Okubo, Kotetsu

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Okubo, Kotetsu

Post by Niro » Sun Jan 16, 2022 8:08 pm

Okubo, Kotetsu


General Information Age: 15
Gender: Male
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 137 Lbs
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Kotetu's hair a brown mop of hair that can easily reach to his ears when slick with sweat from the forge while his eyes are a deep amber.
  • Body: Kotetsu spends the majority of his day in his amateur forge or in the forges of other blacksmiths in the village in an attempt to better himself. Due to his, the boy is taught with thick muscles covering his back, chest, and arms. His legs are thick and built like tree trunks from carrying materials to and from the forge. Small scars pepper his forearms and hands as reminders of his demanding work.
Clothing/Accessories: Kotetsu's entire ensemble contains the color brown. His tunic is brown and so are his pants and blacksmith apron. When it comes to battle or hunting down materials, he dons a set of leather armor consisting of a pauldron, greaves, and vambraces that offer minimal protection.
Personality: Kotetsu is much of a blank set as a teenager coming into his own. He tries his best to fit in with whoever he is speaking with and will adapt their mannerisms they longer they speak or work together. Because of this, he often overthinks about the situation at hand and can get himself into a misunderstanding or two.
Battle Information Village: Iwagakure no Sato
Rank: Genin
  • Total: 40
    Chakra Pool: 6
  • Endurance: 8
  • Control: 5
  • Strength: 10
  • Speed: 5
  • Willpower: 6
  • Power Rank: D
Equipment:
  • Cross Pein Hammer - Belt
  • Tongs - Satchel
  • x2 Scrolls - Belt
  • Portable Forge - Sealed in scroll
  • Anvil - Sealed in scroll
  • x5 Explosive Tags - Satchel
  • x5 Kunai - Satchel
  • x10 Shuriken - Satchel
  • x1 Smoke Grenade
  • x1 Flash Grenade
Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity: Katon
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu[Katon][Doton][Kouton]
Taijutsu[Deft Hands][Weapon Crafting][Medicine][Rigid Structure][Hafted Weapons]
Genjutsu[-]

Jutsu
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Shinden:
Emerging from the depths of the Marsh Country, Shinden is a style of Kenjutsu that focuses on one thing and one thing alone: overwhelming strength. While not completely forsaking flexibility, Shinden techniques are traditionally structured around downward slashes. Using a combination of their strength, gravity, inertia, centrifugal force, and technique, the practitioner brings unsurpassed might and death upon the heads of their opponents. Due to this quirk unique to Shinden, while sufficiently performed with a katana, users of this style typically prefer hafted weapons or heavier blades such as Nodachi, Odachi, and even Zanbatou. These large weapons further enhance the natural strengths the style's core mechanics provide, forgoing defense for brute strength and overwhelming power.

Requires: [Rigid Structure] Concentration; one of [Sword Weapons], [Polearm Weapons], or [Hafted Weapons] Concentration.
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*[Shinden • Ambidexterity]
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
After practicing for a long amount of time with the concept of using both of their hands with equal skill, the user has developed a level of ambidexterity that allows them to utilize both hands equally and as effectively without any penalty. This extends to other methods of combat or simple everyday life as well.
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Weapons Crafting:
With large amounts of experience in the forge and with creation, this individual is able to craft and create most types of weapons and armor. While this typically doesn’t grant the individual himself any additional powers, it allows him to make more powerful gear for himself and shinobi than what can typically be found. However, those with such familiarity with weapons and armor are often skilled at noticing the strengths and weaknesses of weapons they face, and allow them to more easily exploit them. This concentration also encompasses the crafting of other types of weapons and items such as poisons or advanced recovery concoctions for use on and off the battlefield.

Requires Deft Hands Concentration
*[Weapons Crafting • Tempering]
D-rank Weapon Crafting Discipline
Prerequisite: 5 Control
While often thought to be an enchanting process, the process of creating chakra tempered weapons is known to most any smith who has basic chakra control. The skill represents the smith’s ability to recognize minerals and ores that are good for accepting the tempering process, and know how to temper weapons with chakra. This ensures all weapons made by this crafter are tempered and do not require a static strength.

*[Weapons Crafting • Sword Weapons]
D-rank Weapon Crafting Maneuver
This smith has specifically learned how to craft various type of normal sword type weapons including daggers, short swords, and katana, reducing the production cost for them by half.

*[Weapons Crafting • Shinobi Tool Set]
D-rank Weapon Crafting Maneuver
The most common secondary weapons used by shinobi are shuriken, kunai, senbon, and arrows. Having spent so much time producing these specific weapons, this smith is able to produce said weapons at half the price, allowing them to buy 10 of the weapons for the price of 5.

