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Post by HogoshaHa » Thu Aug 11, 2022 2:03 am

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General Information Age: 10
Gender: male
Height: 5’5
Weight: 125lb
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: round head, and has a small mole ontop of the end of the lip on the left side. Brown smooth slick back hair with a olive skin complexion.
  • Body: Is neither fat nor skinny. Nor buff, just slim.
  • Notable Features:----
Clothing/Accessories: Wears a grass green colored gi with the Konoha symbol etched on the back of the shirt, and on the front of both sides of the front of the pants, but small enough to see, the back is about the size of the top of His back, the ones on the front half.
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Personality: rather talkative and curious. Ha is prone to be more protective over his bird than himself. The 10 year old boy is rather kind and gentle to the opposite gender, but extra competitive with the same. The boy becomes even more competitive in a unisexual setting, and often wants to be out on top. However, he is still compassionate to all. He hates to lose but can take a los with bitterness.
  • General:
  • Hopes/Dreams: become a chunnin.
  • Fears: spiders, rats, rodents, people over 7 feet.
  • Combat Mentality:------------

Battle Information Village: Konohagakure no Sato
Rank: Genin
  • Chakra Pool: 11
  • Endurance: 6
  • Control: 7
  • Strength: 7
  • Speed: 6
  • Willpower: 6
  • Power Rank: D
Equipment: starter kit. In two pouches. One at the right leg another at the center above the buttocks. A gray white rock inside back pouch. 5 kunai, 10 shuriken, 5 flash bangs, 5 explosion tags, 1 smoke bomb
Companions: (1/1)
Affinity/Specialization: Bloodline
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
Senju:
Mokuton [Wood Release] is a unique elemental affinity exclusive to the Senju clan. By mixing their natural affinities for Doton [Earth Release] and Suiton [Water Release] the clan is able to create strong, durable, living wood. As Mokuton is living, it has a growth effect.
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Growth:
A truly unique element, Moktuon users create life in the form of trees. Even after their jutsu is done, these trees continue to live and grow aided by the high density of chakra in them. This gives Mokuton the growth effect, which uses the residual chakra in mokuton jutsu to rapidly speed up the natural growth process for a limited time after creation, causing the jutsu to gain +2 strength per post for an amount of posts after creation depending on the user’s [Control] used in the jutsu.
  • 1-9: 3 posts
  • 10-19: 4 posts
  • 20-24: 5 posts
  • 25-34: 6 posts
  • 35+: 7 posts


Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
Taijutsu[[
Perception:
The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Deft Hands:
The fundamental skill of [Deft Hands] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.
Mounting:
The fundamental skill of [Mounting] indicates the user's proficiency in acting from atop amount. This includes various skills such as riding, jousting, and even being able to be effective while in flight.
Projectile Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Projectile Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with weapons designed to attack from afar, such as bows, shuriken, senbon, launchers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Weapons Crafting:
With large amounts of experience in the forge and with creation, this individual is able to craft and create most types of weapons and armor. While this typically doesn’t grant the individual himself any additional powers, it allows him to make more powerful gear for himself and shinobi than what can typically be found. However, those with such familiarity with weapons and armor are often skilled at noticing the strengths and weaknesses of weapons they face, and allow them to more easily exploit them. This concentration also encompasses the crafting of other types of weapons and items such as poisons or advanced recovery concoctions for use on and off the battlefield.
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*[Basic Jutsu • Clone Technique]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After completing a set of handseals, the user forms a slight chakra 'body', thus creating a single, massless clone. The clone created from this technique is very basic and will dissipate when hit with anything. These clones do not possess vital signs or a unique chakra signature, meaning they don't disrupt the environment, and anything on their person is superficial. The clone has 1 in each stat. They are limited to basic movements.

*[Basic Jutsu • Transformation Technique]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After completing the needed handseals, the user of this technique will be able to alter their physical appearance to match that of another person. By consistently emitting chakra throughout their body, the user is able to keep their appearance adjusted at the cost of their Chakra Pool draining over time. As this technique is quite strenuous to uphold, experienced shinobi may see more clearly through this delusive disguise. This technique lasts for a number of posts equal to that of the user's (Chakra Pool/2).

