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Tezuka, Red
Petitish


No matter the size, we win the price.
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General Information Age: 1991
Gender: Male
Height: 167 cm (56cm length.)
Weight: 60 Kg (0.02kg)
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Red used to be a great wizard back in the day, but today he is nothing more than a spirit hat that lives on forever to assist its wearer. Red has 2 giant eyes and large beak that reaches 10 cm, both of these are located at the tip of the hat.
  • Body: Thick bottom, small tip.
  • Notable Features: Striking eyes and long beak
Clothing/Accessories:
Red hat with eyes and beak.

Personality:
  • General: Red was a powerful wizard who was extremely arrogant, having been turned to hat for over a thousand years has mellowed the man, his personality grew as he got to experience different wearer and now mostly considers himself a great adventure partner who is always ready for the next quest, he secretly yearns for the day his body can return but until that day he wants to discover all the secrets of the world.
  • Hopes/Dreams: Protect the Triforce and return his body.
  • Fears: Fail his mission.
  • Combat Mentality: Uses ninjutsu and genjutsu to protect Yuuto and Ei.

Battle Information Village: Kirigakure no Sato
Rank: A-Rank
  • Chakra Pool: 25
  • Endurance: 4
  • Control: 40
  • Strength: 1
  • Speed: 25
  • Willpower: 25
  • Power Rank: A (120)
Equipment:

Elemental Affinities: Petitish
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First AbilityPetitish is an ability granted to Red when he was turned into a sentient hat, Red has the ability to shrink anyone to half the size of an ant, this ability requires great concentration from the hat and can only be held for as long as Control/4 before the hat and the wearer returns to their normal size. All jutsu that are cast from Red are channeled either through him or by Yuuto forming the correct hand seals then either Red casts it or Yuuto.
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
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Katon:
Katon Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Katon affinity. Katon has a passive ignition effect.
Passive (Ignition)Show
Katon's effect is ignition, which means that all katon jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread fire from their source. Once a jutsu has been performed, the fire from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. That means a C-rank katon jutsu that moves at 13 speed would create subsequent fires that spread at 4 speed. These secondary fires require flammable material to continuously spread, otherwise they will burn out on their own. Additionally, Katon jutsu have a Burning effect, and burn anyone they come in contact with with [Control] strength.

Fuuton Affinity:
Fuuton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an cutting effect.
Passive (Cutting)Show
Fuuton has a natural cutting property to it, that exists in all jutsu unless otherwise stated. This gives fuuton a unique opportunity to strike with additional power, and to act as a offensive defense. Regardless of their purpose fuuton jutsu passively cut with no distinct pattern at 1/2 the strength of the technique rounded down unless otherwise stated. This means if someone punched a 20 strength fuuton wall, they would get cuts on their hand applied with 10 strength. This also means that fuuton jutsu specifically designated to cut things can create devastating wound by essentially striking twice.

Raiton:
Raiton
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a shocking effect.
Passive (Shocking)Show
Raiton has the effect of shocking, which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis based on the [Strength] of the technique. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area.

Suiton:
Suiton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Suiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Suiton affinity. Suiton has a passive Replenishing effect.
Passive (Replenishing)Show
Suiton's effect is replenishing, this means that suiton jutsu passively repair themselves when damaged, at no additional cost to the user. The rate of repairing itself is 1/3 [Strength] per post. This only works for the length of the technique, so maintaining the damage to Suiton until the jutsu expires will stop it from regrowing.

Doton:
Doton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the doton affinity. Doton has a passive enduring effect.
Passive (Enduring)Show
Doton has a passive effect of Endurance, which means that it's power is retained throughout the entirety of the jutsu. All of a single doton jutsu retains the strength of the jutsu, even after the jutsu has been destroyed, and unlike other jutsu, doton does not fade when destroyed. This means that if a doton barrier with 25 strength is cut in half and falls to the ground, a part of that barrier could be picked up and carried as a hand held shield which would still have 25 strength, despite being a fractured part of a jutsu. This creates incredibly potent defenses, making doton a popular affinity among defensive fighters.

