Menshin Yamado

Menshin Yamado
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Menshin Yamado

Post by Menshin Yamado » Sat Mar 23, 2024 9:49 am

Menshin Yamado
白い雪華武士
Samurai of the White Snowdrop

"People are unteachable, the aggressive minority drowns out the more numerous group of good people, which is the cause of our misfortune.”

General Information Age: 36
Gender: Male
Height: 175 cm
Weight: 61 kg
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: He has a youthful and determined face, with sharp features reflecting his warrior spirit. His blue hair is fresh and falls freely backward, often swaying in the wind during his swift movements.
  • Body: His physique is muscular yet not overly large, allowing him to be agile and quick on the battlefield. Each muscle on his body is the result of years of training and discipline.
  • Notable Features: On his left shoulder, there's a tattoo of his family clan, symbolizing his heritage and duty. His eyes are an unusually bright shade of blue, reminiscent of steel.
Clothing/Accessories:
  • His white kimono is made of the finest silk, adorned with patterns that tell the story of his ancestors. The kimono is cinched at the waist with a white rope, highlighting his muscular build.
  • He carries a single katana at his waist, with a hilt decorated to reflect his personality and fighting style. The hilt bears an intricate dragon motif.
  • His footwear is practical and sturdy, suitable for both the demands of combat and the formality.
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Personality:
  • General: He embodies the quintessential samurai spirit, marked by a serene composure and deliberate thoughtfulness. His calm demeanor is a still lake, undisturbed even in the face of chaos. This samurai walks the path of bushido with unwavering resolve, his actions always measured and his words carrying the weight of his honor.
  • Hopes/Dreams: He dreams of a time when his sword can rest, and peace prevails. His aspirations are not for personal glory but for the prosperity of his clan and the well-being of the people. He envisions a future where the wisdom of the samurai guides society towards enlightenment and harmony.
  • Fears: His fears are few, but profound. He fears not death, but dishonor; not defeat, but failing to uphold the principles he cherishes. The thought of his legacy being tarnished by a single misstep haunts him more than any enemy could.
  • Combat Mentality: In combat, he is the embodiment of zen—his mind clear, his movements fluid, and his strategy three steps ahead of his adversary. He fights not with rage but with precision, each strike a testament to his years of disciplined training and his deep understanding of the art of war.

Battle Information Village: Kemurigakure no Sato
Rank: Chunnin
  • Chakra Pool: 10
  • Endurance: 10
  • Control: 5
  • Strength: 15
  • Speed: 35
  • Willpower: 5
  • Power Rank: C rank (80)
Equipment: Katana with a length of 80 cm and lightweight construction weighing only 1.2 kg. It has a silver scabbard, gold tsuba and blue decorated handle.
Companions: (0/1)
Affinity/Specialization:
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
Ki Sabre:
When a Samurai reaches a certain level of skill with their blade, they become able to force their 'Ki' into their blade and shape it as they will to allow a Kenjutsu user a greater range of attacks in comparison to normal fighters. This power is referred to by the citizens of the minor countries as "Ki", and has historically allowed the greatest samurai to stand on equal footing with shinobi.
Sensory:
Sensors are shinobi who are able to activate a sixth sense which can locate and read chakra sources. Sensory is advantageous as it allows shinobi to perceive without using any of their conventional senses, which can easily be deceived. Sensors are able to collect a lot of information through the interpretation of this sixth sense. For the purpose of the concentration, only Mind's Eye and Empathy take up the concentration slot. Extension types of sensory do not take up a concentration.
Taijutsu
Sword Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Sword Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with swords and sword-like weapons such as knives, daggers, sword-breakers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Rigid Structure:
The fundamental skill of [Rigid Structure] describes the user’s ability to adeptly position and lock in their skeletal structure to efficiently absorb blows with minimal damage to their person. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Perception:
The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Mounting:
The fundamental skill of [Mounting] indicates the user's proficiency in acting from atop amount. This includes various skills such as riding, jousting, and even being able to be effective while in flight.

