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Furutsutsuri Senju
Furu,TsuTsu, Ri, Ri-Ri

[Nindo]”I never give up”

General Information Age:11
Gender: Male
Height: 5'1
Weight: 95 LBS
Physical Features: Furu has green eyes with brown hair. His skin pigmentation isn't quite white, but not dark either, resulting in a lighter skin complexion than caramel,but darker than vanilla. Tsutsu is somewhat built, and tall for his age. Ri wears a samurai gear simular to Hashirama's, but in a younger version. The crest of his clan dormant onhis back and on the outward side of the bicep. The color similar to hashirama's as well, except the red was black.[/b]
  • Face/head: Tsutsu has fish lips and a nose like a strawberry, the curve not being too huge. His eyebrows aren't think nor thin. His eyes oval, sideways, and his eyelashes were surprisingly long and curled upwards. Ri’s face was clean and smooth. The ears being not too big,nor round.
  • Body: His body was made of muscle rather than fat, however, he wasn't excessively muscular in appearance.
  • Notable Features: He has the Konohagakure symbol tattooed underneath his left eye, and has no forehead protecter. ----
Clothing/Accessories: Samurai Gear. Shinobi sandals that adds half a foot to his height.
Picture:N/A
Personality: Although vulgar, and Cynical at times- he is kind and sympathetic. Although when caught in moments and acts of love, Furu freezes and is unresponsive. That is, when the feeling is shared, or comes from a place of meaning and generosity. Furu is often willing to help out the less fortunate. He developed a no self conscious, meaning he doesnt feel sympathy towards those that he doesnt know or doesnt care for, however will help if guilt is used or in life threatening situations. So in other words his sympathy is towards the weak, his friends.Tsu will display sociopathic reactions, with curiosity best ruling his instincts.This leads him into situations that don't end well, withholding information if the situation arises, like finding the clues to the base of operations of a secret organization just to look through it first. The mystery behind his parents leads him to further develop a need for the curiosity. For example, finding a serial killer only to face him on his own because he wants to know how they would do it. In a nutshell, he is complex. Often keeping to himself one day, and happy the other. He suffers from a sort of depression, and bi polar issues due to his past, and has a sense of abandonment issues.
  • Hopes/Dreams:To be loved ans recognized by his kin folk
  • Fears:Loss of close ones. Being wrong.
  • Combat Mentality:Mostly meant to be mid-long range. Utilizing his skipper step upon analyzing the enemies strengths and weaknesses. What he lacks in strength and speed, he makes up for in stamina and ninjutsu techniques. His taijutsu is meant more for defensive coordination and dodges. Utilizing taijutsu solely in combinations with his ninjutsu, which uses techniques that hinder opponents and trouble there movements. He uses his fuuinjutsu in combination with his attacks as well when the time calls upon it. In a nutshell, he wants to be the last one standing by all means; Using keen observation with acrobatic maneuvers. He is Also a ninjutsu specialist ------------

Battle Information Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
  • Ninjutsu:10(50)
  • Taijutsu:5
  • Genjutsu:1
  • Stamina:10(50)
  • Control:4(50)
  • Strength:2(50)
  • Speed: 3
  • Instinct:5
Equipment: 15 explosive tags, Gauntlets with three spikes in between the knuckles, 15m wire, 15 kunai's, 15 senbon which are all within his pouch on the right hip at the waist
Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity:
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
Senju:
Mokuton [Wood Release] is a unique elemental affinity exclusive to the Senju clan. By mixing their natural affinities for Doton [Earth Release] and Suiton [Water Release] the clan is able to create strong, durable, living wood. As Mokuton is living, it has a growth effect.
Passive (Growth)Show
Growth:
A truly unique element, Moktuon users create life in the form of trees. Even after their jutsu is done, these trees continue to live and grow aided by the high density of chakra in them. This gives Mokuton the growth effect, which uses the residual chakra in mokuton jutsu to rapidly speed up the natural growth process for a limited time after creation, causing the jutsu to gain +2 strength per post for an amount of posts after creation depending on the rank of the jutsu.
  • E-Rank: 2 posts
  • D-Rank: 3 posts
  • C-Rank: 4 posts
  • B-Rank: 5 posts
  • A-Rank: 6 posts
  • S-Rank: 7 posts

Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu:
Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu
This user is able to utilize Storage Fuuinjutsu and Force Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Storage or Force Classification. Storage Fuuinjutsu can be used to store supplies, weapons, armor, or anything in between. Force Fuuinjutsu are used to release, counteract, and capture energy.
Charge Fuuinjutsu:
Charge Fuuinjutsu
This user is able to utilize Charge Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Charge Classification. Charge Fuuinjutsu are used to create jutsu like effects out of seals.

Taijutsu
Perception:
The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Acrobatics:
The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Genjutsu[Place them here]

Jutsu
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Mokuton • Needle
E-Rank Ninjutsu
By performing the correct hand seals, the user of causes the fingers to become needles of wood, but their palms remaining flesh. The user's strength is at 5 for the needles.

~Mokuton • Wood Weapon Creation
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a set of up to 10 wooden basic projectiles, such as kunai, shuriken, or senbon, in their hand. These tools have a strength of 5.
~Mokuton • Bulwark
D-Rank Ninjutsu
By performing the correct hand seals, the user of causes several waves of wood to grow out of their arm, forming a 5x3 foot, 4 inch bulwark of wood to form on their arm. The bulwark has a strength of 6 and forms at a speed of 4.
~Mokuton • Wall of Eden
D-Rank Ninjutsu
By performing the correct hand seals, the user of causes several waves of vines to grow out of the earth, forming a 6x6 feet wall around himself. The wall has a strength of 4 and forms at a speed of 6.

~Mokuton • Sprouting Roots
D-Rank Ninjutsu
By performing the correct hand seals, the user will cause a root to sprout out of the ground at their feet before lashing out at a target's feet up to 7 meters away at a speed of 6. If successful, the root will pull their feet out from under them at a strength of 4 and attempt to rapidly drag them back towards the user. If the targets strength is higher, the technique will fail.

~Mokuton • Sky Mallet
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user focuses on an already existing source of their Mokuton, causing a wooden mallet with a meter diameter to grow out of it and move at a speed of 8, up to 6 meters away from the source into a target. If it successfully hits a target, it does so with 12 strength.

~Mokuton • Roots
C-Rank Ninjutsu
By performing the correct hand seals, the user will cause a root to sprout out of the ground at their feet before lashing out at a target's feet up to 15 meters away at a speed of 12. If successful, the root will pull their feet out from under them at a strength of 8 and attempt to rapidly drag them back towards the user. If the targets strength is higher, the technique will fail.

*Fuuinjutsu • Air Seal
D-Rank Charge Fuuinjutsu
A truly unique move in that it can be used alongside other Fuuinjutsu, by channeling into their finger as they draw in the air directly in front of them, the user releases raw chakra the lingers for a small amount of time, allowing it to be used as a seal formula. This technique consumes chakra equal to the cost of the technique.

*Fuuinjutsu • Explosive Tag
D-Rank Force Fuuinjutsu
After drawing an 2x5 inch seal formula on a surface the user forms the needed hand seals then touches the seal, arming it with their chakra. Upon being kai'd, the tag releases it's stored energy as a D-Rank Explosion of concussive force outward from itself.


*Fuuinjutsu • Four Seal Barrier Formation
C-Rank Charge Fuuinjutsu
After drawing 4 approximately 2x5 inch surfaces, the user forms a set of hand seals arming the tags. When finished, they will place the tags into a square formation up to 15x15 meters in size. After setting the seals in their desired locations, the user may kai any one of the seals at anytime to activate the jutsu, causing a barrier the size of the formation to pop up around the area in-between at a speed of 8. The barrier has a strength of 12
TaijutsuShow
Skitter Step:
Skitter Step
The Skitter Step is a style that relies heavily on the user's senses. The style itself is a mesh of quick, fast, and wild punches, kicks, and jumps. Due to the user altering their senses, every bit of movement is heard and, since they can start to respond to things instinctively, they can respond to things that normally wouldn't have been able to be heard/seen/done. In addition to the heightened senses, users are normally in a "paranoid" state, where they start to suspect things that aren't always there.