Sensory:
Sensors are shinobi who are able to activate a sixth sense which can locate and read chakra sources. Sensory is advantageous as it allows shinobi to perceive without using any of their conventional senses, which can easily be deceived. Sensors are able to collect a lot of information through the interpretation of this sixth sense. For the purpose of the concentration, only Mind's Eye and Empathy take up the concentration slot. Extension types of sensory do not take up a concentration.

Tenkujutsu:
The user of this style has a strong affinity towards spirits. They are able to utilize certain techniques to combat and subdue spirits, Jinchuuriki, Genma, etc. Practitioners have noted their chakra to gain a [b][color=#B5215D]Maroon[/color][/b] color tint when using these techniques. Tenkujutsu share a pyramid with the prerequisite concentration.

Ninjutsu: Advanced Channeling:
This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any Ninjutsu that is designed to be channeled, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method.
Taijutsu
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Perception:
The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Genjutsu[Place them here]

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
PetitishShow

D-Rank

Petitish Version: Arms
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout its body, Red is able to shrink the wearer's arm to half its size, making it harder for the enemy to block his incoming strike as it doesn't sacrifice any of the strength.

Petitish Version: Legs
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout its body, Red is able to shrink the wearers leg to half its size, making it harder for the enemy to block his incoming strike as it doesn't sacrifice any of the strength.

Petitish Version: Head
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout its body, Red is able to shrink the wearers head to half its size, making it harder for the enemy to strike his head as his speed is not sacrificed due to being smaller.


C-Rank

Petitish Version: Mini Upper Body
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout its body, Red is able to shrink the wearers upper body to half its size, making it harder for the enemy to strike his head as his speed is not sacrificed due to being smaller, this jutsu can be used combined withPetitish Version: Mini Lower Body.

Petitish Version: Mini Lower Body
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout its body, Red is able to shrink the wearers arm to half its size, making it harder for the enemy to strike his head as his speed is not sacrificed due to being smaller, this jutsu can be used combined withMini Upper Body.


B-Rank

Petitish Version: Mini v.1
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout its body, Red can shrink the wearer's entire body and anything they got equipped to half its size, making it harder for the enemy to strike his head as his speed is not sacrificed due to being smaller, This jutsu lasts for as long as Red channels chakra through their bodies.
KatonShow

D-Rank
*Katon • Fireball
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling out a 1 foot diameter fireball at the opponent. It travels up to 10 meters away at [Control] speed and strength.

*Katon • Flame Jet
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling out a cone that is up to five meters long and three meters wide at it's base. The cone travels at a speed equal to [Control] and impacts with a strength equal to [Control].


C-Rank

*Katon • Flame's Shadow
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will create a copy of themselves out of katon chakra. The clone has stats equal to the user, and is capable of using Katon Jutsu. The clone will only last for 3 posts.
FuutonShow

D-Rank
*Fuuton • Wind Skating
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, the user is able to glide on air as if they were skating on ice. This allows them to move faster (+3 speed) but lowers their ability to translate force (-3 Strength). This doesn't allow them to fly, but rather to travel over things like land, water, and ice with greater ease. The user is only held several inches off of the ground. This Jutsu does not expire until the user’s chakra supply runs out or the user shuts it off. The fuuton passive is not applied in this technique.

*Fuuton • Wind Bullet
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the required hand seals, the user expels a basket ball sized ball of wind from their mouth. This ball of wind travels up to 10m at [Control] speed, and explodes with [Control] Strength on contact with solid matter or at the end of its range.


C-Rank

*Fuuton • Wind Clone
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary hand seals, the user will create a clone out of their fuuton chakra. This clone will have the users stats. It lasts for [Control/4] posts.


B-Rank
RaitonShow

D-Rank
*Raiton • Lightning Armament
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After the correct hand seals are performed, the user coats themselves in a thick layer of lightning. This armour of lightning forms near instantly and requires [Control] Strength to break. During this time, the user's physical strikes apply the Raiton shocking effect.

