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Zenchou
To create a new and unprecedented major village and establishing a new world order for the bettering of all mankind.
Freedom through strength & solidarity



Type of Organization: Central Org
Location of the Organization's Main Base: Juu No Kuni
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The Core is Zenchou’s home base in the real realm. It’s a massive structure invisible to all but those who know exactly where it is. Hidden deep below the ruins of a once great nation, Juu no Kuni. Where there once were a network of mine shafts and then an underground city, there was now an operational hub dedicated to Zenchou’s goals. Taking an ultimately circular shape beneath the ground, the complex has a diameter and a height of 200 meters exactly. It is a massive structure.

The underground building is ultimately well designed and symmetrical, but still has hundreds of sections that are still organized like mining tunnels. The Core is still very much a work in progress, but it takes an extraordinary and down-right historic amount of chakra to create everything from scratch. Instead, the majority of the tunnels were filled with metal and molded around the tunnels using chakra. Many bits, though still a minority of the complex was altered directly and made to be the exact shape desired

There could be nearly 1,000 offices in the complex if desired, but instead, a majority of it is yet unused space or special rooms. Every bit of it made of dense metal. The entire complex is powered by electricity derived from a complex system of fuuinjutsu that convert the geothermal energy naturally around the complex into electricity that can be manipulated.
Other rooms are armories, training rooms, gymnasiums, stages, housing, meeting rooms, storage rooms, etc. The Core is one massive storage of everything Zenchou could ever need and owns. And it’s all linked together and organized through Fuuinjutsu and Spacetime. Each room has several anchors that individuals can use to teleport either to Zai’s realm (where they’re deposited in a room full of portals to other rooms within the Core) or to specific other rooms. It’s all very well organized and even one with no ninjutsu or chakra control can navigate it.
Description of the Organization: Zenchou is essentially a massive vehicle for world progress and order. The organization aims to create a better world for all, regardless of nationality or intent. Though a noble cause, the organization is far from moral. It is willing to manipulate, extort and kill its way to the end. It has the goal of building the world in a very specific way.
To start, it has to create a safe haven. Zenchou is in the process of building its home village and country. Having come across Juu no Kuni, an ancient and uninhabited country, the organization now works to clear it of its plethora of criminals and bring it back to working order. Already diplomacy has begun, however, and the organization is reaching around the world, situating itself to be the next world leader.
Requirements of the Organization: None
Members Of the Organization
Wakatsuki Zai
Muramasa, Maido

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Organization's Jutsu/Defenses (41/45 used)
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Energy Conversion - [Kept on the outer walls of the compound which is in direct contact with the geothermal energy]
S-ranked Augment Fuuinjutsu
A seal system that is able to harness natural energy and convert it into chakra. The seal sucks in any non-chakra energy that touches it, such as geothermal, solar, wind, and even impacts from strikes. This energy is then converted to an equivalent of a third is amount in chakra. The process is extremely complex, but it's unlikely a jutsu could perform a more efficient conversion. The energy that's converted need to be immediately released, either into the surrounding environment or another jutsu.

Battery [Kept in six rooms littered throughout the complex dedicated for the seals, as well as directly below any instance of an Energy Conversion seal.]
A-ranked Storage Fuuinjutsu
A seal system that stores up to an a-ranked jutsu worth of chakra, the amount varying based on the size of the seal. This chakra can be of any nature so long as it has been put into the seal. This stored energy can't be used for anything other than the other zenchou defense fuuinjutsu.

System-monitoring [Found in every single room, and on the outer walls so that there's two per 50 square meters]
A-ranked Augment Fuuinjutsu
A seal system that essentially evaluates the area around it. The seal is able to register the temperature, humidity, particulate density, noise level, number and location of objects, amount of light and how much chakra is touching whatever the seal is on. The range of this jutsu is 50 meters, so if the surfaces its on extends past that, it won’t register the whole thing.

Link Space: Ticket [At least two Tickets found in each room and cooridoor. One to the key room, one possibly to another specific location)
B-ranked Jikukan Jutsu
By performing the proper handseals and touching an item with another item, the user is able to link the items to each other. Anybody that touches one item and wishes to be teleported will be sent to the other item, regardless of how far away it is.

Control Panel [Found on counter surfaces in monitor rooms, as well as in the Control Room. One found in every single room as well]
B-ranked Augment Fuuinjutsu
A unique seal that serves to translate the product of other seals into something that can be seen. Any seal linked to this will have its status, inputs, outputs and location displayed in a visual manner. The seal releases different shades of blue chakra to create visuals with words, diagrams and graphics that allow the user to see everything about the seals it’s linked to.

Seal-link [Found around every single seal in the complex]
B-ranked Storage Fuuinjutsu
A unique seal in its function and size. This seal is tiny, thin and actually added around other seal designs. Any seal that this one wraps around is linked to others that have the same exact design and construction wrapped around them. This linkage allows anything that’s stored in or created from the seal to be sent to the seal they’re linked to.

