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Uchiha, Touma


"My path. My Way. THAT is my creed."
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General Information Age: 27
Gender: Male
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 128lbs
Physical Features:
Touma is athletically toned with a lightweight, skinny body but well defined muscles with clear abs and perfectly structured jaw.
Despite his seemingly rough fighting style he still manages to appear pristine and beautiful, using oils and other such things to maintain his good looks with his majestic mane of black hair curving along his perfect facial features and complementing his dazzling black eyes.
Touma keep a part of his hair longer than the rest in a prideful manner, braiding it together and threading it through golden hair jewellery on the right side of his face where it grows ever longer.
There is one blemish upon Touma's body and that would be a scar running down the side of his stomach and cutting across into the lower left ab, something he both hates but could not bare to remove.
Clothing/Accessories:
Touma usually wears a simple, sleeveless, dark grey shirt with a grainy green spread across his chest and upper back with it wrapping round at the collarbone and below the ribs leaving the stomach area clear.
The cross has a simple helical design running along the lower left portion and also reveals a red rim to the collar of the shirt.
He also wears hakama style black pants with a fancy criss-crossing lace across red fabric at the waist that pulls them tight, of which the red fabric has an outer layer that curved around the back of the pelvis area with an intricate flame design along the right side with the Uchiha clan symbol underlaid beneath.
These hakama style pants are tucked and bound by his black and red boots, with the upper red part appearing similar to a shin guard that reaches halfway up that ties with lace that forms a cross shape.
This creates and overall puffier look to the pants as they seem to bloom from the boots.
Touma also usually wears full length arm guard like black glove on his left arm and a three-quarter length black glove on his right arm.
The left glove has an intricate flame design running down to the just past the elbow with the Uchiha clan symbol underlaid beneath.
The right glove is simple but is bound by a red wrist guard and red fabric and lace around his bicep, plus a red shoulder guard that is threading to the left glove across the front and back in a cross shape.
Picture:
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Personality:
  • General:
    Touma can be quite strong willed and always aims to find his own way and forge his path no matter the possible consequences, sometimes pushing himself into some dangerous situations if he thinks he can handle them.
    Though he has learned not to throw away his life too willingly, remaining cautious and strategic of such possible dangers and would gladly accept the aid of others to reach his goals.

    Touma also has a large sense of adventure as he loves to travel to many different places and maintain a nomadic lifestyle, which he had fought to get back to and escape from the new clutches of Iwagakure.

    That being said it can sometimes be a bit difficult to get him to settle on another's path, with their two idles needing to strongly align or a good enough argument to twist his own thoughts on something which can make him appear kind of stubborn.

    Though not generally a dirty man he can sometimes lean into tricking others into doing as he wishes and getting what his way, perhaps even using genjutsu to direct others if he has to but generally he would simply argue that he is right and only go so far if they where truly unwavering and possibly evil.

    Touma can become quite passionate when it comes to forging his path in life and can get really into something that has sparked his interest, as a result he may become pushy as he aims for such goals and that is when his stubbornness truly shines through and when he truly wishes to do things his way.

    He can also be quite charming and intriguing, pulling others in like a dazzling star that people can easily become enamoured with which makes things easier to get things he wants and probably part of the problem with his stubbornness and people not willing to say no to him.
  • Hopes/Dreams: Touma's biggest wish is to venture the world and learn many things as he maintains a nomadic lifestyle, becoming the strongest person he could be and perhaps spreading his own ideals with said world.
  • Fears: Touma still has some lingering fear over his family's condition in Iwa, hoping they fair well with no way to truly know but he remains strong and willing to push on without them.
  • Combat Mentality:Touma prefers to catch opponents off guard and capture them in genjutsu so that he can quickly finish them off and dispose of them.
    His style can seems erratic and quite rough despite his charming looks and stubborn personality, picking up the seemingly uncouth movements of the Toryuu style and combing it with that of the Uchiha and his genjutsu.

