Enkouton Hiroko

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Enkouton Hiroko

Post by Kaitos10 » Sun Jul 25, 2021 5:39 pm

Enkouton Hiroko


[please stop staring your embarrassing me……]

General Information Age: 15
Gender: Female
Height: 5”11
Weight: 180 lbs
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: She has brown hair and her skin is moderately tanned and practically pale compared to other clan members. The rest is hidden by accessories and clothing though her face is the only time someone can get a peek at her skin color. She has blue eyes
  • Body: She has a long lanky body along with H cup breasts that she usually keeps tied down to reduce their size and prevent her from standing out more. That appear to be only c cups under her wraps and layers of clothing, while she has more muscle definition than the average person she still has little compared to the rest of her clan. She has a slightly curvy figure though sometimes hard to see through the clothes, She also has very thick long thighs.
  • Notable Features: She is quite a bit taller than the average person, she also has pretty thic thighs
Clothing/Accessories: wears multiple layers of clothes. The first layer is the bandages wrapped around her chest along with her underwear, the second layer is a mesh net with a crop top over it. The third layer is a casual t-shirt and the final layer is a flak jacket. Though when not in combat usually wears a turtleneck sweater instead of a flak jacket. She also wears baggy pants over her legs.

Picture:
Social version


Personality: Hiroko is a very shy and socially awkward person, being one of the few artistic people in her clan along with her appearance making her stand out brings her a lot of stress sometimes. She has a minor inferiority complex because of never feeling like she never got her parent's approval. She can be pretty indecisive, she hates when people other than her clan bother her when she’s working on a project.
  • Hopes/Dreams: To find someplace she can fit in
  • Fears: To disappoint her clan as well as get disowned by her clan, to have people she cares about, or to have important people mad at her. To have lots of people staring at her.
  • Combat Mentality: Hasn’t finished developing yet currently she just blasts people with lava-

Battle Information Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Chunin
  • Chakra Pool: 15
  • Endurance: 8
  • Control: 25
  • Strength: 6
  • Speed: 21
  • Willpower: 5
  • Power Rank: C
Equipment: 5 kunai
10 shuriken. Located in pouch on hip

10m of wire located in a pouch on the left thigh
5 exploding tags
1 smoke bomb
1 flashbang.

Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity: Youton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Enkouten:
Youton
Born to the Enkouten clan, this user is able to utilize Lava Release, a fusion composed of Doton and Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require Youton. Youton has a melting effect.
Passive (Melting/Hardening)Show
Youton melts in all its techniques, making it a powerful offensive and defensive ability. Enkouton are resistant to Youton for short periods of time, but can be just as damaged by it as a normal person, even by their own techniques, if exposed for too long. The melting quality of Youton burns at such an high temperature that it tends to encapsulate everything in it's path. Despite this, however, weaker youton jutsu struggle to sustain themselves and tend to only give weaker burns to those who come in contact with it. Youton have been known to dull weapons, or even melt weapons at high levels, and flow through defensive jutsu. More importantly, the melting power of youton means that youton techniques passively reduce the strength of anything they're in contact with by 1/4th th strength of the youton jutsu per post after contact. This means a 20 strength youton technique would do 20 strength of damage at impact, then melt at 5 strength per post until it hardened. This allows youton jutsu to substantially weaken defenses over time.
Hardening:
Youton jutsu naturally harden over the course of time. Below is a chart for the longest a youton jutsu can sustain itself. The length of a jutsu is a given, but can be specified to be less than the listed amount should the user so desire. Once hardened, Youton jutsu have only 1 strength, being extremely brittle.
  • E-rank: 1 post
  • D-rank: 3 posts
  • C-rank: 4 posts
  • B-rank: 6 posts
  • A-rank: 8 posts
  • S-rank: 10 posts
Requirements over 35 for S-rank can extend this length as well.
The burn strengths of Youton follow the below scale:
  • 1-14 Strength: Uncomfortable heat.
  • 15-24 Strength: First degree burns.
  • 25-34 Strength: Second degree burns.
  • 35+ Strength: Third degree burns.
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
Kouton Affinity:
Kouton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Kouton, and advanced form of Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Kouton affinity. Kouton has an resisting effect.
Passive (Resisting)Show
Kouton has a resisting effect. This means that Kouton jutsu ignore the effects of other affinities, regardless of their nature. If a Kouton spear was thrown through a water shield, the spear would not be caught by the shield, nor would it be destroyed by Sankaton, or cut by Fuuton. This resisting effect does not apply to active effects by jutsu. This means a fuuton jutsu that cuts with 30 strength would still cut through a 20 strength kouton shield, but it would not be affected by the secondary cutting by Fuuton. This makes Kouton very effective for breaking through and penetrating defenses that opponents expect to protect them. It's hardy nature makes Kouton very popular amoung Doton users.
Doton:
Doton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the doton affinity. Doton has a passive enduring effect.
Passive (Enduring)Show
Doton has a passive effect of Endurance, which means that it's power is retained throughout the entirety of the jutsu. All of a single doton jutsu retains the strength of the jutsu, even after the jutsu has been destroyed, and unlike other jutsu, doton does not fade when destroyed. This means that if a doton barrier with 25 strength is cut in half and falls to the ground, a part of that barrier could be picked up and carried as a hand held shield which would still have 25 strength, despite being a fractured part of a jutsu. This creates incredibly potent defenses, making doton a popular affinity among defensive fighters.
Sensory:
Sensor
Sensors are shinobi who are able to activate a sixth sense which can locate and read chakra sources. Sensory is advantageous as it allows shinobi to perceive without using any of their conventional senses, which can easily be deceived. Sensors are able to collect a lot of information through the interpretation of this sixth sense.
Katon:
Katon Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Katon affinity. Katon has a passive ignition effect.
Passive (Ignition)Show
Katon's effect is ignition, which means that all katon jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread fire from their source. Once a jutsu has been performed, the fire from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. That means a C-rank katon jutsu that moves at 13 speed would create subsequent fires that spread at 4 speed. These secondary fires require flammable material to continuously spread, otherwise they will burn out on their own.

