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Post by Taiga » Fri May 31, 2019 8:07 am

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The Shadow King

General Information
Type: Swarm
Gender: ?
Age: ?
Appearance:A swarm of black-colored wispy beings, potentially lesser spirits of some kind.
Personality: When not forced into submission by Hajime's synch, one of the spirits will rise to the top and dominate the rest, changing the personality to whatever the wisp's personality is. Personalities are very basic supersets of human emotions, like michevious or curious.
Battle Information Rank: C
Stats Sync
  • Ninjutsu: Sync
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  • Genjutsu: Sync
  • Stamina: Sync
  • Control: Sync
  • Strength: Sync
  • Speed: Sync
  • Instinct: Sync
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Elemental Affinities: Katon
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Abilities
Twisted Telepathy - GenjutsuThe Shadow king is capable of using all types of Genjutsu, but only those initiated by touch and sight.
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NinjutsuN/A
TaijutsuN/A
GenjutsuN/A

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The Shadow King is an oddity- a swarm of many small black spirits that form together an often take the form of one being. The Shadow King has an advanced telepathy potential enable the being when as one to cast Genjutsu. Potential ages old, little is known about the swarm but legends often spoke of the weak little spirits who would trick those lost in the forest into it's trap... and leave nothing but squeaky clean bones when it was finished with the lost. In the legendary cannon, this added yet another spirit to their army.


During his reclusive time after departing from the village, Hajime came into contact with The Shadow King in the forest of Tea Country. Utilizing his dead wood he was able to deplete their stamina, bringing them to a halt and protecting himself from their powers. Slowly, he eased off and studied them, at one point noticing that one spirit was able to take control of the others- as if it lead the swarm. After observing this phenomena, Hajime came to understand that one spirit would "bubble" to the top, and if he could replicate that, he too could take control of the swarm in a similar manner, exerting his power over the group to warp them to his will, much as the spirits tended to do to each other.

In doing so, Hajime made The Shadow King is pawn. Since then, he has used The Shadow King to commit murder without ever showing his hand, and for many other dark deeds.
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Post by Kao » Fri May 31, 2019 8:33 am

Please remove the "me" tag on username and link to your profile. That tag makes whoever is reading the page see their name.

Also the character will need a spiritualism technique to summon this and I didnt see one on the app
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Post by Krystical » Fri May 31, 2019 6:48 pm

This is a very nice concept.

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Post by Taiga » Fri May 31, 2019 9:55 pm

Its a swarm


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Post by Takumi » Sat Jun 01, 2019 10:15 am

"Whether Spirit or Pets, Swarms must be naturally swarming animals."

Two shadow things should not qualify as a swarm.

Also, I find the ability questionable but that's another thing altogether.

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Post by Varian » Sat Jun 01, 2019 1:18 pm

The Me tag doesn't work like it used to Jesse, it displays the reader of the post rather than yourself. You will have to do it the other way.
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Post by Kao » Sat Jun 01, 2019 2:07 pm

• I know it is a swarm. It is still a spirit type swarm, which means he needs to be able to summon it. So he needs spiritualism technique.

• I agree with Takumi about that not being a naturally swarming entity. If Niro is okay with it then that's fine.

• Remove the [/me] tag at the top and replace it with a link to your profile using url tags. You still haven't done that.

• That is a paid ability. You cannot have that at start up.
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Post by Taiga » Fri Jun 07, 2019 11:42 am

extenz


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Post by Kao » Mon Jun 10, 2019 1:19 pm

Extension granted. Post when you're ready for checking
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Post by Taiga » Wed Jun 12, 2019 8:41 am

Added spiritualism, fixed the tag.

Why is it a paid ability? Not saying your wrong, asking you for clarification. The whole paid ability thing is after my time.

@natural thing: I dont exactly see how it makes any sort of difference


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Post by Takumi » Wed Jun 12, 2019 3:30 pm

The ability essentially grants the swarm multiple concentrations, and bypasses the specialization locks, therefore it falls under a paid ability.

As far as naturally forming, apart from the fact it's been a rule as long as I remember, a swarm by definition should be much more than two.

It seems you want the benefits of a swarm without following any of the rules for it. But, I'm not a mod so take my opinion with a grain of salt. However, the info I gave on paid abilities should be correct.

