Aisu, Menma

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Aisu, Menma

Post by Kabu » Wed Nov 15, 2023 7:41 am

Aisu, Menma

"You shouldn't talk, it makes you look stupid."

General Information Age: 18
Gender: Male
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 173 lbs.
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Menma has wild, spiky black hair flowing down his back and cool, icy blue eyes. He is a handsome man with sharp defining features that gives him a fierce appearance. His ears are pierced several times with a few studs and big red hoops in each of them. Menma has the Hirohito symbol branded on the underside of his tongue, a part of his contract to the Hirohito family.
  • Body: With fair skin Menma has a light complexion. He has lots of colorful tattoos of demons, and dragons, and ladies on his arms and chest. Over his sleeves of tattoos there are lots of white scars that flicker in the light. Menma has a slouched posture and his muscular frame seems to hold him up well. His body is hard as ice and he has a thick booty, perfectly sculpted by years of practicing kenjutsu.
  • Notable Features: On his arms and chest Menma has brightly colored tattoo's that stand out and mark his appearance.
Clothing/Accessories: Menma wears a long sleeve black track suit that zips up underneath of his white leather jacket. On the jacket there is a vibrant print of a blue dragon flying through grey clouds. On his waist is a black scabbard with his steel ninjato sheathed inside. He wears baggy black pants held up by a red belt where he also has his Kirigakure headband attached. On the back of the belt is a utility pouched fastened by pins, this pouch carries all of Menma's ninja tools. On his feet Menma wears modern sneakers that are black and red.
Personality:
  • General: Despite being born as a noble of Kirigakure Menma is incredibly down to earth. He likes to be at eye level with whoever he is talking to. Menma is modest and humble. Despite being a respectable member of society he is a rascal. Menma is rebellious and considers himself a leader. He often takes the bull by the horns and while his talents have propelled him this far, he has been known to be trampled by self defeat. Menma is a humble killer who takes his ninja duties very seriously. He considers himself to be competent and holds himself to a high standard. Being the rebel that he is Menma often goes against the grain for his own selfish purposes. He isn't beyond associating with untouchables if the end justifies the means, and in fact he revels in the filth. Menma has a wild streak in him that can sweep him away with toxic ideals of pride and a pattern fueled by wrath.
  • Hopes/Dreams: As a ninja Menma desires to learn all the secrets of the Aisu clan and studies all of their teachings intensely. He wishes to lead his clan and master Hyouton unlike anyone before him using his natural talent for ninjutsu.
  • Fears: Growing up Menma had an incredibly superstitious mother who convinced him that black cats were a sign of bad luck. If he sees one he will become fraught with anxiety and panic, but he is also incredibly biased around cats and gets uncomfortable around our feline friends. Menma is prejudice against the Tsukino, as some of them do appear to be feline in appearance and it gives him the heeby jeebies.
  • Combat Mentality: Menma depends on his Hidden Snow Jutsu to remain in stealth and strike with his blade, though he is a competant fighter with Hyouton techniques at mid range.

