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Chikamtsu Shin

Post by Chikamatsu Shin » Fri Jun 14, 2024 1:14 pm

Chikamatsu Shin
Shin, Kohana, The Chikamatsu Twins

[Life of Service is more Noble than Royalty]

General Information Age: 10
Gender: Boy/Girl (twin souls)
Height: 4'8"
Weight: 80lbs
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Pale white skin with pupilless blue/green eyes. Stark bright blonde hair. Effeminate features, very androgenous looking for a young boy
  • Body: Lean frame often seen wearing a variety of outfits from white crop tops and black shorts to fully covered tan cloaks, though on his days off they do prefer to wear a simple outfit of tans and greens.
  • Notable Features:Blue/green eyes shirt to a crimson like hue when Shin's sister, Kohana, takes control of their body.
Clothing/Accessories: Commonly seen wearing a white shirt with a black jacket to protect him from the sun. Headphones and a loose tie pair well with their short cut shinobi pants and sandals.
Picture:
Personality:
  • General:
    • Shin: Shin is a positive and generous soul! He strives to be the best that there is academically and plans on pursuing the path of the medic and sensei as he grows up. He wants to learn all that there is to know in this world and is excited to find the next big discovery.
    • Kohana: Extroverted as much as her brother is Introverted, Kohana has had a rough start to life. Passing in eutero, the soul of this departed child latched onto her twin brother and has yet to let go. Like a ghost that haunts him, Kohana is as opposite from Shin as they come. With a quick temper and a general distaste for the living, it isn't surprising that she has caused their vessel to go through various punishments due to her outbursts. She would be the first to tell their Sensei what she felt about their lesson and had zero interest in learning the curriculum.
  • Hopes/Dreams: Shin's dream is to find a way to give his sister a true body of her own and to one day become the next clan leader for the Chikamatsu!
  • Fears: Shin fears that if Kohana continues down the path that she is going that he will have no choice but to either follow her into the darkness or sever their connection, regardless of who's life will be on the line.
  • Combat Mentality: Slow and steady wins the race! from layering Genjutsu with Chikamatsu Secret techniques, the young pair of twins have one thing in common! Where they differ is that the use of Poison and Genjutsu for Shin allows him to make sure he has the opportunity to protect and support his allies, while Kohana gets enjoyment out of torturing and tormenting her foes,

Battle Information Village: Sunagakure! :suna:
Rank: Genin
  • Chakra Pool: 10
  • Endurance: 3
  • Control: 7
  • Strength: 3
  • Speed: 7
  • Willpower: 10
  • Power Rank: 40
Equipment:
Companions: (0/1)
Affinity/Specialization:
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu[Place them here]
Taijutsu[Place them here]
Genjutsu[Place them here]

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
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TaijutsuShow
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GenjutsuShow
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History
Historical AccountsShow
Many years before he was born his father was the apprentice to the shinobi named Mojitsu Areomaru before the man disappeared forever. During this time the young shinobi spent many years traveling the world learning the craft of marionette design from masters from every nation. During his travels he met a young kunoichi from another village but quickly parted ways. Years passed and almost by fate the two ran into each other once again while the young Yamanaka was visiting Sunagakure. The two seemed to click with one another rather easily and love came naturally. After becoming a citizen of Suna the young woman eventually married the man she learned to love and the two of them began their life together. The baby was born with his mother's appearance which she knew would mean he also had her unique bloodline somewhere deep inside of him. They named the boy Shin and he grew up loving his village and his parents, and nothing out of the ordinary happened. Nothing tragic, nothing magical, nothing. His life was that of a regular Sunan. He grew up and decided he wanted to join the village's academy as many young children did. Here he began to further his advancement of jutsu and chakra.

During his first couple of years of life he dd, however, study with his mother and father. From his dad he learned the ninja art of puppetry and learned how to channel his chakra into threads used to control marionettes. His mother's training was rather unique. It consisted of meditation and sharpening of his mind. As time went on the boy began to develop the skills that his mother had been talking about. He could hear her thoughts. He understood that he had traits exclusive to the Yamanaka Clan. He worked to master this keen mind of his to the point where not only could he hear other's thoughts but could also project his own thoughts to others. Mainly used to train with his mother, the boy could also make the distance to the shop his father worked out just down the street.

As he joined the academy the boy's family moved to the new Sunan Residences out of the slums he was born in. The harsh sun was new to him but he welcomed to with a warmth in his heart. He worked with his mother training his shuriken skills and how to even use the Hanabuki flowers his mother grew. He was growing to become a fine descendent of the Yamanaka Bloodline even if he didn't carry the name. It took him years of dedicated training with his mother to pull the secrets from his DNA as there no tragedies in his life that normally triggered these responses. His bloodline's tradition was still being tested as he continued to try access the secret techniques he gained from his mother's clan!

It wasn't until graduating from the Academy where he fell into a deep trance and accidentally woke he lingering spirit of his sister, Kohana, who almost immediately went on a rampaging attack. The Chikamatsu Clan, known for having strong senses of will, were not surprised when they heard that one of the children had a dual soul, as the leader of the clan, the Overseer of the Chikamatsu, possessed a secret technique that allowed them to merge souls with up to five other willing members of the clan, forming what was called the Inner Circle. This technique, known as the Seal of the Yurei Orchid, would one day be Shin's to have as he was destined to be the next Overseer, but until this the boy had much to learn on how to be a Shinobi before he could ever become a leader.

