[Denied]Jiku Jinzo's Fuuin

[zippo]

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Change:

+Ability = 40 points for Augment Fuuinjutsu + 15 points for an innate mind hearing ability
+Augment Concentrations
+These below are the jutsu [14 points total]:
+Body Seals

FuuinjutsuShow

*Fuuinjutsu • Explosive Tag
D-Rank Force Fuuinjutsu
After drawing an 2x5 inch seal formula on a surface the user forms the needed hand seals then touches the seal, arming it with their chakra. Upon being kai'd, the tag releases it's stored energy as a D-Rank Explosion of concussive force outward from itself.

*Fuuinjutsu • Tool Storage
D-Rank Storage Fuuinjutsu
After drawing a seal formula on a surface, appropriate in size to the weapon being sealed but no larger than 3x9 inches, the user forms the needed hand seals then may place as many of that singular object into the scroll as desired. When done, the user performs another set of hand seals and touches the seal closing it off as the seal condenses to the shape of the object stored. This seal is the only known sealing applications that allows depth storage and unfortunately this cannot be done at larger sizes. Tools can only be released at a maximum of 10 at a time, and are released with zero force.

*Fuuinjutsu • Tattoo
D-Rank Storage Fuuinjutsu
Developed for clandestine operations originally, instead of using ink and paper, the user draws a seal onto their body the size of the item they are sealing into their body. Upon doing a set of hand seals, the user then slides the item into the tattoo and performs a second seal, causing the seal to go dormant. When kai'd the seal releases the stored item.

Fuuinjutsu • Gotcha
D-Rank Storage Fuuinjutsu
Prerequisite: Augment Fuuinjutsu
After drawing a seal formula on a target with a previous Augment Fuuinjutsu, the user will include a secondary symbol of what looks like a period. This additional application gives birth to why Fuuinjutsu experts are at times needed for assistance when a Fuuinjutsu is present. As soon as the seal has been tampered with, it causes this seal to trigger forcing its surroundings to explode equal to the force of a concussive D-Rank Explosion.

Fuuinjutsu • All In The Past
C-Rank Augment Fuuinjutsu
Prerequisite: Kakome
By placing a small seal on the body, the user begins channeling chakra into it, connecting it with his currently active Kekkei Genkai. As a result, when parting away from his target, the user can channel into those who bear this seal and witness their surroundings using the Kakome Kekkei Genkai.

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[quote=D Rank]*[color=black][b]Fuuinjutsu • Explosive Tag[/b][/color]
[i]D-Rank Force Fuuinjutsu[/i]
After drawing an 2x5 inch seal formula on a surface the user forms the needed hand seals then touches the seal, arming it with their chakra. Upon being kai'd, the tag releases it's stored energy as a D-Rank Explosion of concussive force outward from itself.

*[color=black][b]Fuuinjutsu • Tool Storage[/b][/color]
[i]D-Rank Storage Fuuinjutsu[/i]
After drawing a seal formula on a surface, appropriate in size to the weapon being sealed but no larger than 3x9 inches, the user forms the needed hand seals then may place as many of that singular object into the scroll as desired. When done, the user performs another set of hand seals and touches the seal closing it off as the seal condenses to the shape of the object stored. This seal is the only known sealing applications that allows depth storage and unfortunately this cannot be done at larger sizes. Tools can only be released at a maximum of 10 at a time, and are released with zero force.

*[color=black][b]Fuuinjutsu • Tattoo[/b][/color]
[i]D-Rank Storage Fuuinjutsu[/i]
Developed for clandestine operations originally, instead of using ink and paper, the user draws a seal onto their body the size of the item they are sealing into their body. Upon doing a set of hand seals, the user then slides the item into the tattoo and performs a second seal, causing the seal to go dormant. When kai'd the seal releases the stored item.

