[Accepted]Space-time techiques

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[Accepted]Space-time techiques

Post by Zao » Sat Aug 26, 2017 7:52 am

Application: Zao
Change:
  • Adding some archive and some custom Space-Time Techniques. Please add Jikukan to his Ninjutsu concentrations.
  • Transferring all the points from my Kiri-Nin, Toukai Kasai to Zao, since I can't afford this mod without it. (203/2=101.5=102?)
  • Giving Zao a total of a 127 points. I'd like to also use one point to to add fifteen kunai to his equipment area in his left hip pouch.
Payment: 12 C-rank, 7 B-Rank, 5 A-Rank, and 1 S-Rank = 116 Points. This should leave him with 11 points left over if I did the math right.
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JikukanShow
Quote:
Jikukan Ninjutsu
Practitioners of this art are able to manipulate Space/Time to create localized pockets within either, or both, that they have control over. An extremely advanced form on Ninjutsu, it demands a firm control and complex understanding of the fundamentals of chakra.
Personal RealmShow
Zao's personal realm consist of a small thirty meter diameter island that appears to truly be floating in the middle of space, as it is surrounded by numerous starts and even planets hover around the edges of the 200^3 area that has been shaped by the inner workings of the former Suna-nin's mind. On the small island is a single floor structure that appears to be made of age bamboo but the aged wood is truly stronger that it appears taking a strike of 35 strength to damage them. While the outside of the structure only takes up around twenty meters of the island the inside has been permanently affected by the flux in space causing the inside of the structure to actually encompass over 50^2 worth of space split between a meditation area, training area, living are, kitchen area, and an armory area.

Outside the structure and the island in general the starts and planets seem to be in a slow constant rotation around the section of space containing Zao's personal realm and this space actually breaks a few of the laws of physics. Allowing anyone who enters the realm to be able to fly at a speed equal their control within the confines of the spaces barrier. Despite the appearance of everything outside being outer space, as long as one does not accidently leave the boundaries of the personal realm then they area able to breath as normal and the temperature remains at a comfortably cool feeling. Though if one was to accidently leave the area of the personal realm they would be sucked into the nothingness of true space with no air and temperatures that would rapidly freeze their lungs and bodies.

Despite their not being a nearby star to assume tge roll as a constant source of light like the sun, the orbiting planets and stars as easily able to illuminate the small area that Zao's realm encompasses here. While secondly the island upon which the strange, aged bamboo structure is built gives off a soft golden light that also serves to gently illuminate that pierce of space that has come to form its own realm independent of any other.
*Recycle Space: Projectile
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
After throwing a projectile the user will do a short series of hand seals, ending with a single finger pointing at the small projectile(kunai, shuriken, etc.). Spontaneously a second projectile will form anywhere within 1 meter of the projectile in motion, moving at the same speed and strength as the original. After 3 posts the weapon will disappear as the universe self corrects.

*Close Space: Anchor
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then touch an object they’ve turned into an anchor. The anchor will then close, no longer acting as a means to move through space.

*Open Time: Resume
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then focus on anything they’ve Closed Time on. Time will resume for that target, no longer Closed.

Tighten Space: Ambush Strike
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
By channeling in front of the user they can tighten the space directly in front of them in a single, linear direction and can be up to 10 meters of in length and the space tightens with a speed of 10. When the user then performs a jutsu, launches a projectile, or throws a strike this allows the technique or projectile to immediately traverse that distance and surprise the enemy.

Expand Space: Looks Are Deceiving
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will channel chakra, focusing on the area immediately around them causing the area within a seven meter radius around them will expand now doubling in distance to fifteen meters. This jutsu lasts only for 2 posts, after which the area that was expanded will reduce back to its normal size, closing the distance between them. Oftentimes, however, this additional distance can be enough to allow the user to dodge or evade an attack that they normally wouldn’t have been able to normally.

Tighten Space: Slight Displacement
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will channel their chakra into a 15x15x5m area in front of them. Anything within this space will become slightly distorted. Any time in the following 2 posts, if anything passes through this area the user will do a single handed hand seal, causing the area to rapidly tighten at a speed of 10. After a brief moment, the area will return to its original form, but anything that was passing within the area can be displaced from its original location end up to the left or right of the user’s position. This allows the user to change the trajectory of weapons, or even people.