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Chikamtsu Shin

Post by King of Cats » Fri Jun 14, 2024 7:26 pm

Hey, thanks for joining us for RP. :D

Everything looks good so far. You need to finish the app though. You get a starter kit, 5 kunai, 10 shuriken, 10m of wire , 5 exploding tags, 1 smoke bomb, 1 flash bang. You can add that to your inventory, make sure to note where your character keeps the items. Then pick a specialization or affinity, that would be a specific concentration to get discounts with. Then pick out your concentrations, info on that is found here. Then decide on jutsu, you can search the archives or make your own.

If you need any help, shoot me a question on discord! Thanks again!
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Post by Chikamatsu Shin » Sat Jun 15, 2024 3:47 pm

Chikamatsu Shin
Shin, Kohana, The Chikamatsu Twins

[Life of Service is more Noble than Royalty]

General Information Age: 10
Gender: Boy/Girl (twin souls)
Height: 4'8"
Weight: 80lbs
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Pale white skin with pupilless blue/green eyes. Stark bright blonde hair. Effeminate features, very androgenous looking for a young boy
  • Body: Lean frame often seen wearing a variety of outfits from white crop tops and black shorts to fully covered tan cloaks, though on his days off they do prefer to wear a simple outfit of tans and greens.
  • Notable Features:Blue/green eyes shirt to a crimson like hue when Shin's sister, Kohana, takes control of their body.
Clothing/Accessories: Commonly seen wearing a white shirt with a black jacket to protect him from the sun. Headphones and a loose tie pair well with their short cut shinobi pants and sandals.
Picture:
Personality:
  • General:
    • Shin: Shin is a positive and generous soul! He strives to be the best that there is academically and plans on pursuing the path of the medic and sensei as he grows up. He wants to learn all that there is to know in this world and is excited to find the next big discovery.
    • Kohana: Extroverted as much as her brother is Introverted, Kohana has had a rough start to life. Passing in eutero, the soul of this departed child latched onto her twin brother and has yet to let go. Like a ghost that haunts him, Kohana is as opposite from Shin as they come. With a quick temper and a general distaste for the living, it isn't surprising that she has caused their vessel to go through various punishments due to her outbursts. She would be the first to tell their Sensei what she felt about their lesson and had zero interest in learning the curriculum.
  • Hopes/Dreams: Shin's dream is to find a way to give his sister a true body of her own and to one day become the next clan leader for the Chikamatsu!
  • Fears: Shin fears that if Kohana continues down the path that she is going that he will have no choice but to either follow her into the darkness or sever their connection, regardless of who's life will be on the line.
  • Combat Mentality: Slow and steady wins the race! from layering Genjutsu with Chikamatsu Secret techniques, the young pair of twins have one thing in common! Where they differ is that the use of Poison and Genjutsu for Shin allows him to make sure he has the opportunity to protect and support his allies, while Kohana gets enjoyment out of torturing and tormenting her foes,

Battle Information Village: Sunagakure! :suna:
Rank: Genin
  • Chakra Pool: 10
  • Endurance: 3
  • Control: 10
  • Strength: 3
  • Speed: 4
  • Willpower: 10
  • Power Rank: 40
Equipment:
Companions: (0/1)
Affinity/Specialization: Sensory
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
Twin Soul - Shadow: Kekkei GenkaiMany of the Chikamatsu Clan of Sunagakure are born with fragments of souls connected to their ancestors or lost loved ones, but in extreme situations some members of the Clan are born with an entirely second soul that dwells within their body as well. Shinobi with two distinct soul wave lengths are known as Twin Souls, and are often selected as future Overseers of the Clan as the Twin Soul shinobi has an above average chance to bond successfully with the Yurei Orchid - Body Modification.

Having this Twin Soul allows the wielder to have two distinct personalities within the body, each able to fully control the body as if their own, though often times requiring the other soul to step out of the light and into the mental darkness as it's a rare occurrence when both souls agree on a singular path to take.

The most notable feature of the Twin Soul's chakra is the ability to launch this secondary soul out from the body to act as a scout. The Shinobi with this advantageous ability is able to perceive the world from two vantage points simultaneously if this is used, though any distortions of reality the primary soul is affected by apply to the secondary soul that is expelled from the body as well.