Battle Information
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Village: Iwagakure no Sato
Rank: B-Ranked Missing Nin
  • -Ninjutsu: 5
  • -Taijutsu: 21
  • +Genjutsu: 15
  • -Stamina: 15
  • +Control: 20
  • -Strength: 19
  • +Speed: 19
  • +Instinct: 21
  • -Sharingan: 25
  • Total: 160
Equipment:
Touma carries a basic Ninjato sheathed on the right side of his back so that the handle peaks over his shoulder. The blade is 48cm long with a 6cm black hilt with a cross-shaped guard and red grip fabric wrapped along the handle.
He also has a basic Tanto sheathed across the lower back at his waist with its similar black handle with red wraps pointing to the left. The tanto's blade is 16cm long whilst the handle is 6cm.

Touma has a black and red weapons pouch tied to the back of his waist below his tanto. Inside the pouch it contains 15 Kunai, 30 caltrops, 30 senbon, 10 explosive tags, 5 flash bombs and 120m of wire.

Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity: Katon [Fire Element]
Specialisation, Abilities and Concentrations
Genjutsu Specialist:
Having devoted their lives to mastering the art of genjutsu, this shinobi is classified as a Genjutsu Specialist. Genjutsu specialist are able to devote a total of 10 concentrations to genjutsu, unlike most people who are capped at 8. However, they are only able to devote a max of 5 concentrations to taijutsu, and a max of 5 concentrations to ninjutsu.

As a Genjutsu Specialist, Touma is able to utilize genjutsu concentrations reserved for specialists, and is able to enter the God Tier [45+] on select stats, and meaning as a specialist they can select stats to break into the God tier. These stats can only be Genjutsu, Speed, Control and Instinct.
Abilities
First Ability
SharinganShow
  • [Infant]
  • [Immature]
  • [Mature]
Sharingan Mastery:

The greater the level of Sharingan Mastery the user has, the greater their Sharingan grows and matures. The lower levels provide meager bonuses, while the higher, more evolved stages provide greater bonuses and clarity. Those who master their Sharingan unlock the fabled Mangekyou Sharingan, the pinnacle of the Uchiha doujutsu. The user may maintain their Sharingan for a period equal to their Mastery/2 posts. Afterwards, the user cannot use it for a period equal to their Mastery/4 posts. For Mangekyou Sharingan users, they may use their dojutsu for a period equal to their Mastery/4 post. Afterwards, the user cannot use it for a period equal to their Mastery/2 posts.
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5+3 Instinct +2 Taijutsu | Infant Sharingan Unlocked; 1 tomoe each eye
10+5 Instinct +5 Taijutsu | Immature Sharingan Unlocked: 2 tomoe, 1 tomoe
15+8 Instinct +7 Taijutsu | 2 tomoe, 2 tomoe
20+8 Instinct +7 Taijutsu +3 Ninjutsu +2 Genjutsu | Mature Sharingan Unlocked: 3 tomoe, 2 tomoe
25+8 Instinct +7 Taijutsu +5 Ninjutsu +5 Genjutsu | 3 tomoe, 3 tomoe
35+8 Instinct +8 Taijutsu +10 Ninjutsu +9 Genjutsu | Mangekyou Sharingan Unlocked
39+10 Instinct +10 Taijutsu +10 Ninjutsu +9 Genjutsu | Sharingan Mastered: User is now able to use certain jutsu.
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
Katon:
Katon Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Katon affinity. Katon has a passive ignition effect.
Passive (Ingition)Show
Katon's effect is ignition, which means that all katon jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread fire from their source. Once a jutsu has been performed, the fire from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. That means a C-rank katon jutsu that moves at 13 speed would create subsequent fires that spread at 4 speed. These secondary fires require flammable material to continuously spread, otherwise they will burn out on their own.

Additionally, the strength of burns on organic material from katon jutsu is determined by the strength stat of the individual jutsu.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: First Degree Burns
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Second Degree Burns
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Third Degree Burns
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Fourth Degree Burns
Taijutsu
Close Quarters Combat:
The fundamental skill of [Close Quarters Combat] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.
Perception:
The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Sword Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Sword Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with swords and sword-like weapons such as knives, daggers, sword-breakers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Genjutsu
Genjutsu: Advanced Channeling:
This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any genjutsu that is designed to be channel, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method. To get this concentration the user must be a Genjutsu Specialist, and have picked Control as one of their specialized stats. Channeled Genjutsu cause the user to be surrounded in an aura of chakra while channeling the genjutsu, until the genjutsu is initiated.
Sight Initiation:
This user has learned to use visual cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to perform actions, or draw the eyes to something to capture their targets in a genjutsu.
Sound Initiation:
This user has learn to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu.
Touch Initiation:
This user has learn to use physical sensations to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to physical touch the target, or touch them with objects to capture their targets in genjutsu.
Warp Genjutsu:
This user has learned to combine the basics of Status and Illusion genjutsu, allowing them to use single techniques to create sensory illusions, as well as status changes on their target.