*Raiton • Conductor
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will coat a weapon they are holding in Raiton electricity for 5 posts. This causes the shock effect to be produced on any contact with a target, while also granting blunt weapons the ability to cut through skin to produce shallow wounds. This also works for thrown weapons, however if the projectile remains out of contact with the user for more than 2 posts the technique will dissipate early.

C-Rank
*Raiton • Shock Double
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary hand seals, the user will create a clone out of their Raiton chakra. This clone will have the users stats. It lasts for [Control/5] posts.

SuitonShow

D-Rank
*Suiton • Defensive Barrier
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will spray water created from the inside of their chest through their mouth. Once the water is expelled, it will form an umbrella shape that is concave to the user and about two meters in diameter. This defense is somewhat solid and can be formed in any direction the user can spit, up to 10 meters away. The defense is shot at [Control] Speed and has [Control] Strength and unless completely destroyed it lasts for three posts before falling lifelessly to the ground.

*Suiton • Water Shuriken
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a shuriken of water that can be thrown up to 10 meters. When kai'd, this shuriken explodes with [Control] Strength and covers the immediate area in water. If not consumed, this technique lasts for three posts.


C-Rank

*Suiton • Clone
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user creates a clone of themselves comprised completely of suiton chakra. This clone has the users stats. It lasts for [Control/5] posts.

DotonShow

D-Rank
*Doton • Binding Formation
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling doton chakra into their foot the user will slam the ground within 5 meters of a target's feet with their heel, causing a formation of rock to shoot upwards at [Control] speed binding the target's feet at [Control] strength

*Doton • Wall
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a solid stone wall up to 5 meters away from them at [Control] speed. The wall has [Control] strength and is 3x3x1 meters large.

*Doton • Trip Fault
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will cause a 1/2 meter pot hole to appear at [Control] speed somewhere within 5 meters.

C-Rank


History Red, The Magician!
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Red was born into the Tekuza clan over 1900 years ago, they were a fortunate family that got to master the art of ninjutsu, but they called it magic where Red came from. He grew up to become a great wizard who helped his community. Everything went along fine until the day he became a master, when he brought in his own student, Gyarados, a man with great ambition which Red missed in the height of his arrogance.

For years they trained until the day Gyarados betrayed his master and forced him into the shape of an immortal hat, for hundreds of years the great magician collected dust, until there started to more heroes who picked him up during his journey. His self-loathing stopped when he heard rumors of a way of turning him back, rumors of Gyarados still being alive.

Though no hero had ever been capable of dealing with this man, until Yuuto stumbled upon the hat, this boy would do Red felt his powers and knew there was something special about the boy.

Username: Kitsui
Owner: Yuuto
Stat Trainings: (0/25)
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SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
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Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
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Post by Texas » Mon Feb 26, 2024 1:31 pm

Easy Stuff First,

Your Jutsu count exceeds the 100 ryo max.

The elements would need their own pyramid.

Why does Holy start at B?

For Owner, could you actually link the app. It is a small thing, but makes things a tiny bit easier.

Does the hat have hands? If not, you might want to consider Advanced Channeling for the archive jutsu.

I don't understand Holy all too much. It just seems like Ninpou that buffs and debuffs. Not 100% sure why all of the elements and tenkujutsu is attached
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Post by Trusted Grader » Mon Feb 26, 2024 2:33 pm

Fixed.

Removed holy for now, holy is supposed to be atmosphere changes that mess with your physical being as if you experience altitude changes. Tenku so it can effect Summons/genmas etc. Anyway, it's removed, already had Advanced :)
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The Compassionate
Karagata, Yuuto
Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
The Jashinist
Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
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Post by Texas » Wed Feb 28, 2024 8:51 am

Holy is still in your concentrations
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Ishiguro, AkihikoKumogakure no SatoChuunin - [color=#FF4080]Text Color[/color]
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Post by Trusted Grader » Wed Feb 28, 2024 2:26 pm

Yeah I kept it as a concentration, but should I remove it for now or ?

Edit: removed 4 now
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Different Sides Of The War
Order
The Compassionate
Karagata, Yuuto
Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
The Jashinist
Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
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Post by Texas » Thu Feb 29, 2024 12:49 pm

Elements would need their own pyramid. You started off doing it right with katon and fuuton,
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Post by Trusted Grader » Sat Mar 02, 2024 6:54 am

Fixed my brotha!