*[Basic Jutsu • Chakra Kai]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
A jutsu used with the purpose of activating seals and a range of devices and weapons, this technique begins with a single handseal. Once this has been performed, the user will focus a dollop of their chakra into what they are looking to activate in order to complete the task. Seals activated with this technique must be within 10 meters of the user's position.

*[Basic Jutsu • Act of Tree Climbing]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
By focusing chakra into his/her feet, the user is able to walk up trees and other vertical surfaces in a similar fashion to walking along the ground. This chakra amount must be precise, and although all shinobi learn this technique, the user's control stat will determine how well this jutsu can be executed. Users with low control 2 or lower will often fall during the use of this technique, while users with average control 3 or higher will be able to use this technique functionally. It lasts for a number of posts equal to the user's Chakra Pool.

*[Basic Jutsu • Act of Water Surface Walking]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
A variation of the Act of Tree Climbing technique, this jutsu requires the user to focus a precise and balanced amount of charka into the soles of his/her feet. By doing so, the user is able to walk on the surface of water as though it were a solid surface. Users with low control 2 or lower are much more likely to fall through the surface of the water, while users with average control 3 or higher will be able to use this technique functionally. It lasts for a number of posts equal to the user's Chakra Pool.

*[Basic Jutsu • Kai Release]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
A rather simple technique that allows the user to escape from a genjutsu. The user will form a single ram seal and focus to reset their chakra system to purge themselves of foreign chakra. The stat requirements for this technique can be found in the genjutsu rules.

*[Basic Jutsu • Change of Body Stance Technique]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After completing the necessary handseals, the user is able to quickly substitute his/her body with a nearby object that is at least 2/3rds his/her size, but no bigger than their body. This substitution allows the object to take the force of the attack that was meant for the user, additionally allowing the user to create distance between him/her and the opponent. The object used in this jutsu may not be objects that are imbued with chakra or controlled by it, and they may also only be single, solid objects within a 10 meter radius of the user. This technique may only be used a total of one time in a single thread, give or take how many times Shunshin no Jutsu has already been used.
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[Mounted Projectile • Rain of fury. ]
D-Ranked MP Taijutsu.
Ha while mounted on Tori while Ha begins to unleash a rain of shuriken while Tori circles around a person or place of interest. The user throws a total of 8 shuriken while circling. Each shuriken targeting a vital organ. They travel at the strength and speed of user.


[Mounted Projectile • Hunters trap]
C-Ranked MP Taijutsu.
Ha unleashes wire and puts the end through a kunai's hoop, ties a knot, then loops the wire around through another kunai's hoop and ties a knot. He does this with 3 other kunais. While riding Tori, Ha throws a kunai near the target, intended to hit exactly three feet away, then as Tori circles, Ha throws another kunai across from the last one and then another two across each other, creating a square, then with the rest of the 5 meters of wire he wraps around someone or something then tying it in place. . They travel at the strength and speed of user.


[Mounted Projectile • Leafs Explosion]
D-Ranked MP Taijutsu.
Ha places an exploding tag on a smoke bomb and a flash bang, as well as on two shuriken and a rock. He launches the rock first, then the flash bang, then the smoke bomb and finishes it up with the two shuriken. Each thrown in senquence.

*[Weapons Crafting • Shinobi Tool Set]
D-rank Weapon Crafting Maneuver
The most common secondary weapons used by shinobi are shuriken, kunai, senbon, and arrows. Having spent so much time producing these specific weapons, this smith is able to produce said weapons at half the price, allowing them to buy 10 of the weapons for the price of 5.


*[Weapons Crafting - Reforged: Strengthening]
D-Rank Weapon Crafting Maneuver
The user uses their refined knowledge of special blacksmithing methods, their chakra, and other materials to enhance the capability of a weapon or item by increasing its [Strength] stat by 5 points each time the technique is used on the item. Due to the crafter's level of proficiency, they are able to perform this crafting enhancement at half the normal cost.