Battle Information Village: Kirigakure no Sato
Rank: Chuunin
  • Chakra Pool: 17
  • Endurance: 13
  • Control: 17
  • Strength: 15
  • Speed: 13
  • Willpower: 5
  • Power Rank: C-Rank
Equipment:
Steel Ninjato, 40 inch blade - waist
5 kunai, 10 shuriken, 10m of wire , 5 exploding tags, 1 smoke bomb, 1 flash bang - back pouch
Companions: (0/1)
Affinity/Specialization: Hyouton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Second Ability
Third Ability
Concentrations
Ninjutsu
Sensory:
Sensor
Sensors are shinobi who are able to activate a sixth sense which can locate and read chakra sources. Sensory is advantageous as it allows shinobi to perceive without using any of their conventional senses, which can easily be deceived. Sensors are able to collect a lot of information through the interpretation of this sixth sense.
Hyouton:
Hyouton has the ability to dynamically cool anything, rapidly decreasing the temperature of entities and areas via techniques and producing effects such as freezing, frostbite, and hypothermia. The temperature decrease, and the area they can decrease, is determined by the Control of techniques, with more talented Aisu able to create snap freezes that can kill with ease.
Inorganic targets can be frozen to a depth of [Control/10] metres per post if the Control of the Hyouton technique is greater than or equal to the Strength of the object. Organic targets experience the scaling effects below, unless healed by iijutsu or countered by techniques, of equivalent Control to the cooling effect, that provide warmth to the affected area for an equivalent length of time:
CoolingShow
≤14 ControlTargets suffer from first degree frostbite, with the affected area turning red, painful, and experiencing localised swelling.
15–24 ControlTargets suffer from second degree frostbite, with the affected area turning a pallid white and blistering with localised numbness. The target suffers from -1 to Endurance for the remainder of the thread or until healed.
25–34 ControlTargets suffer from third degree frostbite as the deep tissues and blood vessels within the affected area are subjected to the intense cooling. Hypothermia begins to set in, inducing shivering in the target and reducing their Endurance by -2 for the remainder of the thread or until healed. Without healing, the affected area turns black after 3 posts.
35–44 ControlTargets experience fourth degree frostbite throughout a wider affected area, with the surface freezing too rapidly for any colour change to occur. The affected area will become entirely numb, and severe hypothermia induces slurring of speech and loss of coordination in the target. Affected areas left untreated for over 5 posts are likely to experience permanent tissue death.
≥45 ControlTargets experience such intense flash-freezing that joints and muscles being to seize throughout their body as even deeper tissues become frozen. Permanent gangrenous tissue death becomes highly likely if the affected area is not healed within 3 posts. The target suffers from -3 to Endurance for the remainder of the thread or until healed.
Suiton:
Suiton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Suiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Suiton affinity. Suiton has a passive enveloping effect.
Passive (Enveloping)Show
Suiton's effect is enveloping, meaning that suiton passively surrounds anything that it makes contact with. Suiton techniques that do not last over periods of times (i.e, exploding techniques) drench their opponents, but long term techniques will envelop anything they come in contact with and maintain a hold on it with the 3/4th strength of the technique, rounded down. This means that if a suiton wave is shot forward with 17 strength, it will envelope and move anything with it that does not have more than 12 strength to resist it. This allows Suiton to fill a very powerful role in eliminating tools from opponent's access and capturing targets.
Fuuton Affinity:
Fuuton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an cutting effect.
Passive (Cutting)Show
Fuuton has a natural cutting property to it, that exists in all jutsu unless otherwise stated. This gives fuuton a unique opportunity to strike with additional power, and to act as a offensive defense. Regardless of their purpose fuuton jutsu passively cut with no distinct pattern at 1/2 the strength of the technique rounded down unless otherwise stated. This means if someone punched a 20 strength fuuton wall, they would get cuts on their hand applied with 10 strength. This also means that fuuton jutsu specifically designated to cut things can create devastating wound by essentially striking twice.
Raiton:
Raiton
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raiton has a shocking effect.
Passive (Shocking)Show
Raiton has the effect of shocking, which means causes it's effect to be diffuse upon impact. In organic material, this causes nervous stimulation which results in numbness, tingling, loss of sensation, and sometimes paralysis. In inorganic material, this means that the strength of the jutsu diffuses across an area 2x the size of the attack. In a jutsu that creates a lightning ball 2m in diameter, if it struck a wall the size of the attack would cover a 4m area.