Open Space: Within One’s Grasp
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra into the area directly in front of them and into another area within fifteen meters of the user’s position the user is able to open up two connected portals in space at a speed of ten. The portals can be up to one foot in diameter and last for up to two posts. During this time the user is able to reach through, utilize projectiles, or any techniques that can fit through the portal in front of him as they instantly transverse the distance and space between the other portal appearing front it.

Open Space: Personal Withdraw
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra into the area directly in front of them the user is able to open a portal in space that is directly connected to the space within his personal realm at a speed of ten. The portal can only be up one meter in diameter and lasts for up to two posts. During this time the user is able to reach through and withdraw items that have been prepared before hand and stored within his personal realm that he normally wouldn’t keep on his person as long as they are able to fit through the portal.

Tighten Time: Corrode
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then focus on a ninjutsu within 10m of their person. Any posts counts on that ninjutsu will be sped up by 2 posts. Should this go beyond the limit for that ninjutsu, it will end as it would have it reached completion.

*Erase Time: Small Wound
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
When the user or a comrade have been recently injured in which the wound is no larger than the size of their hand the user can perform a series of hand seals, then focus on the event placing their hand over the wound. So long as the injury occurred in the past 2 posts, the user can Erase time on that portion of the affected target’s body, removing the past 2 posts from ever happening, removing the wound.

Erase Space: Doton
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come in contact with a section of earth (dirt, stone/rock), if the area is larger than 3x3x3m in size then only the section of the area the user is touching up to the previously designated size will be affected and removed. The moment they come in contact with it, the section of earth will vanish, regardless of it’s speed, strength or temperature, having absolutely no impact on the user. 5 posts after the application of this technique, a pile of earth will appear from nowhere within five meters of where it vanished after 2 posts. The targeted body can be naturally occurring, the byproduct of a jutsu, or a jutsu in motion itself. When dealing with jutsu or doton with active chakra in it, there's a control battle between the user and the opponent

[Open Space • Linked Portals]
C-Rank Anchoring Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 19 Ninjutsu
The user begins by channeling chakra through their body, then releasing this chakra into the area around then. This chakra will create two eight meter diameter portals anywhere within 22 meters of their person. These portals must also be within 30 meters of each other, and they are created at a speed of 19. These portals are linked together through the user's personal realm, meaning that anything that goes through one passes through their realm for a brief moment (portals area five meters apart in the user's personal realm) before coming out of the other portal and vice versa. Inside the Zao's personal realm they appear directly above one another so that fall from the first into the second making it more direct for unwanted visitors to try and stick around and last for 2 posts.

*Tighten Space: Displacement
B-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then focus on a 30x30x10m area. Anything within this space will become slightly distorted. Any time in the following 3 posts, if anything passes through this area the user will do a single handed hand seal, causing the area to rapidly tighten at a speed of 20. After a brief moment, the area will return to it’s original form, but anything that was passing within the area can be displaced from its original location. This allows the user to change the trajectory of weapons, or even people.

*Tighten Time: Deteriorate
B-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then focus on a ninjutsu within 10m of their person. Any posts counts on that ninjutsu will be sped up by 4 posts. Should this go beyond the limit for that ninjutsu, it will end as it would had it reached completion.

*Expand Space: Tail
B-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, focusing on the area immediately behind them. As the user moves, a 20m wide stretch of area behind them will expand at half the rate they’re moving, for as far as they travel. This jutsu lasts only for 2 posts, after which the area that was expanded will reduce back to it’s normal size, closing the distance between them. Oftentimes, however, this additional distance can be enough to allow the user to escape before it’s closed. Because it expands at half the rate they’re moving, anyone or anything within the space is slowed down by half the user’s speed capped at a maximum of 20 speed. (i.e; 40 speed reduces everything by 20 speed).

Expand Space: Hard to Reach
B-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will channel chakra, focusing on the area immediately around them causing area within a ten meter radius around them to suddenly expand now becoming twenty meters. This jutsu lasts only for 3 posts, after which the area that was expanded will reduce back to its normal size, closing the distance between them. Oftentimes, however, this additional distance can be enough to allow the user to dodge or evade an attack that they normally wouldn’t have been able to or to cause a technique to expire before reaching the user.