*[Weapons Crafting • Enhanced Integrity]
C-rank Weapon Crafting Discipline
Masters of their craft are able to recognize their own limitations and weak points. Knowing this the smith has learned to protect the weak points of their weapon(s) and equipment. When wielding weapons, they’ve personally crafted, this crafter’s weapons are able to remain intact even when they receive two strikes that would exceed the normal structural integrity and break them but will break if they continue to be used. For example, if they have a sword with 30 strength that blocks two 40 strength strikes, it will not shatter, and would suffer growing structural damage to the weapon but if they used it to block another (third) strike it would immediately shatter. This allows the crafter to avoid losing weapons.
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He went through the academy and passed great. He was known for riding an eagle while throwing Kunais, and the like, and hitting all targets straight at the center. He was also known for being able to endure and last a long time. The young boy

Born to a non kunoichi mother and Senju father, his mother is a massagist. He was a mistake and a one night stand. When he was finished with the academy, His mother bought the boy a baby eagle.

In His childhood he enjoyed playing sport games, sparring, and reading. His mother operates out of their home, and has made a decent amount of income operating the business. She mainly sees ninjas and shinobis or individuals who've had massive muscle problems. She Is also a chiropractor.

His mother offered to teach the boy how, but he opted not to because he deemed not manly. Ha grew up on the outskirts of konoha in a small community called Grassy Leaf Waterfalls, because of the fact that 75% of their community each belonged to 3 different countries, except for the center of the community where Ha was born. When he was 3 they moved to a settlement near Hidaki mountain where he stayed for a year. He took up some blacksmithing here and also helped find wood, food, carry stone and the like.

By age 6 he was in a community in between Konohagakure, and Hidaki mountain until age 9. This Is where he learned taijutsu related techniques. He met Tori here for the first time. He played a wide variety of sports but kickball was by far his favorite, as well as pankration a form of combat sports. He moved to Konoha in 1231

One night he bonded with Baby and signed a contract when Konoha went to war. That was when the eagle grew the tattoos. Tori explained to the young Senju that he could not speak because of a negative stigma as he was technically an alien here.

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Post by HogoshaHa » Thu Aug 11, 2022 4:06 am

Read the rules and did to my Best abilities
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Post by Serene Winter » Fri Aug 12, 2022 9:13 pm

Hey, welcome to Saigen! While your application is appreciated, I suggest you make the following changes to meet the quality level we expect from our members here.

1. Frankly, your character is too young. Even the top prodigies in the show were not this young when they graduated the academy. I suggest, at the very least, doubling their age.
2. Please describe your character in more detail. While I don't have an exact criteria to this, due to your lack of a picture for easy reference, your character should have a decent physical description to help others gain an image of what they look like.
3. It would be appreciated if you could go more in-depth on your character's personality. I'm not expecting an essay, but one paragraph would be enough to suffice.
4. There are a few grammatical errors when it comes to your capitalization. Please fix this.
5. Please list what comes in the starting kit within your inventory, rather than saying 'starter kit'. Also, include where said items are being stored on your person, or if they're just stored at home. If you want to edit your clothing to include pockets and such for this purpose, you are more than welcome to.
6. As a Genin, you start with 50 Ryo to use during character creation, to either purchase jutsu that your character is capable of using, stats (up to an additional 15 stats only), or weapons/items. If you don't want to use any of that, that is cool, but if you do, then the shop for the price ranges you'll be using is here: Shop Pricings
7. You should add your affinity. This can either be one of the Elemental Natures you have access to, or a specific type of specialty you want to get a discount on.
8. Finally, your history is terribly short. While it doesn't need to be very big due to how young your character is, and the fact that you're a Genin, you should probably at least go for two paragraphs. That would be sufficient enough to explain your character's background info, as well as how he did in the academy, until eventually graduating.

When you've done all of these, we'll see what you have and go from there. Good luck!
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Post by Mugen Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro » Fri Aug 12, 2022 9:29 pm

Can you purchase a companion with starter ryo?