Shock Converter [Found in the same rooms as the Battery Seal, and also in the monitoring rooms and control room]
C-ranked Augment Fuuinjutsu
Prerequisite: Raiton
A relatively simple fuuinjutsu, this seal is able to convert any chakra put into it into electricity. This electricity is immediately active and is released through the seal, shocking anything that touches it while the seal and chakra source last.

Organization's Equipment (0/0 used)
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EquipmentShow
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Plotboard Tracker
This keeps track of all the PBs completed under the Org, those marked as being used as payment have an asterisk along with the name of the reward given(*)
D-Rank PBs Completed C-Rank PBs CompletedB-Rank PBs CompletedA-Rank PBs CompletedS-Rank PBs Completed 1* (Defene), 2, 3, 41* (Defense) 2, 31* (Defense), 21* (Base)
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Post by Zangy » Thu May 18, 2017 8:35 am

Fix your broken tags.
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Oohazure: [color=#AFAD00][b]""[/b][/color]
Yumegokochi: [center][color=#79CDCD][font=Georgia][big][[sub][/sub]][/big][/font][/color][/center]
Okuure Daisuke: [b][color=#BA7CBC]""[/color][/b]
Kouseki Kazouchi: [b][color=#007D4F]""[/color][/b]

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Post by CDF » Thu May 18, 2017 8:38 am

no, as zai can't be linked t yet
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Post by Zangy » Thu May 18, 2017 8:44 am

Your color tags and such in the jutsu. :P
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Yumegokochi: [center][color=#79CDCD][font=Georgia][big][[sub][/sub]][/big][/font][/color][/center]
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Post by CDF » Thu May 18, 2017 4:50 pm

awk edited
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Post by Willoria » Wed May 24, 2017 9:38 am

As a note, none of these jutsu list where they are as part of the orgs defenses or otherwise. Now the org system is new so there is still some confusion on certain things, one thing I'm just now learning is that there are no org specific jutsu. The jutsu listed in these apps should be defenses for the org base which means the locations of where all of these are placed should probably be mentioned as well. (Of course I could be wrong about the no org specific jutsu, I'm going to double check with director on that).

Energy Conversion --> How many posts, from activation, does it absorb energy for before it is 'filled' and the stored energy is useable?

Battery --> My understanding is this cannot be done. There is no such thing as a chakra battery.

System-monitoring --> This is doing too much for a B rank and to keep as is will need to be taken up to A rank.

Lastly you have a random [/color] at the end of your jutsu spread.
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Post by Willoria » Sun May 28, 2017 5:19 pm

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Post by CDF » Thu Jun 01, 2017 4:59 am

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Post by Willoria » Sun Jun 04, 2017 11:39 pm

me:
Battery --> My understanding is this cannot be done. There is no such thing as a chakra battery.
This is still there.
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Post by CDF » Mon Jun 05, 2017 5:44 am

Right forgot to argue that:

So from what I know, what you can't do is store chakra for you to power up from, like a personal battery. But Suna defenses since I made them a while ago have had ninja from the different clans come and store their chakra into it to allow the use of the mirage and stuff. And Charge fuuin is literally storing of chakra in the form of jutsu, so I don't see why the storing of raw chakra wouldn't be possible as well.

I think the rule you're referring to is just about using chakra batteries for stamina
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Post by Rain21199 » Wed Jun 14, 2017 2:42 am

Yes, and while that may be true, it doesn't change the fact that the way your jutsu is written, it sounds like it could be used to charge characters as well as equipment. Edit that jutsu and state that the chakra isn't compatible with people or however you want to phrase it and I'd say this app is ready for a 1/2


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Post by Director » Tue Jun 20, 2017 4:18 pm

Quote:
Battery [Kept in six rooms littered throughout the complex dedicated for the seals, as well as directly below any instance of an Energy Conversion seal.]
A-ranked Storage Fuuinjutsu
A seal system that stores up to an a-ranked jutsu worth of chakra, the amount varying based on the size of the seal. This chakra can be of any nature so long as it has been put into the seal.
Make sure you just state this is utilized to power the fuuin defenses, and nothing else can derive from the stored chakra.

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Post by CDF » Sun Jun 25, 2017 4:27 am

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Post by Willoria » Mon Jun 26, 2017 6:23 pm

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Battery [Kept in six rooms littered throughout the complex dedicated for the seals, as well as directly below any instance of an Energy Conversion seal.]
A-ranked Storage Fuuinjutsu
A seal system that stores up to an a-ranked jutsu worth of chakra, the amount varying based on the size of the seal. This chakra can be of any nature so long as it has been put into the seal. This stored energy can't be used for anything other than the other zenchou jutsu
That is not the correction you were asked to make.
Quote:
Make sure you just state this is utilized to power the fuuin defenses, and nothing else can derive from the stored chakra.
Please update your phrasing according to the request made by the admin.
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Post by CDF » Wed Jun 28, 2017 5:10 pm

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Post by Willoria » Mon Jul 03, 2017 12:05 am

2/2

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