The Primary Soul is known as the Host, and the Secondary Soul is known as the Shadow. This Shadow is often times seen as the polar opposite of the Host until the Host is able to overcome their own short comings and dominate this ability. Until the Host asserts true dominance, the Shadow can be antagonistic towards the Host. There have been instances in the past where the Shinobi fell at the hands of their own Shadow as those with the Twin Soul ability have been capable of summoning the Shadows into reality.
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
Iijutsu Fuuton:
This concentration allows for the user-to-user chakra to affect the biological processes of a living creature. This includes modifying, speeding up, or slowing down the biological processes. Iijutsu is known for it's advanced nature and requires precise chakra control to work effectively. It can be differentiate from normal techniques by the faint light green color of the chakra used in Iijutsu techniques.
Sensory:
Sensors are shinobi who are able to activate a sixth sense which can locate and read chakra sources. Sensory is advantageous as it allows shinobi to perceive without using any of their conventional senses, which can easily be deceived. Sensors are able to collect a lot of information through the interpretation of this sixth sense. For the purpose of the concentration, only Mind's Eye and Empathy take up the concentration slot. Extension types of sensory do not take up a concentration.
Taijutsu
Medicine:
The fundamental skill of [Medicine] describes the user’s mental and physical ability to perform traditional and mainstream medicinal practices. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Perception:
The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Genjutsu
Initiators: Sight:
One of the easier senses to initiate genjutsu with, sight is used by channeling the chakra through the user, through another person, or through an object, to instigate the genjutsu. Common examples of this are eye contact, seeing the hand seals, seeing a specific weapon, or seeing an action. The intend target(s) must place their eyes on the initiator for at least a brief moment to be initiated

Its understood that typically, the harder it is to get someone to look at something, the stronger the genjutsu is. This means that while “seeing the user perform the hand seals” is typically pretty easy to obtain “maintaining eye contact with the user” is much harder to retain, so the latter is likely a much stronger genjutsu, allowing for more strength the longer the eye contact is maintained.

Using sight to initiate genjutsu is one of the more commonplace genjutsu initiators found. Initiating through Sight requires one concentration.
Initiators: Hearing:
Arguably the easiest sense to use to initiate genjutsu with, hearing is used by channeling chakra through a sound. This can be a sound made by the user, made by a weapon, or made by an ally. Common examples of this are the sound of clapping, whistling, a bell attached to a weapon, or even the sound of an exploding tag going off. The intended target(s) must hear the sound for at least a brief moment to be initiated.

Its understood that typically, the longer a sound lasts, the stronger the genjutsu is. The strongest sound based genjutsu typically require the user to maintain a continuous sound (typically playing some sort of instrument), that preoccupies them to some length. That being said “hearing the user clap their hands” is likely a weaker jutsu than jutsu that require ‘as long as the user continues talking’.

Using sound based genjutsu is the most commonplace genjutsu initiator found. Initiating through Hearing requires one concentration.
Type:Status:
Status genjutsu are ones that modify the processes the brain uses to think. This is typically the creation of emotions, calling forth of memories, or simply giving them thoughts. Status genjutsu are more complex than illusion genjutsu, and are C-rank minimum. This means that you must have some experience in illusion genjutsu to be able to use status genjutsu. The only unique case in status genjutsu is sleep genjutsu. Genjutsu that put targets to sleep must include 1 post that gives the target a chance to realize they're in a genjutsu, and only requires 15 Willpower to resist. Sleep genjutsu with these specs must be A-rank, though the rank can be lowered by extending the post count beforehand, and the kai requirement can be increased by making it higher ranked.
Type: Overlay:
Overlay Genjutsu are essentially the teleporting of the minds of the user and the one targeted into a new world, or an all new reality. This reality is an all encompassing, but limited, illusion technique, with just a dash of status slipped in. Overlay genjutsu create entire scenes, worlds, for the mind to experience. Overlay genjutsu gives you a "fake" body but keep in mind that in an overlay genjutsu NOTHING is actually real. But this does not mean that you can walk off an Overlay, due to the mental stress that this level of Illusionary Technique causes on the target, they are able to debilitate those that are weak in Will Power. The 'damage' done in Overlay genjutsu is based on the user's Will Power stat versus the caster's Will Power stat.

Note: Overlay requires a minimum of 30 Willpower to use B-rank, 35 Willpower to use A-rank, and 40 Willpower to use S-ranks, making them quite powerful styles. Additionally you must have the concentrations for both Status and Warp to take the Overlay concentration. Finally, if you have the Overlay Concentration you can never have the Kinesis, Space/Time or Heavenly Taijutsu Concentration.