Also, how about 7 years old

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Post by Mugen Hayai Ishinokyōso Ishiguro » Fri Aug 12, 2022 9:39 pm

Sorry asking for myself

Should i have not posted?

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Post by HogoshaHa » Sat Aug 13, 2022 6:10 pm

Mugen:
Fri Aug 12, 2022 9:29 pm
Can you purchase a companion with starter ryo?

Also, how about 7 years old
I also have the same question about the Ryo
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Post by HogoshaHa » Sat Aug 13, 2022 6:32 pm

Serene Winter:
Fri Aug 12, 2022 9:13 pm
Hey, welcome to Saigen! While your application is appreciated, I suggest you make the following changes to meet the quality level we expect from our members here.

1. Frankly, your character is too young. Even the top prodigies in the show were not this young when they graduated the academy. I suggest, at the very least, doubling their age.
2. Please describe your character in more detail. While I don't have an exact criteria to this, due to your lack of a picture for easy reference, your character should have a decent physical description to help others gain an image of what they look like.
3. It would be appreciated if you could go more in-depth on your character's personality. I'm not expecting an essay, but one paragraph would be enough to suffice.
4. There are a few grammatical errors when it comes to your capitalization. Please fix this.
5. Please list what comes in the starting kit within your inventory, rather than saying 'starter kit'. Also, include where said items are being stored on your person, or if they're just stored at home. If you want to edit your clothing to include pockets and such for this purpose, you are more than welcome to.
6. As a Genin, you start with 50 Ryo to use during character creation, to either purchase jutsu that your character is capable of using, stats (up to an additional 15 stats only), or weapons/items. If you don't want to use any of that, that is cool, but if you do, then the shop for the price ranges you'll be using is here: Shop Pricings
7. You should add your affinity. This can either be one of the Elemental Natures you have access to, or a specific type of specialty you want to get a discount on.
8. Finally, your history is terribly short. While it doesn't need to be very big due to how young your character is, and the fact that you're a Genin, you should probably at least go for two paragraphs. That would be sufficient enough to explain your character's background info, as well as how he did in the academy, until eventually graduating.

When you've done all of these, we'll see what you have and go from there. Good luck!
Done
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Post by Kabu » Mon Aug 15, 2022 11:22 pm

The app looks much better but I notice you have no jutsu aside from the basics, which are free for village ninja. Could you tell me how you spent your ryo?

As well, could you list the exact contents of the starter kit on the app, just to make things easier on everyone involved.

Aside from that it all looks good, though if you could expand just a little bit on his history that would be well appreciated. Maybe tell us a bit about what his childhood was actually like.
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Post by HogoshaHa » Wed Aug 17, 2022 6:42 pm

gotcha

I spent it on a companion
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Post by Nick » Thu Aug 18, 2022 9:11 am

Companions don't cost ryo. Companion slots scale up 50 ryo each, and your first one is free (meaning buying your second costs 50 ryo, third 100, so on, so forth.)

If you mean you spent them on stats or etc for your companion, your startup ryo have to be spent on you.
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Post by HogoshaHa » Thu Aug 18, 2022 7:10 pm

didnt realize that . i thought it was ryo cost first time.

ill fix this
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Post by Ace Trainer » Sat Aug 20, 2022 9:02 pm

Let us know when you fix it.
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Post by HogoshaHa » Tue Aug 23, 2022 11:32 pm

Fixed
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Post by Nick » Wed Aug 24, 2022 7:33 am

Quote:
*[Weapons Crafting • Shinobi Tool Set]
D-rank Weapon Crafting Maneuver
The most common secondary weapons used by shinobi are shuriken, kunai, senbon, and arrows. Having spent so much time producing these specific weapons, this smith is able to produce said weapons at half the price, allowing them to buy 10 of the weapons for the price of 5.