If overused, the style can lead to paranoia in individuals, along with constant fidgeting, making experts in the style quite well known for these activities.
  • Requires: [Acrobatics] and [Perception]
  • Requires *[Skitter Step • Senses Open] prerequisite to learn any other jutsu.
*[Skitter Step • Stop]
E-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
Prerequisite: Any form of Senses Open used.
The user will make a fist with their right hand, and place it against their palm with their left hand, against their chest. This calms the users senses and returns them to a centered state.

*[Skitter Step • Back Jab]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: A form of Senses Open used.
After using any form of "Senses Open" when the user hears motions behind them, they'll instinctively kick a foot back behind them to strike whatever the source of the sound was.

*[Skitter Step • Reject]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: A form of Senses Open used.
The counter discipline to Accept. When faced with an extended limb, may it be an arm or leg, a master of this discipline will always bat at the extended limb with full force, typically aiming for the joint of the limb in order to cause it to collapse.

*[Skitter Step • Senses Open]
C-Ranked Taijutsu Stance
The main jutsu of the Skitter Step, Senses Open does exactly what the name states. The user takes a moment to focus their bodies, then releases it. While in this stance, the users sensory input is increased, allowing them to receive more information quickly. This causes a +2 in Taijutsu, and a +4 in speed, but a -3 in Ninjutsu and -3 in Control. This stance will remain in effect until deactivated by [Stop]. Practioners of this technique will find themselves fidgetting and constantly moving, which can make it difficult for them to use this style while on stealth missions.


GenjutsuShow
Place Genjutsu in here

History
Historical AccountsShow
When Furūtsutsurī was born, his parents had been sent out for a secret opp mission, leading him to be taken care of by his Grandmother until she passed away when he was five, which devastated the boy greatly as he was then transferred to a foster home until his parents returned from said mission. Furu grew infatuated with not only plants, but also fuuinjutsu, after hearing stories of how well his father was adept at it. He practiced and studied from the day his grandmother passed away.

Born with the Senjus wood release, Furu showed great promise in Ninjutsu techniques, mastering d ranked and c ranked techniques by the time he graduated the academy and implemented his fuuinjutsu techniques which complimented him, defeating many adversaries in higher ranks. However, one day, he encountered a highly effective taijutsu user whom defeated him. This drove Furu to try and learn a taijutsu technique in order to turn the odds, leading him to learn the Skitter Step style after reading up on the style.

When Furu turned 11(or academy graduate grade) he graduated the academy,and only a year later did he find out his parents died on the mission. Furu was unphased by the news as he never really knew who they were, and being raised in a household where his foster parents were constantly bickering and fighting, in drunken states, made Furu become extremely vulgar and sociopathic by nature. After graduating the academy, Furu got his own place and now sustains himself.
He follows the Will of Fire to the end, at least for now.
Last edited by TheOneAndOnly on Thu Dec 27, 2018 5:22 pm, edited 14 times in total.

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Post by Diatenshi » Sun Dec 16, 2018 1:55 am

Your ability table seems off and you have a few floating brackets in you concentrations
Tools of WarShow
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King Of Pirates

Ryoshi Kaisui

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Kumogakure

[color=#7FFFD4][/color]
Wintery Hunter

Aisu Tenshi

Chuunin
Kirigakure

[color=#15AABC][/color]
Burning Will of Fire

Senju Masaru

Genin
Konohagakure

[color=orange][/color]
Doctor

Shoutohiro Toshi

C-Rank
Whirlpool Country

[color=#008b5e][/color]

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Post by TheOneAndOnly » Mon Dec 17, 2018 6:52 pm

Edited

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Post by Diatenshi » Wed Dec 19, 2018 6:58 am

What j meant by the ability table being off is the table shows two columns but you have all your text squeezed into the first vs utilizing the second column
Tools of WarShow
Tools of War
King Of Pirates

Ryoshi Kaisui

C-Rank MN
Kumogakure

[color=#7FFFD4][/color]
Wintery Hunter

Aisu Tenshi

Chuunin
Kirigakure

[color=#15AABC][/color]
Burning Will of Fire

Senju Masaru

Genin
Konohagakure

[color=orange][/color]
Doctor

Shoutohiro Toshi

C-Rank
Whirlpool Country

[color=#008b5e][/color]

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Post by TheOneAndOnly » Thu Dec 20, 2018 12:52 am

I really dont understand; from an ignorant perspective, I view the app ok; Can you please elaborate?

