Custom Raiton Pre-Approval

[Texas]

This is for Aki

However, I am just going to get these jutsu pre-approved so it is 1 less thing to look at when I submit his large app in December.

Raiton • Lightning Pulse
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of handseals and channel chakra into their feet. A 1 meter wide wave of lightning will be sent forth from the users feet at [Control] Speed and Strength, covering 1 meter of the ground in electricity. The wave will travel 15 meters before fizzling out.

Raiton • Lightning Copy
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will channel chakra into a projectile weapon and it will crackle with electricity. Upon throwing the projectile, with a Kai, the weapon will shoot forth a copy of itself made out of lightning. The copy will be shot in front of the projectile, somewhere within a 180 degree angle of the original. The copy will move at [Control] Speed and Strength. The copy can fly for 3 posts before fading away.

Raiton • Thunderclap Arrow
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of handseals and a white bolt of lightning will shoot from in front of their chest, forward at [Control] Speed and Strength. The bolt of lightning travels fifteen meters before popping with a loud boom. People who are within 5 meters of the boom experience brief loss of hearing for 1 post.

Raiton • Electric Drawing
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of handseals and place their hands on a Fuuinjutsu seal. They will charge the seal with Raiton chakra, and then pull their hand away. As their hand is removed from the Fuuin, whatever binds the seal will be drawn into the lightning between the users hand and the seal, with [Control] Strength, and then destroyed with [Control] Strength. This jutsu cannot be used on a seal that has more [Control] than the user.

Raiton • Static Shock
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals and then point their finger at a person. A small charge of electricity will be transfered from the user to the target at [Control] Speed, to a range of 5 meters. The static shock will cling to the victim at [Control] Strength, but without causing any damage or obvious physical sensation. If the victim wishes to remove it, they must bat it off with greater Strength than the jutsu. The user can track the exact location of the static shock for up to 7 meters. For up to 20 meters out, the user can track a rough location. From then out to 100 meters, the user just gets a general idea of where their target is. The chakra in the static shock will dissipate at the end of 5 posts.

Raiton • Hell Charge Raiment
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals and then channel RAiton chakra throughout their body. A sharp lightning aura will form around the user with [Control] Speed and Strength, emanating about 8 inches off of their body. The shoulders have lightning spikes protruding off of them, about 1/2 a meter high. This aura will rend through flesh, inflicting the Raiton passive and mutilating bodies. Any damage inflicted with this aura must be healed via Iijutsu of an equal or greater rank.

Raiton • Lightning Barrier
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals and then channel Raiton chakra somewhere in the air within 30 meters of them. At [Control] Speed and Strength, a 2.5 meter high, and 2 meter wide barrier will form. The user is able to keep their hands tied in seals and create a total of 2 barriers. These barriers last for 3 posts.

Raiton • Lightning Trap
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
The will perform a series of hand seals and then channel Raiton chakra somewhere in the ground within 30 meters of them. A human sized foothold trap will form out of lightning at [Control] Speed and Strength. The trap will be set and anyone who steps on it will have their leg binded by the trap with [Control] Strength. The target must have an Acrobatics technique to avoid getting their leg caught in the trap. This Jutsu lasts 5 posts.

Raiton • Jumpin Jack Rabbits!
C-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals and on any side of them, a husk of jack rabbits made out of Raiton chakra will form. The rabbits have [Control] Speed and Strength.and will jump towards the target and push them back. The rabbits can jump up to 15 meters high and swarm for 3 posts before dissipating.

Raiton • Raining Electric Death
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals and create a storm cloud 10 meters above their target. For the next 5 posts, the user is able to Kai up to 6 lightning bolts down on their target. They cannot change targets. The maximum range of this Jutsu is 60 meters away from the user.

Raiton • Electric Guardian
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals and form a 5 meter tall standing, 3 meter tall at the shoulders, bear made out of lightning with [Control] Speed and strength. The bear will circle around the user and protect them from any attackers. With a kai, the user is able to explode this bear with [Control] Speed and Strength, and create a 10 meter tall wave of lightning. The wave of lightning will push outward from the explosion at [Control] Speed and strength, up to 30 meters, electrocuting any living thing it comes in contact with. Due to the serious nature of the electric shocks, the user will experience muscle twitching and suffer a -6 Strength Debuff.

Raiton • Lightning Current Dance
B-Ranked Ninjutsu
The user will perform a series of hand seals and hold their hand, or hands out in one direction. From their fingertips, lightning will be expelled in a wide arc, up to 40 by 20 meters in area. The lightning will shock the victims and induce motor function problems. Due to the newfound difficulty functioning, the victim will suffer -6 Endurance.


Raiton • Hounds of Raijin
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Requires: 40 Control
The user will perform a series of hand seals and can produce up to 12 wolves that are made of a black lightning will phase into existence at [Control] Speed and Strength. Each wolf will be given a target and pursue them for, at most, 100 meters away from the user. Due to their dark shade of color, the lightning wolves cannot be detected except by a Perception technique of equal rank or greater. They will stalk their target using pack hunting tactics, aiming to wound them at first, and then closing in on the kill. This Jutsu lasts 7 posts.

