Desumonsuta

[Kaitos10]

Desumonsutā

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General Information Age:18
Gender:female
Height:5”5
Weight:120 lbs
Physical Features:sickly white pale skin with red eyes, blood red hair. She has a thin body with no muscle tone a almost sickly look that hides her immense strength for her age. She usually wears old and used dresses that look moderately shredded from all the fights she’s in as well as her life style. On her arms around the wrist area she has a ring of holes from the guantlets she usually wears that when equipped have a mechanism that practically nails them to her hands.

• Face/head: pale skin red eyes
• Body:thin and sickly looking
• Notable Features: scars all over her body, razor sharp teeth and claws

Clothing/Accessories: tattered dress and a black burlap choker
Picture:

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Personality:is a huge masocistic and sadist favorite thing to do is to get hurt or hurt others. Her sense of pain and pleasure is Reversed of that of what it would be for a normal person. She Is bat shit crazy, is sometimes curious and inquisitive about things around her and she has a odd fascination with the color and texture of blood and guts. She has slightly above intelligence and has periods extreme focus and concentration as well as periods where she gets distracted easily.

• General:
• Hopes/Dreams: no dreams but hopes to have unlimited supply of people to eat or “play” with
• Fears:fluffy stuffed animals, cuddling, hugs, friendly or lewd hand holding and candy
• Combat Mentality: kill them fast and tear them appart brutally before they can finish me off

Theme

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Battle Information Village: born in realm of titans
Rank: jounin equivalent minor country ninja

• Chakra Pool:26 (31-5)
• Endurance:31
• Control:1
• Strength:31
• Speed:31
• Willpower:35
• Power Rank: A

Equipment:

Razor gauntlets one on each hand 50 strength +50 strength cord
A glove that has bladed finger tips it has a crank that makes it attach to the hands by making spikes come out literally nailing it to the arm when the crank is fully activated. making removing and disarming them difficult. The gauntlets armored section goes up to the elbow with another blade on the fore arm. In addition this has a grappling hook that looks like a barbed spike that comes out of the palm and can extend out up to 50 meters to be thrown at the strength and speed of user’s strength stat


Companions: (0/1)
Primary Affinity: warp Genjutsu

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Abilities and Concentrations

Sybiotic Parasite Host

The host is infected with a chakra that acts like a parasitic entity. This infestation is manifest by a crimson liquid textured aura that permeates through their natural chakra, commonly causing the white of the eye to appear red with blood. The chakra is sentient, but not sapient, having its own desires and goals. It directly influences any host via direct stimulation of the creature's brain. Because the parasite feeds on chakra it will continually push the host to seek out strong sources of chakra and consume them. Upon consumption the parasite will devour the chakra, however any biomass will be used to repair, augment, and nourish the host regardless of the type of biomass consumed.

Deathless Sustenance	Those infested by the parasite are physically unable to die. While under the effects of any infestation the individual will be sustained though nearly any damage possible. So long as the brain remains intact all wounds will reconstitute themselves. This renders all normally vital bodily process unnecissary, though the instinct will remain, and the pain associated with such acts as breathing, eating, drinking, or otherwise can get excruciating. The parasite will also use any consumed biomass, be it animal, plant, fungus, or other to accelerate their reconstitution as well, treated as jutsu that're dictacted by the endurance stat. Any creature that "dies" while infested via "Parasitic Infestation" will be considered dead for the remainder of that thread. So long as the brain is intact they will have this ability forcibly added to them as the parasite sustains them and begins reconstituting their body. The new host will retain all memories, skills, jutsu, and abilities NOT replaced by this one. However, the parasite will manipulate the host's mind in much the same way as others on top of the new host being submissive, but not subservient, to there creator’s desires. (Should an RPer decide against RPing the character under these conditions it will become a companion under control of the creator directly and reworked tof ollow all typical companion rules. Should the new host not have enough ability slots available one ability will be chosen to be overwritten by this one. This ability imparts a permanent -5 to the Chakra Pool stat, symbolizing the parasite constantly feeding on the host's chakra.)
Physiological Augmentation	The symbiotic chakra augments the body's permanent physical structure in many radical ways. These augmentations can be excruciatingly painful while undergoing them but are sustained as if natural parts of the body afterwards. Individual augmentations require different jutsu based off the endurance stat and take a substantial amount of it to manifest. Speed of augmentation is controlled by the host's speed stat.
Parasitic Infestation	The parasite may use the host as a vector for transmission, infesting any significant source of chakra. This infestation manifest as a red cloak of liquid textured chakra that permiates their body. This cloak may only be manifest around the host body up to control/2 meters away from themselves. It can also be concentrated into specific parts of the body. It may not ever leave the body unless it has latched onto another source of chakra and "infested" it. The manifestation and mild control of this cloak is a free action that uses control for its speed. Non-living sources of chakra that come in contact with this cloak become infested and begin to be devoured rapidly, being rendered innert. If the jutsu is not being actively controlled by an individual, or that being has less control than the host, it will become innert within 1 post of infestation. If a controlled jutsu is infested and the controller has higher control, take the different between the host and the controller's chakra and devide that by 5 to determine how long it takes to devour the chakra within it with the result being messured in posts. Any jutsu that is infested this way and rendered inert does not lose any force already applied to it, it merely loses the energy empowering it, becoming basic structures or forces. Any living source of chakra (plant animal or otherwise) will be infested in a much more intricate way. The parasite will latch onto their tenketsu. The exact effects of this infestation are determined by which "mode" the cloak is in, governed by seperate jutsu. Possible effects include but are not limited to delerium, fatigue, reduced chakra pool, necrosis, severe pain, or death. Infested individuals will know they're infested, and any infestation can be purged via the use of a kai while having higher willpower or control than the infestesting host.