Additionally, the strength of burns on organic material from katon jutsu is determined by the strength stat of the individual jutsu.
  • 1-14 Strength Requirement: First Degree Burns
  • 15-24 Strength Requirement: Second Degree Burns
  • 25-34 Strength Requirement: Third Degree Burns
  • 35+ Strength Requirement: Fourth Degree Burns
Taijutsu
Close Quarters Combat:
The fundamental skill of [Close Quarters Combat] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc.
Stealth:
The fundamental skill of [Stealth] describes the user’s proficiency in remaining silent, unseen and unnoticed as they go about tasks. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Perception:
The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Genjutsu[Place them here]

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
dotonShow
Doton:
Doton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the doton affinity. Doton has a passive enduring effect.
Passive (Enduring)Show
Doton has a passive effect of Endurance, which means that it's power is retained throughout the entirety of the jutsu. All of a single doton jutsu retains the strength of the jutsu, even after the jutsu has been destroyed, and unlike other jutsu, doton does not fade when destroyed. This means that if a doton barrier with 25 strength is cut in half and falls to the ground, a part of that barrier could be picked up and carried as a hand held shield which would still have 25 strength, despite being a fractured part of a jutsu. This creates incredibly potent defenses, making doton a popular affinity among defensive fighters.

*Doton • Earthen Ninja Tools
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a set of up to 10 basic projectiles, such as kunai, shuriken, or senbon, in their hand. These tools have [Control] strength.

*Doton • Dirt Cloud
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a 1 meter diameter ball of loose dirt in front of them, launching it off up to 10 meters away at [Control] strength and speed. Upon impact the ball of loose dirt breaks apart forming a vision-impairing cloud of dirt with a 5 meter radius.

*Doton • Wall
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a solid stone wall up to 5 meters away from them at [Control] speed. The wall has [Control] strength and is 3x3x1 meters large.

*Doton • Binding Formation
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling doton chakra into their foot the user will slam the ground within 5 meters of a target's feet with their heel, causing a formation of rock to shoot upwards at [Control] speed binding the target's feet at [Control] strength

*Doton • Trip Fault
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will cause a 1/2 meter pot hole to appear at [Control] speed somewhere within 5 meters.

C rank

*Doton • Landmine
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will tap their foot on the ground charging a 25 meter radius around their foot with explosive chakra. This is armed at [Control] speed. For the next three posts if anyone other than the user steps on the area it will explode with at a [Control] Strength explosion.

*Doton • Manica
C-Rank Ninjutsu
By channeling doton chakra into their arm, the user will form rock from their shoulder downward, encasing their forearm and hand in rough and simplistic layered plates of stone. The stone passes over the hand on the back-side but leaves the palm-side uncovered allowing full dexterity of the hand for seals. This essentially resembles a manica, which is a segmented armor that spans the length of the arm. The armor has [Control] strength and speed.