Jutsu
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Iaido Kenjutsu:
The samurai of the Land of Tea have produced a unique style of Kenjutsu called Iaido. Unlike other styles, which rely on the sword being drawn to attack, a practitioner of Iaido is always ready to attack their opponents, even when their weapon is sheathed in its scabbard. Known as a "sword drawing" technique, Iaido uses the smooth, linear motion of pulling the sword from its sheath to create abnormally fast slashes and strikes against often ignorant and unsuspecting opponents. Though the katana is preferred for this style, any curved sword single-edged sword with a complimenting scabbard is compatible with this style. Their ability to fight with both traditional swordplay and hand-to-hand combat while perfectly capable of switching to quick slashes and stabs using Iaido's hallmark techniques makes practitioners of this style unpredictable fighters.

Requires: [Sword Weapons], [Perception] Concentrations.[/center][/table]

D rank

*[Iaido • Ancestral Focus]
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
The hallmark of Iaido is its practitioners abilities to launch an attack even when their swords are sheathed. This Discipline represents the practitioner's capacity to consistently execute a sword draw and slash all in one movement by gripping the edge of the scabbard and pulling the scabbard slightly forward before drawing the sword. This Discipline enables the practitioner to immediately draw their sword and attack at the start of combat.

*[Iaido • Mantra]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
A simple yet potent defense, especially against other weapons users, the practitioner partially draws the sword from its scabbard and blocks incoming attacks with the back of their blade. This technique is ineffective against opponents with higher Strength than the practitioner's Strength.

**[Iaido • One with the Sheath]
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite(s): 8 Speed.
The practitioner has learned how to more quickly and efficiently sheath his blades. The practitioner can now seamlessly transition from drawing their blade to slash to sheathing their blade, allowing the practitioner to sheath their sword in half the time, up to a maximum speed equal to their Speed score, for the more rapid execution of Iaido techniques.

*[Iaido • Last Rites]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
A defensive technique particularly useful when an opponent is close to the practitioner or is clinching them in a grapple, the practitioner grabs the hilt of their sword with a reverse grip and rams the butt or pommel of the hilt into the opponent's body, pushing the opponent back a number of meters equal to the difference between their Strength scores. Conversely, against opponents with higher Strength than their own, the practitioner can use this technique to push themselves back a number of meters equal to their own Strength score. The speed and simplicity of the attack can push opponents away and give the practitioner the needed space to set up additional attacks.

*[Iaido • Clouding Eyes]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite(s): 8 Speed.
A simple technique meant to cripple the target's vision, the practitioner draws the sword from its scabbard and aims a quick slash at the eyes. This technique can be done in any single direction to either target one or both of the opponent's eyes.

C rank

*[Iaido • Shinigami Draw]
C-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Losing the use of one's hand or arm in a fight can be a death sentence, but Iaido has found a simple, elegant response to this desperate situation. Using their free hand, the practitioner momentarily braces the edge of their sword against the inside of the scabbard before drawing. While it does not confer the instant acceleration benefit of its parent technique, this Discipline does allow the practitioner to use Iaido techniques at their normal speed even with only one hand.

*[Iaido • One with the Sword]
C-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite(s): *[Iaido • One with the Sheath].
The practitioner has learned how to more quickly and efficiently sheath his blades even without the use of both hands. The practitioner can now sheath the blade just as quickly with one hand as could be done with two hands, and so long as the scabbard remains on their person, the practitioner will always have an exact knowledge of the position of their scabbard.

*[Iaido • Ancestral Visage]
C-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Using Iaido to its fullest requires a keen eye and quick reactions, enabling its users to target weaknesses and openings that their opponents present almost instantaneously. This Discipline represents the practitioner's ability to attack openings that present themselves, the practitioner now able to reflexively attack an opening in almost the same moment that it is observed. This Discipline reduces the gap of time between a practitioner recognizing a potential opening for attack and launching the attack to exploit said opening to almost nil.