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
Katon: 3D, 1CShow
D-Rank
*Katon • Fireball
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling out a 1 foot diameter fireball at the opponent. It travels up to 10 meters away at a speed of 6 and a strength of 4.

Katon • Burning Sight
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisites: Infant Sharingan, 9 Ninjutsu
After performing the correct handseals and channelling chakra to their sharingan, the user will focus their vision on a single point within 10 metres of them. The point will visibly gather chakra along with heat before bursting into a torrent of flames at 3 speed. These flames burn with 15 strength, spreading out to a metre diameter before petering out after one post.

*Katon • Heated Blade
D-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling katon chakra into a metal weapon or blade, the user will cause it to grow hotter and cover the blade in flames. The imbued weapon will be able to carve through defenses of 5 or less strength with ease.

C-Rank
*Katon • Great Fireball
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling a thin stream of flames up to 15 meters away at a speed of 10. Either at 15 meters, or if the stream makes impact with anything, the stream will erupt into a spherical C-Rank explosion, scattering flames over everything within a 5 meter radius from the point of impact.
Taijutsu: 10D, 8C, 3BShow
Uchiha Style:
The Taijutsu style of the Uchiha Clan relies on the Sharingans ability to improve the reflexes and combat sense of the Clan member to focus on a more defense oriented style. The style focuses on both letting the opponent get close to the user who will engage them with a variety of grapples, locks, punches, and kicks to turn the foes movements and momentum against themselves along with the user closing in on their opponent through zoning footwork and pressing an advantage.

Concentrations Required: [Close Quarters Combat], [Perception]
Toryu Style:
Toryu, a style of Kenjutsu founded in the Land of Pebbles, melds traditional kenjutsu swordplay with subversive feints and sudden bursts of close quarters combat, two unyielding hills crashing together to form a mountain. Toryu typically favors use of the blade with one hand, utilizing the freedom of movement to use one's hands, joints, legs, head, and even the hilt and handle of the sword to make an already deadly style more unpredictable and more lethal. Ignorantly considered a very "unrefined" style by most practitioners of the sword, Toryu is actually one of the most difficult styles of Kenjutsu to learn and master. The very basic premise of the style revolves around the firm control and manipulation of one's own movements and body, some techniques requiring execution while using another attack as a feint or misdirection while not sacrificing strength. The style has no weapon requirements outside of a sword, but many users often prefer kodachi, wakizashi, ninjato, or even tanto, the reduced size and weight of the blades having fewer blindspots and making the user's weapon more mobile.

Requires: [Close Quarters Combat], [Sword Weapons] Concentrations.

D-Rank
~Walking Stance
D-rank Taijutsu Stance
The user will set their dominant foot one shoulder width apart from their other foot before sliding the nondominant foot backwards a distance equal to one and a half shoulder widths, forming an 'L'. The user will then bend the leg of the front facing foot slightly while keeping the other leg nearly strait. When advancing forward, the user will sweep their feet forward rather than lifting them up and down so as to clear the space in front of them of objects and to subtlely force their opponents backwards.

~Low Block
D-rank Taijutsu Manoeuvre
The user will bunch their hands into fists in anticipation of an attack before bringing their left fist to their right ear, the fingers of the fist facing towards the user. Their second hand will meet the first, this fist with its fingers outwards before the user forcefully slides their left fist from their ear to their knee to block or redirect blows aimed at their lower body.

~Mid Block
D-rank Taijutsu Manoeuvre
The user will bunch their hands into fists in anticipation of an attack before bringing their left fist to their right ear, the fingers of the fist facing towards the user. Their second hand will meet the first, this fist with its fingers outwards before the user forcefully slides their left fist from their ear across their chest to block or redirect blows aimed at their midsection.

~Upper Block
D-rank Taijutsu Manoeuvre
The user will bunch their hands into fists in anticipation of an attack before bringing their left fist to their right hip, the fingers of the fist facing towards the user. Their second hand will meet the first, this fist with its fingers outwards before the user forcefully slides their left fist from their hip to above their head to block or redirect blows aimed at their upper body.