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Post by Varian » Thu Dec 20, 2018 12:55 pm

You get 20 points worth of starting equipment I would recommend using even if it is just for throwables like Kunai or Shuriken.
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Post by TheOneAndOnly » Thu Dec 20, 2018 5:25 pm

Ok ill work on that later today. I was under the assumption that those were for jutsus/weapons. Should really look at the information regarding these things and tweak it a bit so others know.

Edit:
Im stupid. V.V i seen the jutsu points and the equipment points. I gottem mixed up. Im redoing now

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Post by TheOneAndOnly » Sat Dec 22, 2018 8:23 am

Done

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Post by Yura » Sat Dec 22, 2018 9:33 pm

I'm only counting 39 stat points. Genin get 40 so you can have one more
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Post by TheOneAndOnly » Sat Dec 22, 2018 11:15 pm

Done

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Post by Lord-High-Lord of the Frogs » Sun Dec 23, 2018 1:38 pm

Clothing/Accessories << Can you elaborate on "Samurai gear"? Does he wear a full set of samurai armor at all times? Or does he wear the more formal clothing like this?

Charge style fuuinjutsu is restricted to ninjutsu specialists only. If you'd like to be a ninjutsu specialist and take advantage of this, please denote it on your sheet somewhere (usually in the abilities section) as per the specialist rules.

After this I think you're probably good.

"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!" The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
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Post by TheOneAndOnly » Thu Dec 27, 2018 1:11 am

Done

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Post by Lord-High-Lord of the Frogs » Thu Dec 27, 2018 5:45 am

You've got ninjutsu specialist titled in the combat mentality section, which is technically fine since there's no specific place for it, but you do also need to state which specialist stats you're taking as a ninjutsu specialist, which can be found in the rules I linked above as well.

Most people denote this by putting an asterisk next to the chosen stats in their stat lineup, bolding them, or whatever works for you.

"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!" The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
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Post by TheOneAndOnly » Thu Dec 27, 2018 5:22 pm

Done

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Post by Niro » Sun Dec 30, 2018 8:18 pm

That's one old looking 11 year old lol

Please be more descriptive with his clothing, try to write it as if he didn't have a picture.

Ninjutsu:10(50) <-Please just mark Specialist stats with a * or _ after the stat. Like so [b]Ninjutsu:*[/b] 10
Taijutsu:5
Genjutsu:1
Stamina:10(50)
Control:4(50)
Strength:2(50)
Speed: 3
Instinct:5

Primary Affinity: <-This should read Mokuton
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Post by TheOneAndOnly » Mon Dec 31, 2018 4:41 pm

I am so confused. I hear so many things from so many different people.

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Post by Niro » Mon Jan 07, 2019 5:12 pm

As it reads now, with the (50) next to the stats, it implies they're somehow 50 rather than a specialized stat. Putting a special character onto the stat which is being specialized is much easier on everyone when it comes to knowing what is and what isn't a specialized stat.
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Post by TheOneAndOnly » Mon Jan 07, 2019 10:47 pm

You can take this down..i won't be going through with it after all

Edit:nvm I put work in it I guess I'll finish it. Keep it up I'll fix the things

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Post by Yura » Mon Jan 14, 2019 8:05 am

Post when you make the changes. I'll give you another day or two before denying the app.
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Post by TheOneAndOnly » Fri Jan 18, 2019 4:58 am

You can deny it-- sorry for wasting your guys time

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Post by Kao » Mon Jan 21, 2019 1:13 am

): If you change your mind and need the nocode, let us know

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