[Accepted]Toukai Chisaki

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[Accepted]Toukai Chisaki

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Toukai Chisaki
General Information
Age: 16Gender: Female
Height:5'3"Weight: varies but generally 250lbs
Physical Features: Under normal conditions her body is unmarred by scars or blemishes. Her alibaster skin glows with an ethereal light through the mist filled streets of Kirigakure, giving her porcelain appearance a ghost like charm. Her magenta hair, styled in a drop fade crew cut, gives her a look that's half way between rebellious and militaristic. Her cat like eyes are an eerie yellow, creating a striking contrast from her pale complexion.

Despite being rather young, Chisaki's body matured at a young age. Due to the virus merging with her DNA, her body rapidly matured to it's peak form. Her body is in the best condition it could ever possibly hope to achieve from a genetic stand point, growing as if she'd had perfect conditions. So although she is merely 16 she has a fully developed figure and appears to be approximately 25. Her waist is lithe and narrow like that of a well practiced gymnast. Due to the uniqueness of her physiology, her weight is much higher than someone of her size would be. The incredibly dense biomass that makes up her body increases her weight without disrupting her visable form.
Clothing/Accessories: Due to the unique mutation of her virus, all of Chisaki's clothes are actually a part of her body, generated from the biomass that makes up her body. As such her clothing can't actually be removed, merely absorbed back into the body. The upside is that she can pretty much "wear" what ever she wants. Generally however she will be found wearing a black cropped jacket with a stiff oversized neck, the jacket cutting off a few inches over her belly button but having full sleeves. She'll generally wear tight pants that due to her unique physiology, are way more flexible and elastic than their normal counter parts. Rounding off the ensemble are a pair of black knee high boots.
Personality: As strange as it may seem Chisaki has a rather bright and cheery personality, if not somewhat disturbing. She's almost always happy whether it's while she's relaxing with friends or in a fight thinking about how to kill her opponent, that beautifully haunting smile never leaves her face. The only time she ever seems angry or upset is when someone interrupts her fun. Despite the militaristic nature of her clan, Chisaki isn't very reserved often speaking out of turn only to be disciplined for it later.

Amongst the things she likes are sugary sweets like candy or cake. While not necessary for her survival, she is still capable of eating, the non-usable biomass being broken down and ejected in a partical form from her body. She has a semi-abusive nature towards those she cares about, often being excessively hard on them and having a sadistic desire to hurt them, though gods forbid anyone else try to lay a hand on them. Despite this her treatment towards her enemies is much worse, usually trying to torture a target to death, while keeping them alive as long as possible to prolong their suffering.

As far as her hobbies go, she enjoys testing the limits of her viral powers, seeing if she can make people sick, transforming her limbs into strange and unusual shapes. Outside of her special training, Chisaki also trains her physical body like any other would. When not improving herself as a ninja, Chisaki is often found watching wildlife or taking naps in trees.
Battle Information Village: Kirigakure no Sato
Rank: Chuunin
  • Ninjutsu: 10
  • Taijutsu: 10
  • Genjutsu: 8
  • Stamina: 10
  • Control: 12
  • Strength: 10
  • Speed: 10
  • Instinct: 10
Equipment: Being able to transform her body into a whole arsenal of weaponry, Chisaki rarely uses equipment. What she does carry is a smalk pack of supplies(2 days of dried rations and water, as well as a small first aid kit with three 6' by 6" bandages, a tourniquet, and a pack of fifteen 1" x 3" bandages
Companions: (0/5)
Affinity: Suiton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Viral Corruption:
A perversion of the Toukai clan, Chisaki's virus has mutated into her very DNA and completely overtakes the place of the normal Virus ability. She has become a walking talking virus and can no longer be classified as human. Her appearance as one sees it, from her pretty pink hair to her wardrobe, is merely a construct of biomass. There are no actual bones or organs within her body. Instead, she has a virus core that produces chakra and viral organic material. The core is the size of a human heart and is easily mistaken for a valuable jewel as it looks like a large cut and polished ruby.