Jutsu
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Twin Soul Genjutsu • Manifested Shadow(Custom):
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then clench onto their chest, grabbing hold of their second soul and pulling it from their own body. The Shadow then manifests as a semi permanent body that can be easily destroyed through any minor instance of force applied to them. The Manifested Shadow can travel 5m per 1 Control the user has away from the Host's Body. The Host and the Shadow maintain connection to each other's senses at all times during the duration of this technique.
IijutsuShow
Diagnostic Check:
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
A technique used by medical shinobi to deduce what is going on with a patient. They will perform a hand seal and green chakra will cover their hands. From there, they may place them upon a number of patients equal to their [Chakra Pool]/2. Their chakra will travel through the patient at [Control] Speed before coming back to them and allowing the medical shinobi to be able to tell their patients temperature, blood pressure, oxygen saturation, and heart rate for as long as they have chakra.
Blood Clot Technique:
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After focusing chakra into their hands, the user will hover them over the bleeding wound and begin to channel chakra through it. The chakra will began to thicken the blood, causing it to clot at [Control] Speed. Wounds can be dealt with one limb at a time and the number of wounds that can be tended to within the three (3) posts that this technique lasts depends on their size. Although this technique stops the bleeding, the wound remains vulnerable and will require further care after this has been performed.
Chakra Sitching:
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user performs a short set of hand seals and then will gently place their index finger at the base of the patient's wound. Once this is done, the user will lift their finger and touch it to the other side of the wound, causing a visible 'stitch' of chakra to appear and hold the wound together with [Control] Strength. This is repeated until the wound has been pulled together. Actions performed with more [Strength] or [Speed] than the [Control] used to create the stitch will destroy it.
SensoryShow
Sensory Style • Beyond Senses:
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisites: 10 Control
First performing handseals, this sensor jutsu is used by shinobi to feel chakra sources within a radius of 35 meters. While this jutsu is fairly helpful in sensing chakra, it is unable to actually pinpoint specific chakras outside of a 10m radius. This only gives the Shinobi an idea of how many entities with chakra are present in their general area.
Sensory Style • Approaching Tides:
C-rank Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals and place their hands to a body of water. Releasing waves of chakra out of their hands. These waves of chakra will bounce back to the user after traveling out 50 meters on the surface of the water. As the chakra returns to the user it will evoke an image in the users head of the surface of the body of water, anything on the surface, and anything up to 5 meters under the surface of the water. These are still images, not moving images, but can give the user a good idea of what is happening if they aren’t able to see otherwise.
Sensory Style • Approaching Tremor:
C-rank Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals and place their hands to the ground. Releasing waves of chakra out of their hands. These waves of chakra will bounce back to the user after traveling out 50 meters on the ground. As the chakra returns to the user it will evoke an image in the users head of the immediate area around them, anything touching the ground and anything up to 5 meters underground. These are still images, not moving images, but can give the user a good idea of what is happening if they aren’t able to see otherwise.
Sensory Style • Approaching Breeze:
C-rank Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals and place their hands in the air. Releasing waves of chakra out of their hands. These waves of chakra will bounce back to the user after traveling out 50 meters in the air. As the chakra returns to the user it will evoke an image in the users head of the immediate area around them, anything in the air and anything up to 5 meters in the air. These are still images, not moving images, but can give the user a good idea of what is happening if they aren’t able to see otherwise.
TaijutsuShow
Place Taijutsu in here
GenjutsuShow
Genjutsu • Paranoid:
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then whistle. Anyone who hears the whistle will be captured in this genjutsu. For the following 4 posts, the target will see a shadow in the corner of their eyes, constantly shifting out of view when they attempt to look at it.
Genjutsu • Boom!:
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then within the next post, snap their fingers. Anyone who hears the snapping will hear an explosion in the distance behind them. This works as an effective distraction, or a scare tactic, if properly utilized.

History
Historical AccountsShow
Many years before he was born his father was the apprentice to the shinobi named Mojitsu Areomaru before the man disappeared forever. During this time the young shinobi spent many years traveling the world learning the craft of marionette design from masters from every nation. During his travels he met a young kunoichi from another village but quickly parted ways. Years passed and almost by fate the two ran into each other once again while the young woman was visiting Sunagakure. The two seemed to click with one another rather easily and love came naturally. After becoming a citizen of Suna the young woman eventually married the man she learned to love and the two of them began their life together. The baby was born with his mother's appearance which she knew would mean he also had her unique bloodline somewhere deep inside of him. They named the boy Shin and he grew up loving his village and his parents, and nothing out of the ordinary happened. Nothing tragic, nothing magical, nothing. His life was that of a regular Sunan. He grew up and decided he wanted to join the village's academy as many young children did. Here he began to further his advancement of jutsu and chakra.

During his first couple of years of life he dd, however, study with his mother and father. From his dad he learned the ninja art of puppetry and learned how to channel his chakra into threads used to control marionettes. His mother's training was rather unique. It consisted of meditation and sharpening of his mind. As time went on the boy began to develop the skills that his mother had been talking about. He could hear her thoughts. He understood that he had traits exclusive to his mother's clan. He worked to master this keen mind of his to the point where not only could he hear other's thoughts but could also project his own thoughts to others. Mainly used to train with his mother, the boy could also make the distance to the shop his father worked out just down the street.

As he joined the academy the boy's family moved to the new Sunan Residences out of the slums he was born in. The harsh sun was new to him but he welcomed to with a warmth in his heart. He worked with his mother training his shuriken skills and how to even use the Hanabuki flowers his mother grew. He was growing to become a fine member of the Chikamatsu Clan as he began to learn and easily utilize both Sensory and Iijutsu techniques. It took him years of dedicated training with his mother to pull the secrets from his maternal lineage, but he was sure that eventually his mind would be able to keep up with his mother's genjutsu prowess with no issue!

It wasn't until graduating from the Academy where he fell into a deep trance and accidentally woke he lingering spirit of his sister, Kohana, who almost immediately went on a rampaging attack. The Chikamatsu Clan, known for having strong senses of [Willpower], were not surprised when they heard that one of the children had a dual soul, as the leader of the clan, the Overseer of the Chikamatsu, possessed a secret technique that allowed them to merge souls with up to five other willing members of the clan, forming what was called the Inner Circle. This technique, known as the Seal of the Yurei Orchid, would one day be Shin's to have as he was destined to be the next Overseer, but until this the boy had much to learn on how to be a Shinobi before he could ever become a leader.