Edit: I thought elementals just like Ninpou shared a pyramid, my bad.
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Order
The Compassionate
Karagata, Yuuto
Special Jounin: Kiri
[Lightblue]
SSM
Sushi
The Lawful
Shoshiki, Amaya
Bannin: Iwa
[Palegoldenrod]
H.N.K
Wana, Ran
The Hunter
Inuzuka, Kitsui
Genin: Konoha
[Forestgreen]
N/A
Wana
Treasure Hunter
Amigaou, Mahalow
B-Rank: Suna
[Olive]
[N/A]
[N/A]
The Invisible
Nonki, Hotaru
Jounin / Spy: Kumo
[#7FA08C][Dimgray][Gray]
S.T.R.A.T.O.S
Kirie
The Mercenary
Nara, Chikara
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Purple]
Setsuzoku
Chie, Yasu, Wakana, Ayuma, Shiryoku
The Cryomancer
Aisu, Yuri
Genin: Kiri
[Skyblue]
N/A
N/A
The Jashinist
Kijo, Nehan
S-Rank MN: Konoha
[Maroon]
Chishiki
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Post by Texas » Fri Mar 15, 2024 3:38 pm

1/2
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Ishiguro, AkihikoKumogakure no SatoChuunin - [color=#FF4080]Text Color[/color]
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Post by Trusted Grader » Mon Mar 18, 2024 10:43 pm

This shouldn't interrupt the 1/2 but I just unlocked the companion so when it is accepted can you guys make sure that it's not unclaimed :) Once accepted I'll put Red as an item on Yuuto instead of him being a whole companion (Will be like Suzuko's backpack)

viewtopic.php?f=58&t=8346454&p=4205896#p4205896

Alternatively if we can't unlock companions while training I have another thread for the unlock.

viewtopic.php?f=56&p=4205923#p4205923

So just add him in items or I can do it in a quick mod once he is accepted :D

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[Spoiler=Petitish][center][Glow=red][big][big][b]Tezuka, Red[/b][/big][/big]
Petitish[/glow]
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Petitish is an ability granted to Red when he was turned into a sentient hat, Red has the ability to shrink anyone to half the size of an ant, this ability requires great concentration from the hat and can only be held for as long as Control/4 before the hat and the wearer returns to their normal size.
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[list][*][b]Chakra Pool:[/b] 25
[*][b]Endurance:[/b] 4
[*][b]Control:[/b] 35
[*][b]Strength:[/b] 1
[*][b]Speed:[/b] 30
[*][b]Willpower:[/b] 25
[*][b]Power Rank:[/b] A (120)
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[b]Equipment:[/b] 