She is able to regenerate either by absorbing infected biomass that she has previously created or by consuming the living tissue of another person wherein the virus that makes up her body will infect then assimilate the new tissue. Chisaki being a creature made up of organic tissue without internal organs, is immune to most diseases, her own viral cells aggressive in attacking foriegn
material introduced into her body. In addition to this, due to the lack of any form of circulatory system, when poisoned, only the immediate area of exposure is affected and can be treated by ejecting the contaminated biomass. When her body is destroyed to a certain level (loss of 35-45% biomass), Chisaki can turn into a red slug like creature(if she loses all four limbs or half her body). Due to her ability to replace her biomass when it breaks down, the toukai clan's viral lifespan limit no longer applies to her as the virus isn't attacking her body anymore but instead is her body. If another Viral character attempts to assimilate Chisaki's biomass it becomes a battle of stamina+control/2 vs stamina+control/2.
Full TransformationShow
Chisaki's fully transformed state covers her entire body in a sleek chitinous black armor that has a strength that is equal to her control. Note this doesn't give her the strength to hit or attack past her strength stat, it's just how hard the armor is. The armor itself is lithe and narrow as if designed to improve high speed movement. The helmet though solid is like a one way mirror allowing her to see out but preventing others from seeing in.
BiomassShow
Biomass is the organic tissue that makes up Chisaki's body. Like the original virus' ability Chisaki is able to transform her body utilizing her biomass to make weapons and armour by channeling her chakra. When chakra has been channeled and concentrated the affected body part will glow red as small amounts of her biomass fuse with her chakra. While her structure and body build is fixed in design and appearance while fully transformed, the weapons on her limbs are capable of changing. All transformations and attack utilizing the virus fall under their own concentration titled Biomass Jutsu. Biomass Jutsu have a passive of mutation.
Mutation Passive:
The mutation passive of Biomass techniques are caused by the cancerous effects of Chisaki's virus in the human body. These mutations are generally temporary with the more severe ones requiring iijutsu to heal properly. The mutation only occurs if Chisaki manages to get her biomass into the target's body and Chisaki's control stat is higher than the target's stamina stat. Viral infections take 2 post to incubate before symptoms start to show, lasting for a number of post = to the difference between the targets stamina(immune system) and Chisaki's control.
  • 1-9 Ninjutsu Requirement: Fever.
  • 10-19 Ninjutsu Requirement: Fever, red skin and purple eyes that cause mildly distorted vision (drunken vision)
  • 20-24 Ninjutsu Requirement: Fever, red skin, purple eyes with mildly distorted vision, and small tumors on skin
  • 25-34 Ninjutsu Requirement: Fever, red skin, purple eyes with mildly distorted vision, large cancerous growths on skin
  • 35+ Ninjutsu Requirement: Fever, red skin, purple eyes with mildly distorted vision, cancerous growths spread to lungs affecting breathing
Second Ability
Mother of the Infected:
Once a person has died as the result of a biomass related attack or died while infected, the virus will merge with the corpse's still living tissue, reanimating it. The tissue must still be alive for infection to work as the virus doesn't grant life. There is an incubation period of 2 post before the zombie rises. As a plain infected zombie, the beast will attempt to attack and eat anyone that is still alive. It's stats will be that of a genin. The corpse will be feral and unable to utilize any genjutsu or ninjutsu. It will also indiscriminately attack anything else that isn't also a reanimated corpse, including Chisaki herself.

After killing and eating a certain number of people the creature will be able to evolve and mutate, having added to it's total amount of biomass. This generally equates to a rank up in stats and physical mutations. These wild zombies are all treated as Org NPC's of The Horde. Each zombie is able to spread the virus by biting or scratching to infect, then by killing their target to allow the virus to take over the body. Mutated zombies may be of any rank between D rank and S rank. They are generally assumed to have average stats for their rank. At S rank the zombies become self-aware and regain their intelligence. At this point they can act and think on their own and may or may not have memories from their time as human. As they are self-aware, Chisaki is unable to directly control any zombie that has reached S rank including those originally in her entourage, though she may take them as a companion instead.

If Chisaki infuses her chakra into the corpse as the virus reanimates it, it will rapidly mutate and reanimate the corpse over the span of 1 post. Zombies made in this manner develope an ability (mechanism) related to the concentrations they had in life. All zombies are connected by a hivemind that Chisaki can tap into, to influence nearby zombies. This Hivemind also allows her to directly control a number of zombies following the rules for puppetry. The zombies under her direct control are treated as her puppets.
Third Ability-------------
Concentrations
Ninjutsu~~~~~~
Taijutsu
Close Quarters Combat:
The fundamental skill of [Close Quarters Combat] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.
Acrobatics:
The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Corded Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Corded Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with long rope-like weapons such as chains and wire. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Genjutsu
Taste initiation:
This user has learn to use taste to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to use flavors to capture their targets in genjutsu.
Sight Initiation:
This user has learned to use visual cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to perform actions, or draw the eyes to something to capture their targets in a genjutsu.