Open Space: Homeward Bound
B-ranked Jikukan Ninjutsu
After channeling Jikukan throughout his body, the user will essentially phases their body through space and time to their personal realm instead of creating a full portal. This teleportation is slower than if the user had created a portal and stepped through it, but is a more efficient way of moving to the person all. This phasing happens at a speed of 20 and with direct contact the user can also perform this jutsu along with other people, so long as they are willing.

[Open Space • Specific Destination]
B-Rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: [Fuuinjutsu: Destination Marker]
After channeling a large amount of chakra through his body, the user will picture the location of one of their [Fuuinjutsu: Destination Marker] Seals. Once the image of the area is in his mind, The user will force this chakra into their hands and rip space in front of then, creating  up to a three meter diameter rift that connects to the Fuuinjutsu. This allows User to transport themself instantaneously across vast distances. The rift only remains open for a single post or until used, whichever comes first.

*Recycle Time: Replay
A-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
Having used a contact based technique in the past post, if the user fail or misses their target, they can perform this jutsu to recycle time by a single post, resetting everything to how it was prior to them attempting the technique. This allows them to attack again, with the knowledge of how their opponent intends on dodging.

*Open Space: Seeking Truth
A-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then reach out into the air in front of them and physically grab “space” pulling apart their two hands to tear apart Space right in front of them up to 3x3 meters. This tear is new, and will cause the universe to self correct and make a personal realm for the user. This technique is required for the user to have any techniques that involve the use of a personal realm. This technique can only be used once to create a personal realm, but can be used repeatedly in order to enter that realm. An Architect using this technique within their realm will merit no reaction, while using it within someone else’s realm will allow the user to enter their own. Specifics on the Realm can be found within the Jikukan spoiler.

Erase Space: Timely Drought
A-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come in contact with a a body of water, stone/rock), if the area is larger than 10x10x10m in size then only the section of the area the user is touching up to the previously designated size will be affected and removed. The moment they come in contact with it, the section of water will vanish, regardless of it’s speed, strength or temperature, having absolutely no impact on the user. Five posts after the application of this technique, a short rain will appear from no where for two posts. The targeted body can be naturally occurring, the byproduct of a jutsu, or a jutsu in motion itself. When dealing with jutsu or suiton with active chakra in it, there's a control battle between the user and the opponent.

*Recycle & Open Space: True Link
A-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals then place one hand on an any object small enough to fit in their grasp. Upon doing so, they will Recycle Space, creating an exact duplicate of that object. The duplicate of said object will act as an Anchor, turning both objects into links to each other. Should any party aside from the Architect come in contact with either anchor, they’ll be instantly transported to the other Anchor either a) they elect to or b) their control is less than the control of the Architect. The Architect can opt to use the Anchor at any point as well, should they so choose.

*Tighten Space: Step
A-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then focus on a location within 50m in front of them. There can be no obstructions, to include people, in this 50m range. Once they’ve targeted the location, they’ll take a step forward. The space between their current location and target location will rapidly tighten at 25 speed, allowing them to take a single step to cover the distance, then return to normal.

*Close Time: Mist
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then throw their arms into the air. For the next 4 posts, everything airborne within a 30m radius of the user will have time closed around it. This means for jutsu, their post counts are paused. This technique includes jutsu, particulates, and projectiles of all forms. Everything is closed by its strength, and requires more than its strength in order to move it. This means that particulates which are suspended purely by their weight, are easy to move through, by weapons which are thrown at a strength, would require more strength than that to move beyond it. At the end of the 4 posts, Time will open and everything will resume as it was.
FuuinjutsuShow
[Fuuinjutsu: Destination Marker]
B Rank Augment Fuuinjutsu
Prerequisite: Space-Time Concentration
 The user will inscribe this one meter diameter fuuinjutsu formula on a surface large enough to hold said seal. Thereafter, they can use the seal as a target for certain space-time teleportation techniques, allowing him to be anywhere that one of these seals exists. There is no distance limitation on a space time technique that targets this seal as it's teleportation point, but the space time technique must be made specifically to teleport to this seal.
Jutsu NocodeShow

