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Post by Bolin! » Mon Feb 15, 2016 11:31 am

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Shibata Taro

[I can't give up; I have to find her.]

General Information Age: 15
Gender: Male
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: He has a very youthful face, well-cleaned after his time outside of the Village. His eyes are big with a soft-brown color and his dark brown hair is styled into dreadlocks that are pulled back into a ponytail.
  • Body: Taking a look at this boy leads to one conclusion quite quickly; he is clearly not very strong. While not so bad as to leave him with bones showing through his skin, he is still very slight in build. His time away from the Village has seemed to change him holding himself in reserved stances. His skin bears a tan, gained from his life growing up in Kumogakure.
  • Notable Features: If one were to investigate the bottom of his feet, they would find that his feet are rough and calloused from the long travels he's experienced.
Clothing/Accessories: Returning home to a fresh change of clothes, Taro has taken to wearing a green shirt over a thinner sky-blue one; both being sleeveless. In addition, he wears a pair of pants in the same green as his over shirt. By habit developed in his time away, he still tends to go about without shoes. Further, he accessorizes his outfit with a thin black cord choker and a necklace of black and white beads.
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Personality:
  • General: If Taro could see himself from the outside, he would see that he had changed a lot. Still shaking off the feeling of truly losing his sister, he has become somewhat more reserved. He still tries his best to help the Villlage in anyway he can; though he'll appear to be distracted at times when he starts to think about his sister.
  • Hopes/Dreams: Still being young, the most important goal he has in mind is finding his sister to bring her home safely.
  • Fears: A part of him worries about not being fully accepted in the Village. The other part worries that he will never see his sister again.
  • Combat Mentality: Knowing he doesn't stand much of a chance in close combat, Taro prefers to stay back from the fight, sending projectiles into the fray as needed. In terms of teamwork, though, he'll focus more on the use of his Jutsu to support his allies so that he won't have to fight that much himself.

Battle Information Village: Kumogakure no Sato
Rank: Genin

Stats: (0/50)
  • Ninjutsu: 8
  • Taijutsu: 5
  • Genjutsu: 10
  • Stamina: 5
  • Control: 8
  • Strength: 5
  • Speed: 5
  • Instinct: 6
Equipment:
Belt Bag(Left Side)Show
  • 10 Flash Tags
  • 5 Exploding Tags
Right Leg PouchShow
  • 10 Shuriken
  • 5 Kunai
Companions: (0/5)
Affinity: Raiton, Fuuton
Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First AbilityCompanion Master
This character specializes in the organization of others, and has committed part of their time in coordinating themselves with pets, summons, or henchmen in combat. This gives the user of this ability four[4] companions, each companion is separate from the other and can be any type of companion. There is no limit to ranks for companions.
Second Ability-------------
Third Ability-------------
Concentrations
NinjutsuRaiton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Raiton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Raiton affinity. Raion has a shocking effect.

Fuuton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Fuuton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the Fuuton affinity. Fuuton has an cutting effect.
Taijutsu-------------
GenjutsuSight Initiation
This user has learned to use visual cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to perform actions, or draw the eyes to something to capture their targets in a genjutsu.

Sound Initiation
This user has learn to use sound cues to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to create sounds and sustain sounds to capture their targets in a genjutsu.

Touch Initiation
This user has learn to use physical sensations to initiate genjutsu. Allowing them to physical touch the target, or touch them with objects to capture their targets in genjutsu.

Jutsu
RaitonShow
E-RankShow
*[Raiton • Static Absorption]
E-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
As the user walks, they must constantly scrape their feet on the ground. This allows them to store static electricity in the user's body. The static electricity can be stored for use in further jutsu or, if the user is touched, to shock anyone who’s body comes in contact with the user's hand. The shock, if the electricity is created and stored over the course of two posts or more, can have an intensity equivalent to fully grasping a joy buzzer. The shock isn’t very powerful, but it causes the target's body to jerk for a brief moment and causes very minor pain.
D-RankShow
*[Raiton • Shock Double]
D-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
After performing the correct hand seals, the user will create a copy of themselves out of Raiton chakra. The clone will be able to move with the stats labelled below, while also exploding with the force of a single exploding tag upon death (which also applies the raiton passive effect). The clone will only last for 3 posts.
  • Taijutsu: 2
  • Stamina: 1
  • Strength: 1
  • Speed: 2
FuutonShow
E-RankShow
*[Fuuton • Projectile Control Technique]
E-Ranked Fuuton Jutsu
Forming the necessary hand seal, the user is able to alter the angle of slope of a small object such as Kunai, Shuriken, etc. thrown by the user by forty-five degrees. This is done by coating the projectile with chakra. The object must be within fifteen feet of the user for this to be used.
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*[Fuuton • Wind Bullet]
D-Ranked Fuuton Jutsu
After performing the required hand seals, the user expels a basket ball sized ball of wind from their mouth. This ball of wind travels up to 20m at 5 speed, and explodes with the strength of a single explosive tag on contact with solid matter or at the end of its range.

