Kouyou Swarm

Aburame Jizo's Swarm

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Zao
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Kouyou Swarm

Post by Zao » Sun Oct 21, 2018 12:02 am

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Owner: Jizo Kouyou Swarm Description: The kikaichū are a species of small, beetle-like insects that were found by the Aburame clansman and utilized exclusively by the Aburame Jizo. Individually, the small beetles are generally between 10mm and 12mm with the queen being around 16mm and the squad leaders about 14mm on average.

Personality: The swarm, due to the training received from their host, is broken down in to military style structure with the queen insect being the overall leader with the remaining swarm broken down three squads each consisting of three teams, each team consisting of five synch worth of insects each totaling fifteen per squad. The leader of each time is slightly larger than the other beetles in its team and the squad leader is larger than the team leader. The remaining five synch worth are a type of personal security detail which protect the host, whom houses their queen, at all times. They receive orders from their host to the squad leader bugs who carry out the tasks assigned to them. Once synced with their host they will serve as obedient soldiers that are mentally linked to their host, able to communicate telepathically with one another in order to coordinate movements.

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Skills
Chakra Injection:
Upon activated, the portion of the swarm using the ability is able to inject the chakra directly within the opponent’s body upon successful contact, releasing forth a wave of chakra which spirals around and through the opponent’s body, assaulting their chakra system as well as the rest of their inner body dealing damage to the internal structures of the body rather than the typical external attacks leaving the outside of the target's body untouched for the most part.
  • 1-5 Synch: This has a painful effect on the muscles and blood vessels within the body, causing bruising at the touch in the area being affected.
  • 10 Synch: Can cause damage to the internal tissues of a target resulting in pain to the touch and deep bruising to the body in the area being affected.
  • 20 Synch: Causes the rupturing of blood vessels and the tearing of muscle tissues in the area being affected.
  • 30 Synch: Causes internal bleeding in internal organs and devastating the opponent’s muscles in the area being affected.
  • 40 Synch: Causes serious damage to internal organs and causing cracks to appear in bones within a three inch radius of the bugs attached to the target, medical ninjutsu required to repair the damage done.
  • 50 Synch: The wave of chakra is enough to shatter internal organs rendering them more or less a mangled mass of flesh within the body and if performed on a limb the muscle tissue and the bone will be fracture and torn into a multitude of pieces rending the limb unable to be used until medical treatment is rendered or they have some form of regeneration to deal with the injuries.
History:: A mutated breed of the well known support bug, the Shijikonchū, instead of allowing for the user to channel chakra through them these insects they have instead mutated to the point that they were able to take the chakra supplied to them from absorbing it from their host and use it to attack the target of their host. In a rather simple manner they developed the ability to inject the chakra directly within the opponent’s body upon successful contact, attacking their internals rather than their externals. This was a mutation that occurred soon after their host entered ANBU and trained under other Aburame ANBU members. Their unique method of attacking earned them and their host the nickname of the Phantom Killer, as those killed by the swarm had little or no damage done to the outside of their body, confusing many on how the target's had died until an autopsy was performed.
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Post by Niro » Tue Oct 23, 2018 10:06 am

[*] 10 Synch: Can cause widespread damage to the internal tissues of a target resulting in a lot of pain and damage to the body in the area being affected by the insects. <- 'lot of pain and damage' is really vague and I feel could be abused. Could you clarify it to something like deep bruises?
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Post by Zao » Tue Oct 23, 2018 10:16 am

Fixed
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Hyōryū -- Suna S-Rank / Dead / Used as Inheritance.

Xi - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Sato - A Rank, "The Cleaving Swordsman " / Inactive

Akujin - Konoha Genin, Art Ninjutsu Guy / Inactive

Toukai Touma - Kiri Genin / Inactive

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Post by Niro » Tue Oct 23, 2018 11:01 am

1/2
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Post by Yura » Thu Oct 25, 2018 7:47 am

[*] 10 Synch: Can cause damage to the internal tissues of a target resulting in pain to the tough and deep bruising to the body in the area being affected..

^ a little nitpicky, not taking away the 1/2, but it says "pain to the tough" and I'm not entirely sure what that means.

Also might as well update the owner link now that he's accepted: viewtopic.php?f=85&t=8339440
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Post by Zao » Thu Oct 25, 2018 10:32 am

Thanks, would have been silly to read that later. Lol

And link fixed. :)
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Hyōryū -- Suna S-Rank / Dead / Used as Inheritance.

Xi - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Sato - A Rank, "The Cleaving Swordsman " / Inactive

Akujin - Konoha Genin, Art Ninjutsu Guy / Inactive

Toukai Touma - Kiri Genin / Inactive

Arashiyama, Toushi - Kumo Bannin / Dead

Hitachiai - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Ji Ning - Iwa Genin / Inactive

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Post by Yura » Fri Oct 26, 2018 7:41 am

[Accepted]
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