[spoiler=Jikukan]
[quote][color=#666699][b]Jikukan Ninjutsu[/b][/color]
Practitioners of this art are able to manipulate [b]Space/Time[/b] to create localized pockets within either, or both, that they have control over. An extremely advanced form on Ninjutsu, it demands a firm control and complex understanding of the fundamentals of chakra.[/quote]
[spoiler=Personal Realm]
[center][img]http://i.imgur.com/B0tPk3R.jpg[/img][/center]
Zao's personal realm consist of a small thirty meter diameter island that appears to truly be floating in the middle of space, as it is surrounded by numerous starts and even planets hover around the edges of the 200^3 area that has been shaped by the inner workings of the former Suna-nin's mind. On the small island is a single floor structure that appears to be made of age bamboo but the aged wood is truly stronger that it appears taking a strike of 35 strength to damage them. While the outside of the structure only takes up around twenty meters of the island the inside has been permanently affected by the flux in space causing the inside of the structure to actually encompass over 50^2 worth of space split between a meditation area, training area, living are, kitchen area, and an armory area.

Outside the structure and the island in general the starts and planets seem to be in a slow constant rotation around the section of space containing Zao's personal realm and this space actually breaks a few of the laws of physics. Allowing anyone who enters the realm to be able to fly at a speed equal their control within the confines of the spaces barrier. Despite the appearance of everything outside being outer space, as long as one does not accidently leave the boundaries of the personal realm then they area able to breath as normal and the temperature remains at a comfortably cool feeling. Though if one was to accidently leave the area of the personal realm they would be sucked into the nothingness of true space with no air and temperatures that would rapidly freeze their lungs and bodies.

Despite their not being a nearby star to assume tge roll as a constant source of light like the sun, the orbiting planets and stars as easily able to illuminate the small area that Zao's realm encompasses here. While secondly the island upon which the strange, aged bamboo structure is built gives off a soft golden light that also serves to gently illuminate that pierce of space that has come to form its own realm independent of any other.
[/spoiler]
[b]*[color=#666699]Recycle Space: Projectile[/color][/b]
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
After throwing a projectile the user will do a short series of hand seals, ending with a single finger pointing at the small projectile(kunai, shuriken, etc.). Spontaneously a second projectile will form anywhere within 1 meter of the projectile in motion, moving at the same speed and strength as the original. After 3 posts the weapon will disappear as the universe self corrects.

[b]*[color=#666699]Close Space: Anchor[/color][/b]
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then touch an object they’ve turned into an anchor. The anchor will then close, no longer acting as a means to move through space.

[b]*[color=#666699]Open Time: Resume[/color][/b]
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then focus on anything they’ve Closed Time on. Time will resume for that target, no longer Closed.

[b] [color=#666699]Tighten Space: Ambush Strike [/color][/b]
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
By channeling in front of the user they can tighten the space directly in front of them in a single, linear direction and can be up to 10 meters of in length and the space tightens with a speed of 10. When the user then performs a jutsu, launches a projectile, or throws a strike this allows the technique or projectile to immediately traverse that distance and surprise the enemy.

[b][color=#666699]Expand Space: Looks Are Deceiving[/color][/b]
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will channel chakra, focusing on the area immediately around them causing the area within a seven meter radius around them will expand now doubling in distance to fifteen meters. This jutsu lasts only for 2 posts, after which the area that was expanded will reduce back to its normal size, closing the distance between them. Oftentimes, however, this additional distance can be enough to allow the user to dodge or evade an attack that they normally wouldn’t have been able to normally.

[b][color=#666699]Tighten Space: Slight Displacement [/color][/b]
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will channel their chakra into a 15x15x5m area in front of them. Anything within this space will become slightly distorted. Any time in the following 2 posts, if anything passes through this area the user will do a single handed hand seal, causing the area to rapidly tighten at a speed of 10. After a brief moment, the area will return to its original form, but anything that was passing within the area can be displaced from its original location end up to the left or right of the user’s position. This allows the user to change the trajectory of weapons, or even people.

[b][color=#666699]Open Space: Within One’s Grasp[/color][/b]
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra into the area directly in front of them and into another area within fifteen meters of the user’s position the user is able to open up two connected portals in space at a speed of ten. The portals can be up to one foot in diameter and last for up to two posts. During this time the user is able to reach through, utilize projectiles, or any techniques that can fit through the portal in front of him as they instantly transverse the distance and space between the other portal appearing front it.

