Surudoi Kibou

[hobnob]

SURUDOI, KIBOU

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General Information Age: 12
Gender: Male
Height: 147cm
Weight: 38kg
Physical Features:

• Face/head: A head full of brown, scruffy hair that the youth keeps at a medium-long length, just long enough to be able to easily cover the top of his neck. The face carries a soft, and composed expression that helps him mask the realities of his mind, that work on the basis of pure logic. This face does not carry any notable features, other than being symmetrical when it comes to the composition of the face, the hair is another story.
  
  Deep blue eyes decorate the boys face, among a wide array of different tones of brown that he inherited and wears in order to fit in with the crowd of Sunagakure.
• Body: The youth is of a lean build, physical strength is not his strong point. Instead, he has always focused on being quick and agile, this lead to his physical development to being one that is athletic, easily being able to carry his own weight and shift it around as he pleases. But he does not posses the physical mass to be considered to be a bulky person.
• Notable Features: The youth does not have anything that would make him stand out. He was brought up in to be able to blend into the background, hence the reason why he wears clothes that are very common for the area for which he is staying in. The only notable thing about him might be the long, red, multipurpose scarf that he wears.

Clothing/Accessories: During windy days, that are frequent in the village hidden in the sand, the boy wears a long red scarf that he can use to wrap around his face to protect him from the elements but also to keep him warm during the cold night of the desert.

His forearms are covered by metallic forearm protectors that cover the outside of his hand and reach all the way up to his elbow. The metallic plates that make up the protectors overlap one another but are not fixed together to allow for better maneuverability.
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Personality: He is a collected, well-mannered, but quiet often a very arrogant young man. He can easily change his approach he has to people, depending on how the situation is unraveling. But, even in the situation where he does resolve to arrogance, he uses polite language, and will never belittle anyone. His arrogance kicks in when he is confronted, or he has to deal with something that he is not interested in doing.

Time-wasting is his number one pet hate; he simply does not recognize doing something that someone will not benefit from as a valuable way to spend ones time. This means he is very committed to his chosen activities. and when he does something he does it to the best of his ability; he is always pushing his limits.

• General:
• Hopes/Dreams: The youth does not have any spectacular hopes or dreams. He simply wants to lead a life dedicated to ensuring the well being of his family and his village. Being a member of the Surudoi family, he was naturally destined to spend his days working in the administrative sector of the village. He, however, decided to pursue a different path, and joined the military forces.
  
  His ideal future; he reaches retirement and is able to spend his time raising his kids.
• Fears: Humiliating his family name.
• Combat Mentality: Kibous approach to battle is very methodical. He has phases which he essentially puts his opponents through to test their abilities. He is a distance fighter that uses the tools at his disposal to wear out the enemy and finally land the winning blow.
  
  Throughout the battle he remains composed and calm, he does not allow his emotions to cloud his judgement. Once he establishes a strategy that will work well against his opponent he will adhere to it, without any loss of focus.

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Battle Information Village: Suna
Rank: Genin

• Chakra Pool:10
• Endurance:10
• Control:15
• Strength:5
• Speed:10
• Willpower:5

Equipment:

Shichijūni-menShow

Shichijūni-men is a collection of twelve, six-sided metalic discs that are roughly are the exact same size, in terms of diameter, as a shuriken. The collection was made especially for Kibou, by his family's blacksmith after he created a jutsu based around the usage of weapons.

These discs are made of the toughest metals found in the Land of Wind, and undergo a vicious tempering procedure to ensure that the blades do not lose their edge.

Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity: Kuuton

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Abilities and Concentrations

Abilities

First Ability

Amenome - The Eye of HeavenShow This is a kekkei genkai ability that runs in the main branch of the house Surudoi, and it is still rare for someone awaken it. This Peculiar doujutsu manifests itself by forming patterns within the iris of the eye, and the patterns that appear represent the stage the doujutsu is in. There are three stages, with each stage granting the clansman certain skills. Stage oneShow Stage one manifests itself by creating a ring around the pupil of the eye. The user obtains the skill to see the world in terms of gravitational forces. The world becomes black and white, giving the possessor of this doujutsu the ability to see how much gravity it is exerting and how it affects the rest of the surroundings; losing the standard vision means that the he can only be affected by sight genjutsu that is equal or above the users [Control]. The secondary skill this stage grants the user is the option to pull, and push away objects away from the possess, just with the use of his vision. This skill relies heavily on the users [Control]; he victims [Strength] needs to be higher than the users [Control] to be able to withstand the force of this skill. Unfortunately, this skill is tough for the user and there for he is only able to keep it active for short periods of time. The Skill can only be used once every four posts, and when it is used, the object only moves a distance equivalent to the users [Control]; if the object is on the ground, he is elevated by a few feet the moment the skill is active. Stage two -Show Stage two manifests itself in the irides of the eye by forming three pairs of small hoops around the pupil. This stage of the development allows the user to create gravitational spots. These spots exert the usual gravitational alterations on the area around them; the strength these spots exert is equal to the users control [Control], and requires the [Strength] of the object to be higher than the user control to be able to resist it; they remain active for two posts. This simply means that, these spots can attract or repel. However, when focused on an object, the user is able to disintegrate, or compress the object that he is looking at, based on the users [Control]. Due to its complexity and focus that is required, each of the skills has a four post cool down. Stage three -Show This stage completes the development of the doujutsu and manifests itself ans a curved line that connects the pairs of hoops that were developed during the awakening of the second stage. Stage three does not grant the user with any special abilities, instead it shows that the user has fully mastered the doujutsu and as a result the cool down applied to the skills after each use is reduced by one post Second Ability Third Ability

Concentrations
Ninjutsu	FuutonShow Fuuton Affinity A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an cutting effect. Passive (Cutting)Show Fuuton has a natural cutting property to it, that exists in all jutsu unless otherwise stated. This gives fuuton a unique opportunity to strike with additional power, and to act as a offensive defense. Regardless of their purpose Fuuton jutsu passively cut with no distinct pattern at 1/2 the strength of the technique rounded down unless otherwise stated. This means if someone punched a 20 strength fuuton wall, they would get cuts on their hand applied with 10 strength. This also means that fuuton jutsu specifically designated to cut things can create devastating wound by essentially striking twice. Kuuton AffinityShow Kuuton Affinity A character with this concentration is able to utilize Kuuton, and advanced form of Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Kuuton affinity. Kuuton has a gravitational effect. These gravitational pockets can reach through barriers, walls, and function like a real source of gravity. Passive (Pressure)Show Kuuton users chakra to create pockets of gravity in a specific direction. Through the use of these technique Kuuton users can launch objects away from them, pull things in to a specific place, or crush things down into the ground. Kuuton jutsu operate off a focal point, and always move towards or away from that focal point. This means that all Kuuton jutsu cover some sort of area, and only effect what is within that area. They can not be used on a micro scale. [/quote]
Taijutsu	[Place them here]
Genjutsu	This user has learned to use visual cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to perform actions, or draw the eyes to something to capture their targets in a genjutsu. This user has learn to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu.