Concentrations
Ninjutsu	[/list][/quote]
Taijutsu	The fundamental skill of [Close Quarters Combat] indicates the user's proficiency to efficiently utilize martial arts and advanced combat moves involving the body, for example but not limited to, advanced kicks, grapples, advanced punches, etc. The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Rigid Structure] describes the user’s ability to adeptly position and lock in their skeletal structure to efficiently absorb blows with minimal damage to their person. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Stealth] describes the user’s proficiency in remaining silent, unseen and unnoticed as they go about tasks. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Medicine] describes the user’s mental and physical ability to perform traditional and mainstream medicinal practices. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The fundamental skill of [Sword Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with swords and sword-like weapons such as knives, daggers, sword-breakers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu. The skill of having understood augmentations to the body done by the parasite and using them efficiently in combat. Supports the creation of jutsu that involve any additional limbs, functions, or structures the host may acquire. The fundamental skill of [Corded Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with long rope-like weapons such as chains and wire. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Genjutsu	[ This user has learned how to utilize Status Genjutsu that impose mental and cognitive effects on their target. This user has learned to combine the basics of Status and Illusion genjutsu, allowing them to use single techniques to create sensory illusions, as well as status changes on their target. This user has learned to use visual cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to perform actions, or draw the eyes to something to capture their targets in a genjutsu. This user has learn to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu. This user has learn to use smells to intiate genjutsu. Allowing them to utilize and produce various scents to capture their targets in genjutsu. This user has learn to use physical sensations to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to physical touch the target, or touch them with objects to capture their targets in genjutsu. This user has learned to use their chakra's presence to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to initiate genjutsu in people who notice them with sensory techniques.

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Jutsu

NinjutsuShow

Place Ninjutsu in here

TaijutsuShow

ParasiteShow

The host may augment and sustain new structures to their body through the use of the parasite. These new structures are treated as natural parts of their body once created unless otherwise noted. Any augments effective are treated as having been used inside that thread, their cost paid for at the start of thread for purposes of chakra and endurance consumption. (I.E. if the host begins the thread with horns, claws, and a tail they'll be considered as having use those jutsu upon the post immediately preceding the first). The host may not have any more than 5 sustained augmentations simultaneously of C rank or greater. To augment the body further an existing structure must be sacrificed.

D RANK

Aspect of the Beast: D - Parasite The host causes their adrenal glands to go into overdrive and forces that power into the muscle for additional strength. While doing so they gain a +3 strength but doing so puts a strain on there body from the enhanced strength above there limits costing -3 endurance Aspect of the Beast: Maw D - Parasite The jaw slightly deforms as each tooth is rearranged. The host's teeth is replaced my predatory pointed teeth that resemble a mix between a caynid's and a monitor lizard. These teeth range from a quarter of an inch to a full inch in length, with the k-9s being the longest at an inch and a half. Aspect of the Beast: Talons D - Parasite The nails on each of the host's fingers and toes grow out to between one and three inches in length, with the middle finger being longest. These newly formed claws shape and harden to be sharp enough to puncture and rip through nearly any material they have the strength to damage. Aspect of the Beast: eyes D - parasite The parasite modifies the subtle muscle structures that control how dilated the eyes are and how quickly they respond to light. This achieves a much quicker "shutter speed" allowing the eye to adjust much more rapidly, effectively negating the effects of sudden darkness or blinding light. Due to the modified dilation the host can also see much more clearly in either case, treating a moonless night as broad daylight and a floodlight as comfortable shadows.