[b] [color=#666699]Open Space: Personal Withdraw[/color][/b]
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra into the area directly in front of them the user is able to open a portal in space that is directly connected to the space within his personal realm at a speed of ten. The portal can only be up one meter in diameter and lasts for up to two posts. During this time the user is able to reach through and withdraw items that have been prepared before hand and stored within his personal realm that he normally wouldn’t keep on his person as long as they are able to fit through the portal.

[b][color=#666699]Tighten Time: Corrode[/color][/b]
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then focus on a ninjutsu within 10m of their person. Any posts counts on that ninjutsu will be sped up by 2 posts. Should this go beyond the limit for that ninjutsu, it will end as it would have it reached completion.

[b]*[color=#666699]Erase Time: Small Wound[/color][/b]
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
When the user or a comrade have been recently injured in which the wound is no larger than the size of their hand the user can perform a series of hand seals, then focus on the event placing their hand over the wound. So long as the injury occurred in the past 2 posts, the user can Erase time on that portion of the affected target’s body, removing the past 2 posts from ever happening, removing the wound.

[b][color=#666699]Erase Space: Doton[/color][/b]
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come in contact with a section of earth (dirt, stone/rock), if the area is larger than 3x3x3m in size then only the section of the area the user is touching up to the previously designated size will be affected and removed. The moment they come in contact with it, the section of earth will vanish, regardless of it’s speed, strength or temperature, having absolutely no impact on the user. 5 posts after the application of this technique, a pile of earth will appear from nowhere within five meters of where it vanished after 2 posts. The targeted body can be naturally occurring, the byproduct of a jutsu, or a jutsu in motion itself. When dealing with jutsu or doton with active chakra in it, there's a control battle between the user and the opponent

[color=#666699][b][Open Space • Linked Portals][/b][/color]
C-Rank Anchoring Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 19 Ninjutsu
The user begins by channeling chakra through their body, then releasing this chakra into the area around then. This chakra will create two eight meter diameter portals anywhere within 22 meters of their person. These portals must also be within 30 meters of each other, and they are created at a speed of 19. These portals are linked together through the user's personal realm, meaning that anything that goes through one passes through their realm for a brief moment (portals area five meters apart in the user's personal realm) before coming out of the other portal and vice versa. Inside the Zao's personal realm they appear directly above one another so that fall from the first into the second making it more direct for unwanted visitors to try and stick around and last for 2 posts.

[b]*[color=#666699]Tighten Space: Displacement[/color][/b]
B-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then focus on a 30x30x10m area. Anything within this space will become slightly distorted. Any time in the following 3 posts, if anything passes through this area the user will do a single handed hand seal, causing the area to rapidly tighten at a speed of 20. After a brief moment, the area will return to it’s original form, but anything that was passing within the area can be displaced from its original location. This allows the user to change the trajectory of weapons, or even people.

[b]*[color=#666699]Tighten Time: Deteriorate[/color][/b]
B-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then focus on a ninjutsu within 10m of their person. Any posts counts on that ninjutsu will be sped up by 4 posts. Should this go beyond the limit for that ninjutsu, it will end as it would had it reached completion.

[b]*[color=#666699]Expand Space: Tail[/color][/b]
B-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, focusing on the area immediately behind them. As the user moves, a 20m wide stretch of area behind them will expand at half the rate they’re moving, for as far as they travel. This jutsu lasts only for 2 posts, after which the area that was expanded will reduce back to it’s normal size, closing the distance between them. Oftentimes, however, this additional distance can be enough to allow the user to escape before it’s closed. Because it expands at half the rate they’re moving, anyone or anything within the space is slowed down by half the user’s speed capped at a maximum of 20 speed. (i.e; 40 speed reduces everything by 20 speed).

[b][color=#666699]Expand Space: Hard to Reach [/color][/b]
B-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will channel chakra, focusing on the area immediately around them causing area within a ten meter radius around them to suddenly expand now becoming twenty meters. This jutsu lasts only for 3 posts, after which the area that was expanded will reduce back to its normal size, closing the distance between them. Oftentimes, however, this additional distance can be enough to allow the user to dodge or evade an attack that they normally wouldn’t have been able to or to cause a technique to expire before reaching the user.