*[Iaido • Peace in Death]
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite(s): 15 Speed.
An abnormally aggressive technique in Iaido, this technique serves as a preemptive counter, attacking the opponent in the split moment between drawing back to prepare an attack and launching said attack. Violently torquing the muscles in their legs, the practitioner more quickly accelerates to their maximum speed (or instantly accelerating to their max speed if their Strength is equal or higher than their Speed) than with normal movement. With this movement, the practitioner bolts toward the opponent and launches an attack, cutting the opponent as they pass to their side. This technique can be used while moving to immediately change direction instead before launching the attack. Properly reading this attack requires the opponent to have a Perception technique of equal or higher rank than this technique.

*[Iaido • Shinigami’s Wrath]
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite(s): 15 Speed.
A technique refining the concept of targeting multiple opponents with a single draw, the practitioner uses their sheath hand to reverse grip the hilt. Using the one hand, the practitioner quickly torques their body and cuts with a reverse hand slash a full 360 degrees before immediately sheathing the blade. This technique can strike multiple opponents at once, and the reverse grip of the sword allows the practitioner to more easily defend against counterattacks immediately after.

B rank

*[Iaido • One with the Spirit]
B-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite(s): *[Iaido • One with the Sheath], *[Iaido • One with the Sword].
Through incredible amounts of practice, the practitioner of Iaido has learned his weapon and its housing inside and out. The user of this weapon can now reflexively sheath their sword in its scabbard almost instantaneously by instinct with either one hand or both hands without even looking. This facilitates further use of other Iaido techniques.

*[Iaido • Phantom Funeral]
B-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite(s): 35 Speed.
The superlative speed of Iaido is harnessed to attain seemingly supernatural feats. By momentarily torquing the muscles in their arms, the practitioner manages slashes so fast that they spawn vacuum blades that follow the trajectory of their original attack. This attack spawns a single vacuum blade that travels up to a number of meters equal to half the practitioner's Speed, rounded down, and hits with 1/2 the Strength of the original attack, rounded down. If this technique is used in tangent with a melee attack, the vacuum blade strikes immediately after the original attack is finished, potentially sealing the opponent's guard and creating an opening. This technique can be used in conjunction with other techniques.

*[Iaido • Spectral Flight]
B-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite(s): 15 Strength, 25 Speed, *[Iaido • Ancestral Visage].
In order for Iaido to stand toe to toe with a variety of high-level opponents, refining fundamentals to a new height is necessary. This Discipline represents the practitioner's ability to more quickly accelerate to max movement speed and decelerate to a full stop at a moment's notice. This does not offer protection against attacks that the practitioner does not know is coming.

A rank

*[Iaido • Sword Spirit Draw]
A-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Overwhelming the opponent with a literal shower of high-speed slashes, the practitioner torques the muscles in their arm to draw their sword and continue to assault the opponent's defenses with a seemingly unending wave of slashes. By torquing the muscles in the arm and twisting the wrist when changing the direction of the slash, each strike of the sword is as fast as if it had been drawn from its scabbard. This technique can be used while moving, and the practitioner can feint strikes within the flurry to throw the opponent off-guard. This technique can be used for up to three posts.
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In the heart of the Iron Country, in a place where the sky touches the tips of ancient pines, Menshin Yamado was born. His childhood was marked by the sound of steel and the smell of fresh snow. His father, a samurai who loved his son as deeply as he loved his sword, taught him the art of combat and discipline from an early age. His mother, a woman with eyes full of stories, told him legends of heroes of old before bedtime.

Menshin's talent for the martial arts became apparent at a young age. His hands gripped the wooden sword tightly, and even as a boy, his determination was unwavering. In Kemurigakure no Sato, a village hidden in smoke, Menshin was known for his tireless diligence and eagerness to learn. At the academy, where he studied alongside the descendants of warriors, he quickly rose to become one of the best students.