[b]Elemental Affinities:[/b] [glow=red]Petitish[/glow]
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[center][b][big]Abilities and Concentrations[/big][/b][/center]
[table=2, Abilities][b]First Ability[/b][c]Petitish is an ability granted to Red when he was turned into a sentient hat, Red has the ability to shrink anyone to half the size of an ant, this ability requires great concentration from the hat and can only be held for as long as Control/4 before the hat and the wearer returns to their normal size. All jutsu that are cast from Red are channeled either through him or by Yuuto forming the correct hand seals then either Red casts it or Yuuto.[/table]
[table=2, Concentrations][b]Ninjutsu[/b][c][spoiler=8][quote=Katon][color=orangered][b]Katon Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Katon, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Katon affinity. Katon has a passive [color=orangered][i]ignition[/i][/color] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Ignition)]Katon's effect is [b]ignition[/b], which means that all katon jutsu, regardless of effect, start and spread fire from their source. Once a jutsu has been performed, the fire from the jutsu spreads at 1/3rd the speed of the technique, rounded down. That means a C-rank katon jutsu that moves at 13 speed would create subsequent fires that spread at 4 speed. These secondary fires require flammable material to continuously spread, otherwise they will burn out on their own. Additionally, Katon jutsu have a [b]Burning[/b] effect, and burn anyone they come in contact with with [Control] strength.[/spoiler][/quote][hr][quote=Fuuton Affinity][color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an [b]cutting[/b] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Cutting)]Fuuton has a natural [b]cutting[/b] property to it, that exists in all jutsu unless otherwise stated. This gives fuuton a unique opportunity to strike with additional power, and to act as a offensive defense. Regardless of their purpose fuuton jutsu passively cut with no distinct pattern at 1/2 the strength of the technique rounded down unless otherwise stated. This means if someone punched a 20 strength fuuton wall, they would get cuts on their hand applied with 10 strength. This also means that fuuton jutsu specifically designated to cut things can create devastating wound by essentially striking twice.[/spoiler][/quote][hr][quote=Raiton][color=yellow][b]Raiton[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a [b]shocking[/b] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Shocking)]Raiton has the effect of [b]shocking[/b], which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis based on the [Strength] of the technique. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area. 
[/spoiler][/quote][hr][quote=Suiton][color=dodgerblue][b]Suiton Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Suiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Suiton affinity. Suiton has a passive [color=dodgerblue][i]Replenishing[/i][/color] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Replenishing)]Suiton's effect is replenishing, this means that suiton jutsu passively repair themselves when damaged, at no additional cost to the user. The rate of repairing itself is 1/3 [Strength] per post. This only works for the length of the technique, so maintaining the damage to Suiton until the jutsu expires will stop it from regrowing. [/spoiler][/quote][hr][quote=Doton][color=saddlebrown][b]Doton Affinity[/b][/color]
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the doton affinity. Doton has a passive [color=saddlebrown][i]enduring[/i][/color] effect.
[spoiler=Passive (Enduring)]Doton has a passive effect of [b]Endurance[/b], which means that it's power is retained throughout the entirety of the jutsu. All of a single doton jutsu retains the strength of the jutsu, even after the jutsu has been destroyed, and unlike other jutsu, doton does not fade when destroyed. This means that if a doton barrier with 25 strength is cut in half and falls to the ground, a part of that barrier could be picked up and carried as a hand held shield which would still have 25 strength, despite being a fractured part of a jutsu. This creates incredibly potent defenses, making doton a popular affinity among defensive fighters.[/spoiler][/quote][hr][quote=Sensory]
Sensors are shinobi who are able to activate a sixth sense which can locate and read chakra sources. Sensory is advantageous as it allows shinobi to perceive without using any of their conventional senses, which can easily be deceived. Sensors are able to collect a lot of information through the interpretation of this sixth sense. For the purpose of the concentration, only Mind's Eye and Empathy take up the concentration slot. Extension types of sensory do [b]not[/b] take up a concentration. [/quote][hr][quote=Tenkujutsu]The user of this style has a strong affinity towards spirits. They are able to utilize certain techniques to combat and subdue spirits, Jinchuuriki, Genma, etc. Practitioners have noted their chakra to gain a [b][color=#B5215D][nocode][b][color=#B5215D]Maroon[/color][/b][/nocode][/color][/b] color tint when using these techniques. Tenkujutsu share a pyramid with the prerequisite concentration. [/quote][hr][quote=Ninjutsu: Advanced Channeling]
This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any Ninjutsu that is designed to be channeled, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method.[/quote][/spoiler][c]
[b]Taijutsu[/b][c][spoiler=1][quote=Perception]The fundamental skill of [b][Perception][/b] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.[/quote][/spoiler][c]
[b]Genjutsu[/b][c][Place them here][/table]
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[center][b][big]Jutsu[/big][/b][/center]
[spoiler=Ninjutsu][spoiler=Petitish][hr][center]D-Rank[/center][hr]


[glow=Red]Petitish Version: Arms [/glow]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout its body, Red is able to shrink the wearer's arm to half its size, making it harder for the enemy to block his incoming strike as it doesn't sacrifice any of the strength.

[glow=Red]Petitish Version: Legs [/glow]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout its body, Red is able to shrink the wearers leg to half its size, making it harder for the enemy to block his incoming strike as it doesn't sacrifice any of the strength.