*[Sensory Style • Approaching Tremor]
C-rank Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals and place their hands to the ground. Releasing waves of chakra out of their hands. These waves of chakra will bounce back to the user after traveling out 50 meters on the ground. As the chakra returns to the user it will evoke an image in the users head of the immediate area around them, anything touching the ground and anything up to 5 meters underground. These are still images, not moving images, but can give the user a good idea of what is happening if they aren’t able to see otherwise.

*Doton • Spike Shot
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a stone spike directly in front of them roughly 1.5 meter long and 1/2 meter in diameter at it's thickest point before launching the spike forward up to 25 meters away at [Control] strength and speed.

[Doton • Mole Hiding]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After flooding the earth below her with chakra, Aiya will submerge herself into the ground. Aiya can then dig through the earth with the use of chakra, willing it to move out of her way. In the first post, Aiya may only move down into the earth to a maximum depth of 10 meters, leaving no sign of disturbed earth behind. In the following posts, Aiya can travel underground for up to 5 posts before needing to recast the jutsu. The maximum distance Aiya can travel from their original position is 25 meters in any direction, including down deeper into the earth. Additionally, the earth can only be moved at a speed equal to the user's [control], limiting the user’s speed at which they can travel through the ground.
“lava jutsu”Show
Enkouten:
Youton
Born to the Enkouten clan, this user is able to utilize Lava Release, a fusion composed of Doton and Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require Youton. Youton has a melting effect.
Passive (Melting/Hardening)Show
Youton melts in all its techniques, making it a powerful offensive and defensive ability. Enkouton are resistant to Youton for short periods of time, but can be just as damaged by it as a normal person, even by their own techniques, if exposed for too long. The melting quality of Youton burns at such an high temperature that it tends to encapsulate everything in it's path. Despite this, however, weaker youton jutsu struggle to sustain themselves and tend to only give weaker burns to those who come in contact with it. Youton have been known to dull weapons, or even melt weapons at high levels, and flow through defensive jutsu. More importantly, the melting power of youton means that youton techniques passively reduce the strength of anything they're in contact with by 1/4th th strength of the youton jutsu per post after contact. This means a 20 strength youton technique would do 20 strength of damage at impact, then melt at 5 strength per post until it hardened. This allows youton jutsu to substantially weaken defenses over time.
Hardening:
Youton jutsu naturally harden over the course of time. Below is a chart for the longest a youton jutsu can sustain itself. The length of a jutsu is a given, but can be specified to be less than the listed amount should the user so desire. Once hardened, Youton jutsu have only 1 strength, being extremely brittle.
  • E-rank: 1 post
  • D-rank: 3 posts
  • C-rank: 4 posts
  • B-rank: 6 posts
  • A-rank: 8 posts
  • S-rank: 10 posts
Requirements over 35 for S-rank can extend this length as well.
The burn strengths of Youton follow the below scale:
  • 1-14 Strength: Uncomfortable heat.
  • 15-24 Strength: First degree burns.
  • 25-34 Strength: Second degree burns.
  • 35+ Strength: Third degree burns.

*Youton • Lava Bomb
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing a string of hand seals, the user will form a sphere of lava the size of a tennis ball in one hand. The sphere can be thrown and explodes on impact, with a blast radius of 10 meters in any direction, and a strength equal to the user’s control. This jutsu causes 1st degree burns. The lava hardens over the span of 3 posts, reducing the strength of impacted objects by 1 strength per post.

*Youton • Lava Burst
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing a string of hand seals, the user thrusts their hands forward, causing lava to burst from the ground 1 meter ahead of them. The lava then moves forward up to 10 meters with a speed and impact strength equal to the user’s control.

C rank

*Youton • Eruption
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing a string of hand seals, the user will cover the surface of their body with Youton chakra. Physical contact with the user triggers the technique, causing lava to burst outwards from the point of contact with a speed and impact strength equal to the user’s control. This jutsu causes 1st degree burns. The lava hardens over the span of 3 posts, reducing the strength of impacted objects by 2 strength per post. The jutsu lasts until triggered or for 3 posts, at which point it dissipates harmlessly.