*[Toryu • Sinking Quicksand]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite(s): 8 Taijutsu, 8 Strength.
One of Toryu's many grappling techniques, the practitioner steps in close to the opponent, slamming their heel into the opponent's foot to lock the target in place. In the same movement, the practitioner grabs the opponent's arm and flips them over their back, slamming them to the ground. The prone position this leaves the opponent in leaves them exposed to an attack of opportunity from the practitioner's weapon after executing this technique.

*[Toryu • Skipping Stone]
D-Rank Taijutsu Stance
The signature Stance of Toryu, practitioners relax the muscles in their bodies, gaining additional flexibility in their movements in how they approach the enemy, how they retreat, how they evade attacks, and how they attack the opponent. This Stance allows the practitioner to more easily read opponent's attacks and defend against them by evading in unusual ways, such as ducking, bending around, and quickly sidestepping attacks without needlessly exposing themselves to additional attacks. This fleet-footed Stance lets the practitioner mix up their movements to confuse and misdirect the opponent, allowing them to attack lesser known openings in the opponent's guard. It also allows the practitioner to rapidly and reflexively change the angle, position and grip of their weapon with minimal movement, allowing them multiple manners in which they can attack the opponent or defend against attacks.

[Uchiha Toryu • Walk and Skip]
D- Ranked Taijutsu Stance
Prerequisite: *[Toryu • Skipping Stone] and ~Walking Stance
A fusion of both the Toryu and Uchiha basic stances in which the user combines the footwork of the Walking Stance and its sweeping foot movements and dominant foot position with the swordwork and ambiguity of the Skipping Stone stance, allowing them to rapidly move the angle, position and grip of the sword with the ideal swaying, open, ambiguous stance all whilst maintaining the integrity of both stances.
The ease in which both stances work into each other means this single fused stance can be used in place of either single stance where they may be required, which is useful for maintaining the use of a bladed weapon when possible.

*[Toryu • Dust Eater]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The practitioner moves in and initiates a feint in the form of a thrust. Part way through the thrust, however, the practitioner twists their arm to the side and drops low, rotating and lashing out with a spinning low kick, attempting to sweep the opponent's feet out from under them. Opponents with a Taijutsu stat higher than the practitioner's Strength stat can resist the tripping effect.

*[Toryu • Cobblestone Skeleton]
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite(s): 8 Taijutsu, 8 Strength.
A practitioner of Toryu is capable of attacking with every part of their body, even their heads. This Discipline represents the practitioner's capacity and experience with executing palm strikes, heel strikes, knee strikes, elbow strikes, and headbutts/skull bashes just as effectively as regular punches, kicks, and sword strikes. This Discipline allows the practitioner to consistently execute these kinds of attacks while minimizing or eliminating openings in their defenses or shock/damage they would experience while using these kinds of strikes.

*[Toryu • Sundering Gravel]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite(s): 8 Taijutsu, 8 Strength.
Designed as a counterattack but also a potent attack by itself, the practitioner will first wait to block or parry an opponent's attack with their weapon. Then, the practitioner will quickly counter with a swift knee strike to the opponent's stomach or diaphragm to stun them or cause them to stagger by winding them, followed by a quick slash or stab to their chest or stomach. The practitioner may choose to use this as an attack instead by immediately leading off with the knee strike if they so wish.

C-Rank
~Frontal Assault
C-rank Manoeuvre
Prerequisite: Walking Stance
Falling into the Walking Stance, the user will begin to move towards their opponent with small, compact sweeping steps before launching a flurry of jabs at the opponent's upper body to force them to block or parry. While assailing their opponent, the user will step inside the opponent's guard with their dominant foot before forcefully pushing off the ground into the opponent in an attempt to break their guard.

~Simple Counter
C-rank Manoeuvre
The user will await their foe to throw a punch or kick before catching the limb mid flight and wrapping both arms around the offending appendage. The user will then rotate their grip and toss their foe to the ground before barraging them with a horde of kicks while they are off balance or on the floor.

~Reverse Counter
C-rank Manoeuvre
A move to use when their strike is trapped or grappled, the user will use their free hand to swing and reposition the limb the opponent is using to lock the user's limb to around their shoulders. The user will then lift up with their body and flip the opponent onto their back before rolling with the flip and controlling the opponent's limb on the way down. The user will finish their roll with the opponent's face on the ground and their arm locked behind their back.