[color=black][b]Fuuinjutsu • Gotcha[/b][/color]
[i]D-Rank Storage Fuuinjutsu[/i]
Prerequisite: Augment Fuuinjutsu
After drawing a seal formula on a target with a previous Augment Fuuinjutsu, the user will include a secondary symbol of what looks like a period. This additional application gives birth to why Fuuinjutsu experts are at times needed for assistance when a Fuuinjutsu is present. As soon as the seal has been tampered with, it causes this seal to trigger forcing its surroundings to explode equal to the force of a concussive D-Rank Explosion.[/quote][quote=C Rank][color=black][b]Fuuinjutsu • All In The Past[/b][/color]
[i]C-Rank Augment Fuuinjutsu[/i]
Prerequisite: Kakome
By placing a small seal on the body, the user begins channeling chakra into it, connecting it with his currently active Kekkei Genkai. As a result, when parting away from his target, the user can channel into those who bear this seal and witness their surroundings using the Kakome Kekkei Genkai.[/quote]

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[Izanagi • Stage 1]
C-Rank Ninjutsu
Prerequisites: Izanagi, Kakome • Stage 1
With a channel, the user summons Izanagi with an active Kakome, transforming his eyes to a more ancient ability. The user taps into the minds of an area within Kakome range and capabilities, allowing him/her to additionally hear the emotions around the user but not necessarily understand what's going on in a pinpoint manner. Seeing what happens is still the larger indicator, but this is just the birth of Izanagi's potential.

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[b][Izanagi • Stage 1][/b]
[i]C-Rank Ninjutsu[/i]
[i]Prerequisites:[/i] Izanagi, Kakome • Stage 1
With a channel, the user summons Izanagi with an active Kakome, transforming his eyes to a more ancient ability. The user taps into the minds of an area within Kakome range and capabilities, allowing him/her to additionally hear the emotions around the user but not necessarily understand what's going on in a pinpoint manner. Seeing what happens is still the larger indicator, but this is just the birth of Izanagi's potential.

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[quote=Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu][color=#444F51][b]Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu[/b][/color]
This user is able to utilize Storage Fuuinjutsu and Force Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Storage or Force Classification. Storage Fuuinjutsu can be used to store supplies, weapons, armor, or anything in between. Force Fuuinjutsu are used to release, counteract, and capture energy.[/quote]

Izanagi
The Next Stage of Kakome, the Izanagi. The legendary Kekkei Genkai few have ever mastered throughout the history of the shinobi world. It happens to be the ancient origin, the purest form, of all who currently possess the Kakome and can only be activated when one truly believes in their destiny, seeing pass reality's distortions. Such a vision was how the ancient clan rose as well as fell, then later scattered for their disillusions as shinobi villages were being created. This bloodline ability includes the capability to see into the past but also hear the minds of those within said past as well as have access to Augment Fuuinjutsu, as the arcane and long forsaken belief indicated that such capabilities can only be harnessed as soon as one fully believes seeing past their own reality, whether it be true or not, which it really isn't, and truly be emboldened in their beliefs that they can hack into it. Making them the perfect detective and enforcer of apprehension, as their ancient ancestors were. While this is active, typically the user feels a sensation like that of flowing water upon the skin. This ability's channeling has a +5 Control requirement for each Doujutsu jutsu. The Doujutsu falls under Ninpou/Sensory Style while Augment Fuuinjutsu fall under its original listing. And the user can perform Augment Fuuinjutsu while the doujutsu is dormant after it has been awakened.

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[color=grey][b][big][big]Izanagi[/big][/big][/b][/color]
The Next Stage of Kakome, the Izanagi. The legendary Kekkei Genkai few have ever mastered throughout the history of the shinobi world. It happens to be the ancient origin, the purest form, of all who currently possess the Kakome and can only be activated when one truly believes in their destiny, seeing pass reality's distortions. Such a vision was how the ancient clan rose as well as fell, then later scattered for their disillusions as shinobi villages were being created. This bloodline ability includes the capability to see into the past but also hear the minds of those within said past as well as have access to Augment Fuuinjutsu, as the arcane and long forsaken belief indicated that such capabilities can only be harnessed as soon as one fully believes seeing past their own reality, whether it be true or not, which it really isn't, and truly be emboldened in their beliefs that they can hack into it. Making them the perfect detective and enforcer of apprehension, as their ancient ancestors were. While this is active, typically the user feels a sensation like that of flowing water upon the skin. This ability's channeling has a +5 Control requirement for each Doujutsu jutsu. The Doujutsu falls under Ninpou/Sensory Style while Augment Fuuinjutsu fall under its original listing. And the user can perform Augment Fuuinjutsu while the doujutsu is dormant after it has been awakened.