Username: Chikamatsu Shin.
Organization Equipment: 0/0
Organization Jutsu: 0/0
Ryo: 50/50 (4+4+4+6+6+6+6+6+4+4)
Prestige Perks: 0/0
Stat Trainings: (0/75)
Inventory:
  • Leg Pouch:
    • 5 Kunai
    • 5 Exploding Tags
  • Hip Pouch:
    • 10 shuriken
    • 10m of Wire
    • 1 Smoke Bomb
    • 1 Flash Bang
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Chikamtsu Shin

Post by King of Cats » Sat Jun 15, 2024 4:14 pm

Overlay is a Pinnacle, and you don't meet the requirements to obtain it, yet. >:)

Iijutsu Fuuton
"This concentration allows for the user-to-user chakra to affect the biological processes of a living creature. This includes modifying, speeding up, or slowing down the biological processes. Iijutsu is known for it's advanced nature and requires precise chakra control to work effectively. It can be differentiate from normal techniques by the faint light green color of the chakra used in Iijutsu techniques."

Typically a concentration follows a theme. As this is Iijutsu Fuuton, you should describe how a wind of mystical energy can boost or curse biological creatures. Or whatever the concentration does, i feel like it isn't clear as it is written. Also you should have Fuuton if this is a combo of the two concs, Iijutsu and Fuuton.

Twin Soul Genjutsu • Manifested Shadow(Custom)
This is labeled a Genjutsu, but its a Ninjutsu. Maybe clarify it as like "Twin Soul Style" or something. "The Manifested Shadow can travel 5m per 1 Control the user has away from the Host's Body." This should follow rank averages. So 15 meters for a D rank. It does scale with control btw.

For the three empath sensory techniques you have. Tides, Tremor and Breeze, you need the Elemental concentration for those jutsu.

Also, if you could recode those jutsu to be copy and pasted exactly as you found them. Without the quotes. It's coded like that with certain marks for the mods to be able to see what jutsu are custom and what ones aren't. Typically they are divided like this

Ninjutsu> Style > Jutsu
Where the > indicates a spoiler. And remember you want to copy and paste them exactly as they appear on the screen. It helps the mods.

Your Ryo count should be 0/0 we don't count starter ryo.

Finally your inventory should go in equipment, between Stats and Companions.
Kouseki, SeijiChuuninSunagakure no Sato
Nara, ShiroyashaGeninKonohagakure no Sato
Kaguya, RenjiChuuninKirigakure no Sato
Shuryo, RokuHarubushiHeart Empire
Akari, KohakuGeninIwagakure no Sato
Kisama, AichiHarubushiHeart Empire
Hyuuga, KokouJouninKonohagakure no Sato
Ishiguro, ShushikiGeninKumogakure no Sato

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Post by Chikamatsu Shin » Sun Jun 16, 2024 8:40 pm

Chikamatsu Shin
Shin, Kohana, The Chikamatsu Twins

[Life of Service is more Noble than Royalty]

General Information Age: 10
Gender: Boy/Girl (twin souls)
Height: 4'8"
Weight: 80lbs
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Pale white skin with pupilless blue/green eyes. Stark bright blonde hair. Effeminate features, very androgenous looking for a young boy
  • Body: Lean frame often seen wearing a variety of outfits from white crop tops and black shorts to fully covered tan cloaks, though on his days off they do prefer to wear a simple outfit of tans and greens.
  • Notable Features:Blue/green eyes shirt to a crimson like hue when Shin's sister, Kohana, takes control of their body.
Clothing/Accessories: Commonly seen wearing a white shirt with a black jacket to protect him from the sun. Headphones and a loose tie pair well with their short cut shinobi pants and sandals.
Picture:
Personality:
  • General:
    • Shin: Shin is a positive and generous soul! He strives to be the best that there is academically and plans on pursuing the path of the medic and sensei as he grows up. He wants to learn all that there is to know in this world and is excited to find the next big discovery.
    • Kohana: Extroverted as much as her brother is Introverted, Kohana has had a rough start to life. Passing in eutero, the soul of this departed child latched onto her twin brother and has yet to let go. Like a ghost that haunts him, Kohana is as opposite from Shin as they come. With a quick temper and a general distaste for the living, it isn't surprising that she has caused their vessel to go through various punishments due to her outbursts. She would be the first to tell their Sensei what she felt about their lesson and had zero interest in learning the curriculum.
  • Hopes/Dreams: Shin's dream is to find a way to give his sister a true body of her own and to one day become the next clan leader for the Chikamatsu!
  • Fears: Shin fears that if Kohana continues down the path that she is going that he will have no choice but to either follow her into the darkness or sever their connection, regardless of who's life will be on the line.
  • Combat Mentality: Slow and steady wins the race! from layering Genjutsu with Chikamatsu Secret techniques, the young pair of twins have one thing in common! Where they differ is that the use of Poison and Genjutsu for Shin allows him to make sure he has the opportunity to protect and support his allies, while Kohana gets enjoyment out of torturing and tormenting her foes,

Battle Information Village: Sunagakure! :suna:
Rank: Genin
  • Chakra Pool: 10
  • Endurance: 3
  • Control: 10
  • Strength: 3
  • Speed: 4
  • Willpower: 10
  • Power Rank: 40
Equipment:
  • Leg Pouch:
    • 5 Kunai
    • 5 Exploding Tags
  • Hip Pouch:
    • 10 shuriken
    • 10m of Wire
    • 1 Smoke Bomb
    • 1 Flash Bang
Companions: (0/1)
Affinity/Specialization: Sensory
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
Twin Soul - Shadow: Kekkei GenkaiMany of the Chikamatsu Clan of Sunagakure are born with fragments of souls connected to their ancestors or lost loved ones, but in extreme situations some members of the Clan are born with an entirely second soul that dwells within their body as well. Shinobi with two distinct soul wave lengths are known as Twin Souls, and are often selected as future Overseers of the Clan as the Twin Soul shinobi has an above average chance to bond successfully with the Yurei Orchid - Body Modification.