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Jutsu

NinjutsuShow

KuutonShow

D-RankShow

Kuuton • The Weight of Dust
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After the user performs a string of handseals, he touches the ground and in that moment he transfers Kuuton chakra into the ground. It is able to travel up to - and at the speed equivalent to - a distance equivalent to the users [Control] stat and then causes an eruption of dust particles from the ground. The dust eruption covers an area with a radius that is equal to the users [Control/2], it causes the vision problems for the victim along with breathing issues; this results in a temporary speed de-buff of 5 and last for a time duration equal to the users [Control/10].
Kuuton • Earth Contact
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After the user performs a string of handseals, he touches the ground and in that moment he transfers Kuuton chakra into the ground. The speed and distance of the jutsu is equal to the users [Control] stat and then creates a gravitational field that requires the victim to have the [Strength] stat higher than the users [Control] stat to break free. The area Affected is equal to the users [Control/2]. If the victim does not have the strength to do so, he or she cannot move from that location until the jutsu ends - the jutsu remains active for a post count that is equal to the users [Control/10]. The user will not be affected by this jutsu if he finds himself in the area affected.
Kuuton • Landmine
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After the user performs a string of handseals, he touches the ground and in that moment he transfers Kuuton chakra into the ground. The jutsu travels anywhere in an area with a radius of equal to the users [Control]. Once the jutsu has been set, it remains fixed in that location for the duration of the jutsu. The jutsu remain active until detonated, remotely, or an individual stepping on the area that has a radius of 1m. Once detonated, the area erupts with a gravitational force, causing damage that is equal to the users [Control]. For every use of the jutsu, the user can place an amount of landmines that is equal to his [Control/5].
Kuuton • Tentacles
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Once the user performs a string of handseals, he gathers chakra on their back and from that point six chakra tentacles sprout, they are see through but cause a slight distortion to the light that can be seen if watched closely. The tentacles do not generate any gravitational fields, but are in themselves a gravitational force. They cause damage by pulling apart what they come in contact with (like a rip). The strength and speed of the jutsu is equal to the uses [Control[. Each of the tentacles is able to reach a distance equal to the users [Control/5]. The jutsu remains active for a minimum of two posts and as long as the user chooses to. After the initial two posts, the jutsu is subject to an active chakra drain.
Kuuton • Pulse
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After the user performs a string of hand seals, the user gathers chakra around him and is then propelled in a chosen direction at a speed, and max range equal to his [Control].

C-RankShow

Kuuton • Levitate
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the required handseals, the user will coat their weapon of choice in Kuuton chakra, giving it the ability to defy the laws of gravity. This results in the user being able to freely control the given weapon. The jutsu can remain active for a time period equal to the users [Control] and does not prohibit prevent him from using other jutsu. The weapons speed and strength is equal to the users [Control].

TaijutsuShow

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GenjutsuShow

*[Genjutsu • Touch of Heaven
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
The trigger for this jutsu is witnessing the user perform the handseals required. Once the victim is caught in the genjutsu, he or she will experience begin propelled up into the air high enough to touch the clouds. However, the victim actually remains on the ground, usually frozen in fear. The strength of the genjutsu is equal to the users [Will Power], and the victim requires to have [Will Power] higher than the user to be able to break out of the jutsu.
*[Genjutsu • Piercer
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
After performing required handseals, the user will gather his chakra in his voice voice box and release a single, high pitched whistle that results in the blockin of the victims nural pathways that process sound. This results in the victim hearing this loud pitched noise constantly, but the hearing of the user is actually not affected; they can still be placed under other sound illusions. The strength of the genjutsu is equal to the users [Will Power], and the victim requires to have [Will Power] higher than the user to be able to break out of the jutsu.
*[Genjutsu • The Monster Within
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
The trigger for this jutsu is witnessing the user perform the handseals required. Once the victim is caught in the genjutsu, he or she will see the user a couple of steps closer than he or she actually is The strength of the genjutsu is equal to the users [Will Power], and the victim requires to have [Will Power] higher than the user to be able to break out of the jutsu.
*[Genjutsu • Torture
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
After performing required handseals, the user will gather his chakra in his voice voice box, and begin to whistle. Once the victim is caught in the genjutsu, he or she will experience a progressive numbing of their limbs, eventually losing the sense of feeling. The strength of the genjutsu is equal to the users [Will Power], and the victim requires to have [Will Power] higher than the user to be able to break out of the jutsu.
*[Genjutsu • An Earthly Trick
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
After the user performs the required handseals, he or she will pick up a small rock and lauch it at the victim; the throw itself is the trigger. Once the victim is caught in the genjutsu, he or she will see the rock traveling towards them as it were, but it is growing in size as it moves closer; to the point where at point blank range it is a size of a large boulder. The strength of the genjutsu is equal to the users [Will Power], and the victim requires to have [Will Power] higher than the user to be able to break out of the jutsu.

