Valfar

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Valfar

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Valfar


General Information
Type: Summon
Gender: Male
Age: 450
Appearance: When manifested in the shinobi world, Valfar takes the form of a golden lion with a silver mane and wings. Silver feathers sproud from his forearms and haunches, further accenting his otherworldly nature. He's larger than a regular male lion, roughly the size of a warhorse, and clearly has significant weight behind him.
Personality:
  • General: Valfar is a serious, blunt individual most of the time. He doesn't appreciate metaphor and prefers to call things exactly as they are. He's exceptionally honest as a result, and his arrogance as a royal spirit lends into his lack of tact and subtletly in social situations.
  • Hopes/Dreams: Valfar is king of the Sky, and the arrogance of nobility clings to him closely. His whims change with the wind, and it's difficult to predict exactly what he desires at any one time, though he would never be afraid to make it known.
  • Fears: Valfar would never admit to experiencing fear, but deep down he is extremely fragile about recognition. He fears the loss of the respect and status his position gives him, and he craves the attention that comes with it. Being ignored or overlooked is both infuriating and terrifying for the King of Sky.
  • Combat Mentality:When fighting with The Empress, Valfar is typically either a mount which provides transportation, support, and cover, or in his armour form where he plays defence while supporting Kougyoku's attacks.
Battle Information Rank: A-rank
Stats
  • Endurance: 20
  • Chakra Pool: 20
  • Control: 20
  • Strength: 20
  • Speed: 20
  • Willpower: 20
Equipment: -
Elemental Affinities: Fuuton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
Regalia of Sky This ability allows Valfar to transform himself into a suit of armour to be worn by Kougyoku. This armour consists of gauntlets, vambraces, greaves, boots, and a headdress. The armour posseses Valfar's strength and inflicting damage upon the armour is like inflicting damage on the summon itself. While in this form Valfar can only cast techniques through channelling. While in this form, Valfar shares Kougyoku's senses and does not possess any sensory organs of its own, however he is able to concentrate on different things that Kougyoku can sense than the Empress herself. Valfar is capable of communicating with Kougyoku while she wears him in this form through a type of telepathy initiated by a Genjutsu he possesses, however he cannot speak out loud.
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Concentrations
Ninjutsu
Raiton:
Raiton
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a shocking effect.
Passive (Shocking)Show
Raiton has the effect of shocking, which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area.

Additionally, the strength of the nervous effect on organic material from raiton jutsu is determined by the Strength stat range they fall into.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: Tingling, acute numbness.
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Loss of Sensation
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Localized Paralysis
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Diffuse Paralysis

Fuuton Affinity:
Fuuton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an cutting effect.
Passive (Cutting)Show
Fuuton has a natural cutting property to it, that exists in all jutsu unless otherwise stated. This gives fuuton a unique opportunity to strike with additional power, and to act as a offensive defense. Regardless of their purpose fuuton jutsu passively cut with no distinct pattern at 1/2 the strength of the technique rounded down unless otherwise stated. This means if someone punched a 20 strength fuuton wall, they would get cuts on their hand applied with 10 strength. This also means that fuuton jutsu specifically designated to cut things can create devastating wound by essentially striking twice.

Elemental Ninjutsu: Advanced Channeling:
This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any elemental Ninjutsu that is designed to be channeled, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method.
Taijutsu
Rigid Structure:
The fundamental skill of [Rigid Structure] describes the user’s ability to adeptly position and lock in their skeletal structure to efficiently absorb blows with minimal damage to their person. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Acrobatics:
The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Genjutsu
Sight Initiation:
This user has learned to use visual cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to perform actions, or draw the eyes to something to capture their targets in a genjutsu.

Touch Initiation:
This user has learn to use physical sensations to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to physical touch the target, or touch them with objects to capture their targets in genjutsu.

Genjutsu: Advanced Channeling:
This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any Genjutsu that is designed to be channeled, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method. Channeled Genjutsu cause the user to be surrounded in an aura of chakra while channeling the genjutsu, until the genjutsu is initiated.

Status Genjutsu:
This user has learned how to utilize Status Genjutsu that impose mental and cognitive effects on their target.


Jutsu
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*Raiton • Lightning Armament
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After the correct hand seals are performed, the user coats themselves in a thick layer of lightning. This armour of lightning forms near instantly and requires [Control] Strength to break. During this time, the user's physical strikes apply the Raiton shocking effect.

*Raiton • Conductor
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will coat a weapon they are holding in Raiton electricity for 5 posts. This causes the shock effect to be produced on any contact with a target, while also granting blunt weapons the ability to cut through skin to produce shallow wounds. This also works for thrown weapons, however if the projectile remains out of contact with the user for more than 2 posts the technique will dissipate early.