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
Biomass JutsuShow

Fleshy Shackle
D-rank Ninjutsu
Doing a series of hand seals, the user focuses chakra into their hands, causing viral tissue to grow around whatever she touches with her palms. The biomass will develop like a lock around anything it’s formed around, and hold those things together with 5 strength, allowing it work like a shackle.

Biotrap
D-rank Ninjutsu
After forming the correct hand seals, Chisaki will place her hands on the ground, as organic tissue comes out of her hand and enters the ground. The next person who steps within a 2 meter radius of the trap after the user steps off of it (the user included) will trigger the Jutsu. Once the Jutsu is triggered the biomass will burst out of the ground at a speed of 5 and wrap around the target's feet, binding them to the ground with a strength of 5. The trap will remain active for 5 posts.

Chitin Tool Creation
D-rank Ninjutsu
After channeling her chakra into her hands Chisaki is able to create up to 10 of the same small weapon (senbon, kunai or shuriken) from converting her biomass into chitin.These tools have a strength of 5.

Biomass Vambrace
D-rank Ninjutsu
By channeling her chakra to one of her arms she is able to create a small bulwark made of biomass that will grow out of one of the user's arms at a speed of 4. The organic tissue is capable of safeguarding the user from wounds with a strength of 6. The bulwark is as long as his forearm, 6 inches wide and 2 inches thick.

Kitten's Claw
D-rank Ninjutsu
After channeling her chakra into one of her hands Chisaki's fingers will change into black blade-like chitin and extend 3 inches and sharpen to a point turning her hand into a claw. The claw last for three post and has a strength of 5.

Little Hammers
D-rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra into her one of her hands and making a fist, Chisaki's hand will swell turning black as her skin transforms into a chitinous shell. The hand will fill with high density biomass making it heavy weighing 25lbs, being the size of a gallon milk jug. The shell has a hardness/strength of 5. The hammer fist last for three post before reverting.

Terraform Micro Generator
D-rank Ninjutsu
After forming the proper handseals, Chisaki will point her left hand at a surface within 3 meters. Her hand will then shoot out disconnecting from her body and embed itself into the surface it hits as a new one grows in it's place. It digs in with a strength of 5. After planting itself it will begin to release spores that will cover every surface within a 3 meter by 3 meter by 3 meter area, with a 20 centimeters thick layer of viral biomass over the course of 2 post. The biomass slowly pulsates almost like it has a heart beat. The soft rubbery tissue is red and covered in a slimy clear mucus making it rather slippery.

Tendril Whip
D-rank Ninjutsu
After channeling her chakra into one of her arms, her fingers will sharpen into sharp points while the rest of her arm divides into 5 lengths of fleshy rope that's wound together up to her elbow into a fleshy rope. The arm is capable of stretching out an extra 3 meters from her elbow when lashed as well as unwinding or winding up at will much like a rope, able to switch between one length of tissue or five.

Color Shift
D-rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout her body, Chisaki will change her color to match her surroundings. This jutsu doesn't mimic shapes or patterns merely turning her entire body one solid color.

I See Youuuu
C-rank Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra to a specific point within a body of biomass, Chisaki is able to create an eye that will transfer what it sees to her. The eye is able to move through the biomass at a speed of 5. The eye has a durability of 5 strength.

It's All Me
C-rank Ninjutsu
After performing the proper seals Chisaki is able to merge with an existing source of biomass. Her core can travel through the biomass at speed/2. When exiting the biomass will automatically reform her body.


Devastator-Ground Spike
C-rank Ninjutsu
After channeling a large quantity of chakra to one of her fist, Chisaki will punch the ground sending biomass into the ground. The biomass will rapidly grow and expand beneath the ground, then burst through the ground in the form of 5- 3 meter spikes. The spikes will burst through the ground, after traveling beneath it at a speed of 10, within 10 meters of Chisaki and share a base that's 2 meters in diameter, each spike branching off is 1/2 a meter in diameter. The spikes rise with a speed of 10 and impact with a strength of 10.