Having this Twin Soul allows the wielder to have two distinct personalities within the body, each able to fully control the body as if their own, though often times requiring the other soul to step out of the light and into the mental darkness as it's a rare occurrence when both souls agree on a singular path to take.

The most notable feature of the Twin Soul's chakra is the ability to launch this secondary soul out from the body to act as a scout. The Shinobi with this advantageous ability is able to perceive the world from two vantage points simultaneously if this is used, though any distortions of reality the primary soul is affected by apply to the secondary soul that is expelled from the body as well.

The Primary Soul is known as the Host, and the Secondary Soul is known as the Shadow. This Shadow is often times seen as the polar opposite of the Host until the Host is able to overcome their own short comings and dominate this ability. Until the Host asserts true dominance, the Shadow can be antagonistic towards the Host. There have been instances in the past where the Shinobi fell at the hands of their own Shadow as those with the Twin Soul ability have been capable of summoning the Shadows into reality.
Transmitter Mind: Unique Chakra PropertyThough the name has been lost through time, the clan of Shin's Mother had a unique property to their chakra. Though most shinobi combine both Physical and Spiritual energies within their bodies to form Chakra that is then stored within themselves, those blessed with the Transmitter Mind have the ability to control their chakra to such a degree that is no longer required to be stored within their bodies. The Transmitter Minded shinobi can send their chakra out of their body freely to perform all sorts of feats, such as enhancing their sensory prowess, or even to connect to others around them to communicate telepathically.

The use of this chakra property is extremely taxing at first and often takes years to master, but once it is accomplished the user of this Unique Chakra Property can freely navigate their chakra in their surroundings as easily as it is to breathe.
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
IijutsuShow
This concentration allows for the user-to-user chakra to affect the biological processes of a living creature. This includes modifying, speeding up, or slowing down the biological processes. Iijutsu is known for it's advanced nature and requires precise chakra control to work effectively. It can be differentiate from normal techniques by the faint light green color of the chakra used in Iijutsu techniques.
SensoryShow
Sensors are shinobi who are able to activate a sixth sense which can locate and read chakra sources. Sensory is advantageous as it allows shinobi to perceive without using any of their conventional senses, which can easily be deceived. Sensors are able to collect a lot of information through the interpretation of this sixth sense. For the purpose of the concentration, only Mind's Eye and Empathy take up the concentration slot. Extension types of sensory do not take up a concentration.
Taijutsu
MedicineShow
The fundamental skill of [Medicine] describes the user’s mental and physical ability to perform traditional and mainstream medicinal practices. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
PerceptionShow
The fundamental skill of [Perception] describes the user’s practiced methods of more keenly focussing their senses for a short time. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Projectile WeaponsShow
The fundamental skill of [Projectile Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with weapons designed to attack from afar, such as bows, shuriken, senbon, launchers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Genjutsu
Initiators: SightShow
One of the easier senses to initiate genjutsu with, sight is used by channeling the chakra through the user, through another person, or through an object, to instigate the genjutsu. Common examples of this are eye contact, seeing the hand seals, seeing a specific weapon, or seeing an action. The intend target(s) must place their eyes on the initiator for at least a brief moment to be initiated

Its understood that typically, the harder it is to get someone to look at something, the stronger the genjutsu is. This means that while “seeing the user perform the hand seals” is typically pretty easy to obtain “maintaining eye contact with the user” is much harder to retain, so the latter is likely a much stronger genjutsu, allowing for more strength the longer the eye contact is maintained.

Using sight to initiate genjutsu is one of the more commonplace genjutsu initiators found. Initiating through Sight requires one concentration.
Initiators: HearingShow
Arguably the easiest sense to use to initiate genjutsu with, hearing is used by channeling chakra through a sound. This can be a sound made by the user, made by a weapon, or made by an ally. Common examples of this are the sound of clapping, whistling, a bell attached to a weapon, or even the sound of an exploding tag going off. The intended target(s) must hear the sound for at least a brief moment to be initiated.

Its understood that typically, the longer a sound lasts, the stronger the genjutsu is. The strongest sound based genjutsu typically require the user to maintain a continuous sound (typically playing some sort of instrument), that preoccupies them to some length. That being said “hearing the user clap their hands” is likely a weaker jutsu than jutsu that require ‘as long as the user continues talking’.

