Hyeomnu no Enchougenma

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Hyeomnu no Enchougenma

Post by Ace Trainer » Wed Aug 21, 2019 8:13 pm

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Hyeonmu no Enchougenma


General Information
Type: Physical Manifestation
Gender: Male
Age: Eons
Appearance: The Enchougenma is the smallest of the genma, and this form does nothing but emphasize that. His physical being seems to be based off of Tenteki’s, as he stands at the same height of 6’3”, though his body is more dense, it is proportionately the same in size, having him weigh in at around 280lbs. Otherwise, the Enchougenma looks as he does in his true form, wrapped in a black body suit that is reminiscent of armor. His skin is ghost white, his lips thin. Where his eyes and nose would be is instead an enormous hole in his head, though through means of chakra and spiritualism he is functionally able to see from the perspective of this hole as if its an eye.
Personality: Rejected by the other genma due to his tendency to lie and trick, Hyeonmu is often seen as a loner among the chakra beasts. However, the beast is no fool; while he will not hesitate to manipulate the host to get his way, he knows that the Jinchuuriki's well being is his own and is often overly protective of him. This "protection" is always in the spirit of deceit, for he would never admit to caring for the host's health. The beast is very prideful and will never admit to being wrong, instead opting to lie his way through anything. Battle Information Rank: B-rank Companion
Stats
  • Ninjutsu: 5
  • Taijutsu: 10
  • Genjutsu: 5
  • Stamina: 10(15-5)
  • Control: 5
  • Strength: 15
  • Speed: 15
  • Instinct: 10
Equipment: The Enchougenma carries a large dual sided sword in a sheath on his lower back. He carries no other weapons. The sword is 8 feet long, with a 4 foot blade and a 4 foot handle.
Elemental Affinities: Salt Release
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
[Immortal Chakra Beast]
Hyeomnu is a Genma, an immortal beast of chakra that has existed since the birth of the universe. Containing his essence in flesh has resulted in stunted growth, meaning Hyeomnu’s form will never age nor change with time. Additionally his physical form is constantly powered via his archaic chakra, which grants the form Regeneration. However, the power of the chakra does take a toll on him, and Hyeomnu suffers from a -5 stamina at all times.
Concentrations
Ninjutsu--
Taijutsu[Sword Weapons][CQC]
Genjutsu--

Jutsu
TaijutsuShow

Vault
D-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
[Sword Weapons]
Hyeomnu can force his sword into the ground, forcing all of his weight into it and jumping off, throwing his body forward, effectively doubling the distance he can jump.

Ambidextrous
D-rank Taijutsu Discipline
[Sword Weapons]
Hyeomnu can utilize any sworded weapon with equal efficiency with either hand.

Feint
D-rank Taijutsu Discipline
[Sword Weapons]
Hyeomnu swings with the sword, but stops the swing, instead striking with his other hand, whether its holding a weapon or just using his bare head. Often this allows him to exploit holes in the opponent's defense.

Confident Grasp
D-rank Taijutsu Discipline
[Sword Weapons]
Experience with a sword means confidence with it as well. So long as the strength exerted against it is not greater than his own strength, Hyeomnu’s skill means he can retain control of his sword in any situation.

Block Transition
D-rank Taijutsu Discipline
[Sword Weapons]
Experienced with a sword, when performing a block against a weapon, Hyeomnu can transition out of the block directly into a jab strike, often exploiting the hole created from releasing the block to hurt the opponent.

Reverse Strike
C-rank Taijutsu Stance
[Sword Weapons]
Experienced in basic strikes, Hyeomnu knows the basic indicators for directional strikes. When moving to make a strike, Hyeomnu’s can produce tells for the strike in the opposite direction. An experienced fighter looking for subtle indicators for an attack is more suspect to these techniques due to the feint, producing openings that Hyeomnu can exploit.

Recover
C-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
[Sword Weapons]
So long as Hyeomnu makes physical contact with his sword, he can recover it, may it be through using his knee to force it into the air, grabbing it with his teeth, or some other means.

Vice Grip
C-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
[CQC]
Hyeomnu will grab someone by the throat and squeeze, should his strength be higher than their [Strength + Stamina]/2, and the grip is maintained for [Stamina/10] posts, the target will pass out from suffocation.

Close Step
C-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
[CQC]
Hyeomnu will step forward and place his body in direct proximity of his target, often times with one foot placed between the opponents two feet, which his hips parallel to the targets hips. This proximity limits the mobility options of the opponents and removes their ability to make full force strikes without special techniques.