*[Weapons Crafting - Reforged: Strengthening]
D-Rank Weapon Crafting Maneuver
The user uses their refined knowledge of special blacksmithing methods, their chakra, and other materials to enhance the capability of a weapon or item by increasing its [Strength] stat by 5 points each time the technique is used on the item. Due to the crafter's level of proficiency, they are able to perform this crafting enhancement at half the normal cost.

*[Weapons Crafting • Enhanced Integrity]
C-rank Weapon Crafting Discipline
Masters of their craft are able to recognize their own limitations and weak points. Knowing this the smith has learned to protect the weak points of their weapon(s) and equipment. When wielding weapons, they’ve personally crafted, this crafter’s weapons are able to remain intact even when they receive two strikes that would exceed the normal structural integrity and break them but will break if they continue to be used. For example, if they have a sword with 30 strength that blocks two 40 strength strikes, it will not shatter, and would suffer growing structural damage to the weapon but if they used it to block another (third) strike it would immediately shatter. This allows the crafter to avoid losing weapons.
^^These are better under the taijutsu spoiler, they don't use ninjutsu in any way.
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[Mounted Projectile • Rain of fury. ][/b]
D-Ranked MP Taijutsu.
Ha while mounted on Tori while Ha begins to unleash a rain of shuriken imbued with chakra while Tori circles around a person or place of interest. The user throws a total of 8 shuriken while circling. Each shuriken targeting a vital organ. They travel at the strength and speed of users control stat.


[Mounted Projectile • Hunters trap][/b]
D-Ranked MP Taijutsu.
Ha unleashes wire imbued with chakra and puts the end through a kunai's hoop, ties a knot, then loops the wire around through another kunai's hoop and ties a knot. He does this with 3 other kunais. While riding Tori, Ha throws a kunai near the target, intended to hit exactly three feet away, then as Tori circles, Ha throws another kunai across from the last one and then another two across each other, creating a square, then with the rest of the 5 meters of wire he wraps around someone or something then tying it in place with chakra. Lasts 3 posts or can be broken by strength higher than users control. They travel at the strength and speed of users control stat.


[Mounted Projectile • Leafs fire][/b]
C-Ranked MP Taijutsu.
Ha places an exploding tag on a smoke bomb and flash bang, as well as on two shuriken and a rock. He launches the rock first, then the flash bang, then the smoke bomb and finishes it up with the two shuriken. Each thrown in senquence.
^^Your bold tags are broken.

Rain of fury will use your strength, not control. You could make a ninjutsu to launch them at [control] strength/speed, but if it's a taijutsu, it's using your physical stats.

Hunters trap is a similar problem, except the wire will be broken by strength equal to the strength of the wire. Again, you can make a ninjutsu to strengthen the wire to [control] strength, but by default any equipment you get out of the shop is a base of 10 strength.
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Post by HogoshaHa » Wed Aug 24, 2022 9:04 pm

Done. Do i need to put strength for the Leafs explosion
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Post by Nick » Thu Aug 25, 2022 12:01 am

No, similar to the strength of the wire the object will have its own explosion strength.
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Post by HogoshaHa » Thu Aug 25, 2022 12:49 am

Thanks, Nick
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Post by Nick » Fri Aug 26, 2022 7:10 am

Real quick, list out the contents of the starter kit in your equipment section for longevity, if the starter kit ever gets changed/removed.

Then, please swap the ranks for leaf's explosion and hunter's trap. Hunter's trap is considerably more complicated, but suitable for a C rank, probably.

After that, 1/2.
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Post by Ace Trainer » Sun Aug 28, 2022 9:32 pm

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[Shinwa Basuta no Suihouheki Yasahii :: Kirigakure No Sato – Mizukage :: Spirit of Capricorn, Topenga]
[Futokutei Hitoare :: Konohagakure No Sato – Pestilence (Four Horsemen) – Jounin]
[Aisu Koiji :: Kirigakure No Sato – Jounin]
[Shitagane Sakki :: Kumogakure No Sato – Genin]
[Batsu Betsuni :: Iwagakure No SatoJounin A Rank Missing Ninja]
[Futokutei Yasunari :: Konohagakure No Sato – Genin]
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