Using sound based genjutsu is the most commonplace genjutsu initiator found. Initiating through Hearing requires one concentration.
Type: StatusShow
Status genjutsu are ones that modify the processes the brain uses to think. This is typically the creation of emotions, calling forth of memories, or simply giving them thoughts. Status genjutsu are more complex than illusion genjutsu, and are C-rank minimum. This means that you must have some experience in illusion genjutsu to be able to use status genjutsu. The only unique case in status genjutsu is sleep genjutsu. Genjutsu that put targets to sleep must include 1 post that gives the target a chance to realize they're in a genjutsu, and only requires 15 Willpower to resist. Sleep genjutsu with these specs must be A-rank, though the rank can be lowered by extending the post count beforehand, and the kai requirement can be increased by making it higher ranked.

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
Twin Soul Style • Manifested Shadow(Custom):
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then clench onto their chest, grabbing hold of their second soul and pulling it from their own body. The Shadow then manifests as a semi permanent body that can be easily destroyed through any minor instance of force applied to them. Distance traveled follows rank averages, such as 15m at D-Rank. The Host and the Shadow maintain connection to each other's senses at all times during the duration of this technique. This is treated as a [Clone] Jutsu.
IijutsuShow
*[Iijutsu • Diagnostic Check]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
A technique used by medical shinobi to deduce what is going on with a patient. They will perform a hand seal and green chakra will cover their hands. From there, they may place them upon a number of patients equal to their [Chakra Pool]/2. Their chakra will travel through the patient at [Control] Speed before coming back to them and allowing the medical shinobi to be able to tell their patients temperature, blood pressure, oxygen saturation, and heart rate for as long as they have chakra.

*[Iijutsu • Blood Clot Technique]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After focusing chakra into their hands, the user will hover them over the bleeding wound and begin to channel chakra through it. The chakra will began to thicken the blood, causing it to clot at [Control] Speed. Wounds can be dealt with one limb at a time and the number of wounds that can be tended to within the three (3) posts that this technique lasts depends on their size. Although this technique stops the bleeding, the wound remains vulnerable and will require further care after this has been performed.

*[Iijutsu • Chakra Stitching]
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user performs a short set of hand seals and then will gently place their index finger at the base of the patient's wound. Once this is done, the user will lift their finger and touch it to the other side of the wound, causing a visible 'stitch' of chakra to appear and hold the wound together with [Control] Strength. This is repeated until the wound has been pulled together. Actions performed with more [Strength] or [Speed] than the [Control] used to create the stitch will destroy it.
SensoryShow
*[Sensory Style • Beyond Senses]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisites: 10 Control
First performing handseals, this sensor jutsu is used by shinobi to feel chakra sources within a radius of 35 meters. While this jutsu is fairly helpful in sensing chakra, it is unable to actually pinpoint specific chakras outside of a 10m radius. This only gives the Shinobi an idea of how many entities with chakra are present in their general area.
TaijutsuShow
*[Flawless Aim Style • Tracking]
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
After much training and study, the practitioner has learned how to read an opponent's movements and adjust their aim accordingly to compensate without penalty. This Discipline allows the practitioner to accurately hit moving targets, though sudden changes in the opponent's movements will still affect accuracy.

*[Flawless Aim Style • Arcing Shot]
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
The practitioner can launch projectiles in arcs up and over most obstacles, being able to accurately hit a target that is behind obstructions as if they were in the open. The practitioner must still be able to locate their target by some other means to ensure the projectile will hit its target.

*[Flawless Aim Style • Twisting Path]
C-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Preparing a projectile, the practitioner launches the weapon with a slight tailspin, causing the flight path of the weapon to warp as it travels. The practitioner uses this slight change in the projectile's trajectory to hit a variety of targets that could not be targeted by normal means. This can be used to hit a target that is hiding behind another person or object, particularly useful against opponents behind human shields.
GenjutsuShow
*[Genjutsu • Pins and Needles]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
After performing the hand seals and pricking the opponent with some sort of small weapon (usually senbon), the opponent feels their arms and legs fall asleep. It feels as if the blood flow to these appendages has basically stopped, making their movements a tad sluggish and just all around uncomfortable. This jutsu doesn’t really hinder a person, but it makes everything they do feel off. For those who are attuned to the way their body feels during battle, it can be extremely distracting. Lasts 3 posts.

*[Genjutsu • Paranoid]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then whistle. Anyone who hears the whistle will be captured in this genjutsu. For the following 4 posts, the target will see a shadow in the corner of their eyes, constantly shifting out of view when they attempt to look at it.

*[Genjutsu • Boom!]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then within the next post, snap their fingers. Anyone who hears the snapping will hear an explosion in the distance behind them. This works as an effective distraction, or a scare tactic, if properly utilized.

History
Historical AccountsShow
Many years before he was born his father was the apprentice to the shinobi named Mojitsu Areomaru before the man disappeared forever. During this time the young shinobi spent many years traveling the world learning the craft of marionette design from masters from every nation. During his travels he met a young kunoichi from another village but quickly parted ways. Years passed and almost by fate the two ran into each other once again while the young woman was visiting Sunagakure. The two seemed to click with one another rather easily and love came naturally. After becoming a citizen of Suna the young woman eventually married the man she learned to love and the two of them began their life together. The baby was born with his mother's appearance which she knew would mean he also had her unique bloodline somewhere deep inside of him. They named the boy Shin and he grew up loving his village and his parents, and nothing out of the ordinary happened. Nothing tragic, nothing magical, nothing. His life was that of a regular Sunan. He grew up and decided he wanted to join the village's academy as many young children did. Here he began to further his advancement of jutsu and chakra.