Viral Rebirth
C-Rank Ninjutsu
By focusing on the viral tissue in a recently dead corpse, or after infecting a recently dead corpse with her biomass, Chisaki's virus will run rampant through the corpse body mutating the still living tissue and reanimating it. The virus will create a new mind for the body that's connected to Chisaki through a hive mind. This reanimation takes a post to complete.

Zombies made in this manner develope an ability (mechanism) related to the concentrations they had in life. The zombies made in this manner are under her direct control and are treated as her puppets and as such must be ranked up via a PB. The zombies made through this Jutsu will all start at C-Rank.
TaijutsuShow
Living Armament:
A style Chisaki personally devised to fully utilize the transformative abilities of her body. Consisting primarily of attacks and movements designed for use with the various transformations she has developed. With as varied as her transformations, there's a skill and technique to match the needs of any occasion.
Living ArmamentShow
Pouncing Tiger
D-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisites:
Kitten's Claws or higher ranked variant x2
Chisaki will charge her target at a full sprint to build speed and when she gets within 2 meters will pounce towards her target aiming to drive her claws into their chest.

Hammerfall
D-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisites:
Little Hammers or higher ranked variant x2
Chisaki will charge her target at a full sprint to build speed and when she gets within 2 meters will vault up into the air above her target swinging her arms up for extra lift. When she peaks over top her target she'll dive down straight towards the target fist first.

Whirlybird
D-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
In a feat that would be more or less impossible for a normal person, Chisaki rapidly twist her torso around 10 times, winding up. She can stay wound for up to 2 post before her biomass shift and recalibrates loosing the tension. When she gets near an enemy she'll release why e tension in her torso throwing her arms out wide hoping to hit the target with one of her hands.

Flesh Net
D-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisites:
Tendril Whip or higher ranked variant
Chisaki will throw her arm out letting the tendrils separate out around her target before yanking her arm back and rapidly winding the the tendrils together in an attempt to trap her target within her arm as it winds up and retracts.

Hook Shot
D-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisites:
Tendril Whip or higher ranked variant
Chisaki's arm will shoot forward up to 3 meters, attempting to penetrate the surface it impacts. If she's able to penetrate the five points if her hand will embed themselves by digging into the surrounding substance(rock/flesh). The arm will then suddenly retract pulling Chisaki if she doesn't hold her ground or if she has strength greater than her target, potentially pulling the target to her.

In and Out
D-rank Nintaijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: Blob Body

Taking her malleable body a step further, Chisaki is able to retract/absorb her limbs into her body. The limb reforms at a speed = to her control.

Blob Body
D-rank Nintaijutsu Discipline
Due to the lack of any type skeletal structure, Chisaki is able to squeeze her body through any opening large enough for her core to fit through.
GenjutsuShow
Apocalypse Fears:
Apocalypse Fears is set genjutsu centered around fear based techniques that could potentially make one think it's the end of the world.
Apocalypse FearsShow
All Eyes On You
D-rank Genjutsu
Prerequisites:
I See Youuuu and an area covered in biomass.
After charging the eye with extra chakra it will blink. If the target sees the eye blink, as it opens 99 other eyes will open at the same time. All the eyes will focus on the target and will appear to follow their movements. The eyes themselves will appear on any surface covered in biomass with in 10 meters of the original eye. These eyes are merely illusions and are unable to send visual information to Chisaki.

Corrupted Flesh
D-rank Ningenjutsu
Prerequisites:
area covered in biomass.
Once the area has been covered in biomass, the user will wave their hand towards the face of the target releasing a cloud of spores, if the target inhales the bloody tasting spores they will see 5 warped humanoid creatures claw their way out of the biomass tissue and slowly make their way towards the target. The creatures coloration and textures will seemingly match the biomass that they clawed out of, though no two mutants will look alike.


History
Historical Accounts(Semi-Graphic/Disturbing):
AcademyShow
Chisaki had a rather normal childhood before her right of passage. Her parents doted on her and she never lacked for attention whether it was play or training. While in public they were very militaristic and abhorred public displays of affection, in the home they were as loving and kind as any family. As for friends and interactions in class she was outgoing and friendly her bubbly personality making her likable despite the fact she acted like a tomboy.