~Knee Lock Counter
C-rank Manoeuvre
The user will catch an incoming kick with their hands before bringing a free leg up high and then bringing it down on the opponent's outstretched leg in an attempt to stress or snap the knee. Once the opponent is sent to the ground with the user ontop of their leg who then pulls the user's torso towards them before delivering a brutal punch to the face.

~Leg Lock
C-rank Manoeuvre
The user will perform a dropkick aimed at the opponent's knees. Their purpose is to hook their legs around the opponent's knees. Mid drop kick, the user will rotate their hips and knock both of them to the ground where the user will finish the move with a brutal chop to the throat.

*[Toryu • Fury Guard]
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
A technique allowing the practitioner to partially customize their focus on defense or offense, the practitioner guards against attacks while immediately attacking subsequent openings with their free hand. The form this takes depends on which hand they prioritize for defense. Should they choose to guard with their sword hand, the practitioner deflects the attacks outwards, away from the opponent's center of mass where their guard is strongest, and responds by launching unarmed counter attacks like a punch, elbow, or throw. If they choose to guard with their unarmed hand, the practitioner blocks the attack by intercepting the haft of the weapon or the opponent's wrists with the back of their fist or forearm and counter with more lethal slashes and stabs from their sword.

*[Toryu • Lethal Familiarity]
C-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Many of the Toryu techniques would put the user in incredibly daring positions where a single mistake could instantly spell disaster for the swordsman. As a result, Toryu practitioners must train themselves constantly to avoid letting their fears distract them from their task. A practitioner with this technique has learned to shut out fear in the heat of combat, allowing them to perform attacks and techniques without the risk of failure due to fear responses.

*[Toryu • Grave Digger]
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite(s): 15 Taijutsu, 15 Strength.
Rushing in towards the opponent either as a charging attack or after evading an opponent's attack, the practitioner starts with their arms crossed in front of their chests before quickly sweeping their elbows up over their heads, the flat of the practitioner's front-most elbow potentially striking the opponent under their chin. While this elbow strike can cause considerable damage by itself, the purpose of the elbow strike is to cause the opponent to dodge. With their arms crossed over their heads, the practitioner braces their unarmed hand against their sword arm and swings both down at once. The additional torque provided by the unarmed hand allows the sword strike that follows to immediately accelerate to maximum speed. The practitioner can twist or sidestep during this downswing to compensate for where the opponent is dodging.

B-Rank
~Awareness
B-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: 20 Sharingan Mastery
The user has learned to use their Sharingan to pay attention to their opponent's minuscule movements preceding an action and other things in the midst of a fight. The longer the fight goes on, the more details about the opponent will become noticed by the user. The user can only notice and follow those with a Taijutsu equal to or lesser than their [Taijutsu+Instinct]/2.

~Recognition
B-Rank Discipline Taijutsu
Prerequisites: 20 Sharingan Mastery
Humans are being of habits and patterns, this is no exception in combat, ranging from taijutsu to hand seals. Patterns already being easier to remember, the user has trained with their Sharingan to actively commit whatever he sees to his short-term memory. This allows him to remember things such as the beginning wind up to a strike or a hand seal pattern after seeing it once, so that he can recognize the technique if used later in a battle. This gives him an advantage in anticipating his opponents next action and makes an opponent’s consecutive usage of a technique a liability.

~Pressing the Attack
B-rank Taijutsu Manoeuvre
The user will await an incoming blow before stepping inside of the strike and pulling the limb past them. The pull is meant to force the opponent into the user and put them off balance while the user closes in and delivers a strong knee strike to the stomach to force the opponent to bend. Once bent, the user will use one arm to deliver a downward elbow into the opponent's back while their other arm aims a brutal uppercut at their face.
Genjutsu: 4D, 3C, 1BShow
D-Rank
*[Genjutsu • Paranoid]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then point indiscriminately. Should the target see the pointing motion, they'll be captured in this genjutsu. For the following 4 posts, the target will see a shadow in the corner of their eyes, constantly shifting out of view when they attempt to look at it.

*[Genjutsu • Boom!]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then within the next post, snap their fingers. Anyone who hears the snapping will hear an explosion in the distance behind them. This works as an effective distraction, or a scare tactic, if properly utilized.

