Yūgana, Mondai

User avatar
Posts: 1548
Joined: Tue Sep 09, 2014 8:00 pm

Yūgana, Mondai

Post by Archives » Tue Apr 24, 2018 8:56 pm

Points: 83/83

Bring it!

Yūgana, Mondai
Family contractShow
Bleeds for the karagata family
"It's rare for people like me to rise up, so I might as well rise up to the top and be the best I can be!"
General Information Age:13
Height:162 cm (5'2 ft)
Weight:50 kg (111 Ibs)
Physical Features: Mondai is a brown and smooth skinned child, he is tall and muscular, he near constantly carries a serious expression on his face giving of a sight commanding, not to be messed with and focused aura but at the same time not looking so serious to scare people off. he also likes to make it obvious that he is joking breaking of his serious expression. He has small sharp eyebrows combined with piercing eyes makes him look observant and focused. He sports a well combed short Afro and carries a comb with him at all times, making him rather touchy about his hair.
Clothing/Accessories: In every day life he where's nice clothes as he came from a place where that was not all to available and he goes by the logic that if you are going to dress you might as well dress well. This most of the time being a white shirt with a symbol of kirigakure going from chest to stomach and each strand having a different color of red and blue, dark blue full length pants and black boots. On missions he where's sandals, knee length shorts with the head-protector wrapped around his thigh,finger-less gloves with small plating to protect his hands, a dark grey elbow length shirt. He also wears a gray bandana tied around his waist, with a light gray vest with three shoulder holes. And a balaclava with a shark like mask to complete his appearance.
  • General:After his upbringing, discipline from his father and just a bit extra from the academy. Mondai has went from hot headed, crude and judging kid from the slums to a more calm, focused and serious child. While that aspect from his childhood still is very much part of him only it's been toned down majorly over the years. While not one to pick fights he has a quick temper if insulted or challenged always accepting, trash-talking and never backing down. While bit harsh and crude he believes that it's necessary toughen up the skin of his comrades and that it's all in good fun but it also a reminiscent from his past as toxic friendships and fighting were common.

    He always strives to be better and wants to join the seven swordsmen and become the greatest swordsman to ever have lived after hearing all the legends and their great feats.

    Despite all this Mondai is surprisingly empathetic whenever he actually revels his more softer side, He feels bad for the poor in the lowest cast being from there himself and wishes to help whenever he can and occasionally visits the slums to help children by giving them either money or food even fighting of criminals and ninja trying to get away with their crimes in the poor section. And he actually wants to get enough influence to actually help the people in a more major way. He prefers not to kill but isn't afraid to do what's necessary.
  • Hopes/Dreams:To become the Most powerful member of the Seven swordsmen to exist. And to be remembered throughout history as the greatest swordsman to ever have lived. He wants to change the lives of the poor for the better as he grew up in the slums. Wanting to prevent families from experiencing the harsh environment.
  • Fears:Dying not being able to help the poor people and dying at a young age not being able to experience life. He fear not being able to help the poor people of kiri.
  • Combat Mentality: He prefers wait for his opponents and then countering hard,fast and efficient while keeping his enemies at a further range. While mostly using his shield if it wore to be removed from his hand he will be quick to switch to his two handed blade.

Battle Information Village:Kirigakure
Stats: (0/50)
  • Ninjutsu:1
  • Taijutsu:20
  • Genjutsu:1
  • Stamina:16
  • Control:1
  • Strength:16
  • Speed:15
  • Instinct:10
While mostly used to chase down opponents by either throwing or chasing then using the range to cut as they run. Being a relativity short spear only being around 160 cm (5'2ft)
Falcon (Folding Falchion)Show
Falcon is a special razor-like blade made to cut trough flesh and clothing. The sword measures at 35 inches in total (90 cm) It's has a mechanic being able to fold in to a two-handed sword measuring 112 cm 48 (inches)
A Shield passed down from his family but unfortunately the shield has deteriorated due to age. The shield is about 90 cm (35 inches) high 90 cm (35 inches) wide and 2.5 cm (1 inch) thick The shield was made with blades on the side and a spike at the very top. With the spike being 20 cm (8 inches) Making it good for both offense and defense giving more versatility making bashing an useful offense. The shield and blades has a strength of 15 in defense and sharpness.
Razorguard - Pre-ApprovedShow