[glow=Red]Petitish Version: Head [/glow]
D-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout its body, Red is able to shrink the wearers head to half its size, making it harder for the enemy to strike his head as his speed is not sacrificed due to being smaller.


[hr][center]C-Rank[/center][hr]


[glow=Red]Petitish Version: Mini Upper Body [/glow]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout its body, Red is able to shrink the wearers upper body to half its size, making it harder for the enemy to strike his head as his speed is not sacrificed due to being smaller, this jutsu can be used combined with[glow=Red]Petitish Version: Mini Lower Body[/glow].

[glow=Red]Petitish Version: Mini Lower Body [/glow]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout its body, Red is able to shrink the wearers arm to half its size, making it harder for the enemy to strike his head as his speed is not sacrificed due to being smaller, this jutsu can be used combined with[glow=red]Mini Upper Body[/glow].


[hr][center]B-Rank[/center][hr]


[glow=Red]Petitish Version: Mini v.1 [/glow]
B-Rank Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra throughout its body, Red can shrink the wearer's entire body and anything they got equipped to half its size, making it harder for the enemy to strike his head as his speed is not sacrificed due to being smaller, This jutsu lasts for as long as Red channels chakra through their bodies.

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[spoiler=Katon][hr][center]D-Rank[/center][hr]

*[color=orangered][b]Katon • Fireball[/b][/color]
[i]D-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling out a 1 foot diameter fireball at the opponent. It travels up to 10 meters away at [Control] speed and strength.

*[color=orangered][b]Katon • Flame Jet[/b][/color]
[i]D-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals the user draws in a deep breath before exhaling out a cone that is up to five meters long and three meters wide at it's base. The cone travels at a speed equal to [Control] and impacts with a strength equal to [Control].


[hr][center]C-Rank[/center][hr]


*[color=orangered][b]Katon • Flame's Shadow[/b][/color]
[i]C-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will create a copy of themselves out of katon chakra. The clone has stats equal to the user, and is capable of using Katon Jutsu. The clone will only last for 3 posts.

[/spoiler][spoiler=Fuuton][hr][center]D-Rank[/center][hr]

*[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Wind Skating[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, the user is able to glide on air as if they were skating on ice. This allows them to move faster (+3 speed) but lowers their ability to translate force (-3 Strength). This doesn't allow them to fly, but rather to travel over things like land, water, and ice with greater ease. The user is only held several inches off of the ground. This Jutsu does not expire until the user’s chakra supply runs out or the user shuts it off. The fuuton passive is not applied in this technique.

*[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Wind Bullet[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the required hand seals, the user expels a basket ball sized ball of wind from their mouth. This ball of wind travels up to 10m at [Control] speed, and explodes with [Control] Strength on contact with solid matter or at the end of its range.


[hr][center]C-Rank[/center][hr]


*[color=lightgreen][b]Fuuton • Wind Clone[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary hand seals, the user will create a clone out of their fuuton chakra. This clone will have the users stats. It lasts for [Control/4] posts.


[hr][center]B-Rank[/center][hr]


[/spoiler][spoiler=Raiton][hr][center]D-Rank[/center][hr]

*[color=Yellow][b]Raiton • Lightning Armament[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After the correct hand seals are performed, the user coats themselves in a thick layer of lightning. This armour of lightning forms near instantly and requires [Control] Strength to break. During this time, the user's physical strikes apply the Raiton shocking effect.

*[color=Yellow][b]Raiton • Conductor[/b][/color]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will coat a weapon they are holding in Raiton electricity for 5 posts. This causes the shock effect to be produced on any contact with a target, while also granting blunt weapons the ability to cut through skin to produce shallow wounds. This also works for thrown weapons, however if the projectile remains out of contact with the user for more than 2 posts the technique will dissipate early.

[hr][center]C-Rank[/center][hr]

*[color=Yellow][b]Raiton • Shock Double[/b][/color]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
After performing the necessary hand seals, the user will create a clone out of their Raiton chakra. This clone will have the users stats. It lasts for [Control/5] posts.


