Haruka izumi

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Haruka izumi

Post by Kaitos10 » Tue Dec 22, 2020 7:30 pm

haruka izumi
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[Nindo]

General Information Age:12
Gender:female
Height:4”11
Weight:80lbs
Physical Features: Pale skin with blue eyes, black hair. Her thin body is full of mostly muscle because she is only 12 her body is still developing. Around her neck is a hood that extends up and down. She wears a sleeveless mesh chain mesh shirt most shinobi wear with a v neck shirt leaving slit slightly down the middle where the chain shirt can be seen. The sleeves connect on the bottom with a flap of fabric that allows the sleeves to show off her shoulders while covering everything down to her hands.
  • Face/head:pale skin, blue eyes
  • Body: mesomorphic body type thin but muscular.
  • Notable Features:----
Clothing/Accessories:foldable hood with v neck shirt with mesh undershirt and skirt with leggings
Picture:
Personality: Haruka is a bubbly person who has anger issues and over reacts occasionally. She is kind, compassionate, spiteful/vengeful ,fun-loving, energetic, mischievous, and finally is very inquisitive. She loves to see people happy, and may sometimes try to make people happy. Haruka loves games especially games of chance like gambling, also likes traveling, really loves to dance and thinks singing is fun, likes fire as well. Haruka is a spirited person, on the outside she may seem sweet and cheerful but true chaos lies beneath the surface. While she is passionate and driven, Haruka tries to live in the moment.

Haruka will tease people occasionally, or play guessing games if they want to know something because seems more fun. She tends to overreact especially when panicking. Has a difficult time sometimes with restraint. She tends to occasionally have a short attention span so excessive waiting with nothing to do is annoying, so she usually carries a book or two to read just in case. Also, perverse behavior and poking her or other behaviors that are annoying to others usually annoy her.
  • General:
  • Hopes/Dreams: to be the best dancer in the Fire nations and eventually the world and to help restore her clan
  • Fears: spiders, as well as some common other fears like dying.
  • Combat Mentality:------------

Battle Information Village: konoha
Rank:genin
  • Chakra Pool:10
  • Endurance:4
  • Control:10
  • Strength:4
  • Speed:8
  • Willpower:4
Equipment:15 kunai 15m of wire 15 shuriken
Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity:raiton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability neko morph this is a genetic type body morph she inherited from her mom when she was born it gives her cat ears and tail that enhances balance helping to prevent her from falling over and allowing her to keep her balance and stay on her feet better then most people, as well as hearing enough to hear minute sounds and whispers from far away in addition to the rp purposes this has it lets her detect c rank quieting abilities at Genin tier b rank at chunin and a rank at jounin and s rank at banin though there still needs to be some sound to detect if the technique or ability removes all sound completely then can’t use this since need at least a minute amount of sound to detect or hear something last but not least it gives the ability to see in the dark like cats
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
Raiton:
Raiton
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a shocking effect.
Passive (Shocking)Show
Raiton has the effect of shocking, which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area.

Additionally, the strength of the nervous effect on organic material from raiton jutsu is determined by the Strength stat range they fall into.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: Tingling, acute numbness.
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Loss of Sensation
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Localized Paralysis
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Diffuse Paralysis
Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu:
Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu
This user is able to utilize Storage Fuuinjutsu and Force Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Storage or Force Classification. Storage Fuuinjutsu can be used to store supplies, weapons, armor, or anything in between. Force Fuuinjutsu are used to release, counteract, and capture energy.
Doton:
Doton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the doton affinity. Doton has a passive enduring effect.
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Doton has a passive effect of Endurance, which means that it's power is retained throughout the entirety of the jutsu. All of a single doton jutsu retains the strength of the jutsu, even after the jutsu has been destroyed, and unlike other jutsu, doton does not fade when destroyed. This means that if a doton barrier with 25 strength is cut in half and falls to the ground, a part of that barrier could be picked up and carried as a hand held shield which would still have 25 strength, despite being a fractured part of a jutsu. This creates incredibly potent defenses, making doton a popular affinity among defensive fighters.
Katon:
Katon Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Katon affinity. Katon has a passive ignition effect.
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Katon's effect is ignition, which means that all katon jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread fire from their source. Once a jutsu has been performed, the fire from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. That means a C-rank katon jutsu that moves at 13 speed would create subsequent fires that spread at 4 speed. These secondary fires require flammable material to continuously spread, otherwise they will burn out on their own.