[b][color=#666699]Open Space: Homeward Bound [/color][/b]
B-ranked Jikukan Ninjutsu
After channeling Jikukan throughout his body, the user will essentially phases their body through space and time to their personal realm instead of creating a full portal. This teleportation is slower than if the user had created a portal and stepped through it, but is a more efficient way of moving to the person all. This phasing happens at a speed of 20 and with direct contact the user can also perform this jutsu along with other people, so long as they are willing.

[b][color=#666699][Open Space • Specific Destination][/color][/b]
B-Rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: [Fuuinjutsu: Destination Marker]
After channeling a large amount of chakra through his body, the user will picture the location of one of their [Fuuinjutsu: Destination Marker] Seals. Once the image of the area is in his mind, The user will force this chakra into their hands and rip space in front of then, creating  up to a three meter diameter rift that connects to the Fuuinjutsu. This allows User to transport themself instantaneously across vast distances. The rift only remains open for a single post or until used, whichever comes first.

[b]*[color=#666699]Recycle Time: Replay[/color][/b]
A-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
Having used a contact based technique in the past post, if the user fail or misses their target, they can perform this jutsu to recycle time by a single post, resetting everything to how it was prior to them attempting the technique. This allows them to attack again, with the knowledge of how their opponent intends on dodging.

[b]*[color=#666699]Open Space: Seeking Truth[/color][/b]
A-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then reach out into the air in front of them and physically grab “space” pulling apart their two hands to tear apart Space right in front of them up to 3x3 meters. This tear is new, and will cause the universe to self correct and make a personal realm for the user. This technique is required for the user to have any techniques that involve the use of a personal realm. This technique can only be used once to create a personal realm, but can be used repeatedly in order to enter that realm. An Architect using this technique within their realm will merit no reaction, while using it within someone else’s realm will allow the user to enter their own. Specifics on the Realm can be found within the Jikukan spoiler.

[b][color=#666699]Erase Space: Timely Drought[/color][/b]
A-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then come in contact with a a body of water, stone/rock), if the area is larger than 10x10x10m in size then only the section of the area the user is touching up to the previously designated size will be affected and removed. The moment they come in contact with it, the section of water will vanish, regardless of it’s speed, strength or temperature, having absolutely no impact on the user. Five posts after the application of this technique, a short rain will appear from no where for two posts. The targeted body can be naturally occurring, the byproduct of a jutsu, or a jutsu in motion itself. When dealing with jutsu or suiton with active chakra in it, there's a control battle between the user and the opponent.

[b]*[color=#666699]Recycle & Open Space: True Link[/color][/b]
A-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals then place one hand on an any object small enough to fit in their grasp. Upon doing so, they will Recycle Space, creating an exact duplicate of that object. The duplicate of said object will act as an Anchor, turning both objects into links to each other. Should any party aside from the Architect come in contact with either anchor, they’ll be instantly transported to the other Anchor either a) they elect to or b) their control is less than the control of the Architect. The Architect can opt to use the Anchor at any point as well, should they so choose.

[b]*[color=#666699]Tighten Space: Step[/color][/b]
A-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then focus on a location within 50m in front of them. There can be no obstructions, to include people, in this 50m range. Once they’ve targeted the location, they’ll take a step forward. The space between their current location and target location will rapidly tighten at 25 speed, allowing them to take a single step to cover the distance, then return to normal.

[b]*[color=#666699]Close Time: Mist [/color][/b]
S-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then throw their arms into the air. For the next 4 posts, everything airborne within a 30m radius of the user will have time closed around it. This means for jutsu, their post counts are paused. This technique includes jutsu, particulates, and projectiles of all forms. Everything is closed by its strength, and requires more than its strength in order to move it. This means that particulates which are suspended purely by their weight, are easy to move through, by weapons which are thrown at a strength, would require more strength than that to move beyond it. At the end of the 4 posts, Time will open and everything will resume as it was.
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B Rank Augment Fuuinjutsu
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The user will inscribe this one meter diameter fuuinjutsu formula on a surface large enough to hold said seal. Thereafter, they can use the seal as a target for certain space-time teleportation techniques, allowing him to be anywhere that one of these seals exists. There is no distance limitation on a space time technique that targets this seal as it's teleportation point, but the space time technique must be made specifically to teleport to this seal.
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Post by Kabu » Mon Aug 28, 2017 8:19 pm

Open Space: Homeward Bound <- Feel free to ask for a second opinion, but I feel like this should either be A rank or have some form of penalty for being used with multiple people.