C RANK

Aspect of the Beast: Hunter's Hunger C - Parasite Should the host get access to a source of biomass, be it a carcass, fungus, or plant life, of significant mass they may spend time consuming it. For each full post doing so they effectively double their natural regeneration speed as the new mass is immediately put towards repairing structures. This is not a sustained augmentation. *Radius Locator C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver Pre-Requisite: 10 strength The practitioner sidesteps the opponent's punch and grasps the striking arm with their corresponding hand before raising their free arm and ramming their elbow into the opponent's elbow with their full force. This strike cleanly breaks the opponent's radius bone in two pieces. The practitioner's Strength must be 5 points higher than the opponent's Strength to achieve the desired effect of this technique.[ Aspect of the Beast: Autonomy C - Parasite Should any limb be severed via whatever means that limb is capable of acting on it's own for a number of posts equal to one fifth of Desu’s endurance. This is limited to whatever means of locomotion it possesses but will retain one fifth of Desu’s speed and strength. The actions it can take are limited to physical capabilities but almost always are an attempt to return to the main host. This is not a sustained augmentation.

GenjutsuShow

*[Genjutsu • Pins and Needles]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
After performing the hand seals and pricking the opponent with some sort of small weapon (usually senbon), the opponent feels their arms and legs fall asleep. It feels as if the blood flow to these appendages has basically stopped, making their movements a tad sluggish and just all around uncomfortable. This jutsu doesn’t really hinder a person, but it makes everything they do feel off. For those who are attuned to the way their body feels during battle, it can be extremely distracting. Lasts 3 posts.


*[Genjutsu • Paranoid]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then whistle. Anyone who hears the whistle will be captured in this genjutsu. For the following 4 posts, the target will see a shadow in the corner of their eyes, constantly shifting out of view when they attempt to look at it.

*[Genjutsu • Boom!]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then within the next post, snap their fingers. Anyone who hears the snapping will hear an explosion in the distance behind them. This works as an effective distraction, or a scare tactic, if properly utilized.


Fog
D-rank Illusion Genjutsu
The user will channel chakra to perform this technique. Anyone who senses him channeling chakra will be caught in this genjutsu. For the next 5 posts they will see a fog around them, limiting vision to 5m. Because the fog is not real, it will not disappear if the target tries to disperse it.

[Mole] ((bought from shio))
D-rank Illusion Genjutsu Sensory
Channeling chakra and then release a burst of chakra, anyone who senses will be caught in this genjutsu. This genjutsu causes the target to see a mole on the back of their neck for 10 posts, should they look at it. Additionally, at any point while the genjutsu is active Shio is able to focus on anyone caught in it, getting a very vague, momentary sense of all 6 of their senses. This cannot be used to convey any information, but allows Shio to determine if their senses are active, letting him know what style of genjutsu to use.

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History

Historical AccountsShow

Tldr incase you didn’t read the thread
Desumonsuta or desu for short was born in what was at the time the realm of titans in a small village shack to a pair of average parents. The father was a drunk and the mother while not being a drunk wasn’t much better, at first they took care of desu normally but as time went on they slowly got worse and worse. Until by the age of 6 they started to seriously abuse her as time went on the abuse got worse when it hit its peak around the age of 9 with her getting beaten regularly.

With no way of coping she eventually had a psychotic break by the age of 10 then she started to spiral out of control and eventually attacked her parents half way to her 11th birthday. It was a brutal battle and she was beaten within a inch of her life but in the end she came out on top with both her parents dead. Afterwards she collapsed on the ground laying there half dead close to actually dying when katsu arrived as she lay there dying and gave her the parasite

She then left with katsu to live with her. As well as training under her and learning to use the parasite. When heart empire attacked she participated in the war having fun and eating some of the soldiers but when the battle was going side ways and it was clear they would loose she snuck out and disappeared.

found her.
viewtopic.php?f=56&t=8342822

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Username: ucp.php?sid=50ce4c7e6c834e85d3aa2d4c100a39f7
Ryo: 0/0
Prestige Perks: 0/0
Stat Trainings: (0/75)

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[Kanade]

Looks good to me, but I want another mod to 2/2 it since I am not familiar with the bladed gauntlets and 50 str rope.