A Shield passed down from his family but unfortunately, the shield had deteriorated due to age. Later Mondai sought to return the shield to its original power by meeting a legendary smith allied with Mondai's family. After restoring the shield, it has regained the ability to absorb power equal to the shields strength from direct attacks and then redirect that energy equal to how much it has absorbed. By channeling a little bit of chakra through the shield, the shield's absorbed power will burst out in a 10 meter cone in diameter and in total range in a ray of golden light. The shield is about 90 cm (35 inches) high 90 cm (35 inches) wide and 2.5 cm (1 inch) thick. The shield was made with blades on the side and a spike at the very top. The spike is 20 cm (8 inches) making it good for both offense and defense. This gives it more versatility and makes bashing a useful offense. The shield has also regained its color; a shining silver around the center with gold plating around the edges and a monkey face with red glowing jewels filling the eyes providing a little bit of light. The shield has a strength of 50 in defense.
(Cost: 205 points not including reduction to acquire this shield)
Nibui Tsukiakaridaiken/Moonlight greatswordShow
The dull moonlight sword is a large two-handed thrusting focused sword the blade itself is 180 cm (5.11ft) with the Hilt being 20 cm (8 In) With the sword being 2m (6.7ft) in total. Because of it size it slows down the bearer of the sword with 5- speed but makes the user hit harder with 5+ strength. It's a legendary sword with the blade being made of a glass like material and passed down trough the family but has lost it's power leaving a faint yellow celestial glow.
Companions: (0/1)
Affinity:Fuuton Affinity
Abilities and Concentrations
First Ability
Second Ability
Third Ability
Fuuton Affinity:
Fuuton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an cutting effect.
Passive (Cutting)Show
Fuuton has a natural cutting property to it, that exists in all jutsu unless otherwise stated. This gives fuuton a unique opportunity to strike with additional power, and to act as a offensive defense. Regardless of their purpose fuuton jutsu passively cut with no distinct pattern at 1/3rd the strength of the technique rounded down unless otherwise stated. This means if someone punched a 19 strength fuuton wall, they would get cuts on their hand applied with 6 strength. This also means that fuuton jutsu specifically designated to cut things can create devastating wound by essentially striking twice.
Upper Body:
The fundamental skill of the [Upper Body] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their arms, chest and head in various ways to facilitate their use of related Taijutsu.
The fundamental skill of [Acrobatics] includes the user’s ability to contort their body into unfamiliar positions in order to avoid attacks, as well as the user’s ability to fall safely and perform Ukemi and other feats of gymnastics. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Rigid Structure:
The fundamental skill of [Rigid Structure] describes the user’s ability to adeptly position and lock in their skeletal structure to efficiently absorb blows with minimal damage to their person. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Shielded armaments:
The fundamental skill of [Shielded armaments] indicates the user’s proficiency with shields and defensive arms. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Sword Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Sword Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with swords and sword-like weapons such as knives, daggers, sword-breakers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.

Yūgana warfareShow
A special style passed down from his which focuses on both duels and battlefield tactics. Incorporating sword and shield and solo sword fighting. As for the sword and shield style using near constant wall of defense this style incorporates bashing grappling and throws providing offense from both sword and shield. And for the solo sword using different stances and special cuts to bypass the opponents swords.
[Upper body, Shielded armaments, rigid body, sword]
Skillful Wield
D-Ranked Taijutsu discipline
Prerequisite: 5 instinct
With a solid foundation of knowledge on their choice of weaponry, those with the Skillful Wield technique are able to utilize their weapon more fully. By knowing the weapon's weakest points, the user is able to avoid presenting these areas to damage during combat, thus making their weapon less likely to break by means of recklessness.

Seamless Skill
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: 5 instinct
A skill utilized by those on the path to mastery of their weapon, users of Seamless Skill are actively able to transition between offensive and defensive usage of the aforementioned weapon. By transitioning so seamlessly, the user is able to save a marginal amount of energy while attacking.