Open Space: Traveler’s Portal <- There should be a maximum distance, as theoretically Zao could enhance his sight to allow him to see farther distances, hence making the distance that the portal could be created from virtually limitless.
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Post by Zao » Tue Aug 29, 2017 9:24 am

Homeward Bound - This is a direct copy of Hito's technique, but I don't mind removing the extra person part if that'll make it an acceptable B-Rank

Traveler's Portal - I reworded it as an out of combat technique that I honestly want simply for the flare of the technique when role-playing the character during his exploration and adventuring phase. But do you feel that the mechanics of the technique are to much for a B-Rank or as a space-time jutsu in general? Since most space-time teleportation techniques allow people to traverse distances much greater than this technique does or even to different realms/dimensions.
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Post by CDF » Fri Sep 01, 2017 8:43 am

Can you actually hold off on transferring the points/turning the character into an NPC for now? We're currently working on something in staff for exactly this, so you'll be saving yourself some heart and headache if you wait a little on that.

Expand Space: Looks Are Deceiving <--wording on this is weird. This jutsu should either Expand Space by making the 15 meter area around it become a 30 meter area, or you have to expand time. I think you're confusing it with Expand Space: Tail, but that one works like that because it's expanding space behind the user while the user's running in the opposite direction, so the user's getting farther away while lengthening the space behind them.

Expand Space: Hard to Reach < same as above

Open Space: Armory Withdraw <-- I recommend just making this into a jutsu that can create a portal (specify portal size) anywhere in your realm, no need to limit it to the armory.

[Open Space • Linked Portal ] <-- since this means they'd be enterring a portal, exiting it in your realm and then enterring it again to exit back into the normal realm, how far apart are the portals in your realm/where are they? I'm anticipating somebody jumping through and wanting tos tick around, if given the option.


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Post by Zao » Fri Sep 01, 2017 12:54 pm

Appreciate you taking the time to look at the mod, mate. I'll have to still have to transfer the points to afford the mod but I'll hold off on the NPC thing till you guys work out what you guys are working on.

I fixed the extend space techniques you mentioned and altered my 'armory withdraw' technique like you mentions making it much more flexible, thanks. For the Linked portals, honestly I hadn't thought about that but I guess putting them five meters apart inside my realm? Any suggestions you have on this one would definitely be appreciated.
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Post by Director » Sat Sep 09, 2017 7:10 pm