Additionally, the strength of the nervous effect on organic material from raiton jutsu is determined by the Strength stat range they fall into.
  • 1-10 Strength Requirement: Localised numbness and muscle spasms for 1 post
  • 11-20 Strength Requirement: Diffuse numbness and spasms for 1 post
  • 21-30 Strength Requirement: Localised paralysis for 1 post
  • 31-39 Strength Requirement: Diffuse paralysis for 1 post
  • 40+ Strength Requirement: Diffuse paralysis for 2 posts
Doton:
Doton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the doton affinity. Doton has a passive enduring effect.
Passive (Enduring)Show
Doton has a passive effect of Endurance, which means that it's power is retained throughout the entirety of the jutsu. All of a single doton jutsu retains the strength of the jutsu, even after the jutsu has been destroyed, and unlike other jutsu, doton does not fade when destroyed. This means that if a doton barrier with 25 strength is cut in half and falls to the ground, a part of that barrier could be picked up and carried as a hand held shield which would still have 25 strength, despite being a fractured part of a jutsu. This creates incredibly potent defenses, making doton a popular affinity among defensive fighters.
Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu:
Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu
This user is able to utilize Storage Fuuinjutsu and Force Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Storage or Force Classification. Storage Fuuinjutsu can be used to store supplies, weapons, armor, or anything in between. Force Fuuinjutsu are used to release, counteract, and capture energy.
Charge & Augment Fuuinjutsu:
Charge& Augment Fuuinjutsu
This user is able to utilize Charge & Augment Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Charge & Augment Classification. Charge Fuuinjutsu are used to create jutsu-like effects using seals. Augment Fuuinjutsu are used to enhance or limit the power of whatever they are placed on.
Ninjutsu: Advanced Channeling:
This user has superb chakra control, and has learned to perform jutsu by channeling, without the use of hand seals. The user can channel any Ninjutsu that is designed to be channeled, and there are no specified parameters in which a jutsu must fall to be channeled by this method.
Taijutsu
Deft Hands:
The fundamental skill of [Deft Hands] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their hands in very specific and complex movements, like sleight of hand and targeting very small and specific points on an opponent’s body. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu in various ways.
Sword Weapons:
The fundamental skill of [Sword Weapons] indicates the user’s proficiency with swords and sword-like weapons such as knives, daggers, sword-breakers and the like. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
Stealth:
The fundamental skill of [Stealth] describes the user’s proficiency in remaining silent, unseen and unnoticed as they go about tasks. This facilitates their use of related Taijutsu.
GenjutsuNone

Jutsu
NinjutsuShow
HyoutonShow
~Ice Senbon
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: [Suiton] concentration

The user will thrust a hand forward while preparing this technique, forming a set of five senbon in front of their fingertips. The senbon can be collectively fired at any time over the next three posts at [Control] speed to hit with [Control] strength.

~Frost Burst
D-Rank Ninjutsu
Holding a throwable object or weapon in one hand, the user will channel hyouton chakra into it to prepare this technique. Once thrown during the next three posts, the temperature of the item will rapidly drop until it explodes, shattering into frozen shrapnel with the force of a single tag upon impact or at a 'kai' release from the user.

~Morning Chill
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will inhale deeply and saturate their breath with hyouton chakra before slowly exhaling to perform this technique. As they breathe out, the area within a 15 metre radius of their body will rapidly drop in temperature to freezing conditions. This technique will freeze any natural moisture in the air or any airbourne particulates created with less [Control] and create a veil of ice that distorts vision in the area.

~Chilly Day
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user prepares a quantity of hyouton chakra within one of their limbs or weapons to begin this technique, and then attempts to make contact with an target. Upon striking, the hyouton will surge through the point of contact and into the target's body, shocking them with a distracting burst of intense cold and taking their breath away.

~Ancient Wind
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels a thin current of cooling hyouton into the air around them, mixing and weaving it around the warmer natural air to create a localised pressure differential and natural gusting wind. This can be used to push at and deflect airbourne entities within 10 metres of the user with [Control] strength, however is believed to be one of the oldest forms of hyouton ninjutsu ever devised by the ancient Aisu, who used it in a non-combat manner to master the waves and sail the oceans at speed.