Perfect alignment
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: 9 instinct 9 Taijutsu
With extensive knowledge on sword Mondai has learned to perfectly align the edge of the blades. by doing this his sword cuts minimizing damage to the blade and increasing cutting power. He does by aligning the edge in the direction of the strike and he does this perfectly.

"Footwork is the most important part of fighting"
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: 9 instinct 9 Taijutsu
After learning over and over by his father on how important foot work is Mondai has learned to move gracefully with his legs maintaining balance, being able to redirect at moments notice and being in and out of striking range with his swords

Switching grip
D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: 9 instinct 9 Taijutsu
Extensive knowledge has teached Mondai that switching between the edge forward and the flat forward can be critical. This helps with being able to cut more effectively by essentially freeing up the wrist making some slashes from certain guards more efficient bio-mechanically and less awkward as a consequence.

Wrath guard
D-rank Taijutsu stance
In this guard his shield is stretched out as far as possible at an angle. While keeping the elbows slightly bent to absorb blows. And the sword is raised above his head pointing over his shoulder. this helps in protecting his head as the sword could be used to protect his head.

Wall guard
D-rank Taijutsu stance
This guard has the shield close to his body at a slight angle to the left completely defending his left side and torso. His sword is lowered to his thigh protecting his lower and right side.

A great wall and you will pay for it all
D-rank Taijutsu discipline
After extensive training he has learned to keep the shield in a way to protect as much of his body as possible even when attacking keeping his hands and sides safe

Instant rotation
D-rank Taijutsu discipline
As his experience with shields depend he has learned to rotate the shield to his other side and move his weapon hand over or under to keep him free to attack or defense against other incoming attacks

D-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
Usually done from a distance he lowers his head puts the shield in front of his body at an angle and charges towards his opponent he then slams the shield over his enemies torso in an attempt to knock him over. if he has +3 strength more strength over his opponent will be knocked down.

"Wechsel" Change guard
D-rank Taijutsu stance
When the user performs a downward slash, this stance allows them to seamlessly transition into a stance that begins with the sword being held at a downwards angle pointed between an opponent's legs with the flat side of the sword pointed downwards. is initiated by having the blades flat side aimed downward and the blades point is aimed between the opponent's feet while keeping the arms stretched out.

"Nebenhut" Tail ward
D-rank Taijutsu stance
Tail guard resembles a tail hence the name of Tail guard. This stance almost looks like the user is dragging the blade on the ground. The swords stance is assumed by having the lead leg forward and the sword on the opposite side. Keeping the sword in hip height while having the blade pointing towards the ground and having the back edge towards the user and the forward edge towards the enemy. A stance that makes it easier to do upward cuts. But can also be used to make the opponent/s think the user will throw a upwards cut.

"Schranckhut" Barrier ward
D-rank Taijutsu manuever
Used to defend against leg attacks. The ward is initiated by crossing the arms so that the lower hand is above the upper hand while holding a longsword. Causing the blade to point downwards. This can also be done by switching the front lead leg and the back leg and uncrossing the arms.

"Hangen" Hanging ward
D-rank Taijutsu manuever
Hangen guard is used by having the sword over the head and the blade pointed downwards towards the right or left used to defend against horizontal strikes.

"Schlüssel" Key ward
D-rank Taijutsu stance
Key ward is a transitional ward and is assumed by having left or right foot forward while holding the sword so that it points forward while having the blade pulled back close to the body while it's resting on the arm. This stance makes it easier to thrust at a target.

"Einhorn" Unicorn ward
D-rank Taijutsu stance
A transitional end position after throwing an upwards cut which is used for transitioning to other guards. The sword is over the head and has the point pointing downwards towards the opponents face.

"Zorthut" Wrath ward
D-rank Taijutsu stance
His shield stance actually gets the name form this stance. In Zorthut he has his sword resting on his shoulder while having his shoulder and hips cocked towards the right or left against the opponent ready to swing at any point, almost like a baseball player. This stance is used against advancing targets or defensive fighters and can be used in order to smash right through their guard with special techniques.