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History

Historical AccountsShow

Kibou was born into an ancient house of Sunagakure. He was raised in an aristocratic environment that placed great importance on knowledge and skill. He was brought up with the intention to make him a skilled shinobi, who could not only represent his Village and family on the battlefield, but more importantly to be able to carry out requests from his superiors.

When he was little he underwent a rigorous academic education that required him to, not only be well aware of any and all notable figures that operate across the continents, have great military knowledge to be able to make decision that would once again benefit his Village and family.

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[hobnob]

The history/personality are brief because how this character turns out depends heavily on the house/family getting accepted. I will update it in the future once the house/family is all sorted.

[TheLacarix]

Amenome - The Eye of Heaven;

You cannot be immune to genjutsu

Gravity is Kuuton (which you already have) the doujutsu won’t be able to perform kuuton jutsu.

I’ll have Truth and Kab take a look at the rest of your app, you’ll need to set up a clan page if you want to make a custom clan.

[Kabu]

Okay, so um... firstly while shorter histories are fine, this history is too brief. I'd like at least two full paragraphs, one describing home life and early childhood and another going into some depth on his schooling period. Also I personally would like any new clans and houses to be newer additions to the village. It can maybe be an ancient house within wind country at large but not the village itself.

Kuuton • The Weight of Dust <- Buffs and debuffs are static numbers rather than scaling on control and it also needs a maximum range.

Kuuton • Earth Contact <- Needs a max range

Kuuton • Tentacles <- Size of tentacles?

Kuuton • Pulse <- Max range in meters

Kuuton • Levitate <- The part about being able to use other jutsu is a no go and it also needs a maximum duration. Also I'm not sure if Kuuton can actually be used like this but it would be higher than C rank. And also rather than 'damage equal to control' it should be 'speed and strength equal to control'

[hobnob]

Updated.

[TheLacarix]

Your dojutsu hasn't changed?

[hobnob]

What am I suppose to do with it? and it has

[TheLacarix]

It can't use gravity, it could see it if you like but I'm not sure how useful that is and you cannot be immune to illusion gen without the required willpower and control.

You also need to register this clan.

[hobnob]

Why am I not able to use gravity with my doujutsu?

[TheLacarix]

Kuuton is a specific Fuuton extension of Suna, written within secret techniques. A bloodline would then not give you access to this (even though you have the conc) also, Kabuto has told you when registering this clan you need to make it a clan that is new to the village, ICly they would not have access to these secret scrolls.

But I’ll let Kab and Truth take it from here.

[hobnob]

Problem solved, the clan of Surudoi are an ancient clan of the wind country who have contributed to the well being of the village over hundreds of years. Masters of the wind who have developed their skills to the point where they became able to harness the gravity. To ensure the prosperity of the village and country they had decided to pass their knowledge onto the citizens of the village. After years of integration among the clan members, the eye of heaven came into being; it the had gravitational prowess at its core.

[Taiga]

If you are going to wrap multiple abilities into one, I think the Doujutsu should be utilizing a Nth stat.

Honestly though I'd recommend since this is a Suna ninja anyways you just get Kuuton and cut everything out of your ability but the ability to see gravity- that's an exceptionally useful and clever doujutsu/ability in of itself.

This way you can just have a simple "Body Mod" ability + a conc to achieve what you want.

[ShinobiTruth]

I'm going to back up Kenobi on this. I will do my best to make this easier, though.

You do not need to make this a clan. It's the natural inclination, obviously, given the way the canon the site is based off of works, but it's not necessary. If you want a doujutsu, you could simply mention something like a mutation in a recessive gene that allowed you to discover this ability, which would qualify as a Body Mod. I would also recommend that, for now, you stick to seeing gravitational fields and the direction of its pull, as Kenobi suggested.

All the stuff you're trying to do with your doujutsu can (more or less) be achieved with kuuton by itself, so I wouldn't stress too much about making the doujutsu have a whole bunch of abilities. As the character grows, you may find things that you can add onto the doujutsu later.

[Niro]

2 days until timed