Additionally, the strength of burns on organic material from katon jutsu is determined by the strength stat of the individual jutsu.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: First Degree Burns
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Second Degree Burns
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Third Degree Burns
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Fourth Degree Burns
nendo:
nendo Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize nendo, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the nendo affinity. Nendo has a passive shrapnel effect.
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nendo’s effect is shrapnal, which means that all nendo jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread shrapnel from the source of the jutsu which is usually a explosion. After a jutsu has been performed the shrapnel are made from the remains of the earth chakra used to create the bomb the shrapnel is solid though infused with the chakra from the jutsu for extra penetrating power the shrapnel from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. That means a C-rank nendo jutsu that moves at 13 speed would create subsequent shrapnel that spread at 4 speed. The shrapnel are destroyed on contact with a solid object.

Additionally, the strength of the shrapnel on organic material from nendo jutsu is determined by the strength stat of the individual jutsu.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: Small cuts
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Medium size or very painful wounds
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Large or lots of sizable gashes all over 5he body
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: internal bleeding from tons of cuts that penetrate throughout the body
Taijutsu
Close Quarters Combat:
The fundamental skill of [Close Quarters Combat] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.
Deft Hands:
The fundamental skill of [Deft Hands] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.
Acrobatics:
The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Stealth:
The fundamental skill of [Stealth] describes the user’s proficiency in remaining silent, unseen and unnoticed as they go about tasks. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Perception:
The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Projectile Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Projectile Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with weapons designed to attack from afar, such as bows, shuriken, senbon, launchers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Corded Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Corded Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with long rope-like weapons such as chains and wire. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Dancing skill:
the fundamental skill of [dancing] indicates the users skill and proficiency in dancing, being graceful, and having good balance and footing. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu

Jutsu
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Raiton:
Raiton
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a shocking effect.
Passive (Shocking)Show
Raiton has the effect of shocking, which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area.

Additionally, the strength of the nervous effect on organic material from raiton jutsu is determined by the Strength stat range they fall into.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: Tingling, acute numbness.
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Loss of Sensation
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Localized Paralysis
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Diffuse Paralysis
D rank

Raiton • Lightning Armament
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After the correct hand seals are performed, the user coats themselves in a thick layer of lightning. This armour of lightning forms near instantly and requires [Control] Strength to break. During this time, the user's physical strikes apply the Raiton shocking effect.

Raiton • Bright Bolt
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will extend two fingers toward a target. A bolt of lightning will jump up to 10 meters from their fingers at [Control] Speed and Strength.

Raiton • Stun Gun
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will channel Raiton chakra to two of their fingers. They will then be able to fire up to three total bullet sized balls of concentrated lightning from their fingertips. These bullets will travel at [Control] speed, but will not have any physical force. Instead, they will apply light electrical burns similar to a sun burn and will apply Raiton's shocking effect.

C rank

Raiton • Shock Double
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary hand seals, the user will create a clone out of their Raiton chakra. This clone will have the users stats. It lasts for [Control/5] posts.

Raiton • Advanced Stun gun
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will channel Raiton chakra to two of their fingers. They will then be able to fire up to 20 total bullet sized balls of concentrated lightning from their fingertips. These bullets will travel at [Control] speed, but will not have any physical force. Instead, they will apply light electrical burns similar to a sun burn and will apply Raiton's shocking effect.
“Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu”Show
Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu:
Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu
This user is able to utilize Storage Fuuinjutsu and Force Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Storage or Force Classification. Storage Fuuinjutsu can be used to store supplies, weapons, armor, or anything in between. Force Fuuinjutsu are used to release, counteract, and capture energy.
D rank

Storage Fuuinjutsu • Tool Storage
D-Rank Fuuinjutsu
After drawing a seal formula on a surface, ensuring it is large enough for the object that is about to be stored. The user will then begin placing the object into the seal. The user can only seal objects up to their ([Control]*2)m^3 in size.

color=black]Force Fuuinjutsu • Explosive Tag[/color]
D-Rank Fuuinjutsu
After drawing a ([Control]/5)x([Control]/5) meter seal formula on a surface of an object. The user will then arm it with their chakra up to [Control] strength with a concussive force explosion outwards from itself.
Minor Chakra Enhanced Strength
D-rank Ninpou
The user will channel chakra through their body, temporarily increasing their muscle mass, giving them a +3 in Strength. However, this small boost causes the user to expend body energy quicker, giving them -3 Endurance while in this state. This state can last for 5 posts before needing to be refreshed.