As for her studies she was an overall mediocre student. The only place she seemed to be above average was in control of chakra. Outside of that everything else was about the same. Her only weak point was gen just but it wasn't so much lower than the normal that one would really consider it a weak spot.

Although she seemed to love animals she seemed to be incapable of being gentle with them unintentionally killing all of her pets. Despite this she truely did love animals always wanting to pet one when she saw one. When she was 6 she finally managed to not be excessive with her pet and managed to keep it alive with no injuries. That is until a slaver kicked it breaking it's neck all because the dog was in the way.

That was the fist time she ever wanted to intentionally hurt someone. It first she ran up and tried to hit the man but he kicked her back into a food stall. He had looked down at her and laughed a ridiculing sneer across his face. Using the training her parents had given her she'd snatched a kabob that had fallen from the vendor's food stall and threw it into the man's eye. The man fell screaming as he clutched his ruined eye. She charged and threw another into his other eye then repeatedly stabbed him as he fell, tears running down her face.

The incident was rather problematic for her parents. They we're proud of her killer instinct yet still compensation had to be given to the slavers. After paying them off to avoid a situation they attempted to console their daughter. As much as they tried she wouldn't cheer up nor would she let go of the dead animal.

For a whole week she moped and was depressed carrying around the body of the pet refusing to let go until its eye started moving. The eye popped out because of the maggots eating away the body. She screeched and freaked out dropping the animal's rotten corpse the tears flowing forth as she repeatedly babbled: but I took care of him. Her parents disposed of the body properly and tried to cheer her up. She never asked for another pet though her love for animals remained.

When she entered the academy she'd finally recovered her happy self once more smiling and laughing. But the laughter had changed. It was somewhat empty as if something had broken inside of her. The worse was when they conducted training spars. Her smile would trail from ear to ear, laughing manically as she tagged her target with senbon, as if remembering the slaver.

When the time came for her rite of passage, she became incredibly I'll much to her parents worry. As much as they loved their daughter it was the clan's way. And such they waited and hoped she'd get better. But the signs were there.

She got so sick she was unable to return to the third session of the academy. Her condition was clearly worsening and it was decided that she had to be quarantined. As the clans tradition for those unable to over come the virus, she was locked away. When they went to lock her up she became hysteric calling for her mother and father. She cried till there were no tear left to cry and still continued to sob.

After being locked away and quarantined it didn't take long for the virus to run it's course. Two days after being quarantined all signs of life were gone. When they went into check on her it was a horrendously bloody sight. She'd clearly vomited blood and black bile in one corner. The sick and lonely girl had drawn pictures on the walls with her own blood. The biggest picture was of her puppy. Near by was a drawing of her family all together.

Various doodles marked the walls. There was one picture that had been over looked as it was incredibly hard to not be with all the blood on the floor. The picture was of the man that killed her dog. Eyes stabbed with senbon. It was the last picture she'd drawn before vomiting one last mouthful of blood that had obscured a majority of the picture.

It was while they were prepping the body for cremation that the change occurred. In the span of a few days a miraculous change occurred in the morgue. At the end of it a young woman seemingly 25 or so came out. It'd been determined that the virus had mutated inside her and resulted in her apparent death and rapid maturation. It was awkward for the young girl at first one moment she's in the body of an 8 year old the next she's got the body of a fully matured woman.

Over the next few years Chisaki had to relearn how to move her body efficiently and thus had to start the academy all over. It took her some time to properly adapt to her new shape and size but she ended up gaining control of her functions rapidly. The only strange part was that her clan styled transformations seemed slightly different from the norm. At first no one paid it any mind until a full scale study was done to determine exactly what had happened to her.

It was a shocking discovery that almost ended her life. Her virus hadn't just mutated. She herself had become the virus. Between various inspections and test it was discovered she lacked any internal organs or bone structure. Worried that she might be a threat to Kiri she was once more quarantined. After determining that her power and potential was similar to that of a genma. Potentially catastrophic but at the same time a potential tool of village. It was decided they'd keep an eye on her as she developed. She successfully graduated and began to actively work for the village in her capacity as a shinobi.
GeninShow
Her time as a Genin was relatively short due to her militaristic upbringing and sadistic and bloodthirsty nature. Due to her unique physiology it wasn't uncommon for her to be assigned a C rank mission. When ever there was combat she'd relish the fight and while she didn't always kill her opponent they'd certainly be wishing they were dead instead.