[/spoiler][spoiler=Suiton][hr][center]D-Rank[/center][hr]

*[color=dodgerblue][b]Suiton • Defensive Barrier[/b][/color]
[i]D-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals the user will spray water created from the inside of their chest through their mouth. Once the water is expelled, it will form an umbrella shape that is concave to the user and about two meters in diameter. This defense is somewhat solid and can be formed in any direction the user can spit, up to 10 meters away. The defense is shot at [Control] Speed and has [Control] Strength and unless completely destroyed it lasts for three posts before falling lifelessly to the ground.

*[color=dodgerblue][b]Suiton • Water Shuriken[/b][/color]
[i]D-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a shuriken of water that can be thrown up to 10 meters. When kai'd, this shuriken explodes with [Control] Strength and covers the immediate area in water. If not consumed, this technique lasts for three posts.


[hr][center]C-Rank[/center][hr]


*[color=dodgerblue][b]Suiton • Clone[/b][/color]
[i]C-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals the user creates a clone of themselves comprised completely of suiton chakra. This clone has the users stats. It lasts for [Control/5] posts.


[/spoiler][spoiler=Doton][hr][center]D-Rank[/center][hr]

*[color=saddlebrown][b]Doton • Binding Formation[/b][/color]
[i]D-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After channeling doton chakra into their foot the user will slam the ground within 5 meters of a target's feet with their heel, causing a formation of rock to shoot upwards at [Control] speed binding the target's feet at [Control] strength

*[color=saddlebrown][b]Doton • Wall[/b][/color]
[i]D-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals the user will form a solid stone wall up to 5 meters away from them at [Control] speed. The wall has [Control] strength and is 3x3x1 meters large.

*[color=saddlebrown][b]Doton • Trip Fault[/b][/color]
[i]D-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will cause a 1/2 meter pot hole to appear at [Control] speed somewhere within 5 meters.

[hr][center]C-Rank[/center][hr]



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[spoiler=Personality & History][center][b][big]Personality:[/b][big][/center]
[list][*][i]General:[/i]  Red was a powerful wizard who was extremely arrogant, having been turned to hat for over a thousand years has mellowed the man, his personality grew as he got to experience different wearer and now mostly considers himself a great adventure partner who is always ready for the next quest, he secretly yearns for the day his body can return but until that day he wants to discover all the secrets of the world.
[*][i]Hopes/Dreams:[/i] Protect the Triforce and return his body.
[*][i]Fears:[/i] Fail his mission.
[*][i]Combat Mentality:[/I] Uses ninjutsu and genjutsu to protect Yuuto and Ei.[/list]


[center][b][big]History[/big][/b][/center]
[center][Glow=gold]The Sentient Battle Mage Hat[/glow]
[Video=400,40]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wX-Q_Ggq9e0[/video][/center]


Red was born into the Tekuza clan over 1900 years ago, they were a fortunate family that got to master the art of ninjutsu, but they called it magic where Red came from. He grew up to become a great wizard who helped his community. Everything went along fine until the day he became a master, when he brought in his own student, Gyarados, a man with great ambition which Red missed in the height of his arrogance.

For years they trained until the day Gyarados betrayed his master and forced him into the shape of an immortal hat, for hundreds of years the great magician collected dust, until there started to more heroes who picked him up during his journey. His self-loathing stopped when he heard rumors of a way of turning him back, rumors of Gyarados still being alive.

Though no hero had ever been capable of dealing with this man, until Yuuto stumbled upon the hat, [i]this boy would do[/I] Red felt his powers and knew there was something special about the boy.[hr]
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Post by Ace Trainer » Tue Apr 02, 2024 2:41 pm

Your ability is 2 abilities

1 - Shrinking people
2 - Jutsu sharing

I’m not approving an ability that shrinks people, tbh.

The jutsu sharing is really typically for people who are either Jinchuriki or being possessed by a spirit, I’m not sure if being worn is sufficient for that but.
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Post by Trusted Grader » Fri Apr 05, 2024 3:56 pm

1) Why can't it follow the dwarfism table, so the size is accordingly? We can enlarge, so making one smaller shouldn't be all that.
2) what needs to be removed from the description?
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