*[Ninjutsu • Wall]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user causes a thin 3x3x1 meter flat barrier to form within 10 meters of them at [Control] Speed and has [Control] Strength. It lasts for 3 posts.

*[Ninjutsu • Chakra Burst alt]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra into one of their fists or feet, the user will then attempt to strike their target and if successful, they will release additional concussive force in the form of an outward explosion with [Control] Strength from their fist. If the user does not strike a target within 3 posts the jutsu dissipates.

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“Caipoira Taijutsu”Show
Caipoira Taijutsu:
This Taijutsu style is all about quick, rhythmic movements with grace. It was created by haruka izumi in a way to still have fun doing something she loved while training to be a better ninja at the same time. In this style, the user may perform martial arts maneuvers that are completely indistinguishable from ordinary dancing to those without **Perception** disciplines of equal or higher rank than the techniques performed. This martial arts style focuses on strikings from irregular angles in the form of quick & short snap strikes using one's palms, wrist, forearm, elbows, knees, feet, legs, and body in unorthodox movements that may catch foes off guard. In addition to that it also allows for dodging and sometimes blocking in intriguing ways. Required Concentrations: Close quarters combat, Dancing, acrobatics.
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“Kūgāpou Taijutsu”Show
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Kūgāpou Taijutsu:
This taijutsu style is all about avoidance, with grace. In this style, the user may slap away blades, thrown weapons, and other objects, all in the interests of preserving one's self. However, this style isn't necessarily about avoiding all damage, so much as avoiding the worst damage. In instances where the user is going against an opponent they can't match, they may use this style to avoid fatal injuries and instead receive less serious injuries and live to fight a bit longer, or even another day. Required Concentrations: Deft Hands, Perception.
D rank

Kūgāpou • Soft Paws
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Soft Paws is a bare-handed deflection technique and is used against bladed weapons. At this level, the practitioner is able to read the angles of the attacks to place the flat of their hand against the flat of the blade and push it away without getting cut by the weapon. However, prolonged use of this technique will cause the practitioner to suffer bruises on their hands.

*Kūgāpou • Soft Elbow
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Requirement: *Kūgāpou • Soft Paws
After using Soft Paws to slap a blade away, the practitioner will continue moving forwards while jutting out their elbow. The momentum from the target's original attack that was slapped away, coupled with the sudden defenselessness of the target after having their attack deflected, makes for a powerful counter-attack. The elbow can be aimed anywhere on the torso and above, but is usually aimed at the target's face.

*Kūgāpou • Slight Dodge
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Whenever in a situation where they can't avoid being struck, the practitioner will slightly shift their body. This slight movement allows them to cause the incoming attack to miss any vital organs and cause as little damage as possible.

C rank

*Kūgāpou • Leveraged Fang
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
The practitioner will sidestep a weapon attack against them and attempt to disarm the opponent. They will grab and pull the weapon on a safe or dull spot before simultaneously slamming the other palm into the opponent's wrist. If the opponent has a Rigid Structure technique of equal or higher rank than this technique, they can resist being disarmed. Otherwise, the weapon is ripped from the opponent's grasp and their hand is knocked away. Their wrist will swell from the impact, making handling weapons in that hand difficult if the wrist isn't outright broken due to the practitioner having a higher Strength than the opponent.