*Raiton • Stun Gun
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will channel Raiton chakra to two of their fingers. They will then be able to fire up to three total bullet sized balls of concentrated lightning from their fingertips. These bullets will travel at [Control] speed, but will not have any physical force. Instead, they will apply light electrical burns similar to a sun burn and will apply Raiton's shocking effect.

*Raiton • Sky Spear
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will create a 1 meter long rod of lightning in their hand at [Control] Speed. They are then able to launch it at their Strength in a single direction. Upon contact the spear will explode with [Control] Strength. If it has not been launched by the end of the second post it will dissipate.

*Raiton • Bright Bolt
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will extend two fingers toward a target. A bolt of lightning will jump up to 10 meters from their fingers at [Control] Speed and Strength.

*Raiton • Jamming Pulse
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user emits a wave of electricity from their palm in a single direction. This is produced as a 10m wide line which extends 2m into the air and travels up to 25m from the user at [Control] Speed. The wave will apply the shocking effect and reduce the speed of any living thing it strikes by 3 Speed for 3 posts by electrically interfering with the brain's nervous signals.

*Raiton • Voltaic Zone
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will seep Raiton chakra in an area around them with a 25m diameter. This will produce an electric current on the ground in this area visible as crackling lightning on the surface. Any other than the user who step into this zone will have the shocking effect applied and their legs will sustain [Control] Strength shocks. This current lasts 3 posts, while it ends immediately if the user leaves the area.

*Raiton • Galvanic Zone
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will seep Raiton chakra in an area around them with a 25m diameter. The user's Raiton will constrict and paralyze jutsu and people who enter it. They will lose -1 Speed per post for 2 posts or until the user ends the jutsu.

[Raiton | Golden Sword of Selection]
C-ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra or performing hand seals, Valfar crafts a sword out of Raiton to be wielded by Kougyoku. The created sword will have all the regular properties of a normal sword and can be of any shape or style so long as the blade does not exceed 1m in length and two inches in width. As it is comprised of Raiton, the sword will cause paralysis with the Raiton passive, while also electrically shocking with [Control] strength on hit. This weapon lasts a number of posts equal to half the user’s control score. When this technique is used with higher than rank average control, the user may increase the size of the sword as they wish, so long as it does not breach the maximums outlined in the ninjutsu rules.

[Raiton | Roar of the Sky King]
B-ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra or performing hand seals, Valfar either brings Raiton chakra into his mouth if he is in his true form or into a weapon Kougyoku is wielding if he is in armour form. This allows Valfar to fire a wave of Raiton up to 40m in a line, with a thickness of 3m from his mouth, or in armour form from Kougyoku's weapon. This has [Control] speed and strength. Wherever the beam of lightning strikes, Raiton diffuses into the space around, both air and earth, for a distance of 20m delivering electric shocks and applying the Raiton passive.
FuutonShow
[Fuuton | Extension of Will]
D-Ranked Fuuton Jutsu
After channeling their chakra the user prepares wind around their person, before throwing a projectile or casting another ninjutsu which fires a projectile. The wind will extend the range of that projectile by 10m, and does not apply the Fuuton passive. In armour form Valfar is able to apply this to a ninjutsu or projectile fired by his wearer.

[Fuuton | Buffet]
D-ranked Fuuton Jutsu
After channeling their chakra, the user will expel a gust of wind in all directions for 5m around themselves at [Control] speed and strength.

[Fuuton | Vaccuum Screen]
D-ranked Fuuton Jutsu
The user channels their chakra and then stirs the wind around them into a small whirlwind. This picks up dust, sand, and any other particulate in the 10m area around them and swirls it in and around the user like a wall extending 5m from their person, obscuring them from sight so long as they stay within it. This only lasts for a single post, after which the particulate is pushed upwards and dispersed high into the air. The screen does not follow the user, does not apply the fuuton passive, and only impacts particulates (chakra created or natural).

[Fuuton | Headwind]
C-ranked Fuuton Jutsu
After channeling his chakra, Valfar thickins the wind for a 10m radius around himself, causing anything that moves through this space other than himself or his wearer in armour form to have their speed reduced by 3. This technique lasts 3 posts.

[Fuuton | Aeropause]
C-ranked Fuuton Jutsu
After channeling his chakra, Valfar creates a sphere of wind around himself or the person wearing him in armour form at [Control] speed. The sphere lasts only one post, covering anything which moves through it in a layer of Fuuton which reduces the strength of its impacts by 3 for 3 posts. Valfar can take the sphere down at any time after it is established.
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GenjutsuShow
[Sky Regalia | Communication Link]
D-ranked Genjutsu
The user channels chakra / hand seals before touching a target. The user is then able to create auditory hallucinations in the target's mind so long as they remain in physical contact. These hallucinations are limited to the form of the user's voice speaking to them at a normal speaking volume. The target can end this at any time, as this technique does not have a requirement to dispel it. The technique lasts for a number of posts equal to the user's [Control] unless ended prematurely.