The mission before her exam was her first B ranked mission. She and her team were supposed to be guarding a wealthy merchant. The site was some cabin out in the woods that was supposed to be a secret safe house. The merchant was claiming his competitors had hired missing ninjas to assassinate him. Chisaki had been in charge of directly guarding the merchant.

Despite the fact that the team leader had been unable to keep all the mn away from the cabin, their bodies were never found. The interior of the cabin had turned into a house of horrors as it was completely covered in biomass and looked like the internals of some large beast. The team leader burned the building to erase evidence of what had transpired. The merchant had been knocked out and hidden away throughout the night and had know knowledge of what had transpired merely being told the cabin had been burned down in the fight.

Chisaki herself seemed overly happy afterwards giddy even. When asked what happened to the man she merely giggled and handed him their headbands. As she went to leave the debrief she turned around and said: they were yummy. Disturbed by what he had seen and what she said, her team leader put in a request to be reassigned.

During her chuunin exam they discovered even the toukai clan wasnt safe from her viral abilities. Her mutated virus was able to infect even members of her own clan. While they had originally been unsure as to what would happen they were unprepared for what happeNeed next. Chisaki's viciousness and desire for blood while not overly unusual for a toukai, we're slightly excessive. As she toyed and played with her clan member he managed to get in a lucky hit that sliced off her arm.

Despite not truely being injured as she could just pick up the arm and reabsorb the biomass to heal, Chisaki became irrate. Before the young man had a chance to enjoy his slight score against her, she'd charged at him driving her claws into his chest. While deaths weren't uncommon per say in Kirigakure during chuunin exams, what happened after was unprecedented and disturbing. Within moments of breathing his last breath the boys body began to warp and mutate becoming an unholy abomination. As the boy finished changing, he'd kneel obediently before her. Chisaki had clapped and smiled saying good boy.

Despite protest from the boy's parents, research was done to see exactly what had happened to the boy after he died. They discovered the mutated beast was able to coat itself in flames without injury. It was determined this ability came from the boy's katon chakra nature he had in life. After determining the creatures limits, they had it put down and cremated as was the ways of the clan. Chisaki was forbidden from using her ability against other members of Kirigakure so as not to disgrace their fallen. Instead they began using slaves so her ability could be studied and examined until they finally understood it's limits and powers.

As she had controlled the battle from the start as she toyed with her opponent, she was given a pass and promotion to chuunin. A note was made that she got carried away and got injured as a result however her ability to think tactically was sufficient for her to promote. Despite her violent nature in combat, she served Kirigakure in a loyal manner and her care for her family and friends was seen as something the village could exploit should she ever try to turn rogue. However, since the one incident she has not had any problems nor done anything that may be seen as a threat to the village. As such the clan merely keeps an eye on her as she developed and grows.
Last edited by Diatenshi on Mon Dec 24, 2018 5:56 am, edited 16 times in total.
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Will of Fire-
Senju Masaru

Genin
[color=orange]


Light of Hope-
Awai Akihiro

Genin
[color=red]


Viral Menace-
Toukai Chisaki

Chuunin
[color=#ff0080]


Yin Yang Divided
Naegi Waruhito

Genin
[color=#8b14f9]


King of Pirates-
Ryoshi Kaisui

B-Rank MN
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Toukai Chisaki

Post by Varian » Mon Nov 19, 2018 7:28 am

Biomass' infection - are you infecting people via ninjutsu as well as the weapons she creates on her body? I ask because of the Terraform Microgenerator releasing the infection in the form of spores.

Convergence of the infected should be it's own ability with it's own table on how many stats you have to distribute amongst the reanimated infected, I don't think you should be able to use the stats they had in life due to the nature of your reanimation.

Chitin Tool Creation - Should specify that it can only create 10 small weapons of one type shouldn't be able to mix match senbon, kunai and shuriken in just the one cast.

I See Youuuu - Needs a strength stat for it's durability in case someone wants to destroy it, this would also mean speed would work like a normal jutsu.

Blob Body - This seems to me like it should be Nintai because you are manipulating your E-Body along with contorting yourself through a fine space.