Raiton • Kirin
S-Ranked Ninjutsu
Requires: 35 Control
The user will perform a series of hand seals and summon large thunder clouds into the area. The clouds will rumble with thunder and over the course of 1 post, rain will begin pouring down, a natural reaction of the high temperature lightning rolling in the clouds. The rain will be heavy and cloud vision at a range of 5 meters or greater. After 3 posts of casting this Jutsu, the lightning in the clouds will finish fathering into the shape of a Kirin and descend down on the target with [Control] Speed and Strength. The Kirin will be 20 meters long and with a head 7 meters in diameter. The lightning constructing will repeatedly swoop down on the target and bash into them, pulverizing them into the dirt and electrocuting them. The Kirin will attack the target for 4 posts before exploding in a burst of electricity with [Control] Speed and Strength.

[Ace Trainer]

Raiton • Hounds of Raijin
A-Ranked Ninjutsu
Requires: 40 Control
The user will perform a series of hand seals and 12 wolves made of a black lightning will phase into existence at [Control] Speed and Strength. Each wolf will be given a target and pursue them for, at most, 100 meters away from the user. Due to their dark shade of color, the lightning wolves cannot be detected except by a Perception technique of equal rank or greater. They will stalk their target using pack hunting tactics, aiming to wound them at first, and then closing in on the kill. This Jutsu lasts 7 posts.

This would follow multiprojectile rules so I would probably change the language to “up to” 12 wolves, so that yo’re not being charged 12x the cost.

Raiton • Demonic Hell Stab
A-Ranked Nintaijutsu
Requires: 45 Control
The user will channel Raiton chakra into their hand and assume one of the following positions with their fingers. Raiton chakra will coat the user's hand and forearm about 6 inches off of their skin. This Raiton chakra is incredibly sharp.
Four Finger Nukite: With four fingers the user will be able to break through robust defenses with ease, inflicting 1.5* the amount of damage to Defensive Jutsu.
Three Finger Nukite: With three fingers the user will be able to fire the Demonic Hell Stab manifestation off of their arm with [Control] Speed and Strength. The coating of raiton chakra will retain it's sharp nature and fly through the air for 80 meters before exploding, or it will explode if it comes into contact with something. Alternatively the user can choose to not fire the Three Finger Nukite, in which case they may explode the Raiton aura from their hand with [Control] Strength.
One Finger Nukite: With one finger the user will be able to blow 1/2 a meter in diameter holes in virtually any kind of material. Injuries inflicted by the 1 Finger Nukite require a Iijutsu technique of equal or greater rank to heal.

I don’t think you can do the 4 finger effect.

[Texas]

Fixed the wolf thing, good call. I appreciate that. Nothing worse than being stuck with unnecessary amount of chakra drainage due to verbiage. The the 4 finger aspect, I'm guessing it is the 1.5 that is the issue. Could it be reduced to 1.2 or something or would it just destroy at A-rank passive?

[Kabu]

1/2

[Ace Trainer]

Fixed the wolf thing, good call. I appreciate that. Nothing worse than being stuck with unnecessary amount of chakra drainage due to verbiage. The the 4 finger aspect, I'm guessing it is the 1.5 that is the issue. Could it be reduced to 1.2 or something or would it just destroy at A-rank passive?

I don't think you can get a bonus against defenses at all. That seems to defeat the purpose of the defensive bonus

[King of Cats]

Commenting as the creator, and also I'm trying to come up with a solution for Texmas. If you cant use a specific jutsu to get an edge over defensive jutsu, what's the counterplay to defensive jutsu? It would seem someone could just cast a defensive jutsu, or maybe three, and power through virtually anything. There's no counter for that? Or am I missing something? I think we should, as a community, be open to expanding the potential of strategic combat. It could be something to add to each character's kit. I mean, if everyone can create defensive jutsu, why can't everyone destroy them (in one technique)? I think it would make for a more interesting dynamic to end game battles.

[Ace Trainer]

You can use a bow and arrow/launcher which is a specific bonus we allow for it. The elemental strengths/weaknesses also make it possible to negate power differences in regards to defensive bonuses.

Otherwise, the counterplay is to hit them more. They aren’t invincible, they simply required to be hit more. Considering it’s a ‘defense’ I’m not sure what is meant by “power through virtually anything”. And, if we allowed everyone to simply carry jutsu that cancelled out the defensive bonus to make all defenses able to be destroyed in one technique, then we might as well remove the defensive bonus entirely.

[Texas]

Okay instead of waiting to get the right jutsu in there, I just straight up deleted the jutsu in question for the time being. I have another line of jutsu to submit and a couple mods, so I'd like to avoid annoyance towards staff where I can. Let me know if anything else needs to be adjusted, but I think I got rid of the only problematic jutsu.

[Niro]

ok 2/2