"Mordhau" Murder-stroke
D-rank Taijutsu stance
The Mordhau is an unusual technique used to defeat armor and cause little damage towards the blade. By grabbing the blade with both hands Mondai can use his sword and smash with either the guard of the blade or the pommel. Using the blade as an improvised bludgeon. This makes it so that the blade gains 3+ str to armor but loses 3+ against unarmored foes.

"Halbschwimmen" Half-swording
D-rank Taijutsu stance
Same concept as the Mordhau except for a different approach by grabbing his sword normally by the grip and then grabbing the blade further up the point he can gain more control over the sword and thrust in between the gaps of the armor essentially bypassing the problem. He also can grapple more easily since his hands are so close to the blade while in this stance. While half-swording Mondai gains more control of the blade and is able to put more power into the thrusts but because of the nature of this stance, he isn't as mobile. Mondai gains a -3 speed debuff but gains a +3 str against armor.
Big ass shield easy to wield
C-rank Taijutsu discipline
After extensive use of the shield his no longer encumbered by his shield. Essentially never tiring from holding the shield.

C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
If he sees an opponent wind up an attack he will cock his body and violently smack the attack away shaking his opponent balance leaving them wide open for counter attack. and if the opponent were to have a weapon smack it right out of their hand If he has more strength then the opponent the attack will successfully initiate. +3 more strength over his opponent to work.

Spike raider
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
In this attack he launches two left jabs with the shield aiming to pierce the skull with the spike then he lowers other left jab to the stomach he then follows up with a hook to the neck attacking with the bladed rims.

Stab the sternum
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
If Mondai can predict an attack or sees an attack he stops the attack before it has gained any momentum effectively stopping the attack before it has gained any power. As this is happening he smashes the hilt over his opponent head then unleashes a strike with the shields spike to the opponents sternum. He then launches a knee to the lower chest to release the spike.

Vicious viseration
C-Rank Maneuver Taijutsu
When Mondai sees an opening he will sweep an opponents legs with his shield then he bashes with his shields bladed rim three times to the opponent when they're on the ground aiming to disembowel or even split the opponent in half.
Sword breaker
B-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Because of the unique design of the shield he will attempt to catch a blade in the spaces between the blades and the shield and then apply pressure to the foible (weak) of the sword between the middle to the point.

Raise da roof
B-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
In this attack Mondai charges in with his shield but instead of knocking over his opponent he lifts his foe over his head with the flat of the shield, and slams the enemy down to the ground leaving the victim stunned this is usually followed up with another attack.

B-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite:PARRY KING!!!
After parrying he moves in with a thrust to the heart and after that the receiver will be tripped by Mondai using the gravity to pull out the sword. This attack is deadly and could spell death for if they have no medic nearby.

Arm breaker
B-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
a counter attack which involves him waiting for an opponent to attack he deflects the blow moves in with a slash above the knee making them drop to their knees he then puts the enemies arm to his armpit and then bashes it outward breaking the arm. He then ends his assault with a hilt bash to the head. Requires more strength over his opponent to work.

Bone-breaking brutal bashing
B-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
In this technique Mondai puts his shield in front of his opponents face obstructing vision he then slams the shield on his opponents toes moves it up to split the nose he then follows up with a back handed bash to the jaw follows up with a bash towards the face and then moves his shield around the opponents head smacking him in the back of the head making them tilt their head and body down. Then he follows up with a bash towards the spine making the victim crouch down Mondai then knees the enemy in the chest making them fall to the ground he then ends it by grabbing the shield with two hands and slamming down with the blades towards the chest.
Moonlight berserkerShow
An aggressive, flashy and brutal style of fighting. Revolving around the use of Mondai's Moonlight great-sword. This style uses the combination of weird timing, aggression, and range to destroy his enemies. Combined with huge sweeps with an extremely long reach and damage that can cut nearly around Mondai's whole body. Make Mondai incredibly hard to get close to. Not only that but if they do, this fighting style also has variety of slams, strikes and throws if anyone gets into close quarters. [Rigid body, Sword weapons, Acrobatics, CQC]
D-rankButcher's stomp
D-Rank Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: 10 Strength
In this attack, Mondai will take one hand an places it on his blade and one hand on the hilt. He then lifts the blade up and smashes it into the ground after rushing forwards to get in range. This can be aimed at the head or feet of the target.