“Kouton jutsu”Show
Kouton Affinity:
Kouton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Kouton, and advanced form of Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Kouton affinity. Kouton has an resisting effect.
Passive (Resisting)Show
Kouton has a resisting effect. This means that Kouton jutsu ignore the effects of other affinities, regardless of their nature. If a Kouton spear was thrown through a water shield, the spear would not be caught by the shield, nor would it be destroyed by Sankaton, or cut by Fuuton. This resisting effect does not apply to active effects by jutsu. This means a fuuton jutsu that cuts with 30 strength would still cut through a 20 strength kouton shield, but it would not be affected by the secondary cutting by Fuuton. This makes Kouton very effective for breaking through and penetrating defenses that opponents expect to protect them. It's hardy nature makes Kouton very popular amoung Doton users.

*Kouton • Pellet Storm
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the required hand seals, the user will expel a cloud of metallic pebbles in a cone reaching 10m from themselves and expanding to 5m wide at [Control] speed. The pellets strike with [Control] strength and have spiked edges for maximum damage.

*Kouton • Projectile Creation
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary hand seals, the user can create up to two projectiles out of metal with [Control] Strength at [Control] Speed. This includes kunai, senbon, shuriken, chakrams and other similar sized throwing weapons.

*Kouton • Shrapnel Bomb
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the required hand seals, the user will create a hollow ball of steel about the size of a soccer ball. They will then fire this ball at [Control] speed in a single direction for up to 10 meters. Upon contact or reaching its maximum range, the ball will detonate with [Control] Strength, showering the effected area in metal shards.

*Kouton • Hidden Needle
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will channel chakra into a metal weapon they are holding. Upon throwing or swinging that weapon, they are then able to cause a 15cm long needle to be launched from within that weapon at [Control] speed in a single direction at any point along its trajectory. This needle will strike with [Control] strength.

C ranks

*Kouton • Wall
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user causes a wall of steel with half-meter spikes on its front to emerge from the ground up to 4 meters in height at [Control] speed. This wall can block attacks up to [Control] strength, and crumbles to useless pieces after 3 posts. If the user so chooses within those 3 posts, or if the structure is not destroyed, they may from the spikes off at [Control] Speed and Strength.


TaijutsuShow
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GenjutsuShow
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History
Historical AccountsShow
straight from birth, Hiroko was born differently between her skin tone as well as her eyes; she was different from the average clan member. Her parents named her hoping she wouldn’t be too ostracized. Sadly the differences only grew as she got older, from her choice of crafts to the way her body developed. As a kid she would get picked on, causing her to become withdrawn and only further add to her problems where she would seclude herself.

When she was at the academy, she met a few nice people but because of her troubles with interacting with people she wasn’t nearly as popular as some of the other people. On top of that, she couldn’t tell who wanted to be friends or not unless they said something. Finally, she felt like a freak when her breasts started to develop and people kept staring at her with them. Eventually, she got so uncomfortable she decided to bandage them down to hide them.

Which helped a little with the staring afterward but then she started to notice people sneaking whispers about her and other stuff, she really didn’t like it. It was around this time that she developed one of her crafts which was making masks, usually ornate ones but others were effective also. Though she couldn’t wear them at the academy because it would make her stand out even more. So she just sat there internalizing all the stress from the environment and the other students.

When she became a genin, things were moderately better and she didn’t feel as big of a freak there. But sadly even in that place, her fellow genins gossiped about her behind her back. Though they wouldn’t admit it and at least treated her nicely when in front of her. Eventually, though the chunin exams were coming up Hiroko thought this may be her shot at finally finding her place. Eventually, she passed the chunin exams, but things didn’t change in a meaningful way, just the people. Her clan and the people around her still treated her the same way they did when she was a genin it seems.

Then came the war, sadly she wasn’t able to make any sort of noticeable difference as far as she could tell. The next thing she knew was soon after it started before she could accomplish anything it was over. She wished it didn’t end so soon or she had the power to make a difference in it but just continued with her life.



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Stat Trainings: (0/75)
Last edited by Kaitos10 on Sun Aug 29, 2021 1:55 pm, edited 34 times in total.
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Post by TheLacarix » Wed Jul 28, 2021 5:45 am

There is a lot of grammar and spacing mistakes, I do not have time to go over them all individually. Take some time to read over your app and fix them.

Kamizuru < Needs to link to the clan

And as a note, all of your pictures are clearly Aburame and I worry it make cause some confusion ICly.

Sword < What does the sword look like, where is it holstered, how large is it? What kind of sword?

75m of ninja wire < Should be called steel wire and where is this stored?