*[Fuuton • Wind Skating]
D-Ranked Fuuton Jutsu
After performing the needed hand seals, the user is able to glide on air as if they were skating on ice. This allows them to move faster (+3 speed) but lowers their accuracy and agility (-3 Taijutsu). This doesn't allow them to fly, but rather to travel over things like land, water, and ice with greater ease. The user is only held several inches off of the ground. This Jutsu does not expire until the user’s chakra supply runs out or the user shuts it off. The fuuton passive is not applied in this technique.
NinpouShow
E-RankShow
*[Ninjutsu • Chakra Kai]
E-Ranked Ninjutsu
A jutsu used with the purpose of activating seals and a range of devices and weapons, this technique begins with a single handseal. Once this has been performed, the user will focus a dollop of his/her chakra into what s/he is looking to activate in order to complete the task. Seals activated with this technique must be within 20 yards of the user's position.
D-RankShow
*[Ninjutsu • Boomerang Projectile]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
Typically used on projectile weapons with a less than stellar range of use, the user of this technique is able to have his/her weapons act like a boomerang through use of chakra. After completing a short set of handseals, the user will imbue their weapon with chakra before throwing it. The weapon will move at a speed dependent on the user's strength, and once it reaches its peak distance, the chakra will slowly disperse, bringing it back around toward the user at two less speed than it was thrown. If the user does not catch the weapon, it will travel for 15 yards past its starting point before stopping. Weapons included in this technique can be no larger than kunai.

*[Ninjutsu • Chakra Burst]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
After channeling chakra into one of their fists, the user will then attempt to strike their target and if successful, they will release additional concussive force in the form of an outward explosion at D-Rank force from their fist. If the user does not strike a target within 3 posts the jutsu dissipates.
TaijutsuShow
D-RankShow
*[Taijutsu • Shadow Shuriken Technique]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
Prerequisite: User must possess shuriken of some variation

With little to its application, this technique requires the user to have at least two shuriken to use. When throwing the shuriken at the opponent, the user will throw another that will travel beneath the first, concealing itself within its shadow. By doing so, this allows the second shuriken to go undetected as it makes its approach toward the target. Both shuriken travel at a speed dictated by the user's strength stat unless stated otherwise.
GenjutsuShow
E-RankShow
*[Genjutsu • False Place]
E-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
This is a simple genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object. The user will perform a set of hand seals and put some of their chakra into the object whose appearance is being altered. Those who see the hand seals will be affected by this jutsu. This is a long term genjutsu that can only be used on very minuscule things (Like changing the contents of a letter), and can be ended (without Kai) by touching said object.
D-RankShow
*[Genjutsu • Consumption of Soul and Self]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
After forming the needed hand seals the user will slowly lower themselves into a crouch while holding the last hand seal. Seeing this will cast a genjutsu upon any viewers. They will see the user continue to sink into the ground, they have this time span to assume a hiding spot, after they are “fully submerged in the ground”, the users true location will be visible to the victims again. Meanwhile, the user of this jutsu can attack; he or she will look like a simple black shape, gliding in and out of the ground or boulders, so he or she is relatively well hidden. This lasts for a total of one post.

*[Genjutsu • Pins and Needles]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
After performing the hand seals and pricking the opponent with some sort of small weapon (usually senbon), the opponent feels their arms and legs fall asleep. It feels as if the blood flow to these appendages has basically stopped, making their movements a tad sluggish and just all around uncomfortable. This jutsu doesn’t really hinder a person, but it makes everything they do feel off. For those who are attuned to the way their body feels during battle, it can be extremely distracting. Lasts 3 posts.

*[Genjutsu • When Pigs Fly]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
A rather simple genjutsu that is put into place when the user says a statement ending in "When Pigs Fly". Seconds later, anyone who hears the user say that will see several pigs with full hawk wings fly past, just a few feet above the user and the victim’s head, serving as a somewhat confusing distraction.
C-RankShow
*[Genjutsu • Flower Petal Escape]
C-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
If the user comes under attack, they can use this technique to cover their escape. After forming the needed hand seals, the user's body will disperse into a shower of flower petals. Watching the hand seals being made is the trigger for the genjutsu. The petals will confuse and distract the opponent while the user escapes or hides.

*[Genjutsu • Sly Mind Affect]
C-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
This is a genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. The user of this technique will form the needed seals and then make a loud bang with something nearby. After the target hears the noise, this genjutsu takes effect. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over. This jutsu lasts for 7 posts, or until dispelled, and cannot be used in combat.

History
Historical AccountsShow
Taro is one of the many that had lost something when the village was attacked viciously by a spirit known as Raijin; his parents were among those that had died in the destruction that accompanied the spirit's rampage. Since then, it was his older sister, Maiko - Chuunin of the Village - that took care of him. The boy had already looked up to his sister, and with her now being a stand-in parent he had started to fully idolize her. After doing well in his primary schooling, Taro was given the option to train in the Shinobi arts. Given how he already thought so highly of sister, being one of the greatest ninja of the Village in his eyes, he was more than happy to enter the Academy.