*Kūgāpou • Hunter's Prediction
C-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
By observing a weapon's movement through the air and having a deep understanding of weaponry in general, the practitioner is capable of predicting a weapon's trajectory. This technique is especially effective when the practitioner saw the actual moment the weapon was launched, as seeing the movement of the weapon wielder provides crucial information. If they didn't see the weapon being launched, they can still predict the trajectory to a smaller degree but are incapable of accounting for high-level taijutsu that may be applied to the weapon attack.
“Ochiba”Show
Ochiba:
Ochiba
Ochiba is a weapon style originating from the fire country, one of the few weapon styles developed by Shinobi and not Samurai. Ochiba translate as “Dead Leaf” As it is a weapon style that focuses on the use of a Kunai which are similar in appearance to a leaf. The kunai is held in a reversed manner, the handle comes up by the thumb and the blade comes down by the bottom of the hand. This allows for short, yet quick strikes and parries. Though this style is developed to use a kunai it can be transposed to other short weapons such as ninjato & tanto, though not all techniques will be available.
Requires: Deft Hands Projectiles Weapons and/or Sword Weapons
D rank

*Ochiba • Single Finger Draw
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Utilizing this manoeuvre, the user is able to quickly draw a kunai from its holster. This is done by placing their finger through the lip of the holder and into the ring of the pommel, flicking it up and out quickly, having the kunai in the user’s hand within an instant.

*Ochiba • Ambidexterity
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
After practicing for a long amount of time with the concept of using both of their hands with equal skill, the user has developed a level of ambidexterity that allows them to utilize both hands equally and as effectively without any penalty. This extends to other methods of combat or simple everyday life as well.

*Ochiba • Single Finger Seal
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Having extensive experience with Deft Hands the user is able to manipulate a kunai within their hands and perform hand seals at full speed, without having to put down the kunai at any point.

*Ochiba • Dance Detour
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: 10 Speed
A technique that relies highly on speed, the user will attempt to slap away any incoming melee strikes or projectiles with their kunai. The average of the user's speed and strength needs to be higher than the strength the projectile was thrown at, using the momentum of their own speed to deflect the strike.

*Ochiba • Leafing Lumber
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
A simple technique, the user lowers themselves down and performs a sweeping kick attempting to knock their opponent to the floor, whilst bring their blade into the opponent’s chest all in one fluid motion

C rank
*Ochiba • Spine of the Maple Tree
C-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Often used as a counterattack, by stepping under an incoming strike and resting on their front leg, they will quickly pivot slashing behind them, upwards across their opponent’s spine. This will likely cut the nerves connected to the users legs, making it difficult for them to move, giving a reduction of -5 speed, they will need to seek medical attention.

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History
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Haruka was born in the leaf village, sadly the majority of her clan perished in last and war as well as being on the decline since the war before it. So it was just her and her mom, because her mom was a jounin on temporary leave they traveled a lot. Because of this she got to see lots of the land of fire , sadly she was a baby for a lot of it so she didn’t remember a lot of the time. The reason her mom was traveling so much was she was on tour as a traveling entertainer. By the age of four she was already good enough at walking to be able to dance and learned by watching her mom. By the age of 5 her mom would take her up on stage for some special dance shows, the audience usually thought it was cute and applauded. It was around this time her mom started home schooling her in the ninja arts. Life was going great nearly perfect for her though because she was out traveling with her mom she didn’t get to go to the academy as early as everyone else.

As she got to the age of 8 her mom even started teaching her about the history of her clan and everything she remembered about there family. Time went on Haruka enjoyed the time she got traveling with her mother. But by the age of 10 some enemy ninjas attacked, so Haruka hid, only to find out when it was over her mother was dead. She quickly was taken back to the village where she lived as a orphan, for the first month or so she cried and mourned her mother. But then was thrust into the academy once there she took a crash course though because she had been studying with her mom she quickly passed getting decent grades. By the time she was 12 she graduated and became a genin.

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Post by Ace Trainer » Fri Dec 25, 2020 9:52 am

Are you sure you want to include the [Dancing] Concentration? It appears to be very similar to the [acrobatics] concentration, and I'm unsure what additional skillset [Dancing] provides. If its just a style of fighting, you can have that without taking up the concentration slot.

Similarly. the styles you have in the concentration section should probably go elsewhere so we don't accidentally count them against your concentrations, simply to avoid confusion.

Your ability, [Neko Morph] is fine as an ability, but needs to metrics for what it does. If it increases her speed and hearing, it should have some quntifiable way in which they are increased i.e "Allows her to discern more minute sounds, defying limitations set by C-rank quieting techniques" or something to that effect. Seeing in the dark is a-okay though!