~Arctic Soul
D-Rank Ninjutsu
The user channels a small pulse of hyouton chakra throughout their own body, carefully reducing and controlling their internal body temperature to prevent overheating through any external means. This jutsu has no range and can only cool down the user's body to the point that it can cause first degree frostbite on contact. This technique can last for five posts.

~Frozen Breath
C-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will prepare a quantity of hyouton chakra into their throat to begin this technique, then exhale with icy breath onto an inorganic target. Any material within the area of the breath will be rapidly chilled to the point of brittleness, weakening it by [Control] strength.

Hidden Snow
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Suiton concentration
The user performs a series of handseals and the area 30x30x30 meters around them will drop to below freezing temperatures at [Control] Speed and it will begin to snow. The snow will stick for its duration. Visibility and hearing will also be limited to a 3 meter radius to those in the snow. The snow lasts for 5 posts.

~Frozen Barrier
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Suiton concentration
The user will prepare hyouton chakra before drawing unleashing the chakra forwards in a rectangular shape, producing a wall of ice in that shape up to 30 x 30 metres in size. The wall is approximately half a metre thick and has [Control] strength, forms at a speed of [Control], and will remain in the air until broken.

Ice Halos
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: Suiton concentration
The user performs a series of handseals and forms 12 7 inch in diameter rings made of ice from thin air. These rings float around the user and are commanded by mental thoughts for 5 posts. They can be each fired with [Control] Speed and strength once in a straight line for 30 meters before melting.

~Tundra
C-Rank Ninjutsu
The user will prepare a large amount of hyouton chakra and unleash it into an area of ground within 30 metres of their location at a speed of [Control]. From the point of impact, the ground will rapidly freeze and turn into an icy tundra, spreading for up to 30 x 30 metres in a direction of the user's choice during casting. Plant life within this area will wither and die, the ground will become frozen to a hardness of [Control] strength, unable to be broken except by stronger techniques, and footing will become slippery and unstable for anyone without an appropriate traversal technique of equal or higher rank.
SensoryShow
*[Sensory Style • Vibrant Snow]
C-rank Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals and focus on the snow around them, releasing waves of from their body. These waves of chakra will bounce back to the user after traveling out 30 meters through snow. As the chakra returns to the user it will evoke basic images in the users head of anything inside the snow. These images are akin to blurry pictures.
TaijutsuShow
SekisetsuShow
*[Sekisetsu - Blade Shift]
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Blade Shift is a maneuver learned after hours of training, and allows the user to switch from a standard sword grip to a downwards dagger grip, and back again, seamlessly with either hand or between hands, and even in the middle of strikes or full maneuevers. This core element of Sekisetsu converts a practitioner into a highly unpredictable and opportunistic opponent.

*[Sekisetsu - Swaying Winds]
D-Rank Taijutsu Stance
The most basic stance of Sekisetsu, the user of Swaying Winds sways side to side, and back and forth, mimicking the way a snow flurry moves and preventing obvious telegraphing of movements or strikes. Opponents will find it incredibly difficult to interpret or predict the user's next movements unless they have a visual perception technique of equal or higher rank.

*[Sekisetsu - Leaping Winds]
D-Rank Taijutsu Manoeuvre
Prerequisite: Blade Shift
The user will bring their blade upward from their hip in a wide, diagonally arcing slash, before immediately flipping the blade and slashing back down along the same path.

*[Sekisetsu - Rebuke]
D-Rank Taijutsu Manoeuvre
The practitioner will use the pommel of their blade to attack their target by slamming it into them, usually aimed at weak spots on their body.

*[Sekisetsu - Ambidexterous]
D-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Through hours of rigorous training, the user has learned to not only wield a blade in either hand, but has also learned to dual wield two blades at once in any grip position, and can adapt learned manoeuvres, stances, and disciplines to function with either or both weapons.