[Weapons Crafting • Frame]
C-rank Weapon Crafting Maneuver
Though the tutelage of a forging master and the combination of his in-depth knowledge in the intricacies of the frame creation process, the user has learned the method of producing different types of frames. This smith has specifically learned how to craft this various type of frames through diligent practice, reducing the production cost for them by half. Frames have a base starting strength of ten (10) at initial creation.

*[Weapons Crafting • Armor Forging]
C-rank Weapon Crafting Maneuver
Though the tutelage of a forging master, the user has learned the method of producing each different piece involved in creating a complete suit of armor. This smith has specifically learned how to craft various type and pieces of armors through diligent practice, reducing the production cost for them by half. Armor and shields have a base starting strength of ten (10) at initial creation.

History
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Kotetsu and his parents lived in the countryside of Earth Country before the outbreak of the Great War in a mountain village undisturbed by bandits and shinobi. His father was the local blacksmith, teaching him everything from how to shoe a horse to forge a sword, while his mother assisted in the bakery. After the fighting has spilled over into Earth Country, his parents made the decision to move the family into the village proper. During the trek through the mountains, however, Kotetsu's mother frozen to death and not soon after his father was slain by a wild animal.

He gathered up the remaining tools of his father and continued to Iwagakure where he was welcomed as a war refugee. Seeing his prowess for blacksmithing, the village sponsored and set him up with an apartment and schooling in the academy. The accelerated war-time classes rushed Kotetsu through and he was added to the workforce to make supplies for troops until the war ended. Now, Kotetsu is left trying to make his own way in the world.

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Ryo: 0/0
Prestige Perks: 0/0
Stat Trainings: (0/75)
Last edited by Niro on Sat Feb 19, 2022 3:49 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Okubo, Kotetsu

Post by Gilak » Tue Jan 18, 2022 9:55 am

Is your character purposely missing their History Section?
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Okubo, Kotetsu

Post by Valkier » Wed Jan 26, 2022 10:11 am

Equipment:
Quote:
characters also receive a "starters kit" of weapons, which you may include (or exclude) on your app at no charge. The starters kit includes: 5 kunai, 10 shuriken, 10m of wire , 5 exploding tags, 1 smoke bomb, 1 flash bang.
If you want these you can add them to your app for free, ignore this if not
However Explosive Tags are nowadays priced individually, so 15x of them (or 10x of them not counting the 5 free ones here) would cost your full 50 startup ryo. You'll need to remove some if you want other equipment and jutsu.
I assume the blacksmithing tools are included as crafting equipment rather than weapons, so we can price at 2ryo for each the hammer, tongs, forge, and anvil, and I'm going to say scrolls can be counted as 1 ryo for 5x. Then 1 ryo for the 5 kunai (incl. 5 free from starter set).
So a total of 10ryo for equipment, less any more you want to spend on extra tags etc.

Jutsu:
4D 3C 1B = 16 + 18 + 8 = 42 ryo -> with the equipment too you're 2ryo over the startup amount unfortunately.
The jutsu look fine to me, though the specifics of weapon crafting is still a bit up in the air until the archives are hashed out. Since this was posted while those were already in regs for review I can't really grandfather anything in by approving these. Would you prefer to wait on this app until the crafting archives are resolved, or remove the jutsu temporarily and add them in later? I'm going to say that in this case you can keep any leftover starting ryo on your sheet for this purpose.

You have [Medicine][Katon][Doton][Kouton] concs but no jutsu or styles that require them. It's fine if you want that, but I'm mentioning it just in case it's an oversight.
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Okubo, Kotetsu

Post by Niro » Thu Feb 03, 2022 4:59 pm

Extension please
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Okubo, Kotetsu

Post by Zao » Fri Feb 04, 2022 12:04 am

Of course man
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Okubo, Kotetsu

Post by Niro » Mon Feb 07, 2022 6:31 pm

Added a history, starter pack

Removed D-rank Shinden jutsu

Zao can use these if he'd like for the Weapon Crafting archives; I'm ok to wait.
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Okubo, Kotetsu

Post by Nick » Sat Feb 12, 2022 1:14 pm

Once this is updated to the new crafting stuff, consider it 1/2
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Okubo, Kotetsu

Post by Niro » Sat Feb 19, 2022 3:50 pm

Edited to current Crafting Archives, could I get someone to double check my points spent again please?
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Ashura [color=coral][b]SunaGenin
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Okubo, Kotetsu

Post by Valkier » Sat Feb 19, 2022 4:33 pm

Looks good to me
2/2
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