Finally, while all taijutsu share a pyramid, the ninjutsu do not. So, its advised your separate your ninjutsu based on their concentration (i.e; 1 spoiler for raiton, 1 for fuuin, etc). that way you can keep track of the ranks of jutsu you have.
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[Aisu Koiji :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
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Post by Kaitos10 » Fri Jan 01, 2021 2:34 pm

Fixed it and yes think I will keep dancing as a concentration since it feels like it fits the theme and would have good rp purposes at least
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Post by Dot » Sun Jan 03, 2021 2:01 pm

There some bits in the app that could be removed in the top section of the app like the 'NINDO,' and 'nicknames' but other than that it looks good.

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Post by Ace Trainer » Mon Jan 04, 2021 11:17 am

Oops sorry.

The "Chakra enhanced strength" concentration is actually just ninpou, you don't need an additional concentration for that.

Additionally, you can't boost by %, but instead by a flat number. The rules for this can be referenced [here] and for a D-rank boost you would would +3 and then -3 somewhere else.
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Kaikyo Kohon :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shinwa Basuta no Suihouheki Yasahii :: Kirigakure No Sato – Mizukage :: Spirit of Capricorn, Topenga]
[Futokutei Hitoare :: Konohagakure No Sato – Pestilence (Four Horsemen) – Jounin]
[Aisu Koiji :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shitagane Sakki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Genin]
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[Futokutei Yasunari :: Konohagakure No Sato – Genin]
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Post by Kaitos10 » Tue Jan 05, 2021 5:35 pm

Fixed everything
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Post by Ace Trainer » Fri Jan 08, 2021 6:02 pm

One more thing;

You cannot boost stats the way your ability does without utilize the [Specialist Stat]. I would suggest reading that rule page if you want to stick to this. Otherwise, you can remove it.

As a note, your ability is considered a body modification, meaning it does not need to be in its "complete" form when registered. You are able to add to it over time, so if you would simply like to get accepted now, it might make sense to just remove it and you can revisit the idea in the future.
Hizashi IkinariKenketi TentekiMistaki Shio
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Jounin
Kumogakure No Sato
Special Jounin
Kirigakure No Sato
Jounin A Rank Missing-Nin
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[Setsuya Inka :: Sunagakure No Sato – The Soul Host – Special Jounin]
Kaikyo Kohon :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shinwa Basuta no Suihouheki Yasahii :: Kirigakure No Sato – Mizukage :: Spirit of Capricorn, Topenga]
[Futokutei Hitoare :: Konohagakure No Sato – Pestilence (Four Horsemen) – Jounin]
[Aisu Koiji :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shitagane Sakki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Genin]
[Batsu Betsuni :: Iwagakure No SatoJounin A Rank Missing Ninja]
[Futokutei Yasunari :: Konohagakure No Sato – Genin]
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Post by Kaitos10 » Mon Jan 11, 2021 1:58 pm

Fixed the stat boosts
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Haruka izumi

Post by Izanagi » Sat Jan 16, 2021 4:05 pm

Shouldn't remove the 1/2, just a few things to touch on for the history. Bannin are extremely few and mostly PC or specific NPC's for the village so it doesn't really line up to just have an unnamed Bannin as her mother. You can make the mother a Jounin though and that works fine and can still be someone that was allowed to travel and perform shows, maybe just say she was retired or took a few years off duty on a long maternity leave type thing. completely reasonable. Second, you mention in the history that Haruka graduates from the academy and becomes a Genin at 12 yet the character is only listed as being 10 years old on the app, easy fix just bump the character age to 12. Aside from that history looks fine, just keep in mind her 'clan' isn't an officially recognized clan and would have to more be just a family that specialized in something so they wouldn't be well known or anything.

Natsuki Takeo - 17th Hokage
Karagata Shinjiro - Kiri Jounin; Jinchuuriki, Seven Swordsmen of the Mist
Natsuki Yozei- Konoha Special Jounin; Vanguard
Takeda Ichiro - C-Rank Waterfall Country; Black Wake.

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Haruka izumi

Post by Kaitos10 » Sat Jan 23, 2021 4:16 pm

I assume I just resetted the thing and need it 1/2 again because I added 3 new concentrations katon, doton, and my custom clay release one called nendo so posting this because I was told by Gil I’m supposed to
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Haruka izumi

Post by Gilak » Sat Jan 23, 2021 4:24 pm

1/2


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