*[Sekisetsu - Snowblind]
D-Rank Taijutsu Manoeuvre
Prerequisite: Hyouton concentration
The hyouton practitioner blend chakra into their mouth and then attempt to spit in their opponent's eyes, using the super-cooled saliva to temporarily blind the target and afflict the target with frostbite. They will then immediately follow-up with an upward slash to the target’s abdomen.

*[Sekisetsu - Shifting Blades]
C-Rank Taijutsu Discipline
Prerequisite: Blade Shift; Ambidextrous
A staple of the Sekisetsu Kenjutsu style, Shifting Blades allows the user to swap weapons between grips, and shift them between hands while dual wielding, simultaneously without any delay, even in the middle of a strike or maneuver. The user has become so seamless and proficient in the action that this can often occur without an opponent noticing, with targets being unable to follow the switching nature of blade positions without a visual perception technique of equal or higher rank.
GenjutsuShow
None

History
Historical AccountsShow

On New Years Eve Menma was born to two Aisu. They were overjoyed to give birth to their first born and vowed to give their child the best life they could. Nisha, Menma's mother, was diagnosed with a rare blood disease just weeks before her child's birthday and was given less than a year to live. Fortunately for her husband and Menma she would live another five years and give birth to two more children. Nisha would die in her husbands arms when Menma was 6 years old.

When Menma was 8 years old he entered the Kirigakure academy. He proved to be exceptionally talented and picked up all of the required nationalism and skills to enter into the graduation ceremony. He knew what he was getting into and tracked down a slave who was hiding high up in a tree. With cold, uncaring, blue eyes wide open Menma slashed the slaves head clean off with his ninjato. He grabbed the young mans long hair and dragged the decapitated head to his teacher. He made sure not to get any dirty blood on his hands. Menma hated staining up his clothes with blood.

After graduation Menma was assigned to a rival team. The jounin was a woman who Menma rarely saw but she was a good teacher who instructed the group with a compassionate heart. Menma's rival was a girl named Yumi Aisu. They were both clan purebloods who had a passion for kenjutsu. The two grew close over slashing their blades together. Menma even fell in love with Yumi, her unique style of kenjutsu thrilling to combat and worthy of respect. Menma never expected to become a chuunin against Yumi, she was real good, a true genius.

On the day of his examination Menma came into the ring nervous. His chuunin mentor told him he was ready but Menma didn't believe it. Nevertheless he came prepared with his sword. Yumi smiled as she swiftly came in for the first strike. She was certain it would be an easy battle for her. She sensed Menma's fear. Using a cold enchanted steel blade she beat Menma into a corner. Backed up he had no where to go and the fear really sank in. Yumi had escaped his Hidden Snow and Menma was at a disadvantage from where he was in the corner of the ring. Yumi came in for the final strike running at Menma from the snow storm with her blade swung high over her head. She came in and Menma panicked, he felt like he was in danger and he thrusted his blade forward. He pierced Yumi in the guts, finishing the battle with a scream of fear. She fell to the ground with Menma's blade stuck in her and tears rolling down her face. "You won.." She said as she hit the ground.

Officials came rushing to her side but Menma had done enough damage. The medic didn't have time to save her and Yumi died. That was the worst day of Menma's life. His love was gone, and by his hands no less. He accepted his chuunin promotion for the village despite his grief and Menma grieved in silence. He had never seen his father cry when they lost his mother and Menma vowed to have the same resolve to show his strength. He mourned Yumi's loss but proved to be an excellent ninja none the less. With his lovers blood on his hands Menma grew colder and proved more useful to the village. He worked more, and he worked harder. Menma became a machine.

As the years went by Menma found forgiveness for himself and in a way he even thanked Yumi for her sacrifice. His pain moved on and Menma put more passion into his work. He grew into adulthood with lots of pain, but that made Menma strong. He pushed forward with that strength, forward with his plans to become a Bannin of Kirigakure and lead his clan .

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