Your first ability, these needs fixing you can’t just put ‘Sync stat and swarm’ I’m sure your second ability covers this already.
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Enkouton akai kawa

Post by Kaitos10 » Wed Aug 18, 2021 10:08 am

Changed the character a lot but fixed most of the points

Tried to fix the grammar in Google docs
I added a link to the clan
Changed the picture
Removed the sword
Added a location for the wire
And removed the abilities
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Enkouton akai kawa

Post by Ace Trainer » Thu Aug 19, 2021 4:28 pm

You have a lot of random errors in capitalization
Quote:
she has Brown hair and her skin is moderately tanned and practically pale compared to other clan members. [. . . ] She has She has blue eyes
This occurs throughout the app so I'd go back through and correct that.

At 7'1" and 180lbs she would be incredibly underweight. You spend a lot of time emphasizing her size, these proportions contradict that.

Personality references being a jinchuurinki but she isn't one (yet) so thats a little weird

Power rank should be C.
1 strength is very underpowered, and you'd have a hard time running at 21 speed with such a low strength stat.

Your first ability is Youton, it is an ability not a concentration.

Your perks should include [Inheritance: 100] or you won't receive it. If you spent the 10 ryo you got from the inheritence you ryo should list 0/10.
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Enkouton Hiroko

Post by Kaitos10 » Thu Aug 19, 2021 8:08 pm

Fixed it all I think
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Enkouton Hiroko

Post by Ace Trainer » Thu Aug 26, 2021 1:01 am

As an Enkouten, you cannot carry the fuuton concentration as you may only have Doton, Katon, and their extensions.

Consequently, you can't carry the chalk extension either, as Chalk requires Fuuton.
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Post by Kaitos10 » Fri Aug 27, 2021 2:45 pm

Fixed it
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Post by Zao » Sat Aug 28, 2021 6:34 pm

General: You can probably just delete this part since you added her personality just above this.

" Hasn’t finished developing yet currently she just blasts people with lava while using her genma to weaken them.--" Is Iwa not doing the IC sealings? You would add this part and the part in her history about getting her genma in a mod after the sealing takes place.

Companions: (1/1) - This should be (0/1) since she doesn't have a registered companion yet.

*[color= slategray]Kouton • Pellet Storm[/color] - All your Kouton jutsu need the space removed between '=' and 'slategrey' if you want the color to work.
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Xi - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Sato - A Rank, "The Cleaving Swordsman " / Inactive

Akujin - Konoha Genin, Art Ninjutsu Guy / Inactive

Toukai Touma - Kiri Genin / Inactive

Arashiyama, Toushi - Kumo Bannin / Dead

Hitachiai - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Ji Ning - Iwa Genin / Inactive

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Kaitos10
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Post by Kaitos10 » Sun Aug 29, 2021 1:55 pm

Ok sorry thought I fixed the genma part this time I know I deleted it also fixed the rest
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Kiri genin Karagata Nozomi
Minor country genin Desumonsuta
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Post by Zao » Sun Aug 29, 2021 7:04 pm

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Tsukino Hisato - Kiri Chuunin - Seven Swordsman Dagger

Saisuko Zao - Suna Bannin - Spirit Weapon Saint

Kyōhō Ken - The White Snake Sage - S Rank Assassin/Bounty Hunter

Aburame Hisato S-rank Mn / Inactive

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Arashiyama Ning - Kumo Chuunin - Weilder of the Ghost Spear

Yami Kasai - Mizukage - The Black Reaper - DEAD

Genso - Elemental Crafting Shaman - A Rank Monk - Inactive

Aburame Akiro - Konoha Jounin - ANBU Member - Inactive

Hyōryū -- Suna S-Rank / Dead / Used as Inheritance.

Xi - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Sato - A Rank, "The Cleaving Swordsman " / Inactive

Akujin - Konoha Genin, Art Ninjutsu Guy / Inactive

Toukai Touma - Kiri Genin / Inactive

Arashiyama, Toushi - Kumo Bannin / Dead

Hitachiai - Iwa Jounin / Inactive

Ji Ning - Iwa Genin / Inactive

Naegi, Chin - A-rank MN / Inactive







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Post by Kabu » Sun Aug 29, 2021 7:55 pm

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Shinsen Kyoko - #99840A
Kyomu Nozomi - #5960A8
Ibakuro Rin - #9E4FA5
Nakiya Hotaru - #9E540A
Nakano Kiyomi - #8E47AD], Nakano Ayaka - #0C1C8C
Fukusha Nezumi - #E00747
Karagata yamada - #CE1126, Makura Ayame - #7251BC
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