Reinforced Block
B-rank Taijutsu Stance
[Sword Weapons]
Due to the weight distribution of his sword, if Hyeomnu blocks an attack, his can place his hand against the blade to reinforce the block, then move his hilt hand up to the base of the blade, allowing him to release the hand on the blade without losing the leverage. This frees his hand to attack while the opponent is likely still holding with both hands.

Focused Power
B-rank Taijutsu Discipline
[CQC]
Eons of fighting experience means regardless of his body position, Hyeomnu is able to express the full breadth of his power in a strike regardless of his body position. Meaning jabs and strikes from even the shortest of distance express their strength as if they were done from a full wind up. This allows Hyeomnu to be able to fight in extremely close quarters.

Close Quarters Combat
B-rank Taijutsu Discipline
[CQC]
Adept in close quarters combat, Hyeomnu can assess his opponent regardless of the space between them. Even when directly in front of someone, Hyeomnu is able to pick up body cues from the slightest bit of visualization, meaning he can anticipate attacks that may typically require being able to see the feet, even if he cannot directly see the feet, based on other indicators in their shoulders, or back, etc etc.

Harassment
A-rank Taijutsu Maneuver
[CQC][Close Step]
Following the use of Close Step, Hyeomnu will use this maneuver to maintain the extremely close proximity. Every time the opponent moves, so long as Hyeomnu’s [Instinct+Speed]/2 is equal to the opponents Speed, and Hyeomnu’s speed is equal to or great than the opponent’s speed, Hyeomnu will maintain the close proximity, either by mimicking their movement, or moving in an adjacent manner. By doing so the opponent is forced to remain in close quarters which can limit their attack options.

History Hyeomnu’s history is as long as the universe, every event man has experienced, Hyeomnu has witnessed in one form or another. He has been sealed in countless hosts, spent millenia ruling over man, and has watched countries form and fall, civilizations conquer and be conquered. Most recently, Hyeomnu was being sealed and broke free. After injuring a jounin, the jounin was chosen to be his host, which resulted in Hyeomnu being given a temporary and mortal form. In this form, Hyeomnu is limited in his ability to rampage, and is subjected to the whims of Tenteki, so he instead is attempting to understand man with his new perspective.
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Hyeomnu no Enchougenma

Post by Ace Trainer » Wed Aug 21, 2019 8:20 pm

Obviously registering the Genma is a little strange. But if you look at this mod, you'll see I have an ability being registered that is facilitating this app. Please let me know if there are any questions.

Yes I'm aware I didn't spend all the points, its fine.
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[Kenketi Tenteki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Special Jounin]
[Setsuya Inka :: Sunagakure No Sato – The Soul Host – Special Jounin]
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Hyeomnu no Enchougenma

Post by Director » Wed Aug 21, 2019 10:53 pm

Main question is why is it starting out at B-rank?

Everything else looks good though.
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Character: Konshi, Yuichi | Rank: Jounin | Village: Kumogakure | Color Code: [b][color=#0051BA]

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Hyeomnu no Enchougenma

Post by Ace Trainer » Thu Aug 22, 2019 3:50 pm

Uh....because I wanted it B-rank. I dunno, its a companion. lol
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Genin
Experiment 81 v2
Sunagakure No Sato
Genin
The Soul Host
Iwagakure No Sato
Special Jounin
The Tungsten Princess
Sunagakure No Sato
Jounin
The Revolutionary
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[Kenketi Tenteki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Special Jounin]
[Setsuya Inka :: Sunagakure No Sato – The Soul Host – Special Jounin]
[Kaikyo Kohon :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
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Hyeomnu no Enchougenma

Post by ShinobiTruth » Thu Aug 22, 2019 4:06 pm

Hey, so this isn’t big or anything and is entirely up to you, but you don’t have to specify a weapon type for Ambidexterity. It’s just a plain ol’ D-Rank.

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Hyeomnu no Enchougenma

Post by Niro » Thu Aug 29, 2019 4:09 pm

1/2
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Hyeomnu no Enchougenma

Post by Director » Mon Sep 02, 2019 10:39 pm

ACCEPTED
Character: Awai, Fanho | Rank: Hokage | Village: Konoha | Color Code: [b][color=#682860]
Character: Konshi, Yuichi | Rank: Jounin | Village: Kumogakure | Color Code: [b][color=#0051BA]

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