[Sky Regalia | Bite the Hand]
D-ranked Genjutsu
The user channels chakra while in their armour form. If there is a physical contact with the armour from an enemy's attack, either with a part of the body or a weapon wielded by the target, the touch will initiate this genjutsu. The body part closest to causing the physical contact feels as if it had just been bitten by a beast, strong enough to draw blood and deal significant pain. It quickly fades, however those with low willpower may drop weapons as a result.

[Sky Regalia | Breakdown]
D-ranked Genjutsu
The user channels chakra while in their armour form. If there is a physical contact with the armour from an enemy's attack, either with a part of the body or a weapon wielded by the target, the touch will initiate this genjutsu. This genjutsu causes the target to see their attack has devastated the armour, and broken it beyond the point of use. While this is not the case, it can fool them into thinking the armour no longer protects the wearer for 3 posts.

[Genjutsu | Snarl]
D-ranked Genjutsu
The user channels chakra before baring their teeth at an enemy. If the enemy sees the user bare their teeth, it appears that the user increases in size gradually over the course of a post which makes it look like the user could devour them in one bite. This can result in a particularly threatening visage.

[Sky Regalia | Intimidation]
C-ranked Status Genjutsu
The user channels chakra before causing the headdress on the armour to glow. The glowing horns serve as a visual trigger, those that see the glow experience fear of the wearer of the armour bubble up inside them, and the air gets thick with anticipation of their next action. Once caught, the genjutsu lasts 3 posts.

[Sky Regalia | Break the Hand]
C-ranked Genjutsu
The user channels chakra while in their armour form. If there is a physical contact with the armour from an enemy's attack, either with a part of the body or a weapon wielded by the target, the touch will initiate this genjutsu. This genjutsu causes the body part closest to causing physical contact feel as if it had just been bitten by a beast, strong enough to crack the bones within the appendage. The pain lasts for 2 posts.

[Genjutsu | Gaze of the King]
B-ranked Status Genjutsu
The user channels chakra or performs hand seals before making eye contact with the target. Once eye contact is made, the eyes appear to glow slightly and the target of the technique becomes so overcome by fear that they may freeze if they are unable to dispel the technique before the end of the first post. This technique can keep them frozen in fear for up to 4 posts. This technique will end early if the user or their allies damage the target.

History Valfar, king of the sky and lord of birds of prey, has ruled the air above the spirit world for centuries. Originally a servant of Vorashu during the time when Genma ruled the earth, Valfar ruled as the flying lion king of an area over Wind Country. After the fall of the Genma and their imprisonment, Valfar was considered a minor deity or demon by many tribes of the area. He was known for taking a somewhat feline curiousity in the fledgling human race and would enter into deals and grant boons to interesting people. There are many stories of the djinn, master of wind and granter of wishes, named Valfar.

Valfar had become trapped in a bottle and buried deep within a temple of the sun at the beginning of the Sun-based worship in the nation. There he slept for generations until Kougyoku went to that temple to pray on something that had bothered her. She had questions about what she should do in order to better her village and save it from what she saw as incompetent leadership. It was the questioning of her ruler that piqued Valfar's interest, and he managed to exert enough influence over his prison to knock over the bottle. The noise got the Teacher's attention, and when she released the beast the two were able to make a contract to seek the throne together.
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Valfar

Post by Ace Trainer » Sun Feb 07, 2021 12:57 pm

[Sky Regalia | Bite the Hand]
D-ranked Genjutsu
The user channels chakra while in their armour form. If there is a physical contact with the armour from an enemy's attack, either with a part of the body or a weapon wielded by the target, the touch will initiate this genjutsu. The body part closest to causing the physical contact feels as if it had just been bitten by a beast, strong enough to draw blood and deal significant pain. It quickly fades, however those with low willpower may drop weapons as a result.

This is probably C-rank, just because of how strong the physical illusion is.

[Sky Regalia | Break the Hand]
C-ranked Genjutsu
The user channels chakra while in their armour form. If there is a physical contact with the armour from an enemy's attack, either with a part of the body or a weapon wielded by the target, the touch will initiate this genjutsu. This genjutsu causes the body part closest to causing physical contact feel as if it had just been bitten by a beast, strong enough to crack the bones within the appendage. The pain lasts for 2 posts.

Which woul move this up to B-rank.

TBH i'm not sure how I feel about the touch initiator being transferred through a weapon. We kind of give clothing/armor a pass for obvious reason, but this sets a weird precedent that I'm not super thrilled about humoring. The easy way to get around this would be that they see the two weapon/armor or fist/armor touch or they hear the sound of them striking. Rather than being touch initiated. If you know what I mean?
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Valfar

Post by Ace Trainer » Sun Feb 21, 2021 1:20 pm

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