Once his training began, Taro quickly began to show great promise in Genjutsu. This was primarily due to his desire to emulate his older sister; to be a ninja just as good as her. In addition, he showed to also have talent in the use of Ninjutsu, which seemed to be what he was naturally gifted in. With his attention split as it was between these two disciplines, his ability in martial arts showed very little progress, leaving him to be the thin, little boy he would be for most of his childhood. Aside from how he focused in his training, Taro was also quite friendly with his fellow students and made friends quite easily; by the time of his graduation he had amassed a large number of friends within his class and was truly happy to see them all graduate alongside him.

His time as a Genin was probably the best time Taro ever had. He was able to keep up with all of his Academy friends as they improved their skills and went on a number of missions with them. On his own time, he had started to study a little further into Ninjutsu and found that Fuuton techniques really captured his interest. In another sign that this was his personal talent, he saw that he easily grasped the concepts behind the Wind Style and added what he learned to his bag of tricks. The boy was rather proud of how far he had come, and also that he was able to defend the same Village that his older sister fought for. Deep inside, he felt that one day, he would be just as great as her and would help to defend his home against any future threat.

It was late one night while out of the Village - escorted by his sister to his Chuunin Exam - that Taro woke to find Maiko leaving their campsite. The boy, being curious of what his sister was doing, decided that he would follow her as she weaved her way through the nearby forest. Believing that Maiko wouldn't do anything without good reason, he continued to trail her. Though the distance between them was steadily increasing, the boy was doing well enough to keep up with her at first. But, as would be expected from a boy that possessed sub-par physical conditioning, he did lose sight of her. The last thing he ever found of her was her headband minutes after she had disappeared to him. He was momentarily confused by this, but an idea came to mind; perhaps his sister had been tasked with leaving and his exam was to find her. He figured, being the great ninja she was, she had to have known he was following her. So, determined to find his sister and proof that he was a capable Shinobi, he stepped out into the harsh world in search of the ninja he most admired.

But the search was not meant to last. While he did get to see wondrous things in the world - including teaming up with a man in the distant Frost Country to defeat a rogue Spirit - his search never brought him any closer to finding his sister. Instead, he found a fellow Shinobi of the Cloud in a boy name Senji. It was in their first meeting that Taro was faced with the worst news he could hear: His sister, Maiko, had truly abandoned their home for reasons still unknown. Saddened that his sister was revealed to be a traitor, the boy saw no other course than to accept Senji's offer to return home. But, Taro still refused to give up his search for his sister. Now, he needed to know why she had done this. He couldn't give up. He had to find her.
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Post by Kabu » Wed Feb 17, 2016 4:54 pm

You need to give us a concise list of what all it was that you changed. You also need to link back to the post where you were given your stats in the Renown Counter,
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Post by 7eleven » Sun Feb 21, 2016 7:44 am

3 days left.
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Post by Bolin! » Sun Feb 21, 2016 7:07 pm

Changes:

His Stat Total is taken from this post.
And all of his Jutsu have been updated to be in line with the new Archives, with none being removed, added, or otherwise traded.



Edit: Also caught my own mistake and fixed where his one Taijutsu wasn't labelled as a maneuver.
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Post by 7eleven » Fri Feb 26, 2016 10:28 am

1/2
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Post by FluffyGinja » Sun Feb 28, 2016 11:00 am

Quote:
*[Raiton • Static Absorption]
E-Ranked Raiton Jutsu
This is no longer an archive Jutsu.
Quote:
*[Fuuton • Projectile Control Technique]
E-Ranked Fuuton Jutsu
Same as above.
Quote:
*[Ninjutsu • Chakra Kai]
E-Ranked Ninjutsu
This is now just a basic jutsu.
Quote:
*[Ninjutsu • Boomerang Projectile]
D-Ranked Ninjutsu
This is no longer an archive.
Quote:
*[Taijutsu • Shadow Shuriken Technique]
D-Ranked Taijutsu Maneuver
This is going to require the Projectile Weapons concentration and it is going to need to be listed on the tech itself. Also, no longer an archive.
Quote:
*[Genjutsu • False Place]
E-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
No longer an archive.
Quote:
*[Genjutsu • Consumption of Soul and Self]
D-Ranked Illusion Genjutsu
No longer an archive.

Neither of your C-Rank Genjutsu are archives either.
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Post by Archives » Thu Mar 03, 2016 10:22 am

2 days.

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Post by Ace Trainer » Mon Mar 07, 2016 7:42 pm

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Post by Nick » Sun Mar 20, 2016 7:14 am

3 days.
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Post by Nick » Sun Mar 27, 2016 8:50 am

Damnit, Bolin.

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