During his first couple of years of life he dd, however, study with his mother and father. From his dad he learned the ninja art of puppetry and learned how to channel his chakra into threads used to control marionettes, though he was not greatly skilled at it. His mother's training was rather unique. It consisted of meditation and sharpening of his mind. As time went on the boy began to develop the skills that his mother had been talking about. Through the use of her Unique Chakra Property, the Transmitter Mind, he could hear her thoughts. He understood that he shared these exclusive traits of his mother's clan, but mastering them was still beyond his grasp. He worked to master this keen mind of his to the point where not only could he hear his mother's thoughts but he began the formulation process to make a seal which would allow him to project his own thoughts to others, but he knew he still had quite some time until it was mastered.

As he joined the academy the boy's family moved to the new Sunan Residences out of the slums he was born in. The harsh sun was new to him but he welcomed to with a warmth in his heart. He worked with his mother training his shuriken skills and how to even use the Hanabuki flowers his mother grew. He was growing to become a fine member of the Chikamatsu Clan as he began to learn and easily utilize both Sensory and Iijutsu techniques. It took him years of dedicated training with his mother to pull the secrets from his maternal lineage, but he was sure that eventually his mind would be able to keep up with his mother's genjutsu prowess with no issue!

It wasn't until graduating from the Academy where he fell into a deep trance and accidentally woke he lingering spirit of his sister, Kohana, who almost immediately went on a rampaging attack. The Chikamatsu Clan, known for having strong senses of [Willpower], were not surprised when they heard that one of the children had a dual soul, as the leader of the clan, the Overseer of the Chikamatsu, possessed a secret technique that allowed them to merge souls with up to five other willing members of the clan, forming what was called the Inner Circle. This technique, known as the Seal of the Yurei Orchid, would one day be Shin's to have as he was destined to be the next Overseer, but until this the boy had much to learn on how to be a Shinobi before he could ever become a leader.

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Post by King of Cats » Sun Jun 16, 2024 8:59 pm

In your history:

"He could hear her thoughts. He understood that he had traits exclusive to his mother's clan. He worked to master this keen mind of his to the point where not only could he hear other's thoughts but could also project his own thoughts to others." You don't have any mention of this ability in your app, perhaps it's an oversight.
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Post by King of Cats » Sun Jun 16, 2024 9:37 pm

1/2
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Post by Kanade » Tue Jun 18, 2024 11:51 am

Going to take Transmitter's mind into staff: it seems a lot like Kyoukan.
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Post by Kanade » Tue Jun 18, 2024 12:05 pm

Transmitter Mind: Unique Chakra Property

This ability is too broad and vague.

What does it do, because as it reads now it looks like it can do everything, all techniques, ninjutsu concs, everything.
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Post by Chikamatsu Shin » Wed Jun 19, 2024 9:33 am

Kanade:
Tue Jun 18, 2024 12:05 pm
Transmitter Mind: Unique Chakra Property

This ability is too broad and vague.

What does it do, because as it reads now it looks like it can do everything, all techniques, ninjutsu concs, everything.
So the goal is to be able to have my chakra act as a new origin point for jutsu. If my chakra could be transmitted up to say 30m (or the rank averages whatever they are) away then when i use jutsu that could be the point of origin. So like some examples:

Sensory: If I have a jutsu that allows me to sense the location of people up to Xm away and my chakra can be sent up to Ym away, then I can send my chakra to point Z within my Transmitter Mind range, then perform the jutsu from that point instead of where I am standing.

Seals: i plan on eventually making a telepathy sealing jutsu that gives a seal on someone allowing telepathy that's similar to a headset in use, if this jutsu requires physical touch then i could Transmitter Mind my chakra to them from a distance to create the seal without requiring touch

Medical: If my medical jutsu requires me to touch my target, the Transmitter Mind would let me to send the jutsu at a distance to perform the jutsu as well.

Twin Soul - Kekkei Genkai: I eventually plan on having the UCP and the KG working together. Causing my twin's soul to be manifested wherever I send my chakra so that it would appear that she is performing jutsu when mechanically it's just me. I am aware the combination may need to be treated as a companion or maybe a Clone, idk the system well enough to make long term prediction requirements yet, buuut that's the goal! I'm trying to turn a mechanic on this OC from a different system into something usable in this system

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Post by Ace Trainer » Wed Jun 26, 2024 2:21 pm

I’m going to 1/2 the twin soul ability, but I want to forewarn that down the road you might run into some issues if it ends up being too broad. But, I think as it’s currently written it will be easier to let you flesh it out over time than trying to have you firmly define it all off the jump.

So 1/2
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Post by Kanade » Wed Jul 24, 2024 10:15 pm

Ace Trainer:
Wed Jun 26, 2024 2:21 pm
I’m going to 1/2 the twin soul ability, but I want to forewarn that down the road you might run into some issues if it ends up being too broad. But, I think as it’s currently written it will be easier to let you flesh it out over time than trying to have you firmly define it all off the jump.

So 1/2
with this in mind 2/2 please provide a no-code as there are 3 different apps.
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