

[Mre-face]

Use 34 of my points to buy two puppets and upgrade one to B-rank and one to D-rank

[Kao]

• Next to username, please put in [url=https://www.narutosaigen.com/forums/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=2162597]Mre-face[/url]

• Not sure if this is intentional but his picture is in the middle of his personality

• The Village and Rank fields, and also the Affinity field are blank

• His stats add up to 205. Needs to be 200 if this is a jounin

• For your robot ability, I'm not sure why it's an ability. If it's similar to puppetry then all it should need is the concentration and rely on control

• Your conc table is broken. Taijutsu section is hidden in the ninjutsu spoiler

• Please expand your history regarding him graduating and being a genin. As of now it goes from he wasn't sure if he was going to graduate the academy and then suddenly he is a chuunin.

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• For all of your kouton jutsu that say it takes hand seals or channeling, you need to pick one. It can't be both, it either has to specify that it's channeled or that it takes hand seals. You also don't have advanced channeling to do these so if you want to channel techs, you need the advanced channeling concentration.

• You also added the "hand seals or channeling" to your raiton. Any time you edit archives, you need to remove the asterisk (*). Also, please choose if you want those techs to be channeled or use hand seals since it cannot say both.

• Kouton • Wave Trap Technique <-- What is this doing? Kouton isn't invisible and I'm not sure what you mean by chakra waves.

• Kouton • Robotic Transformation Technique <-- as written this is not a kouton tech, but ninpou. transformation techs are ninpou and would only be kouton if you're adding kouton bits to it

• Kouton • Change of Body Stance Technique <-- this is not kouton, but ninpou

• Raiton • Shocking chain <-- this needs a duration

• Raiton • The Shocker <-- this needs a duration

[Mre-face]

Fixed and added a S/T ability for him!

[Kao]

• Personality:[[/spoiler] <-- broken tag

• For your rank, since this is a village nin, please put Jounin

• Affinity: [Color=]Doton]/Color] <-- broken tag

• He can't have space/time. Even as a paid ability, he needs to meet the requirements to have it:

Additionally, the user must have an Ninpou pyramid that supports 3 S-rank jutsu. This pyramid must be pure ninpou, meaning it cannot be built with any concentrations.

In addition to the Ninpou pyramid, the user must have a combined 25 jutsu from other ninpou based concentrations (Sensory, Iijutsu, Fuuinjutsu, etc)

Stat wise, the user must have an average of 36 between their Stamina, Control, and Ninjutsu stats.

• Your power armor conc doesn't have a description

[Mre-face]

Fixed

[Nick]

Your power armor mechanism doesn't need to be a mechanism, you can save yourself a slot there.

Pure flight is going to take up more than one mechanism slot. As straight up flight with no downsides is an A rank jutsu minimum, you'd need... 3 mechanism slots, technically, but it's only barely there, so I'll let ya get away with 2.

Senbon are 1 point for 15, meaning your launcher that holds 100 should cost about 6 mechanism slots for the senbon alone, never mind the launcher itself. As launchers are kind of the sole purpose of puppets, I wouldn't really charge for that, but you've got to at least pay for the senbon to load it with, even if you take it out of your own equipment point total.

Respirators with no time limits, no chakra costs, and etc, are listed in the special weapon pricing at 75 points, which means 7-8 mechanisms.

Water splitter doesn't really make any sense, why does it peel apart suiton attacks? If it's just meant to be forearm blades, that's fine, but it doesn't make sense to include the thing abut suiton.

Your water aura thing also doesn't really make a lot of sense. Is it a shell of water around him? Is it only effective against fire based attacks?

[Niro]

2 days left

[Mre-face]

Fixing soon!

[Mre-face]

DENY CAUSE THIS SOME BULLLLLLLSHIT!!!

[Niro]

[Denied]