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Equipment:
-5x Kunai (Left-Bicep Tattoo of a tiny, mythical creature)
-5x Flash Bangs (Left-Shoulder Tattoo of a flickering flame)
-5x Explosive Tags (Right-Shoulder Tattoo of a halo)
-5x Kunai, each laced with 2 Explosive-Tags (Left-Bicep Tattoo of two halos)
-1x seal signifying a pair of wings behind his back [The Sentinel]

Payment: user points

[Yura]

So a few things to address before continuing here:

1) Gaining both Charge fuuin and Augment fuuin each costs 40 points for a total of 80 points for someone who is not a ninjutsu specialist.
2) In order to gain access to the abilities of another specialization, you need to complete a plot board of an appropriate rank in addition to paying the points. In this case, to get access to both of these you would need to complete a B rank plot board that relates to why you are suddenly able to use these abilities.
3) Finally, when you do acquire these, they would count as an ability and not concentrations. They can both be rolled into a single ability if you would like, but they would take up an ability slot instead of concentration slots.

All of this is detailed here: viewtopic.php?&t=6210070/1/#new

Let me know how you want to proceed with this since you will need more points/will have to do a plot board do get most of what you want.

[zippo]

Understood.

Fixed.

[Yura]

Your fix essentially has the same issues as before.

To start, your new ability:

1) Allows you to use Augment Fuuin even though you are a Gen specialist meaning that you need to pay 40 points and a C-Rank plotboard for it.
2) Allows you to essentially create custom sensory techniques which can only be done as a Nin specialist meaning that you need to pay 40 points and a C-Rank plotboard for it.
3) Allows you to "see into the past" which I'm not sure what that fully means but if it is tapping into Space Time techniques at all that also can only be done as a Nin specialist meaning that you need to pay 40 points and a C-Rank plotboard for it.

Now, disregarding #3 (because I'm just speculating on what you actually intended for it), if you want this ability to do both Augment Fuuin and Custon Sensory, you are going to need to pay 80 points and perform a B-Rank Plot Board (instead of 2 C-Rank ones) in order to get it. And the plot board would need to be completed before the ability is added to your character.

[zippo]

I understand where you're coming from.

1. Yes, I know it's 40 points and an x plotboard.

2.
I believe that pertains to custom mind's eye jutsu not custom sensory techniques [like Zippo's custom Mind's Eye techniques to make it short ranged--because it was based off of Mind's Eye]. Mind's Eye doesn't relate to this because of the Kekkei Genkai's original standing but I understand the misconception; same with a custom hearing sensory Kekkei Genkai. None of which relate to Mind's Eye. There's more than one sensory technique avenue, and Mind's Eye is just one of the many since Sensory is the style, not Mind's Eye. The archived Empathy being another, based off of elements. Don't need to be a specialist to have a Byakugan, for example, but the Byakugan is a sensor-based ability. Like most Doujutsu. Otherwise, every Doujutsu with special senses will require being a Ninjutsu specialist. If the Kekkei Genkai overall requires a pyramid, I'd understand that but it wouldn't make sense to relate it being a Mind's Eye custom.

3.
He can already see into the past with his original Kekkei Genkai. Izanagi could be written as its second stage/transformation rather than a whole new ability.

Should I edit this in?

[Director]

I'm going to say no to hearing people's minds/emotions in the past. That's Yamanaka/Zekka Emotion sensory territory of invading the conscious. Also, any history you do so see must be checked through via a mod or myself to ensure it fits in within the history of the world. There also must be a limit on how far you can go back depending on the rank of the jutsu used, obviously higher ranks go back further, lower ranks go back only days or minutes.

If any of these suggestions also imply on your Kakome, I need those applied to it as well.

[Kabu]

I'll give you a couple more days to make necessary edits.

[Niro]

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