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Post by Taiga » Wed Jun 19, 2019 9:09 am

If I took off the parts that break spec rules, could it be started with? I see that as "paid ability" but plenty of abilities grant multiple concs without needing a paid ability.

It is more than two. That's literally just aesthetic. A swarm of bugs could all fly cloe and link up to make a fist or whatever shape you want (which is whats happening)


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Post by Kao » Fri Jun 21, 2019 12:28 am

The part of the ability that makes it paid is that you can use overlay and A+ warp, which is restricted to gen spec. Also, does the ability allow you to not need the sight/touch initiators? I can't tell. If so, then removing those parts would leave you with not being able to use genjutsu at all yet, so...yeah, you could start with that.
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Post by Taiga » Sat Jun 22, 2019 12:25 am

I can get the spec locked parts, which I can undo, but an ability that gives concentrations in of itself should not be a paid ability. That's just stupid.

So I can knock of the Warp/Overlay and the Spec stuff for now, and keep the Initiates- I think that's more than fair enough. Companions get an ability slot and I don't get why there would be a punishment for using it? Or a restriction that would prevent it.


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Post by Kao » Sat Jun 22, 2019 7:47 pm

In general you can't have concentrations without actually having the concentrations, so yeah that would be a paid ability because you're getting access to something you normally can't get. As for the ability slot, you're not being punished or prevented from using it? You just can't ever have a paid ability at registration. So if you still want the initiates without taking up the concs, that's still a paid ability.
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Post by Taiga » Sun Jun 23, 2019 12:10 am

So what about clan abilities that effective would be multiple concs if not a clan???

Can I get a price estimate then on the ability


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Post by Niro » Tue Jul 02, 2019 3:04 pm

140 for being able to use all 8 Gen concs without having the concentrations, not including being able to make Overlay or A+ Warp customs without being a Gen spec.
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Post by Taiga » Sun Jul 07, 2019 5:44 am

Uh, I am not trying to use all the Gen Concs though...? A little lost there.

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Post by Niro » Mon Jul 08, 2019 1:16 pm

should link back to Hajime now

95 for being able to use those 5 Gen concs without having the concentrations, not including being able to make Overlay or A+ Warp customs without being a Gen spec.

175 for being able to use those 5 Gen concs without having the concentrations, and including being able to make Overlay and A+ Warp customs without being a Gen spec.
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Post by Taiga » Fri Jul 12, 2019 11:35 pm

Done.

I will put the companion master ability on Hajime or eventually the other Perk to account for specing- so for now don't need spec stuff.

How many points is it per conc, like 15? Just curious.


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Post by Kao » Thu Jul 18, 2019 2:35 am

15 each for the main 5 gen concs. 40 each for Overlay and A+ warp.

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Post by Taiga » Sat Jul 20, 2019 3:16 am

Removed the history typo to clarify.


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Post by WrightJustice » Wed Aug 14, 2019 9:59 am

I know its a swarm but is it supposed to have some genjutsu now or like use genjutsu form wielder?
Is empty genjutsu spoiler correct?

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Post by Taiga » Wed Aug 14, 2019 12:01 pm

The ability gives the swarm genjutsu


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Post by WrightJustice » Wed Aug 14, 2019 3:21 pm

Yeah but is it correct that it has zero right now at registration?

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Post by Taiga » Thu Aug 15, 2019 8:08 am

Yeah. Swarms cannot have jutsu I think? I dont think the blank spoiler really hurts.


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Post by WrightJustice » Thu Aug 15, 2019 11:08 am

1/2

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Post by Niro » Sun Aug 25, 2019 11:50 am

Ngl I'm very confused with your ability if you're planning on taking Evolve and getting this companion Gen spec'd since that gives you access to Overlay and A/S custom Warp.

It'd unlock genjutsu conc slots as you raise your Sync since Sync = Gen. You'd get a total of 4 concs slots which you could fill with Overlay/Warp/Touch/Sight without using an Ability slot.

Plus if this Ability is giving you concs without having to list them, it's a paid ability and can't be started with.
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Post by Takumi » Sun Aug 25, 2019 12:41 pm

Swarms don't get concs like regular companions. They get one concentration or one ability.

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Post by Niro » Sun Aug 25, 2019 1:19 pm

Mk.

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