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Expand Space: Looks Are Deceiving
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will channel chakra, focusing on the area immediately around them causing the area within a fifteen meter radius around them will expand now doubling in distance to thirty meters. This jutsu lasts only for 2 posts, after which the area that was expanded will reduce back to its normal size, closing the distance between them. Oftentimes, however, this additional distance can be enough to allow the user to dodge or evade an attack that they normally wouldn’t have been able to normally.
I prefer 15 meters in diameter.
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Tighten Space: Slight Displacement
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will channel their chakra into a 15x5m area in front of them. Anything within this space will become slightly distorted. Any time in the following 2 posts, if anything passes through this area the user will do a single handed hand seal, causing the area to rapidly tighten at a speed of 10. After a brief moment, the area will return to its original form, but anything that was passing within the area can be displaced from its original location end up to the left or right of the user’s position. This allows the user to change the trajectory of weapons, or even people.
15x5meter area? What are you trying to accomplish here? Do you mean 15m3?
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Open Space: Within One’s Grasp
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra into the area directly in front of them and into another area within fifteen meters of the user’s position the user is able to open up two connected portals in space. The portal can only be up to ten inches in diameter and last for up to two posts. During this time the user is able to reach through, utilize projectiles, or any techniques that can fit through the portal in front of him as they instantly transverse the distance and space between the other portal appearing front it.
Speed they open with pls.
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Open Space: Personal Withdraw
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
By channeling chakra into the area directly in front of them the user is able to open a portal in space that is directly connected to the space within his personal realm. The portal can only be up one meter in diameter and lasts for up to two posts. During this time the user is able to reach through and withdraw items that have been prepared before hand and stored within his personal realm that he normally wouldn’t keep on his person as long as they are able to fit through the portal.
Speed of which it opens pls.
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Tighten Time: Corrode
C-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will do a series of hand seals, then focus on a ninjutsu within 10m of their person. Any posts counts on that ninjutsu will be sped up by 3 posts. Should this go beyond the limit for that ninjutsu, it will end as it would have it reached completion.
I'm gonna say only 2 posts sped-up.
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[Open Space • Linked Portals]
C-Rank Anchoring Ninjutsu
Prerequisite: 19 Ninjutsu
The user begins by channeling chakra through their body, then releasing this chakra into the area around then. This chakra will create two eight meter diameter portals anywhere within 30 meters of their person. These portals must also be within 30 meters of each other, and they are created at a speed of 19. These portals are linked together through the user's personal realm, meaning that anything that goes through one passes through their realm for a brief moment (portals area five meters apart in the user's personal realm) before coming out of the other portal and vice versa. Inside the Zao's personal realm they appear directly above his bamboo constructed home and last for 2 posts.
Cut it down to 22 meters within their person.
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Expand Space: Hard to Reach
B-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
The user will channel chakra, focusing on the area immediately around them causing area within a twenty meter radius around them to suddenly expand now becoming forty five meters. This jutsu lasts only for 3 posts, after which the area that was expanded will reduce back to its normal size, closing the distance between them. Oftentimes, however, this additional distance can be enough to allow the user to dodge or evade an attack that they normally wouldn’t have been able to or to cause a technique to expire before reaching the user.
20 meters in diameter pls.
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Open Space: Traveler’s Portal
B-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
After doing the proper channeling, when not in combat, this technique allows the user to create a portal to anywhere within their line of sight regardless of the distance allowing for them traverse tremendous distances in a single step through the portal. Requires a full post of channeling and this portal will last up to two posts if not closed by the user.
To be honest, not sure how I feel. Gonna discuss it with another broski.
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Post by Zao » Sun Sep 10, 2017 2:57 am

Fixed.
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Post by Director » Thu Sep 14, 2017 4:32 pm

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Open Space: Traveler’s Portal
B-rank Jikukan Ninjutsu
After doing the proper channeling, when not in combat, this technique allows the user to create a portal to anywhere within their line of sight regardless of the distance allowing for them traverse tremendous distances in a single step through the portal. Requires a full post of channeling and this portal will last up to two posts if not closed by the user.
Gonna say can't do this, it needs to be written as a legitimate jutsu.
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Post by Zao » Thu Sep 14, 2017 4:56 pm

I'll just drop the technique completely for now.
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Post by Director » Thu Sep 14, 2017 6:44 pm

1/2
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Post by Zao » Fri Sep 15, 2017 5:46 am

Thanks. :)
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Post by CDF » Sat Sep 23, 2017 2:31 am

Erase Space: Doton <-- sorry to challenge your 1/2, but I don't like that this one c-rank can erase an s-rank doton jutsu with ease. MAke it so when dealing with jutsu or doton with active chakra in it, there's a control battle between you and the opponent.


[Open Space • Linked Portals <--- I recommend having the portals in the air in your personal realm, facing downwards so that it's a fall from one portal to the other. Makes it harder for people you've pushed into it to just stick around, but still gives the option. Also gives you some momentum when coming out the other end.

Erase Space: Timely Drought <-- same as the doton one
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Post by Zao » Sat Sep 23, 2017 3:08 am

Should be fixed now, though just a note with the drought one is that it's only a few words different than the archive with nearly the identical effect. Does that mean the archive is going to get updated with a similar adjustment?

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Post by CDF » Sat Sep 23, 2017 3:17 am

Yea I'll discuss the archive with director. if he ends disagreeing with me, we'll update you.

for now i'll re-1/2 this.
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Post by Zao » Sat Sep 23, 2017 4:21 am

Thanks mate. Just checking cause I wanted to make a few more similar techniques later.
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Post by Director » Mon Oct 02, 2017 8:53 pm

Accepted

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