In and Out - Same as above
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Post by Diatenshi » Mon Nov 19, 2018 8:37 pm

Modified the jutsu as suggested.

Yes breathing in spore would result in infection. Those spores are made from her biomass. As the passive states infection occurs once her biomass has entered the body. This means anyone that walks into the spore cloud would suffer the passive if they inhale. Mind you most people won't willingly walk into a red haze/mist and just breathe it in.

Convergence of the infected has been renamed mother of the infected and has been made it's own ability however it's been dramatically modified. The part of it that Chisaki can control, has been clarified further as far as where the stats come from.
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Will of Fire-
Senju Masaru

Genin
[color=orange]


Light of Hope-
Awai Akihiro

Genin
[color=red]


Viral Menace-
Toukai Chisaki

Chuunin
[color=#ff0080]


Yin Yang Divided
Naegi Waruhito

Genin
[color=#8b14f9]


King of Pirates-
Ryoshi Kaisui

B-Rank MN
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Toukai Chisaki

Post by Kao » Sun Nov 25, 2018 2:14 am

• Your second ability needs to be better defined when it comes to this part:
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After killing and eating a certain number of people the creature will be able to evolve and mutate, having added to it's total amount of biomass. This generally equates to a rank up in stats and physical mutations.


"A certain number of people" is really vague, so it needs a specified number of how many people it has to eat in order to rank up. Also as the zombie puppets grow/rank up, it should need to eat more people per rank up.
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Post by Diatenshi » Tue Nov 27, 2018 6:45 am

I left it vague on purpose as the regular zombies will be NPCs, and thered be no way to keep track for them. If a random npc zombie were to evolve during a thread it'd be at the discretion of the rprs. As for Chisaki's personal entourage of zombies, Chisaki herself would have to rank them up, as they'd count as her puppets, through a PB. I typed up a creation Jutsu for them as well. If she were to take over a zombie in the "wild" shed have to do a PB for it so there's no getting A rank puppets for nothing.
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Post by Varian » Thu Dec 20, 2018 12:49 pm

Awaiting changes discussed with Nick.
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Post by Diatenshi » Thu Dec 20, 2018 8:29 pm

Changes made

1. Wild zombies are org NPC's of The Horde
2. Clarified S-Rank Sentience and zombie conversion so as not to go into the realm of soul or life genmas
3. S-Rank zombies are either NPCs or Companions cannot be puppets (clarified)
4. Puppets under the direct control of Chisaki count as puppets (clarified)
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Post by Nick » Sun Dec 23, 2018 1:31 pm

Biomass Vambrace << Gimme a size.

Terraform Micro Generator << Can you use inches or cm please?

Tendril Whip << Description is a little confusing. By 5 lengths do you mean something like... this? Except that it connects her shoulder to her fist? If not, I'm not sure what you mean by five lengths, and either way, I'm not sure what you mean by switching between 1-5 lengths.

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All your taijutsu and nintaijutsu need to follow the full thing of "D-Rank Taijutsu Stance" or etc, based on their rank and type.

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Post by Diatenshi » Mon Dec 24, 2018 5:58 am

For the whip fist, picture a large rope unwinding. It'll have at least 3-4 lengths of rope that were wrapped together to form the larger length of rope. Attempted to clarify that better.


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Post by Sanjuro » Tue Jan 01, 2019 9:08 pm

Tendril whip is still kind of unclear. Is the entire length 3 meters or is each 'section' 3 meters? Do you want it so that at all five lengths it is 15 meters? Not really sure what you're aiming for here.
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Post by Diatenshi » Tue Jan 01, 2019 10:47 pm

Basically from the elbow down her arm turns into a rope wound up of five sections When she whips her arm it stretches out up to 3 meters. She's able to unwind the rope and rewind it at will.
Visual: take 5 shoe strings and twist them together. Her arm below the elbow is like that. Able to unwind int the 5 shoe strings or wind into one cord at will. The arm is able to stretch like rubber when whipped kind of like those sticky hand toys you get out of the vending machine.
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Post by Sanjuro » Sun Jan 06, 2019 5:47 am

Assuming everything is fine with the ability changes, 1/2.
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Post by Kao » Mon Jan 21, 2019 12:56 am

Thank you for your patience.

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