Shield ward
D-Rank Taijutsu discipline
Prerequisite:10 Strength
By crouching down and placing his sword on the ground in a diagonal angle pressed towards his body, He uses his blade to cover his entire body effectively using his sword as a shield, And because of this crouching position he cannot be knocked away or knocked down unless the attack has more strength. This stance can also be used to transition into different attacks.

D-Ranked Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: 5 Instinct,10 Strength,
After practicing for a long amount of time with the concept of using both of their hands with equal skill, the user has developed a level of ambidexterity that allows them to utilize their preferred weaponry without any sort of issue. This extends to other methods of combat or simply everyday life as well. Mondai can even use this training with his greatsword and other weapons. Mondai can switch between which hand he grips his sword in. Even during attacks. Giving him more versatility and can make it confusing to get used to an opponent switching hands.

Dragging ward
D-Rank Taijutsu discipline
Prerequisite: 9 Strength
In this stance Mondai will place the blade by his side on the ground, dragging it while he is moving. A stance that fakes an opening and is used to set up attacks.

D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: 10 Strength
Instead of stopping mid-swing with his greatsword like with normal swords. Mondai uses the momentum of each swing to lead into the next.

Historical AccountsShow
Mondai was an unlucky child being born in the slums of kirigakure. He lived with his father Sigemaru, his mother Makoto and his sister Naomi. Being raised in this environment was harsh often times having lite food or no food at all. His father had opened up a store, he would find and sell any good trinkets he could get his hands on. People would try to rob both the store and their home but his father was tough and warded off the thugs. But even the store was not enough so Mondai resorted to stealing, his father eventually found out and grew furious. So he punished him in an unusual way his father showed him that Mondai was part of an ancient shinobi family that had fallen centuries ago. Which were contracted to the karagata family, and played a smaller role working as guards, security or defense due to their use of shields. Yet they had somehow managed to pass down their ancient style of warfare which interestingly enough had sword and shield techniques which was incredibly uncommon. His family even had a cherished and legendary sword which was never seen again after the family was destroyed centuries ago. The moonlight greatsword had grown dull due to it's loss of power. His father trained him in a brutal almost no holds barred kind of way, which was actually apart of his fathers plan to get him in to the ninja academy.

He trained until he reached the age of 12, then his father would try to get him in to the academy. This proved to be difficult due to the cast they were so his father used their family history. His father had cleverly found their contact to the Karagata family and offer to resign. While also showing Mondai's skill in combat, successfully convincing a karagata member to vouch for them. This got him in to the academy and made him contracted to the karagata familiy. While Mondai excelled in taijutsu as a result of the training with his father, but was near hopeless in ninjutsu and genjutsu only learning the basics.

His rival was a student that was a noble named Yoshi wanting fame, fortune and glory, Not surprisingly Yoshi looked down on Mondai not believing he would ever be beat nor Mondai was ever going to become a shinobi this lead Mondai nearly constantly training and working on his techniques. This attempted bullying of Mondai continued trough the entire academy leading to multiple brawls between the two with Mondai always winning but Yoshi would never accept it and always say he went easy or did not take it seriously. Eventually came the Chunnin and Mondai passed the exams in flying colors, Yoshi was a surprisingly difficult opponent keeping him out of range with ninjutsu. But eventually Mondai would close the distance lift his opponent then slam him to the ground and bash him in the face ending the fight after that he was ranked up to Chuunin and was left to live in a better world.

While he knew he would have to fight for the rest of his life, it was that or starve. And from what he learned in the academy he could use his higher position to change the lives of the people in the lower cast. While the others who adhere to the cast system would look down on this he saw it as away to not only help people, but also improve the villages standing by bringing in more people who could potentially help the village. Either by work force or military force. He had heard of a unit know as the seven swordman of the mist their might in their sword styles and their legendary blades. They were revered and he wanted the same glory. So now he sets out to change kirigakure and become the strongest swordsman to have ever lived despite coming from such a low and harsh place.


Return to “Kirigakure Archives”