[Genjutsu • Throbbing Head]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
After channelling chakra to the eyes the user will get in close and look into their opponent's eyes and flash them their sharingan. Should the target see the sharingan then they will be captured in this genjutsu. For the following 4 posts, the target will feel a burning sensation radiating from their eyes into their head, causing it to throb like a headache not unlike having severe eye strain.

[Genjutsu • Sudden Jolt]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
After channelling chakra to their hand the user will touch someone, usually the arm or hand. Should the target feel the touch, they will then feel a shocking jolt run through their body with a particularly strong burst towards the heart not unlike suddenly being jolted awake but on a stronger scale.
The target will then feel a constant tingle all over their body for 2 posts following the shock.

C-Rank
*[Genjutsu • Doubt]
C-Ranked Status Genjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then whistle, initiating the genjutsu in anyone who hears the whistle. For the next three posts, the victims of this technique will feel tinges of doubt when listening to other people talk. While the doubt isn't strong, it creates a slight feeling that can be used to dissuade them from following instructions of other people if utilized properly.

*[Genjutsu • Demonic Illusion • Hell Viewing]
C-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
This is a genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a horrifying vision. The ninja will perform some hand seals and make eye contact with the target. Once cast, the world will appear normal to the target until they see the illusion. The illusion is at the discretion of the user. However, they can only make a stationary image, or a visual loop, not a controllable visual illusion. Examples would be a decapitated head on a table, or one of their friends running in circles on fire. This illusions may only last up to 4 posts, or until the user ends the jutsu themselves. As a note, this only effects sight.

[Genjutsu • Anger]
C-Ranked Status Genjutsu
The user will channel chakra and look into their opponent's eyes with a cocky grin spread across their face. Should the target see this expression and make eye contact they will fall under the genjutsu and start to feel a sudden bout of anger over the next 3 posts.
This anger will stay as their main emotion and can't be calmed by normal means, simply coming back no matter what until the genjutsu is broken potentially making them rash and upsetting their combat capability.

B-Rank
[Genjutsu • Calm (C)]
B-Ranked Warp Genjutsu
The user channels chakra, and then breaths out, expelling their breath onto their target. If successful, a 4 post long genjutsu will begin on the target. Over the course of the genjutsu, the target won't be able to feel any wind, and if it's raining, the rain will appear and feel like a light drizzle, regardless of how intense it really it. The target will also feel a sense of calm course through their body, as if all their senses have been slightly dulled, usually causing them to relax, be less stressed, and less inclined to combat. Originally created for the use of execution in combative prisoners, the technique now proves to be an effective method in combat to regain control of the battle field.

History
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Touma was born amongst the nomadic Uchiha with his nuclear family consisting of his mother, father and elder sister which soon expanded further to also include a younger sister.

At his birth those closest to the family within the clan showered him with gifts as was customary, each wishing good things upon the boy with his mother wishing worldly knowledge upon him as an old map was burned in the fires to the gods

As he grew up and started to become capable he was taught the way of the sword and in particular picked up a good few techniques from the pebble country as they moved through it on their travels, though he also learned traditional Uchiha techniques with his elder sister being a major teacher in them for him.

However with the skirmishes the clan constantly got caught up in there came a time when Touma's father had to sacrifice his own life to save the rest, essentially leaving his elder sister in charge given his mother had less of a fighting role with his newly born younger sister.

This also pushed Touma to stand up and train hard and as a result he unlocked his sharingan which was unlike anything he could ever imagine, allowing him to more easily take part in more of the clan's fights but in turn it also got him injured as one foe cut into his stomach with a powerful sword attack.

Luckily the boy's older sibling deflected the attack so that it only cut down the side and into the lower left, saving his life but in doing so she forfeited her own skills due to damage brought down upon her arms rending her unable to fight.

That being said the sister could not give up and continued to train hard to help defend the family despite their mother's wishes, resulting in her death when he got into a skirmish she could no longer handle which brought sadness upon the family once more.

However these constant skirmishes caught the attention of Iwagakure and so the clan where given an ultimatum and as a result where brought into the folds of the village, which Touma and his family welcomed as it meant no more sacrificial deaths and wild skirmishes.