His days were filled with training, from early morning until the evening, when the last rays of the sun disappeared over the horizon. Menshin studied the old scrolls, learning strategy and tactics, and devoted every spare moment to perfecting his technique. It was a time when a boy became a man, and a man became a samurai.

When Menshin reached the age where he could carry a real sword, he was recruited into the Special Operations Battalion. His first missions were a test of his abilities. With each challenge he overcame, his experience and confidence grew. He was not yet a legend, but his name was already becoming associated with potential and hope.

Menshin's journey continued. With each mission he completed, his skills and knowledge deepened. He witnessed the beauty and cruelty of the world outside the walls of Kemurigakure no Sato. He learned from nature, from the wind that whispered secrets between the leaves, from the water that showed him the way to fluidity and adaptability.

In battle he was unyielding, in peace he was calm. His sword was not just an instrument of death, but a symbol of the life it protected. Menshin realized that the way of the samurai was not just about fighting, but about finding a balance between strength and wisdom, between courage and compassion.

His story was just beginning, but it already hinted that Menshin Yamado would not be just another samurai in the service of the Iron Country. He was destined to leave his mark on the hearts of those who knew him, and on the history of the country he served. Though he was no legend, his determination and ability suggested that one day he would become one.

Username: Menshin Yamado
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Meshikin (WIP)

Post by Texas » Sat Mar 23, 2024 7:15 pm

Welcome to the site! Did you double post this app in registration? Also, in the future, please post WIP apps in your own Test Threads. At this point, just let us know when this app is completed :)
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Ishiguro, AkihikoKumogakure no SatoChuunin - [color=#FF4080]Text Color[/color]
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Menshin Yamado

Post by Texas » Wed Mar 27, 2024 12:28 pm

Looks like you have made some edits to your app.

Here are a few things:

For your taijutsu pyramid, it needs to be a pyramid. So in order to have that amount of C-Ranks you would need at minimum 5 D-ranks. Also, if you could describe the Katana size, that would be ideal too.

Once you fix those, I can look into how many ryo you used to see if you went over or under.
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Hatake, TenzinKonohagakure no SatoBannin - [color=#BF0000]Text Color[/color]
Ishiguro, AkihikoKumogakure no SatoChuunin - [color=#FF4080]Text Color[/color]
Kisama, GinjiroHeart EmpireNatsubushi - [color=#80BF80]Text Color[/color]
MurasakiIwagakure no SatoGenin - [color=#FF8040]Text Color[/color]
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Menshin Yamado

Post by Menshin Yamado » Sun Apr 07, 2024 6:20 pm

I have made adjustments according to your requirements. Everything should be fine
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Menshin Yamado

Post by Texas » Sun Apr 14, 2024 10:32 pm

You have 84 Ryo’s worth in jutsu and the katana puts you at +3. So you are at 87 when your max is 85.
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Hatake, TenzinKonohagakure no SatoBannin - [color=#BF0000]Text Color[/color]
Ishiguro, AkihikoKumogakure no SatoChuunin - [color=#FF4080]Text Color[/color]
Kisama, GinjiroHeart EmpireNatsubushi - [color=#80BF80]Text Color[/color]
MurasakiIwagakure no SatoGenin - [color=#FF8040]Text Color[/color]
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Menshin Yamado

Post by Texas » Mon Apr 22, 2024 11:35 am

Any update on this?
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Hatake, TenzinKonohagakure no SatoBannin - [color=#BF0000]Text Color[/color]
Ishiguro, AkihikoKumogakure no SatoChuunin - [color=#FF4080]Text Color[/color]
Kisama, GinjiroHeart EmpireNatsubushi - [color=#80BF80]Text Color[/color]
MurasakiIwagakure no SatoGenin - [color=#FF8040]Text Color[/color]
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