1/2 approved with this in mind

[Kabu]

You're going to need to remove a few jutsu in order to have those gauntlets, or lower the strength to a more acceptable level.

Currently if I'm doing this correctly, you're paying for two gauntlets (as it's not a necessity for them to come in a pair), each at base having a cost of 25 ryo due to having 50 strength. Then from there each gauntlet has the wire contraption which itself comes out to 50 ryo per as it's still a part of the same weapon, thus increasing the price further. This adds up to each gauntlet currently having a cost of 75 ryo.

MathShow

50 strength gauntlet/2 = 25 ryo
50 strength grappling hookX1= 50 ryo
25+50=75 ryo
75ryox2 gauntlets = 150 ryo

This along with all of your jutsu puts your spending well over the total 155 that an A rank gets to spend at startup.

[Kaitos10]

Honestly I was told that they come in pairs when I asked about them in mod chat if i really need to I can remove jutsu to pay for them though

Here’s link to discord messages if you want to see
https://discord.com/channels/7657400495 ... 8755304530

[Kabu]

Even in that case it's still 75 Ryo (assuming I did all my math right) meaning that you're still over your Ryo limit

[Kaitos10]

Fixed it

[Kanade]

1/2

[Valkier]

Looks pretty good! Just a few small things I've noticed:
- The Deathless Sustenance ability still refers to Katsu in some places, you'll want to update this to your own chars' name (especially as Katsu no longer exists)
- Your primary affinity needs to be a specific concentration, not just genjutsu as a whole
- The Gauntlets pricing is a little off unfortuantely -- though you were correct that they come as a pair (the special pricing rules pace does state this), but there is a base equipment cost as well which wasn't accounted for. So the cost for a pair of these gauntlets is: 5 for the base gauntlets + 2ryo for the blades + 25ryo for the 50 strength + 15 ryo for the grappling hook (3ryo per 10m) + 50ryo for the 50str on the grappling hook = 97ryo total for a pair of gauntlets. If you only want the one gauntlet, it'll be half (so 49 ryo). We can recount total costs on the app after this bit. Sorry for the trouble / earlier pricing confusion.
- Could you expand your history to include a short summary of the linked topic there, explaining the backstory of how she met Katsu and how she became infected by/came to master her ability? Linking to the thread is fine but I wouldn't expect someone to read an entire topic just to understand Desu!

[Ace Trainer]

Anime please let us know in the next couple of days if you're still working on this.

[Kaitos10]

Sorry yes still working on it sorry for the hold up

[Niro]

Any update on this? The changes Valk asked for still seem to be there

[Kaitos10]

Any update on this? The changes Valk asked for still seem to be there

Fixed it

[Kabu]

1/2

[Ace Trainer]

. Non-living sources of chakra that come in contact with this cloak become infested and begin to be devoured rapidly, being rendered innert. If the jutsu is not being actively controlled by an individual, or that being has less control than the host, it will become innert within 1 post of infestation. If a controlled jutsu is infested and the controller has higher control, take the different between the host and the controller's chakra and devide that by 5 to determine how long it takes to devour the chakra within it with the result being messured in posts. Any jutsu that is infested this way and rendered inert does not lose any force already applied to it, it merely loses the energy empowering it, becoming basic structures or forces.

Can you explain what this means? There are some typos, but general I'm just not sure what it means by rendered inert

[Kaitos10]

Honestly I’m unsure what it means since the ability was made by dragon I could only guess

[Ace Trainer]

How can you have an ability on your sheet if you don't know what it is or does?

[Kaitos10]

I know what it does basically I just don’t always understand what the wording implies it’s supposed to be like a flesh e body that has the ability to make other people flesh e bodies and gives access to special flesh morphing taijutsu

[Ace Trainer]

Okay well I’m not going to approve an ability that neither I nor you understand, do you’ll need to rewrite this in a way that you understand what it actually is, not just vaguely what it can do.

[Niro]

3 days for this