Then part of the Iwagakure society Touma trained diligently in the mysterious arts of chakra, finding himself particularly skilful with the art of genjutsu.
That being said he couldn't quite seem to settle properly and longed to continue his nomadic lifestyle he once had despite being thankful for their opportunities and village safety, though it was apparent village officials would not simply let him go now he knew the secrets of chakra and other secrets of the village and so a plot sprung up between him and his closest friends.

As such he used an opportunity on a mission to reclaim some lost Uchiha relics and bring them back to Iwa to bamboozle his company, tricking them and fleeing to a path of freedom though his friends where captured in the escape but they where happy to see at least one of the group make it.

Since then Touma laid low for awhile and made out to be a regular nomadic samurai but recently started to reclaim his name as an Uhciha, even stitching the clan's symbol into his clothing despite being alone now.

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Post by Director » Wed Aug 21, 2019 10:06 pm

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Katon • Burning Sight
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisites: Infant Sharingan, 9 Ninjutsu
After performing the correct handseals and channelling chakra to their sharingan, the user will focus their vision on a single point within 15 metres of them. The point will visibly gather chakra along with heat before bursting into a torrent of flames at 3 speed. These flames burn with 15 strength, spreading out to a metre diameter before petering out after one post.

C-Rank
Katon • Engulfed Sight
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisites: Immature Sharingan, 19 Ninjutsu
After performing the correct handseals and channelling chakra to their sharingan, the user will focus their vision on a single point within 30 metres of them. The point will visibly gather chakra along with heat before bursting into a torrent of flames at 13 speed. These flames burn with 25 strength, spreading out to a metre diameter before petering out after two posts.
Make the D-rank range 10m, and the C-rank 20m.

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Post by WrightJustice » Thu Aug 22, 2019 4:08 pm

Fixed. Also subbed a toryuu jutsu.

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Post by Niro » Fri Aug 23, 2019 5:45 pm

Anger is too strong for a Crank status, read as a Brank.
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Post by WrightJustice » Fri Aug 23, 2019 6:56 pm

I think I changed it to sound more C-rank.


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Post by WrightJustice » Sat Aug 24, 2019 2:19 pm

Oops just realised he wasn't supposed to have Engulfed Sight yet, sharingan doesn't give enough ninjutsu to reach 19 nin, so I swapped it for Great Fireball archive.


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Post by Rain21199 » Wed Sep 04, 2019 11:53 am

[Genjutsu • Calm (C)]
B-Ranked Warp Genjutsu
The user channels chakra, and then breaths out, expelling their breath onto their target. If successful, a 4 post long genjutsu will begin on the target. Over the course of the genjutsu, the target won't be able to feel any wind, and if it's raining, the rain will appear and feel like a light drizzle, regardless of how intense it really it. The target will also feel a sense of calm course through their body, as if all their senses have been slightly dulled, usually causing them to relax, be less stressed, and less inclined to combat. Originally created for the use of execution in combative prisoners, the technique now proves to be an effective method in combat to regain control of the battle field.

For this, just change the words of successful to specifically what the trigger is. It's easy to assume it's touch but I can't sleep at night knowing we're letting people assume stuff here at saigen.

Katon • Burning Sight
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisites: Infant Sharingan, 9 Ninjutsu
After performing the correct handseals and channelling chakra to their sharingan, the user will focus their vision on a single point within 10 metres of them. The point will visibly gather chakra along with heat before bursting into a torrent of flames at 3 speed. These flames burn with 15 strength, spreading out to a metre diameter before petering out after one post.

This technique allows you to essentially auto hit someone as long as you're looking at them, and eyes can move very fast so it's very difficult to dodge something like this. Due to this, I think it would be best if you could either find a way to balance it better or just change the jutsu entirely.

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Post by Rain21199 » Wed Sep 18, 2019 8:38 pm

3 days

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Post by Niro » Thu Sep 26, 2019 1:31 pm

Uchiha got changed, please make changes accordingly
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Post by WrightJustice » Wed Oct 02, 2019 2:31 pm

I figure I'm just gonna resubmit this when I do all the changes.

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Post by Kao » Thu Oct 03, 2019 12:22 pm

So you want this denied?
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Post by WrightJustice » Mon Oct 07, 2019 8:23 am

Yeah.

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Post by Varian » Mon Oct 07, 2019 8:50 am

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